专题22 应用文写作-十年（2012-2021）高考英语真题分项详解（新高考专用） 解析版

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专题22 应用文写作
【2021年】
1.（2021·全国高考新高考Ⅰ卷）你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me
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【答案】Youth and Me
It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my whole high school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer.
I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
【分析】本文是一篇应用文，向校刊Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
建立：found→establish
沮丧的：upset→depressed
得到：receive→obtain
赏析：enjoy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.（2021·6月浙江卷）
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传，内容包括：
1. 展览时间、地点；
2. 观展感受；
3. 推荐观展。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】
ln order to enrich students’ after-school life ,an exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school , which sparks a growing love for traditional art .The exhibition is held on the first floor of the school library. Most of the students think highly of this exhibition，which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.
Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures, but also enable you understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better. The exhibition will last for two weeks, every student is welcome to visit.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇关于学校举办的学生国画作品展的宣传稿。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
绘画：drawing→ painting
激发：spirit→spark
欣赏：appreciate→admire
欢迎：greet→welcome
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
The exhibition will last for two weeks,every student is welcome to visit.
合并句：
The exhibition will last for two weeks,during which every student is welcome to visit.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
an exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school , which sparks a growing love for traditional art .本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【高分句型2】
Most of the students think highly of this exhibition，which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【高分句型 3】
Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures,but also enable you understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better. not only...but also连接的并列句。
3.（2021·浙江1月卷）
假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇 发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍活动安排；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Distinguished guests:
On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students.
As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming. May you have an unforgettable experience.
【分析】
本文是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，向即将到校的新西兰学生致欢迎辞。
【解析】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1．表示欢迎；
2．介绍活动安排；
3．表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
on behalf of; would like to; convey; sincere welcome; be of significance; splendid; be worthy of; appreciate; teaching methods; canteen; extremely expect; unforgettable
第三步：连词成句
1. On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
2. At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school.
3. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school.
4. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods.
5. After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students.
6. As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming.
7. May you have an unforgettable experience.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：at first
2.表并列补充关系：Furthermore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students. (运用了强调句型)
【2020年】
1.（2020年6月，浙江卷）
假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now?
I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.
We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。
要求：1.询问近况（How are you feeling now?）
2.告知班级消息（my good news; performed a song which you taught us）
3.表达祝愿（wish you a quick and complete recovery）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery
第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.
2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.
3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.
4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
2.（2020年1月，浙江卷）
假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear George,
I'm writing to invite you to join us in the “Chinese speech contest for foreigners” to be held in our school. The activity is scheduled at 8:00 a.m. on January 20th in the lecture hall.
The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.
Immensely fascinated by its mysterious culture and age-old history, you can, undoubtedly give us a wonderful and impressive performance. You are expected to sign up for the contest at www. Chinesespeechcontestforforeigners.com. I'd appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇应用文写作。
第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。
第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组） ：Chinese speech contest（中文演讲比赛）；be scheduled（安排）；be bound to（必然）；gain a better understanding of（更好地了解）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【2019年】
1.（2019年6月，浙江卷）
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是应用文写作任务，要求写一封感谢信。
【详解】
1. 审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。
3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】
本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：eagerly，heartfelt gratitude，Honestly speaking，professional guidance等；高级句式：Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。这些都提升了文章的档次
【2018年】
1.（2018年11月，浙江卷）
假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：
1. 行程信息；
2. 钱包特征；
3. 联系方式。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. On 1st November, 2018 I flew business class on your flight 753 from China to London.
I clearly remember it was with me immediately I boarded the plane. However, on arrival in London Heathrow Airport, I found it gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one with around 200 dollars, my ID card, and 2 credit cards in it. Along with the items mentioned above, the wallet contains a family photo, my precious memory. As you can imagine, these matter a lot to me.
