中考英文高分作文学案

这是一份中考英文高分作文学案，共10页。学案主要包含了要点指导等内容，欢迎下载使用。
书面表达评分标准：
一档（12-15）内容切题，层次清楚，语言流畅，基本无语言表达错误
二挡（8-11）内容切题，层次比较清楚，语言比较流畅，语言表达错误较少
三挡（5-7）内容基本切题，层次不够分明，语言表达错误较多
四挡（1-4）有一定内容，但语法错误较多
（注意：书面表达依法错误全卷扣分不得超过2分，单词拼写错误全卷扣分不得超过2分，抄袭卷中阅读材料，不给分）
开头句：
1.There is always smething unfrgettable in my life, especially the stry between my friend and me.（难忘的事）
2.I visited Hng Kng last summer hliday. It's a beautiful city and I had a wnderful time there.（上个假期）
3. My friend Daniel encurages me a lt in many ways. Nw let me tell yu smething abut him.（影响深的人/最好的朋友）
4.Hw time flies! Three years has passed. I will graduate frm junir high schl. （初中生活）
5. My friend Daniel encurages me a lt in many ways. Nw let me tell yu smething abut him.（朋友）
建设文明城市
Nwadays we are trying ur best t make Xining becme a civilized city. As students, we must knw what we shuld d and what we shuldn’t d.
2. As citizens f Green City, we shuld nt nly prtect ur envirnment but als fllw the traffic rules.
保持健康
1. As teenagers, it's very imprtant fr us t keep safe. But smetimes accidents may happen arund us. S hw can we keep safe?
2. Summer hliday is cming. And swimming safety becmes a big prblem. S I'd like t
give yu sme advice t keep ff the danger.
中间句
1. As fr my dream，I want t be a teacher，I'll make friends with my kids.（梦想）
2. My favrite memry f my dad is that he always wants t keep me frm making mistakes but he tries t let me find my wn way, even thugh his heart breaks in silence when I get hurt. （父亲）
3. The next mrning, I fund a piece f paper. It said, “Never give up, dear. I am prud f yu!”（父亲/母亲）
4. He is a helpful by wh ften helps peple arund him.
文明城市
T make it mre and mre beautiful, I ften dn't litter everywhere t make the schl
envirnment cleaner.
2. Firstly, when we are n the way t schl frm hme, we shuld fllw the traffic lights and rules t avid the traffic accidents.
保持健康
T keep yurself safe，yu mustn't g smewhere dangerus.
2. In the schl, I take an active part in P.E. lessns. Smetimes we play ftball and vlleyball. Smetimes we play basketball, table tennis r badmintn. Ftball is my favrite sprt.
结尾句：
1. After reading s many bks, I get a lt f knwledge and als feel relaxed. （书的益处）
2. As a student, I think I shuld always try my best t wrk fr ur schl. （校园生活）
3. This is my best dad/mm. I lve him/her and I'm s prud f him/her.（父亲/母亲）
4. I had great fun in my last summer vacatin.（上个假期）
5. Althugh I am nt the best nw，I will make every effrt t becme a tp student and I believe yu will be prud f me.（自己）
6. She is great. Let's wish her a better future.（朋友）
7. Because I thught nthing was imprtant than friendship. What's mre, I became very happy after I frgave him. （朋友/友谊）
8. Hw lucky I am t be his/her daughter!（父亲/母亲）
9. It's really hard fr me t say gdbye. I wish my schl t have a better future.（初中生活）
文明城市
1. It's ur duty t d what we can d t make ur city mre beautiful. I believe if everyne makes an effrt, Xining will be ne f the mst beautiful cities in ur cuntry.
2. All in all, we will try ur best t d what we can d t make urselves and Suqian city mre civilized.
背诵佳句：
Nt nly d I feel gd t help thers, but als I get chances t d what I lve .
If yu give up in winter, yu will miss the hpe f spring, the beauty f summer, the fulfill f autumn.
If I were yu , I wuld say “ Dn’t give up, if yu hld n t yur dream, it will cme true ne day!”
Practice makes perfect; 熟能生巧
A friend in need is a friend indeed;患难见真情
Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成
Early t bed and early t rise des gd t yur health. 早睡早起有益于健康。
The best way t remember new wrds is t practice them everyday.
If yu study harder, yu will be better.
It is ne f the mst warm-hearted that I have ever seen .
好句子
1.It is imprtant/（necessary, difficult, cnvenient, pssible）fr sb. t d sth.
