高考英语真题和模拟题分类汇编22书面表达含解析

专题22 书面表达

I、2021年高考真题

（2021·全国甲卷·书面表达）

假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：

1.阐明写信事由；

2.征求建议；

3.表示感谢。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】Dear Chris,

Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.

As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.

If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

（2021·全国乙卷·书面表达）

你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：

1. 分析优势与不足；

2. 提出学习建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 题目和首句已为你写好。

【答案】one possible version:

Be smart online learners

Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.

 First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.

 Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.

In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以 Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。

1. 词汇积累

充分利用：make full use of→ make the most of

扩宽,丰富：broaden→ enrich

各种各样： all kinds of→ varieties of

不完美：imperfection→ defect

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.

拓展句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages ， finding a proper way to make our study more efficient.

 [高分句型1] Faced with all kinds of information on the internet ,We can't tell the difference between the true and  the false, which may be harmful to our study and life.（非谓语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]On the other hand ,online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.（现在分词作状语）

II、2021年高考模拟试题

（2021·成都三诊·书面表达）

假如你校英语角正在征集与课外活动有关的短文。请根据以下要点介绍令你印象最深刻的一次课外活动。

1. 时间、地点；2. 活动过程；3. 你的感受。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

An Impressive After-school Activity

【答案】Last Saturday, our class held a meaningful activity showing our sincere concern for the elderly in the nursing home. The moment we went there, all of us got started immediately. Some of us cleaned the rooms and windows carefully, some chatted with the elderly delightedly, and some even sang beautiful songs. This wonderful and happy moment lasted for more than four hours. At last, we left with full enjoyment and pride, promising more regular visits. Caring for others is a traditional virtue of our nation. If everyone loves others unconditionally, we can surely make our country a better place to live.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生介绍令一次令人印象最深刻的课外活动。

1.词汇积累

真诚的：sincere→heartfelt

立即：immediately→right away

开心地：delightedly→happily

快乐：enjoyment→joy

2.句式拓展

运用非谓语动词

原句：Some of us cleaned the rooms and windows carefully, some chatted with the elderly delightfully, and some even sang beautiful songs.

拓展句：Some of us cleaned the rooms and windows carefully, some chatting with the elderly delightfully, and some even sang beautiful songs.

 [高分句型1] At last,we left with full enjoyment and pride, promising more regular visits. (运用了现在分词作状语)

[高分句型2] Caring for others is a traditional virtue of our nation. (运用了动名词作主语)

（2021·天津十二区县联考2·书面表达）

你是晨光中学的李津，你校要举办一个英语特色活动，作为负责人，你给你曾经的外教 Jonathan写一封E-mail,请求他给你一些建议。

1.你举办这个活动的设想(时间、地点、目的、一个活动形式如：英语戏剧表演或英语图书 分享会等)。

2,对外教提两个有关活动设想的具体的问题。词数不少于100。开头已给出，不计入词数。

Dear Jonathan,

How time flies! We haven't seen each other for almost one year since you went back home.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】One possible answer

Dear Jonathan,

How time flies! We haven't seen each other for almost one year since you went back home. I am writing to ask for your advice on organizing an activity featuring English, hoping you can help me organize a successful event

I, as the student in charge, have made a plan that this activity will be held next month in our school library in the form of a drama competition. The aim of the competition is to arouse students' interest in learning English and literature. The students will take part in this competition representing their classes. One class one team. What's more, the drama they choose can be either English dramas or Chinese dramas, but all should be performed in English. I do believe this competition can not only enhance students' English level but also improve students' all-tound ability.

Mr. Jonathan, do you think my plan is practical? Can you recommend any dramas that are suitable for the high school students in China to perform? I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me some suggestions. Looking forward to your reply.

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给曾经的外教 Jonathan写一封信，请求关于英语特色活动的建议。

1.词汇积累（4个以上，含4个）

代表：on behalf of→represent

提高：improve→enhance

建议：advise→recommend

感激be grateful→appreciate

2.句式拓展

简单句变倒装句

原句：I do believe this competition can not only enhance students' English level but also improve students' all-tound ability.