Has anybody happened to find it? Please email me at xxx@googlemail.com
Thank you for your time and support.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇考查的写作类型是求助信
【详解】
第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失，要求给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1.行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. boarded the plane, on arrival…, I found it gone. it must have……Has anybody happened to find it? Thank you for your time and support.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
What’s worse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. 更糟的是，里面有我的现金，身份证和两张信用卡。What’s worse意为“更糟糕的是”，连接并列两个坏的东西，且后面一个更严重。
【高分句型2】
I’d appreciate it if you could help me to get it back. 如果你能帮我把它拿回来，我会很感激的。I’d appreciate it if…如果……我会很感激的。
2.（2018年6月，浙江卷）
假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：
（1） 口语能力：
（2） 相关经验；
（3） 应聘目的。
注意：
（1） 词数80左右；
（2） 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。
第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子：I’m writing to apply for…，a good command of English，communicate with，get along with等。
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【2017年】
1.（2017年11月，浙江卷）
假定你是李华，得知外教Mr. Hall今年寒假不回国，想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信，内容包括：
1.时间
2.一同过节的家人
3.活动
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Mr. Hall,
I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19. It’s traditionally a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. We’ll make dumplings together and have a big dinner. We’ll also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents. If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.
Best wishes
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是一篇书信类作文。围绕写信人找收信人有什么事或要求、传达什么讯息等内容展开的，所以在书信的开头考生要说清楚写信目的I’m writing to invite you to come …；其次考生要根据题目给出的内容提示扩充题干或提纲，本文想邀请外教Mr. Hall到你家过春节celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19 …需要扩展过春节可以做的事情；最后要表明自己期待对方同意等If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.。这样一篇结构完整的书信作文就轻松完成了。考生在成文时应注意：合理发挥想象力，使文章的表达自然，丰满。注意文章的人称：以第一人称为主。时态：一般现在时。范文中使用了大量高中生熟悉的词汇traditionally， family reunion，have a big dinner，are able to， pick you up和句型，以提高文章的准确描述；恰当使用一些连词、插入语so 、also 、may even，使文章表达自然，流畅。注意次数：90—110之间。
【范文亮点】①It’s traditionally a time for family reunion.②If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.运用了主将从现的句型。
1.（2017年6月，浙江卷）
假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：
1. 参加者；
2. 时间、地点；
3. 活动：登山、野餐等。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Chris,
How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7:00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.
Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you don’t have spare time for this trip, it is fine. It’s just up to you.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇考查的作文类型是邀请信。
【详解】
本应用文贴近学生实际生活，虽然是命题作文，但还是保持一定的开放程度，形式是邮件，符合当今人们常见的信息交流方式。根据提示要求，本文要涵盖以下三点内容，1. 参加者；2. 时间、地点；3. 活动：登山、野餐等。考生需要认真谋篇，紧扣提示，准确全面地表达所要求的内容，在合适的地方拓展细节，使行文连贯。作为邀请信，要求语言得体，邀请的语气诚恳，有礼貌。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅。
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
I’m very honored to invite you to join us touring to the Green Hill this Saturday. 我非常荣幸邀请您加入这周六我们到绿山的旅行。I’m very honored to...非常荣幸做某事
【高分句型2】
I hope you can take my advice into consideration. 我希望你能考虑一下我的建议。运用宾语从句，take…into consideration顾及；考虑到……
【2016年】
1．（2016·天津卷）假设你是某高中的学生会主席李华。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿:
① 回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)；
② 谈谈收获或感想；
③ 表达祝愿与期望。
注意：① 词数不少于100；
② 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear friends，
_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
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Thank you.
【答案】Dear friends，
How time flies！Two weeks went by, and our exchange activities ended. On behalf of my school, I would like to express my feelings.
As scheduled, we participated in several instructive activities. We learnt many Chinese characters and took plenty of exercise together. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was very delicious. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists’ works.
In my opinion, everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other. And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip back to your country. I hope we’ll get together again next year.
Thank you.
【解析】这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面涵盖，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法句型使文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
2．（2016·新课标1卷）书面表达
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.
Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是一篇考生们熟悉的书信类体裁的书面表达，内容贴近学生生活，所以人人有话可说。文章没有给出开头和结尾，所以考生要注意书信的格式，包括称呼语，正文以及结束语等。在写作时要注意先列出写作要点，而且要注意将来时、现在时以及现在完成时的交错使用；注意使用高级句式和多种结构的使用，而且语气要委婉礼貌。
本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience, 现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help, 宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume也是文章的亮点所在。
3．（2016·新课标2卷）书面表达
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1．主题：环境保护；
2．展览时间；
3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15thand last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展。
文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；2.展览时间6月15日，持续三周；3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。4.投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。在写作时，注意书信的格式以及过渡用语的正确使用；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，恰当使用一些复合句或者谚语以增加获得高分的可能性。
4．（2016·新课标3卷）书面表达
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】题目要求写一封道歉信，李华因不能和Bob一起去书店而向Bob道歉，文章应使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句so that we’ll have more time to read and select books；条件句If it’s convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，使内容显得更加丰富。
【2015年】
1.【2015·新课标全国I】假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：
1. 栏目介绍；
2. 稿件内容；
3. 稿件长度：约400词；
4. 交稿日期：6月28日前。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；
3. 开头语已为你写好。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息要求写一封给美国朋友彼得写信的约稿，为学校校英文报“外国文化”栏目刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的文章。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as, look forward to , hear from等。
【考点定位】考查提纲作文。
【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。文中巧妙地使用了一些固定句式和过渡词语，不仅增强了表达效果，而且实现了形式与内容的统一。
2.【2015·北京】
假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：
1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）；
2. 说明你打算参加的原因；
3. 询问对方的意向。
注意： 1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。
提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you’d like to go with me.
This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.
【解析】本篇文章重点是李华邀请英国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营，属于典型的邀请信，只需按照邀请信的写作流程就可轻松写出。即发出邀请— 介绍活动(时间，地点，内容，参加原因)—期待和感谢。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday；I wonder if you’d like to go with me.
文中注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。
【考点定位】应用文类书面表达
【名师点睛】本题是一篇考的是邀请信，龙舟的一个艺术节，仍然是传统文化的主题。采分点主要是三个板块，第一个板块是相关细节的处理。因为在第一个要点当中写到，学生要自己设计时间、地点以及参赛人员，这使学生需要自行发挥得，编纂的时候要合理一些。第二个板块提到你的参加原因，原因必然是考官会关注的，为什么要参加龙州艺术界的活动。第三，他提到两个字，就是询问，希望学生在写作的时候尽量避开一些非常生硬的词汇。注意写邀请信常用句型：On behalf of…, I am writing to invite you to take part in the…；I’d like to be involved in…due to the fact that…；I am looking forward to your reply/ arrival/coming/ attendance等考生在应用文写作中一定要体现出交际功能，重视该文体的写作结构，除称呼与落款必须写齐全外，正文部分一般开头应道明写作目的，中间呈现具体细节，结尾处补充礼貌性话语。另外，应用文的语言结构忌过于复杂，用词忌过难过偏，少用倒装从句嵌套等长难句。语言与用词做到适用应用场合，准确到位即可。只要做到以上几点，应用文部分即可拿到一个不错的分数。
3.【2015·广东】你接受了一项写作任务，为英语校报写一篇科技报道。
[写作内容]
请根据以下信息，介绍国外医疗行业出现的一项新技术。内容包括：
技术名称：DNA检测
检测方法：唾液样本分析
检测费用：125英镑
检测时长：4到6周
检测用途： 1. 预测重大疾病
2. 预知食物偏好
3. 提示合适的锻炼方式
检测影响： 1. 增强健康意识
2. 易引起过度焦虑
*唾液样本：saliva sample
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容；
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。
【答案】
第一节DNA Detection
We can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses, predict whether people are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise. People should pay 125 pounds for it. It takes four to six weeks to finish the report. After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies. It may cause too many worries.
【解析】对于基础写作用5个句子概括医疗新技术，要求必须用上所有的要点，不能遗漏。对于概括短文大意，要抓住要点。叙述自己的班级情况时：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息。2.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态及一般将来时。 3.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I will explain to them that studying hard is very important运用了宾语从句，以及Sally was a teacher.who taught some students full of problems.定语从句。副词Therefore的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。
【考点定位】考查提纲作文。
【名师点睛】本题所给用5个句子概括医疗新技术的材料是学生不太熟悉的内容，所以要尽量使用学生熟悉的句式来写，还必须用5个句子表达所有的信息。此题主要考查阅读概括能力及语言的组织的能力。需要用一些高级句式及词汇来增加文章的亮点。
4.【2015·陕西】假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要点：
1.表示写信意图；
2.陈述应征目的；
3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。
写作要求：
1.邮件词数不少于100；
2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；
3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯
4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear MS Chen ,
I’mLi Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear MS Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示可知需要结合“英语文化节”的一则招募启事写一封应征邮件。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读招募启事，弄清招募职位所有信息和要求；2、根据写作要点从三个方面写应征邮件。写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.运用了so…that…句型，以及定语从句I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语，如apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along well with,,have such a good command of, lent a helping hand to, live up to等。插入语Besides，以及副词Successfully的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。
【考点定位】考查提纲作文
【名师点睛】这篇作文类似于读写类作文。首先要读懂招募启事，抓住重要信息。再结合提纲写作。内容贴近学生的生活，学生有话讲。也富有实用性。对学生的交际能力也会有所帮助。
5.【2015·四川】假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。
1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；
2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；
3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；
4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。
注意：
1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；
Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】
Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident thatI can help you learn Mandarin.
Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.
In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English.We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.
Hope for you early reply!
Yours Sincerely
Li Xia
【亮点说明】本文要点齐全，结构完整。使用多种句式，如定语从句：I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.、表语从句：It is just what I want.等。还使用了大量短语等。
【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
6.【2015·天津】假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。
（1）自我介绍；
（2）拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；
（3）询问对方的其他需求。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇：学生会 the Student Union
Dear Chris,
此处不能答题

Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】本篇书面要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.自我介绍及写信目的；2.拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；3. 询问对方的其他需求； 4．告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【考点定位】考查提纲作文。
【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。
7.【2015·重庆】Bookcrossing. Com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（controlled release），即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：
1.表明写信目的
2.选择一种分享方式
3.简述作出该选择的理由
4.希望了解更多信息
注意：（1）词数不少于80；
（2）在答题卡上做答
（3）书信格式及开头已给出（不计入总词数）
【参考答案】
Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.
You’ve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.
If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.
【解析】这是一封书信，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，不拖拉，使用短语：apply for申请；Looking forward to盼望着；Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.这句话运用learning做伴随状语，reason后面跟着一个同位语从句；not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.这个句子not only but also连接两个句子，第一个句子需要用部分倒装；
【2014年】
1.[2014·安徽卷]
为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART­TO­HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下：
1．表示理解并给予安慰；
2．提出建议并说明理由。
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．信中不能出现与本人相关的真实信息；
3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪
Hi Worried，
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Jamie
【思路点拨】本篇作文为写回信，为一篇应用文，但其格式已经给出，格式问题无需考虑。主要要求考生写出正文。
审题时，需要解决好如下问题：
一、写什么？这一信息包括在试题的背景介绍和内容要点两个部分之中。写信的背景：署名为Worried的同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。内容要点：1. 表示理解并给予安慰；2. 提出建议并说明理由。
二、如何写？这包括两个层次的问题：首先，文章的布局谋篇，哪个先写，哪个后写。按照常理，应该先“表示理解并给予安慰”，然后再“提出建议并说明理由”。其次，解决好形式与内容的统一。“表示理解并给予安慰”主要是论述，为说理。“提出建议并说明理由”主要是说明，建议或指导别人如何做，通常使用祈使句等表示建议的句型。本篇作文兼有议论和说明。
三、时态、人称、词数等。本文的基调为现在范畴的时态，人称以第二人称为主。注意在行文中使用一些高级句型，提高作文档次。词数要求为120左右。
【参考范文】
Hi_Worried，
I'm_sorry_to_know_that_you_are_having_such_a_bad_time_at_the_moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret. Here are three useful tips：
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of your anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours，
Jamie
2.[2014·江西卷]
假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school？”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。
1. 学会学习：方法、习惯等；
2. 学会做人：真诚、友善等；
3. 其他方面：考生自拟。
注意：1. 词数120左右；
2. 发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honour to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【思路点拨】今年的书面表达仍然属于半开放型作文试题，话题为学生所熟悉，要求考生以“高中阶段学习什么”为主题写一篇120词左右的发言稿，要求向高一学生传授高中三年的学习和生活体会。写作前要注意审题，由作文的要求可知，此篇文章首先应该抓住三个主要内容来展开写作，即如何学习，如何做人及其他方面；然后确定时态，由本文的内容可判断，本文应该以一般过去时为主，兼有一般将来时。考生同时应注意使用各种句式以及衔接词，尽量使文章语言丰富，表达流畅。
One possible version：
Good_morning,_everyone!_It_is_my_honour_to_be_here_to_share_with_you_my_opinions_on_what_to_learn_in_senior_high_school.
