高考英语建议信的写作技巧（共39张PPT）课件PPT

这是一份高考英语建议信的写作技巧（共39张PPT）课件PPT，共39页。PPT课件主要包含了写作三步曲，适当运用模板，即时训练，建议信模版等内容，欢迎下载使用。

说明写信目的→提出建议以及改进措施，忠告→表达希望采纳建议，或者期盼回复。
语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。在提出缺点之前，最好先肯定其优点。
三段式：第一段： 点明主题第二段： 陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由 （是什么，为什么，怎么样）第三段：总结全文，表明希望
Dear Li Hua, I’m srry t hear that yu have such a difficult prblem. In yur letter, yu said+ 你碰到的问题. My suggestins are as fllws. Firstly, ____________,because________. Secndly, yu shuld________________, because_________. Thirdly, yu’d better ___________________.Only in this way can yu __________.What’s mre,_____. I hpe my suggestins will be helpful fr yu. Best wishes. Yurs, xxx
第二段：⑴ 说明建议的内容；（是什么）⑵ 提出具体建议的原因；（为什么）⑶ 指出采纳建议的益处。（怎么样）注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。
Opening sentences 开头句
I am very glad t hear frm yu. Thank yu fr yur letter.3. Yu have asked me fr my advice with regard t … and I will try t make sme suggestins.4. I am writing in reply t … 5. I am srry t hear that…
表示建议的句子Yu shuld/must …Dn’t …What/Hw abut trying a new methd?Why nt find a new way?Yu’d better change yur frmer plan.I’d like t suggest yu make a new plan.If I were yu, I wuld …I’d like t suggest …I strngly recmmend …Yu might as well …
学会用nt nly… but als…表示并列含义 亲爱的朋友们，去参加课外活动吧，这不但会使你的校园生活变得丰富多彩，还会改善你的学习。Dear friends, please take part in after-class activities, which will nt nly make yur schl like clrful, but als imprve yur learning.
Clsing sentences 结束语
I hpe yu will find my suggestins/advice helpful/ useful.2. At last, I hpe I will be yur best friend’s frever! Gd luck t yu! 3. Let’s keep in tuch. I d hpe t hear gd news frm yu.
Read Xia Dng’s letter n page 7 and answer: What is Xia Dng’s prblem?Read the instructins at the tp f page 7 and find ut what yu are required t d.
He’s nt gd at cmmunicating with peple. He finds it hard t make friends with his classmates.
T ask peple their likes and dislikes
T jin in discussins
T shw interest in thers’ ideas
T share his feelings with thers
II Brainstrming
Yur advice fr Xia Dng
Presenting the prblem
Prpsing the slutin
Dear Xiadng, I’m srry yu are having truble in making friends. Hwever, the situatin is easy t change if yu take my advice. Here are sme tips t help yu: First, why nt…? If yu d this,… Secndly, yu shuld/can… Then/ That way,… Thirdly, it wuld be a gd idea if… By ding this, … I hpe yu will find these ideas useful. Yurs, Miss Wang
Firstly, why nt g and talk t peple standing alne. I agree that this is difficult but that student may be lnely t,If yu d this,I’m sure yu will sn have new friends. Secndly, yu shuld begin the cnversatin by asking abut their likes and dislikes,That way,yu will sn find peple with the same interests,because that is a gd way t find new friends. Thirdly,it wuld be a gs idea if yu try t jin in a discussin. Yu may feel that is right.By ding this,yu are letting peple knw hw friendly yu are.S there shuld be n prblem.It shuld prvide yu with sme new friends.
你是我们学校一名很热心的学生，得知我们校要建设娱乐休闲中心，正在征求同学们的意见，请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信。       1. 娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。       2. 最好在学生的课余时间开放。       3. 尽量不要收费。       4. ……
第一段：引出话题，得知要建娱乐中心，想提建议。第二段：建议建乒乓球室和羽毛球场。第三段：建议课余时间开放，能使其得到充分利用。第四段：免费开放，有些学生经济困难。第五段：简单总结。
Dear Mr. President,     It’s cme t my attentin that ur schl is ging t build a new leisure center. I’m writing t ask yu t cnsider the fllwing suggestins.     Firstly, I’d like t suggest that there shuld be a table-tennis rm as well as a badmintn curt. I think it wuld d great gd if yu culd build the center with an eye t thse students wh are interested in playing table-tennis r badmintn.     Secndly, culd the center pen in ur spare time? If s, we will have enugh time t make full use f it.     Thirdly, we will be mre than happy if the center is free. As we all knw, nt every student can affrd the extra expense.     Thank yu fr reading my letter. I hpe yu will cnsider my suggestins. If the center is built, it will greatly enhance student life here n campus.　　                                             Yurs sincerely,　　                                             Li Hua
Dear ___________, Yu have asked me fr my advice with regard t(关于) _______, and I will try t make sme cnductive(建设性的) suggestins here. In my pinin, yu wuld be wise t take the fllwing actins:_________________(建议的内容) . I hpe yu will find these prpsals useful, and I wuld be ready t discuss this matter with yu fr further details. Gd Luck with yur______________(祝愿) Yurs sincerely 签名
English/exams
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。 建议内容： 1. 不要灰心，保持良好心态； 2. 掌握学习方法； 3. 培养对英语的兴趣爱好。
第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己是高一的学生，在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。建议：1. 保持良好心态； 2. 掌握学习方法： 如坚持每天记单词，读英语课文；多 练、多问等。 3. 培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好。 develp an interest in learning English 坚持每天记单词： insist n/ persist in ding insist n/ persist in remembering wrds every day
Dear Li Hua, I’m srry t hear that yu have such a difficult prblem. In yur letter, yu said yu have sme difficulties in learning English. This is a nrmal prblem that every student culd suffer, s I think I can give yu sme useful suggestins. My suggestins/ advice are as fllws. Firstly, yu shuld listen t the teachers carefully in the class. Secndly, the best way t learn English is reading it well and knwing the meanings f it. Thirdly, yu can speak English with yur classmates and teachers, which can imprve yur listening and speaking abilities. What’s mre, the mst imprtant advice is reading English bks befre the class and after the class.
