人教版 (2019)选择性必修 第二册Unit 5 First Aid学案

这是一份人教版 (2019)选择性必修 第二册Unit 5 First Aid学案，共4页。

叙事性记叙文
本单元的写作任务是写一篇叙事类记叙文。该类作文以叙述事件为主，要通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等交代清楚。
[基本框架]
1．开头——交代清楚事件的背景。
2．主体——主要叙述事件的发生、经过及结果。
3．结尾——呼应标题，发表感想、愿望等。
注意事项：
1．标题：如有标题，标题一定要明确，能点明事件或主题。
2．人称：通常用第一人称和第三人称。
3．时态：在叙事过程中，一般用过去时态。在描写背景或某景象时，常用过去进行时，这样显得更加生动形象。
[常用词块]
1．withut delay/hesitatin毫不迟疑/毫不犹豫
2．learn a lt frm it从中学到很多东西
3．give us a warm welcme热烈欢迎我们
4．have a gd time with us和我们一起玩得很开心
5．participate mre actively in helping thse in need更积极地参与帮助那些有需要的人
6．rush him t the hspital赶紧送他就医
7．a basic knwledge f first aid基本的急救知识
8．in the case f emergency在这种紧急情况下
9．benefit a great deal frm从……中受益良多
10．cause severe injuries t his feet使他的脚受重伤
[常用语句]
1．That's really an unfrgettable experience.
那真是一次难忘的经历。
2．After a while，many peple came t help us.
过了一会儿，许多人来帮助我们。
3．Every time I thught f it，I was full f energy.
每当我想到这件事，我就充满了活力。
4．Althugh it happened three years ag，I never frgt the evening party.
虽然那是三年前发生的事了，但我从未忘记那个晚会。
5．Hardly had he heard smene calling fr help when he jumped int the river withut hesitatin.
他一听到有人喊救命，就毫不犹豫地跳进了河里。
6．Befre the ambulance came，the lady wh prved t be a nurse later perfrmed first aid t the kid.
在救护车到来之前，那位后来被证明是护士的女士对这个孩子进行了急救。
7．The stry is a gd example in which first aid makes a big difference.
这个故事是一个很好的例子，说明急救可以起到很大的作用。
8．Frm it，we knw it is necessary t knw basic first aid skills s that we can be better prepared fr an emergency.
从这件事中，我们知道了解基本的急救技能是必要的，以便我们可以更好地为紧急情况做好准备。
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你与同学参加学校举办的“红十字会急救培训”活动的全过程。
注意：词数80左右。
参考词汇：救护员证书first aider certificate
[学生习作]
[升格作文]
Last week, I tk part in the Red Crss first aid training in ur schl.
At the beginning, we assembled in the schl hall t listen t the imprtance and basic steps f first aid. After a shrt gruping, we were led t a classrm where a trainer demnstrated the detailed prcedure. We watched clsely as he shwed every mve. Then came the test fr first aid. Althugh I was nervus, I managed t carry ut all the mves taught.
T my excitement, I was issued a first aider certificate. I thught that I culd help mre peple in need with the knwledge f first aid.
生活中常有意外事故发生。假设你和你班同学李明从锅炉房打完开水，在回寝室的路上，李明的热水瓶突然破裂，开水烫伤了他的脚。于是你对此实施了必要的急救。请你结合此事，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，向学校英文报Teens投稿，主要内容包括：
1．描述事故发生的经过；
2．你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院作进一步的处理)；
3．简要谈谈你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识。
参考词汇：锅炉房biler huse 热水瓶 therms bttle
Accidents always happen suddenly.






【参考范文】
Accidents always happen suddenly.One day，Li Ming and I were n ur way back after fetching sme biling water frm the biler huse when Li Ming's therms bttle burst and the biling water caused severe injuries t his feet.The burn was s severe that the skin was red and swllen.
Immediately，I carried him t the water tap nearby and put his feet under the cld running water until the pain lessened.Afterwards，I called a taxi and rushed him t the hspital where he received further treatment.
Only then was I aware what a difference a basic knwledge f first aid can make，especially in such a case.
Last week, I tk part in the Red Crss first aid training in ur schl.
At first, we listened t the imprtant and basic steps f first aid in the schl hall. In a classrm we watched clsely as a trainer shwed every mve f the prcedure. In the test fr first aid I managed t carry ut all the mves taught.
T my excitement, I was issued a first aider certificate.
点评：
1．文中出现了一些简单的语法错误。如imprtant应为名词imprtance作宾语。
2．词汇有限，语法单调，高级词汇太少。
3．只用了一些简单句，缺少高级句式。
4．全文不太连贯，衔接不够顺畅。