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.
In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pain, no gain. I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colourful and fruitful life here.
Thank_you！
3.[2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]
假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。

注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：住宿 accommodation
【思路点拨】 本文是一篇书信应用文。文章内容是李华计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，看到广告后感觉广告里有一些问题没说清楚，想要给校方写信咨询有关事项。考生要注意信的格式，还要注意时态的选择，即以一般现在时为主，兼有将来时，人称用第一人称。注意恰当地使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅，还可以使用一些高级句型和词汇来提高作文档次。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad，and I'd like to know something more about your six­week English course.First，when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week？Besides，I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
4.[2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ] 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
1. 家庭；
2. 工作；
3. 业余生活。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好。
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】 本文的话题是“十年后的我”，要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面来畅想十年以后的自己。文章应该使用将来时和第一人称。
参考要点：1.十年以后的生活和现在完全不同，会成为一个成年人，有了自己的家庭，甚至有了可爱的孩子。2.希望自己能够在自己喜欢的计算机行业工作，做一名程序设计师。工作顺利，和同事相处融洽。3.在业余生活中经常参加锻炼，如游泳、登山等。假期里出去旅游，生活多姿多彩。
本文要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。考生要根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【参考范文】
I_often_imagine_what_my_life_will_be_like_in_the_future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty­eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer. I'll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I'll do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I'll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I'll travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colourful.
5.[2014·辽宁卷]
假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活·创意无限(Innovations on Campus)”为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示，以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知。

注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3．开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：校园campus　创意作品innovation　颁奖prize­giving
【思路点拨】
本文采取以图画为载体的方式实质考查提纲类写作，这与以前单纯提纲类写作相比难度有所增加，难点在于考生容易遗漏图画中所列要点。但此图画中文字描述较多，难度自然下降。由于体裁是通知，所以应较多使用灵活变化的短句，而少量使用长难句。图画中所列的要点较多，考生要注意点与点之间的合理有效结合。
本文要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意语言力求准确、简洁。根据图画的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
One possible version
Notice
An exciting event “Innovations on Campus”is around the corner. Everyone of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.
Note that your innovations must be school things. Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.
All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym. Looking forward to the prize­giving ceremony? Sure! It'll be held from 15：00 to 17：00 on June 18. So don't miss the chance of being the winner. Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success. For any questions, call Li Hua at 44876655.
Come on, everybody! It's your show time.
Student Union
6.[2014·陕西卷]
假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。
写作要点：
1. 表示对客人的欢迎；
2. 介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等)；
3. 表达对客人的祝愿。
写作要求：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；
3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear American guests，
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】本题是应用文写作，体裁是写欢迎辞，是篇材料作文，且文体格式已经给出，因此在审题环节主要从以下几点着手：(1)主体时态：一般现在时；(2)主体人称：第三人称或第二人称；(3)写作要点：①欢迎客人；②“英语周”活动；③活动目的；④活动内容；⑤祝愿。在审题结束后要注意表达的准确性，行文的逻辑性和句式、词汇的多样性，尽量使用多样化的词汇和句式，并注意写作的层次，恰当地使用连接词和过渡性词汇，以增强文章的逻辑性和可读性。最后就是要注意书写的美观和标点符号的准确使用，避免拼写、标点等较低级的错误。
【参考范文】
Dear_American_guests，
On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.
As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The show will begin at two o'clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.
I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.
7.[2014·四川卷]
假设你是李夏，你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加高考的情况，请根据以下要点回信告知：
1. 考试日期与科目；
2. 考试准备情况；
3. 考试时的状态；
4. 对试题的感受；
5. 可能的考试结果。
注意：
1. 词数120左右；
2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
4. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：高考college entrance examination
Dear Sam，
Thank you for your concern. ________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Xia
【思路点拨】 今年四川省的写作仍沿用往年的半开放式作文形式。本次写作以信为载体，要求考生介绍自己参加高考的相关事宜。信的开头和结尾已经给出，不需要考虑信的格式，只需审出此文要点：1.考试日期与科目；2.考试准备情况；3.考试时的状态；4.对试题的感受；5.可能的考试结果。考生在写作过程中可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯并满足词数的要求。考生还可以根据行文的需要进行分段。
One possible version：
Dear_Sam，
Thank_you_for_your_concern. Well, I'm now taking the once­a­year college entrance examination. We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th, on the first day of which Chinese and maths will be tested, the second day geography, history, politics and English.