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班； ⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。Dear Peter, I'm glad t hear that yu can ask fr my advice n hw t learn Chinese well.____ _____________________________________________Best wishes,Li Hua
Dear Peter,I'm glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestins. First, it is imprtant t take a Chinese curse, as yu'll be able t learn frm the teachers and practice with yur fellw students. Then, it als helps t watch TV and read bks, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever pssible. Besides, it shuld be a gd idea t learn and sing Chinese sngs, because by ding s yu'll learn and remember Chinese wrds mre easily. In additin, Yu can als make mre Chinese friends. They will tell yu a lt abut China and help yu learn Chinese.Try writing t me in Chinese next time.Best wishes, Li Hua
第二篇建议信： 对于我的朋友花大量时间上网，耽误学习的建议信建议内容：1）和他面对面地交流、沟通；2）给她发邮件或短信；3）告诉他学习的重要性。
Dear Li Hua, I’m srry t hear that yu have such a difficult prblem. In yur letter, yu said yur friend spends mst f his time chatting n the Internet and ften ges t the Internet cafe instead f attending classes. Yu really want t help him ut but yu dn’t knw what t d with it/ hw t help him. Well. I wuld like t give my advice fr yu. My advice are as fllws. Firstly, I think yu shuld have a talk with him sincerely. Because if yur friend skips classes, he is nt ging t d well at schl.
Secndly, yu can e-mail him r leave a message. Thirdly, yu shuld tell him the imprtance f study. Because every ne f us just has ne chance t g t high schl, he shuld study hard and nt waste time in indulging n the Internet. In a wrd, I hpe my suggestins will be helpful fr yu. / Best wishes. Yurs, Editr
Hmewrk假定你是某中学的学生李华，请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，主要内容包括：优点：1.话题广泛 : 2.图片丰富 3.有助于提高学习兴趣 建议：适当降低词汇难度Dear Editr, As a student reader, I am writing t talk abut the English textbks published by yur huse.____________________________________________________________________________________
表示并列的过渡词或短语 as well; r; t; als; as well as; and ; nt nly…but als…. ; bth … and…. either … r… ; neither…nr… First……；Secnd……; Third…… Fr ne thing; Fr anther (thing)2. 表示递进的过渡词或短语 Mrever ; What’s mre; Besides; What’s wrse,
3. 表转折对比的过渡词: instead f, but, hwever, n the cntrary, althugh, different frm, despite in spite f, Sme …;Others… On the ne hand,…;On the ther hand, …4. 表原因的过渡词: because, because f, since, as, fr, nw that, thanks t, due t（由于）
5.表结果的过渡词: s, thus, therefre, as a result, s that, then, 6.表条件的过渡词: if, unless , as lng as 7.表时间的过渡词: recently, finally, at the same time, at last, frm nw n, 8.表特定的顺序关系的过渡词:first, firstly, secnd, secndly, third, thirdly, abve all, first f all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last
9.表换一种方式表达的过渡词: in ther wrds, that is t say 10.表进行举例说明的过渡词: fr instance, fr example, such as 11.表陈述事实的过渡词: In fact, T tell yu the truth 12.表目的的过渡词： fr this reasn, fr this purpse, s that, in rder t, s as t 13.表总结的过渡词: In a wrd(总之，简言之), in shrt(总之), generally speaking, finally, in cnclusin, at last, in summary
对于某人来说，做某事很…It is adj /adv (fr sb t d sth)… 学英语对于我们来说不简单 It is nt easy fr us t learn English2.不明白/想知道I wnder +疑问词/if 我想知道怎么能减肥 I wnder hw t lse weight.
3.做某事的最好的办法就是1) The best way t d sth is t d …2) There is n better way t d sth than t d sth 学好英语的最佳途径就是阅读浅显的英语书籍 1) The best way t learn English well is t read many easy English bk. 2) There is n better way t learn English than t read many easy English bk.
4.学会用定语从句拓展句意教材当中有许多好看的图片，这些图片能够帮助我们更好的理解英语。 There are many beautiful and clrful pictures, which can help us understand English better.一些教材当中有些生词或表达、表情（expressins），这些对于我们来说很难。Sme f the texts have t many new wrds and expressins which are hard fr us.
5.用举例子的方式拓宽句意 这些书有许多优点，其中之一就是我们可以发现大量的话题，比如说科学，文化和历史。These bks have many advantages, ne f them is that we can find a variety f tpics, such as science, culture and histry.