2. It takes sb time t d sth/ sb spend time ding sth
3. used t be/d sth ; be/ get used t ding sth
4. It’s knwn/ reprted/ said/ believed that ..
并列关系：and， bth…and, neither …nr, nt nly…but als
转折关系：but, hwever
选择关系：r，either …r…,
连接词if, unless, as lng as
范文一
在过去的三年初中生活中，你肯定遇到了很多好老师。言爱学校英语广播电台开展了“I lve yu, my English teacher”英语征文活动，请你根据下面要点指导和要求，写一封英语广播稿。
要点指导：1. 中等身高，戴眼镜；性格外向，善于交流； 喜欢运动，经常和同学们打篮球。
2. 爱工作，严格对待和关爱每一个学生，帮助家庭有困难的学生。
3. 课堂有趣充满活力，经常开展丰富多彩活动；课后帮助学困生，同学英语成绩好。
参考词汇：medium; utging; cmmunicate; strict; care abut; in truble; clrful; Thanks t
写作要求：1. 词数80－100(短文的开始和结束语已给出，不计入总词数);
2. 内容完整，语言流畅，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
I lve yu, my English teacher
I have met many gd teachers in the last three years. My English teacher, Mr. Huang is ne f them. Nw let me tell yu smething abut him.___________________________________________________________________________
I lve yu, my English teacher! I will never frget yu frever!
【审题】
1. 依据所给题目及开头结尾句可知，作文人称主要采用第三人称“He(Mr. Huang)”，描写自己的感受时用第一人称，时态主要采用一般现在时；
2. 由于已经给出3点要点指导，写作时需条理清楚、意思连贯、要点齐全，并且正确使用所给参考词汇。(注意句子连贯性，切忌逐句翻译)。
【要点指导】
【范文】
I lve yu, my English teacher
I have met many gd teachers in the last three years. My English teacher, Mr. Huang is ne f them. Nw let me tell yu smething abut him. Mr. Huang is f medium height. He ften wears a pair f glasses. He is utging and gd at cmmunicating with thers. He likes sprts and always plays basketball with us tgether. Mr. Huang lves his wrk very much. Thugh he is strict, he cares abut every student. He's always ready t help students frm pr families when they are in truble. In class, he always makes it lively and active. S we ften have different kinds f clrful activities. After class, he usually helps the students wh have difficulties in learning English. Thanks t him, ur English has imprved a lt.
I lve yu, my English teacher！I will never frget yu frever！
范文二
中考结束后，你将告别熟悉的校园。三年的初中生活也许会成为你一生中的“永恒记忆”。请你根据下列图中所给的四个方面，以“Three Years’ Schl Life”为题写一篇小短文，回顾你的初中校园生活。
要求：(1)词数在80～100词。 (2)条理清晰，语句连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
【审题】
由所给背景材料可知要求回顾自己的初中校园生活，因此人称用第一人称“I”，介绍自己三年的校园生产，时态用一般现在时；
根据所给思维导图提示的四个方面，学生需展开合理想象，注意内容的完整性。
【指导】
【范文】
Three Years’ Schl Life
I’m a student in Grade Nine. I will leave my junir middle schl next mnth after I finish the exam. I’m feeling a bit nervus and excited. I study in a middle schl. It is big and nice. There are many students and teachers in it. I get n well with my classmates. We ften help each ther. We study many subjects in schl. I like English and P. E. best. We ften d sprts in the afternn after class. Of curse，we all spend much time n study. We wrk very hard. Our teachers are quite friendly t us. They are als helpful. We can ask them fr help at any time. We g n a schl trip each term and we really enjy it. In a few days I have t say “gdbye” t my schl. I feel srry abut it. I lve my schl and all my teachers and classmates. I will never frget my three years’ schl life.
范文三
最近从媒体报道的一些家庭事件来看，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，隔阂越来越大，孩子普遍存在逆反心理。针对这个问题，某中学生英文报社开展了主题为“与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛。作为一名初中毕业生，你一定有自己的思想与辨别是非的基本能力，但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢？请以“Hw t Get n Well with Our Parents？”为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛。
一、写作要点提示
1. 与父母和谐相处很重要。
2. 与父母和谐相处的做法或建议：
(1)理解与尊重父母(如倾听与有礼貌表达想法)；
(2)多与父母交流(如分享快乐与倾诉烦恼)；
(3)为父母做一些力所能及的事。
3. 与父母和谐相处的感受。
二、写作要求
短文应紧扣要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，以使短文衔接、连贯，词数控制在80－100词。
【要点指导】

Hw t Get n Well with Our Parents?
Getting n well with parents is f great imprtance. But many children have truble in cmmunicating well with their parents. Here are sme suggestins n this prblem.The mst imprtant thing is that we shuld understand and respect ur parents. We can listen t what they think and express ur thughts plitely. Meanwhile（以此同时）, cmmunicate with them as ften as pssible t share happiness and srrws. Last but nt least（最后但并不是最重要）, we can help them d sme husewrk.If we d like this, we'll have a family full f happiness.