Over the past ten months, we have been busy in preparing for this examination. Besides listening to teachers carefully in class, we often study deep into the night. Therefore, I believe I can succeed.
At first, I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down because Chinese and maths, I came to realize, were very easy and English is my favourite subject. So I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college.
Best_wishes!
Yours,_
Li_Xia
8.[2014·天津卷] 假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津， 得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。 请你根据以下提示， 给他写封邮件：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、 饮食等)；
3. 介绍本班情况；
4. 希望Chris做哪些事情， 以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊。
注意：
1. 请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；
2. 可适当加入细节， 使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 词数不少于100; 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。
参考词汇：交换生 exchange student
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Jin
【思路点拨】 随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：
1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段表示欢迎，第二段介绍本地的生活，第三段介绍本班情况，以及为促进友谊Chris要做的一些事情。第二、三两点是作文的重点内容，需要多用一些笔墨。
2. 时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
3. 人称：第一人称。
4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。
5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【参考范文】
Dear_Chris，
I'm_Li_Jin,_monitor_of_Class_One,_Grade_Eleven. I'm very delighted to learn that you're coming to our class to study with us next term. I, on behalf of the whole class, welcome to China warmly.
It is a great honour for me to tell you some information relevant to the local life. First, our traditional foods are steam­bread and rice. I hope you can get used to them soon. In addition, the climate here is very similar to that in the USA, so there is no need for you to worry about it.
Now I'll introduce our class to you. Our class is made up of 52 students, all of whom are hard­working and friendly. There is no doubt that you can get along well with them. Our teachers are kind to us and treat us as their friends. Last of all, I would appreciate it if you can do something, such as helping us practise our spoken English, and introducing something about American culture, to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two countries.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours，
Li_Lin_
9.[2014·浙江卷]
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100～120个词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
注意：信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。
Dear Mr Wang，
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【思路点拨】 从文章体裁分析，这是较典型的推荐信写作，主要让考生就图书馆需要的两种书展开叙述，同时写出推荐的理由。所以考生要根据自己的思路，先要表明写信的目的在于推荐书，然后补充一定的推荐理由，最后还要提出希望得到图书馆的认可和赞同。文章可以从三方面入手：第一部分说明写信的理由；第二部分重点讲述推荐书目的理由；第三部分简要地进行感谢，希望得到认可。
在写作过程中，要注意好词好句的运用，如使用give some suggestions, arouse the curiosity, in addition to, recommend, not only…but also…等重要的词汇词组。句式要多样，如可以用独立结构Knowing that our library is going to…；主语从句What we need most are popular…；表语从句That is why I recommend another…；状语从句I’ll be glad if you can…等。
One possible version：
Dear_Mr_Wang，
Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.
What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about science discoveries.
In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspirations. That is why I recommend another category of books, literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts, fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.
I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours_sincerely，
Li_Yue
【2013年】
1.[2013·山东卷]
假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：
1．未及时回信的原因；
2．你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
注意：1.词数：120—150；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【思路点拨】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段表示道歉，说明没有及时回信的原因；第二段介绍假期的打算；第三段为祝福语。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连接词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。
One possible version：
Dear Tom，
How are you doing? You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation. I am sorry that I didn't reply without delay.How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study, for which I am very sorry. I hope you can understand me.
During the holiday, I am going to do a part－time job. On the one hand, I can earn some money to reduce the burden of my family. On the other hand, I can accumulate the social experience, which does good to my future life. At the same time, I will not forget to go over my lesson. I will spend an instructive holiday. How will you spend your holiday? I hope you have a good time.
These are my plans for the summer vacation. What's yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
2.[2013·陕西卷]
假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。
写作要点：
1．做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；3.你的感受。
注意：1.短文词数不少于100；
2．开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；
3．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
I am an 18－year－old middle school student.