拓展句：Not only can this competition enhance students' English level but also improve students' all-tound ability.

[高分句型1]. I do believe this competition can not only enhance students' English level but also improve students' all-tound ability.(强调句)

[高分句型2].I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me some suggestions.(if引导的状语从句)

（2021·天津市5月压轴模拟·书面表达）

假设你是晨光中学李津。为了响应“光盘行动”号召，反对舌尖上的浪费， 本学期你校英语俱乐部开展了主题为“Clear Your Plate”的英语演讲比赛，请你以此为题准备一篇英文演讲稿参赛。内容包括：

1. 同学们平时食堂就餐时浪费严重；

2. 呼吁同学们节约粮食；

3. 建议。

注意：

1. 词数不少于100;

2. 开头已给出, 但不计入词数;

3. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about “Clear Your Plate”.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【解析】

写作本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Clear Your Plate”为题写一篇英文演讲稿来响应“光盘行动”号召，反对舌尖上的浪费。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在完成时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 同学们平时食堂就餐时浪费严重；

2. 呼吁同学们节约粮食；

3. 建议。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

call on；join a campaign；eat up；contribute our efforts to；eat up；have a chance to；have any effect；make sure;keep in mind；no matter what；make a difference

第三步：连词成句

1.And everyone is called on to join a campaign, called “Clear Your Plate”, which requires people to eat up all our food.

2.And there are lots of things we can do to contribute our efforts to it.

3.Besides, once we have a chance to have meals with other people, who don’t realize the importance, we can explain the purpose of the campaign and convince them not to waste food.

4.Some may question whether the campaign have any effect, but, I think, one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系：Besides, and
2.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…（供参考）

3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

（2021·宝坻区三模·书面表达）

假定你是李津。你校外籍交换生Henry 给你发了一份邮件，想让你为他推荐一种字典，用来学习汉语，请你用英语给他回复。内容包括：

1. 字典名称；

2 推荐理由；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Henry,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Jin

【答案】Dear Henry,

Pleased to know your passion for learning Chinese, I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you. As a native speaker, I believe it is a helpful tool, especially for the beginners.

Firstly, it’s one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range of vocabulary but also for its precise explanation of each word. Besides, its reasonable price is undoubtedly an appealing factor.

I hope my suggestion helpful and wish you great progress in learning Chinese.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍交换生Henry回一份邮件，为他推荐一种字典，用来学习汉语。

1.词汇积累

高兴的：pleased →glad

建议：suggestion → advice

此外：besides →moreover

学习：learn → study

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Pleased to know your passion for learning Chinese, I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you.

拓展句：I am very glad to know that you are enthusiastic about learning Chinese, so I am writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you.

[高分句型1] Pleased to know your passion for learning Chinese, I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you. (运用了省略结构)

[高分句型2] Firstly, it’s one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range of vocabulary but also for its precise explanation of each word. (运用了短语not only … but also …连接句子)

（2021·和平区三模·书面表达）

假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你的美国笔友Tom给你发电了邮件希望了解你的 高三生活。请你给Tom 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括：

(1)高三生活(从学习、娱乐、社会活动中任选二点)；

(2)高三一年中自己最大的感受：

(3)对自己未来的展望。

注意：

(1)词数不少于100；

(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

Your e-mail reached me yesterday, and I

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Dear Tom

Your e-mail reached me yesterday, and I felt greatly honored to share my senior life with you here. More details are as follows.

    To begin with, as a senior student, life is busy and fulfilling due to the ultimate goal---College Entrance Examination. Apart from study, I would play football with my friends after school or at the weekend to get myself relaxed, which in turn refreshes my mind and gives me much energy to fulfill better results.

    What impresses me most is the friendship formed in the period. I think friends in high school are my best friends forever, because they know me a lot and witness all of my emotions.

    As for my future, I’m eager to be admitted into a well-known university. Thus, I work so hard for it, so I must learn more as I can to fulfill myself.

    Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Tom回一封电子邮件，介绍自己的高三生活。

1.词汇积累

荣幸：privilege→honor

最终的：culminating/final→ultimate

目标：target/aim→goal

使恢复：regain/renew→refresh

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：As for my future, I’m eager to be admitted into a well-known university.

拓展句：As for my future, I’m eager to be admitted into a well-known university, where I will further explore my potential and achieve my dreams in the long run.

[高分句型1]

Aside of study, I would play football with my friends after school or at the weekend to get myself relaxed, which in turn refreshes my mind and gives me much energy to fulfill better results.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]

What impresses me most is the friendship formed in the period.（运用了what引导的主语从句）

（2021·河东区二模·书面表达）

假设你是李津，最近你收到英国笔友Peter的来信，想就“How to live with pressure”的话题和你交流，询问你能否就解决学习和生活中一些问题谈谈自己的体验和感想。请根据此话题及以下提示写一封回信。

①过去遇到问题时的表现(如心理压力、情绪紧张、心情低落等)。

②介绍你解决压力问题的做法。

③表达你的希望。

注意：1.词数不少于100，开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

2.必须包含提示内容。

3.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

Glad to hear from you, I'd like to write about how to live with pressure.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Jin.

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Peter,

Glad to hear from you. I'd like to write about how to live with pressure.

Firstly, I'd take my problem as an example. I used to feel pressured to do well in exams.The pressure made me out of breath. To my disappointment, the more worried I was about my studies, the less efficient I became. So I realize I just take pressure too seriously. Secondly, let me tell you how to deal with it. I try taking things easy by taking part in various activates out of class, enjoying music and chatting with my friends about fun things. To my delight, this works.

Pressure cannot be avoided. What counts is how to deal with it properly. So I do hope you can face problems and pressure bravely and your life will be full of sunshine.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李津，最近你收到英国笔友Peter的来信，想就“How to live with pressure”的话题和你交流，询问你能否就解决学习和生活中一些问题谈谈自己的体验和感想。要求考生根据此话题及提示写一封回信。

1.词汇积累

有压力：feel pressured→get stressed

担忧：be worried about→be concerned about

处理：deal with→cope with

参加：take part in→participate in

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I used to feel pressured to do well in exams. The pressure made me out of breath.

拓展句：I used to feel pressured to do well in exams, which made me out of breath.

[高分句型1] To my disappointment, the more worried I was about my studies, the less efficient I became. (运用了“the+比较级……，the+比较级……”结构)

[高分句型2] So I do hope you can face problems and pressure bravely and your life will be full of sunshine. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)

（2021·河西区三模·书面表达）

假定你是晨光中学的学生李律，你正在某国外中学作交换生，该校的“外国文化”栏目近期将介绍中国传统文化，校报编辑Jenny给你写信，咨询你的意见。请你给Jenny写封回信，内容要点如下：

1.你认为最能代表中国文化的是什么?请说明理由；

2.我们应该如何更好地推广中国文化? (至少两点)

3.词数不少于100.

【答案】Dear Jenny,

I am pleased to receive your letter. I'm so happy that the "Foreign Cultures" section in our newspaper will recommend Chinese traditional culture.

There is no doubt that Confucius is the most representative symbol of Chinese culture. As a philosopher, Confucius not only represents the traditional Chinese culture, but has been influencing us Chinese people since ancient times. Nowadays we can find lots of Confucius institutes around the world, which provides precious opportunities for the foreigners to learn about Chinese culture.

To promote Chinese culture, we are supposed to provide various cultural exchange activities. What's more, establishing Confucius institutes all over the world is also a good idea. Meanwhile, attracting more foreign visitors to China to experience Chinese culture will have a far-reaching impact.

I'll be glad if I could help you,

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给所在某国外中学的校报编辑Jenny写封回信，介绍你对中国文化和推广方式的看法。

1.    词汇积累

栏目：column→section

古代：old times→ancient times

建立：build→establish

影响：influence→impact

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Meanwhile, attracting more foreign visitors to China to experience Chinese culture will have a far-reaching impact.

拓展句：Meanwhile, it will have a far-reaching impact if more foreign visitors are attracted to China to experience Chinese culture.

[高分句型1] Nowadays we can find lots of Confucius institutes around the world, which provides precious opportunities for the foreigners to learn about Chinese culture. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] As a philosopher, Confucius not only represents the traditional Chinese culture, but has been influencing us Chinese people since ancient times. (运用了not only… but (also)…连接的并列句)

（2021·北京市3月综合能力测试·书面表达）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim给你写信探讨“读书”的话题。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1.你的阅读经历；

2.你的阅读收获；

3.你对阅读的看法。

注意：1.词数100左右：

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim，

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

【答案】Possible Version 1：

Dear Jim,

I’m so glad to know that you also love reading and I am more than happy to share my experience and thoughts on reading with you.

When I was a kid, I read picture books with interesting illustrations. I would unconsciously burst out laughing or frown with concern about the character in the book. Later in life, I was absorbed in the world of words, where I found myself seeing the world through the eyes of different roles in the stories and I discovered the mystery of so many things, from the smallest atoms to the vast universe. While reading, I even got a new insight into myself. Even though I encountered difficulties sometimes, nothing swayed my enthusiasm about reading.

Frankly, I have really harvested a lot from reading. Reading does not only provide me with encyclopedic knowledge ranging from basic principles to far away outer space mystery, but also convince me that being alone is not lonely. With books in hand, I’ve really got a colorful world belonging to myself. Through that world, I get courage in times of challenge, and I feel love and warmth in the midst of adversity. Further, I have found my role model and a goal I decide to pursue in my future life. 

Reading is a best friend. You need to treat it patiently with your sincere love. In return, reading will bring you a whole new world to get along with, which makes you a complete person.

This is my experience and understanding of reading. What about yours? So looking forward to your sharing.

Yours,

Li Hua

Possible Version 2：

Dear Jim,

How is everything going? Having heard that you are interested in reading, I’m writing to share my reading experience and feelings with you.

I used to be impatient with reading. I often skipped some parts of a story, which I thought weren’t attractive to me at first. As a result, I got very little believing reading wasn’t so beneficial. To solve this problem, I urged myself to read carefully and try to follow the plot. Then I astonishingly found that I could read the whole book smoothly and even learned a moral lesson from it. This is big progress as well as great relief to me. From this experience I have learned that every word “counts”. Besides, I get an opportunity to approach literature and appreciate the beauty of words. It was this experience that helped change my reading attitude and improved my reading skill.

So we need to pay attention to every paragraph and read with full patience, which allows us to get the complete meaning and be truly involved and educated. Reading deserves our patience and deep thinking.

This is my point of view about reading. What do you think of it? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Jim回信探讨“读书”的话题。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和现在完成时,少量一般现在时。

结构：总分总法

要求：

1.你的阅读经历；

2.你的阅读收获；

3.你对阅读的看法。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

more than；share…with…；burst out；be absorbed in；get a new insight into；provide…with…；far away；range from；in hand；belong to；in return；get along with；look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m so glad to know that you also love reading and I am more than happy to share my experience and thoughts on reading with you.

2. When I was a kid, I read picture books with interesting illustrations.

3. I would unconsciously burst out laughing or frown with concern about the character in the book.

4. Later in life, I was absorbed in the world of words, where I found myself seeing the world through the eyes of different roles in the stories and I discovered the mystery of so many things, from the smallest atoms to the vast universe.

5. While reading, I even got a new insight into myself.

6. Even though I encountered difficulties sometimes, nothing swayed my enthusiasm about reading.

7. Frankly, I have really harvested a lot from reading.

8. Reading does not only provide me with encyclopedic knowledge ranging from basic principles to far away outer space mystery, but also convince me that being alone is not lonely.

8. With books in hand, I’ve really got a colorful world belonging to myself.

9. Through that world, I get courage in times of challenge, and I feel love and warmth in the midst of adversity.

10. Further, I have found my role model and a goal I decide to pursue in my future life.  

11. Reading is a best friend. You need to treat it patiently with your sincere love.

12. In return, reading will bring you a whole new world to get along with, which makes you a complete person.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)

2.表并列补充关系：Further, not only…but (also)

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…(供参考)

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

[高分句型1] When I was a kid, I read picture books with interesting illustrations.(when引导时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] Later in life, I was absorbed in the world of words, where I found myself seeing the world through the eyes of different roles in the stories and I discovered the mystery of so many things, from the smallest atoms to the vast universe. (where引导非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型3] Frankly, I have really harvested a lot from reading. Reading does not only provide me with encyclopedic knowledge ranging from basic principles to far away outer space mystery, but also convince me that being alone is not lonely. (not only…but also…连接并列句)

（2021·北大附中三模·书面表达）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。 为迎接北京2022年冬奥会，你们学校下个月将要举办“迎冬奥 做贡献”主题活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：

1.活动目的；

2.具体安排；

3.发出邀请。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jim,

Having known that you are into the Winter Olympics to be held in Beijing, I am writing to invite you to participate in the relevant activity in our school.

In order to promote the Olympic spirit and get deeper insights into the winter sports, an activity themed on “Make a Contribution to the Winter Olympics” will be held next month, when a series of lectures will be open to everyone, such as lectures on how to communicate with people from different countries and ways to improve air quality. Additionally, there will be many competitions varying from skiing to skating so that you can choose whichever you are interested in.

Hopefully, you can come and enjoy the activity.

                                                                                                                                         Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加你们学校下个月将要举办“迎冬奥 做贡献”主题活动。

1.词汇积累

对……感兴趣：be interested in→be into/be crazy about

参加：join in/take part in→participant in

深入了解：make a better understanding of→get deeper insights into

范围从……到……：range from…to…= vary from…to…

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Hopefully, you can come and enjoy the activity.

拓展句：I sincerely hope that you can come and enjoy the activity.

[高分句型1] Having known that you are into the Winter Olympics to be held in Beijing, I am writing to invite you to participate in the relevant activity in our school. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Additionally, there will be many competitions varying from skiing to skating so that you can choose whichever you are interested in. (运用了so that引导的状语从句)

（2021·朝阳区二模·书面表达）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将举办主题为 “创意点亮校园”学生手工作品展。请给你校的交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参观展览。内容包括：

1. 介绍展览信息 (例如：时间、地点、内容等)；

2. 询问对方意向。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

 提示词：手工作品handicraft

Dear Jim,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Possible versions 1.

Dear Jim，

How are you doing? I’m writing to invite you to visit a handicrafts exhibition in our school, whose theme is “Creativity Lights Up the Campus”.

The exhibition aims to enrich our school life and promote our creativity and hands-on ability. It is scheduled to be held in the lecture hall from May 15 to June 1. Dozens of handicrafts with unique designs and various themes will be on display, such as clay sculptures, paper cuttings and so on. They are all created by students. Many works are made from unwanted materials in our daily life, which shows how students turn waste into treasure. I’m sure you will be amazed at the students’ creativity and imagination.

Would you like to come? I’m looking forward to meeting you at the exhibition.

Yours,

Li Hua

Possible versions 2.

Dear Jim,

How is everything going? Our school is going to organize a handicrafts exhibition themed “Creativity Lights Up the Campus” this weekend. Knowing you have a great interest in handicrafts, I believe this is an opportunity to appreciate the creative works.

About 100 handicrafts made by students will be on display in the school lecture hall, each of which is full of fantastic ideas. You can find a wide variety of works that are suitable for decoration. In addition, the exhibits will consist of handicrafts of traditional styles methods, which will offer you a great chance to explore the Chinese traditional culture. I’m sure the exhibition is worth a visit.

It will be a great pleasure if you come to the exhibition. I will be happy to keep you company and offer necessary explanations.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参观学生手工作品的展览。

Possible versions 1

1.词汇积累

旨在：aim at→ aim to do

提升：improve→ promote

计划：be planned to→ be scheduled to

许多：lots of→ dozens of

惊讶的：shocked→ amazed

2 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：The exhibition aims to enrich our school life and promote our creativity and hands-on ability. It is scheduled to be held in the lecture hall from May 15 to June 1.

拓展句：The exhibition, which is scheduled to be held in the lecture hall from May 15 to June 1, aims to enrich our school life and promote our creativity and hands-on ability.

[高分句型1]  I’m writing to invite you to visit a handicrafts exhibition in our school, whose theme is “Creativity Lights Up the Campus”.（运用了由“whose+名词”引导非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] Many works are made from unwanted materials in our daily life, which shows how students turn waste into treasure. （运用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型3] I’m sure you will be amazed at the students’ creativity and imagination.（运用了省略that的宾语从句，作am sure的宾语）

（2021·丰台区二模·书面表达）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和学校英国交换生Chris一起报名参加学校下个月举办的“传统文化节”节目展演，但是你因故不能参加。请你给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 表达歉意；

2. 不能参加的原因；

3. 解决办法建议。

注意：1. 词数100字左右；

2. 文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Chris，

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Chris,

I feel terribly sorry that I can't make my way to our show on the Festival of Traditional Culture.

Unfortunately, I hurt myself accidentally when I was playing basketball last night. As a result, I'm suffering a badly fractured arm, which means it's impossible for me to practice Taijiquan for at least a month and my show will be blown up.

Knowing that you have been waiting for this moment so long, I strongly recommend Jim replace me. As an enthusiast, he's an excellent Taiji player. Besides, Jim is very cooperative and easygoing, who's the most suitable person I can think of.

I do understand you need me badly but I still hope you could forgive me.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生Chris写封道歉信，向他道歉并解释不能参加学校下个月举办的“传统文化节”节目展演的原因。

1.词汇积累

演出：show→performance

建议：recommend→suggest

原谅：forgive→pardon

意外地：accidentally = by accident

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：As an enthusiast, he's an excellent Taiji player. Besides, Jim is very cooperative and easygoing, who's the most suitable person I can think of.

拓展句：As an enthusiast, he's not only an excellent Taiji player, but also very cooperative and easygoing, who's the most suitable person I can think of.

[高分句型1] As a result, I'm suffering a badly fractured arm, which means it's impossible for me to practice Taijiquan for at least a month and my show will be blown up. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Knowing that you have been waiting for this moment so long, I strongly recommend Jim replace me. (运用了现在分词短语作状语，recommend后省略that引导的宾语从句用了虚拟语气)

（2021·海淀区二模·书面表达）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。近期你校将在海淀公园举行“阳光长跑”活动，请你给国际部好友Jim写封电子邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：

1. 活动信息；

2. 注意事项。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jim,
How have you been? Our school will organize an activity called"Sunshine Long-distance Run". I wonder if you would like to come.
The activity will be held at Haidian Park on May 16th. Students from all grades are welcome to join in. Participants need to gather at the West Gate by 8 am, and the running will start there at 8:20. The running will finish at the East Gate and the total distance will be around 5 km.
If you decide to come, please remember to wear running shoes. You may leave your personal items at the storage desk, where members from the Students' Union will keep an eye on them.
I really hope you can join us. Let me know if you are interested.
Yours,
Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生国际部好友Jim写封电子邮件，邀请他参加你校将在海淀公园举行的“阳光长跑”活动。

1.词汇积累

参加：join in=take part in

会合：gather→assemble

开始：begin→start

结束：finish→end

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The running will finish at the East Gate and the total distance will be around 5 km.

拓展句：The running will finish at the East Gate, the total distance of which will be around 5 km.

[高分句型1] Our school will organize an activity called"Sunshine Long-distance Run". (运用了过去分词作后置定语)

[高分句型2] You may leave your personal items at the storage desk, where members from the Students' Union will keep an eye on them. (运用了where引导的定语从句)