范文四
随着手机使用的日益广泛，“作业帮”等手机运用软件的出现，现在，手机又有了新的用途——随时查找作业答案。
部分学生认为：有时作业太多，太难，不得不向手机求助。
自己的观点：1. 抄写答案不能提高学生的学习能力，只能阻止学生思考；
2. 恰当运用网络，不依赖网络。
注意：1. 文中应包括提示观点，可以适当发挥，增加自己的看法，使内容更连贯，更合理；
2. 词数约80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(参考词汇：the students' abilities, make prper use f)
Sme students nw have a new use fr the Internet—use mbile phnes t find ut the answers t their hmewrk. But different peple have different ideas abut it.
【审题】
本文要求考生对“作业帮”等手机运用软件这一现象给出看法，文中给出的几条信息提示必须都涉及到，可以适当拓展。
【要点指导】

Sme students nw have a new use fr the Internet—use mbile phnes t find ut the answers t their hmewrk. But different peple have different ideas abut it. Sme students think that they have s much hmewrk every day that they dn't have enugh time. And sme f the prblems are t hard fr them t wrk ut. S they have t use mbile phnes t find ut the answers.
Hwever, I think cpying the answers can't imprve the students' abilities, and may make them stp thinking. In my pinin, we can make prper use f the Internet and can't depend n it. Studying nline can be a way t help study, but the best way is studying (t study) by neself.
范文四
假如你所在的城市正在创建“国家级卫生城市”, 作为该城市的一员, 你会有许多感触和想法。请以“Hw t set up a natinal healthy city? ”为题, 根据所给提示写一篇80-100个单词的英语短文。
Hw t set up a natinal healthy city?
Our city is trying t set up a natinal healthy city. As a member f the city, I think we shuld bey the rules.
We can’t thrw rubbish here and there. We can’t talk ludly in public, such as in the library r in the museum. We can’t spit and smke in public as well. When we are n the bus, we shuld give ur seats t the ld and children, as well as sme wmen with babies in their arms.
During ur daily lives, we shuld be plite t thers. And we shuld bey the traffic rules. Remember t stp when the traffic light is red. We must g acrss the rad when the traffic light is green. Finally, we shuld als turn ff the lights befre we leave the rm.
I’m sure ur city will becme mre and mre beautiful as lng as we all try ur best t d smething fr it!
my English teacher
要点提示
素材串联
要点1
外貌：中等身高(be f medium height)，戴一副眼镜(wear a pair f glasses)
性格：性格外向(utging)，善于交流(be gd at; cmmunicate)爱好：喜欢运动(sprts)，经常和同学们打篮球(play basketball with...)
要点2
工作态度： 爱工作(wrk)，严格对待(be strict with)和关爱(care abut)每个学生，帮助(help)家庭有困难(in truble)的学生
要点3
教学方面：①课堂有趣、充满活力(lively)，经常开展丰富多彩的活动(clrful activities)②课后帮助学困生(have difficulty in ding sth.)，同学英语成绩好
三年的学校生活
要点提示
素材串联
开头：引出话题
介绍自己是九年级的学生、离校的时间(下月)、此时的心情：紧张与兴奋(nervus and excited)
正文：四个方面的回忆
●同学与朋友：和睦相处，互相帮助 (get n well with; help each ther)●老师：友善、帮助(friendly; helpful)●学科：最喜欢英语与体育，经常课后运动(like English and P．E. best)●学校活动：每学期郊游(g n a schl trip each term)
总结：表达感受
表达对初中学校生活的不舍，爱学校与老师，永远不会忘记三年的学校生活(never frget)
如何与父母和谐相处？
要点提示
素材串联
开头：点明重要性
跟父母和谐相处非常重要(get n well with sb.; be f great imprtance)
正文：具体做法
1.最重要的是：理解、尊重父母(The mst imprtant thing is that...; understand, respect)2.与此同时，和他们多交流(Meanwhile; cmmunicate with sb.)3.最后，但同等重要的是：帮助父母做家务(Last but nt least; d sme husewrk)
结尾：感受
如果这样做，就能拥有一个幸福的家庭(If we 'll...; full f )
对“作业帮”的看法
要点提示
素材串联
开头：表明观点
现在，一些学生对网络有了一个新的使用方法……(Sme students nw have a new use fr the Internet...)
正文：陈述理由
1. 一些学生认为他们有太多的作业……(Sme students say/think that they have s much hmewrk...)2. 并且还有一些问题对于他们来说解决出来很困难。(And sme f the prblems are t hard fr them t wrk ut.)3. 然而，查找作业答案不能提高学生的能力……(Hwever, I think cpying the answers can't imprve the students' abilities...)
结尾：自己的看法
在我看来，我们可以更合理地使用网络……(In my pinin, we can make prper use f the Internet ...)