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【思路点拨】本题是应用文写作，文章题材和体裁已经给出，无需考生过多考虑。而考生重点要注意审题，只有做好了审题环节才能保证写作的有效性和目的性。审题主要要做到以下几点：
(1)主体时态：一般过去时。
(2)主体人称：第一人称单数。
(3)内容要点：做家务的理由；做家务的过程；做家务的感受。其中做家务的过程要作为重点。另外，还要注意以下几点：
①分清层次和段落，切勿平铺直叙，“一逗到底”。
②句式﹑词汇要尽量多样，恰当使用较复杂的句式结构和较高级的词汇。
③文章衔接紧密，过渡自然，恰当使用好连接词或过渡性词汇。
④注意书写的整齐、美观，并正确使用标点符号。
【参考范文】
I'm_an_18－year－old_middle_school_student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly, I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.
At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.
【范文点评】 本文顺利地完成了试题的要求，文体﹑主体时态﹑主体人称的使用准确，涵盖了材料所包含的全部内容要点，而且还有适当的发挥。句式的应用多样，用到现在分词短语作状语﹑时间状语从句﹑让步状语从句﹑特殊句式、why not句型等。范文中连接词和过渡性词汇的运用准确恰当，使得文章的层次感强，衔接紧凑。范文有很强的可读性和示范性。
3.[2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]
假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：
1．外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)
2．象征意义
3．价格
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Tom，
How are you doing？
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【思路点拨】 中国结，是一种装饰手工艺品，是一种中国民间艺术形式。中国结造型优美、色彩多样，表达热烈浓郁的美好祝福，是赞颂以及传达衷心至诚的祈求和心愿的佳品。同学们对于中国结都是很熟悉的，甚至可能自己都做过这种中国结。考生成文时应注意：1.结构上：注意是书信格式； 2.时态：以一般现在时为主；3.人称：第一人称；4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；5.适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【参考范文】
Dear_Tom,_
How_are_you_doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials.They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide.In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck.People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.They are only 12.99 US dollars each.If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me.Also, do let me know if you need further information.Thank you!
Li_Hua
4.[2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：
李明：高个子，戴眼镜
航班号：CA985
到达：8月6日上午11：30
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
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Yours，
Li Hua

【思路点拨】写信是中学生最熟悉的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们有话可说。写作时应注意下面几点：
(1)注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给笔友Peter写信。
(2)注意时态的正确使用：信中对将来事情(如叔叔开会、航班抵达等)的描述与写信人的请求应用一般将来时，叔叔李明的情况介绍用一般现在时。
(3)要点全面、层次清楚、语言简练。
(4)注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点间逻辑连贯、行文通顺。
(5)适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
One possible version：
Dear Peter，
How_are_you_doing?
I'm writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I've asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you've asked for before.
Also, I'd like you to do me a favor.Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the US? Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11：30 am, August 6.My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses.And he will be in a blue jacket.
Looking_forward_to_your_reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
5.[2013·江西卷] 星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain)；
2. 活动的过程；
3. 你对于这次活动的评论。
注意： 1. 词数120左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【思路点拨】今年的书面表达仍然属于半开放型作文试题，话题为学生所熟悉，要求考生以一次登山活动为主题写一篇120词左右的夹叙夹议文。这是一个中学生非常熟悉的话题，可以肯定这篇作文一定能让考生有话可说。写作前要注意审题，由作文的要求可知，此篇文章首先应该抓住三个主要内容来展开写作，然后确定时态，由本文的体裁及内容可判断，本文应该用一般过去时。同时注意使用各种句式以及衔接词，尽量使文章语言丰富、表达流畅。
【参考范文】
In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain－climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8：00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time！
【2012年】
1.[2012·全国卷Ⅱ]
假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：
1．时间：周五晚8点至9点
2．地点：学生俱乐部
3．内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等
4．要求：备小礼物
注意：
1．词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi Susan，
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday.
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【思路点拨】这是一封邀请信。内容有四个要点：时间，地点和内容以及要求等。文章要紧紧围绕这四个要点展开。信件的开头要说明原因，重点放在晚会的时间，地点和内容上，考生要把该邀请信的这四个内容全部表达清楚。同时在信件的结尾段，要表达自己的愿望，希望对方能够接受邀请。考生应该注意段落过渡要自然，用词准确，表意清楚。
One possible version：
Hi Susan，
We're_throwing_a_surprise_party_for_Xiaoming's_birthday. We'd like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And it's going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we'll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games. It'll be nice to see how excited he will be. I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party, too.
Yours，
Li Hua
2.[2012·安徽卷]
假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文、理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由。
注意：
1.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.词数120左右；
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
参考词汇：文科 arts；理科science
Good afternoon，everyone.
Welcome to our school！
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【思路点拨】这是一篇发言稿，内含两个要点：介绍你所做的选择和说明选择的理由。文章要紧紧围绕这两个要点展开。各个要点表达要清晰，要点按提示给出的顺序，先介绍你所做的选择，然后说明选择的理由。层次要分明，衔接要自然。两个要点的重头戏是“说明选择的理由”，需要考生自己做合理的联想，理由要有新意，内容要符合逻辑。
One possible version：
Good_afternoon,_everyone.
Welcome_to_our_school!_ High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science. It was not an easy choice for me to make. After careful consideration, though, I decided on science as my main subject of study. The reasons are as follows.
First, science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China. Second, the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Third, my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student. Last but not least, my physics teacher is my role model, whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.
It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.
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3.[2012·辽宁卷] 假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，内容主要包括：
优点：1. 话题广泛；
2. 图片丰富；
3. 有助于提高学习兴趣。
建议：适当降低词汇难度。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor，
As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.
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本题仍是传统上的书信形式。试题要求我们谈一下对教材的看法，因此属于议论文类型的写作。文章总结了教材的三项优点，并且也提出了建议。
写作时我们要紧紧围绕试题所列要点来写，不要随意发挥，只按照自己的想法来写。写作时语言要有逻辑性和层次感，不要一处未交代清楚，另一处就开始了。
One possible version
Dear_Editor，
As_a_student_reader,_I_am_writing_to_talk_about_the_English_textbooks_published_by_your_house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What's more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, I'd like to suggest changing them into easier ones.
4.[2012·课标全国卷]
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括：
1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)；
2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)；
3.希望获准。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam，
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Li Hua
【思路点拨】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生写作时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题；第二段自我介绍，参加意图；第三段表达愿望：希望获准。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
One possible version：
Dear_Sir_or_Madam，
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Regards,_
Li_Hua
5.[2012·重庆卷]
某国际网站提供个人闲置物品交换服务。现在，你打算通过该网站将自己的一件闲置品与他人交换(exchange)。请你用英文在该网站上发帖，发布物品交换信息。内容应包括：
·你将拿出什么物品进行交换
·具体介绍该物品
·你希望换回什么物品
·请愿意交换的朋友给你留言
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)格式不限；
(3)文中不得使用考生真实姓名和学校名称。
【思路点拨】该题要求考生写一篇帖子在网站上发表——交换自己的物品。试题要求清楚，既有写作必需的硬性要求，又有可供考生自由发挥的空间，符合近年来重庆高考英语写作的基本要求。写作难点是“具体介绍该物品”和“你希望换回什么物品”，这里要求考生必须写出一两个次要点来充实该篇文章。
One possible version：
I would like to offer my MP3 to exchange with whoever is interested in it. My MP3 is in good condition (with the capacity of 4G) which is a famous band—SAMSUNG. I bought it one year ago but now my uncle gifted me another bigger one.
I do like to have some one exchange with me for an English text book of TOFEL, for I am going to get some preparation for this kind of test when I am in college. I sincerely hope that this book contains some model test material with records of tapes or MP3.
Drop me a line if you are interested in my offer.
6.[2012·四川卷]
假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1. 对英语学习的认识；
2. 自己目前的英语水平；
3. 自己英语学习存在的主要问题；
4. 对英语教学的两点建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms Li，
I’m_very_happy_to_have_you_as_our_English_teacher.
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Thank you!
Li Hua
【思路点拨】这是一封英文稿件，写作内容包括五个主要要点：
1. 对英语学习的认识；(一个要点)
2. 自己目前的英语水平；(一个要点)
3. 自己英语学习存在的主要问题；(一个要点)
4. 对英语教学的两点建议。(两个要点)
文章应围绕这五个要点合理展开，可使用适当的词句使文章衔接自然、层次分明。考生需要自己做合理的联想，可根据主题对要点进行适当发挥，内容要切合实际、符合逻辑。
One possible version：
Dear Ms Li，
I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua