2021届宁波中考英语复习常考话题写作课件:话题7 观点阐述 (共23张PPT)
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这是一份2021届宁波中考英语复习常考话题写作课件:话题7 观点阐述 (共23张PPT),共23页。PPT课件主要包含了写句子等内容,欢迎下载使用。
分析浙江近4年中考真题可知,观点阐述类文章通常是给出热点且有争议的话题,让考生阐述自己的观点。如:2019绍兴考查了陈述自己及同学们对于学校是否有必要设立“无作业日”的观点和理由;2018温州考查了针对当前孩子被父母安排上补习班而没有周末的问题,要求考生发表看法;2017湖州考查了针对“T change r nt”这一话题,要求考生发表看法。
[2018·温州]如今,国内外很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末,如下图中的 Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法,以Weekend r Nt?为题写一篇约110 词的英语短文向Parents 杂志投稿,让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。
注意:文中若出现“Jack”以外的人名或任何学校名称,该作文得分不超过12 分。【定人称、定时态】1.人称:题干要求以Jack行文,用第三人称;2.时态:阐述当前现实情况,用一般现在时。
【巧衔接】1.成文时,可使用 which引导的非限制性定语从句,说明对于Jack的影响;2.可使用 As a result说明这种情况对于学生的影响;3.可使用 What is wrse进一步说明孩子们没有时间管理自己的生活;4.成文时,可使用 Still,Nwadays等副词,说明程度与时间,使句子之间衔接流畅。
【成篇章】Weekend r Nt?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【句子升格】1.Still, his parents are pushing him t d mre math exercises and this wrries him a lt.(用which引导的非限制性定语从句升格)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.T make full use f the weekends is necessary.(用it作形式宾语升格)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.I hpe all the children can have the freedm t chse their hbbies and enjy their weekends.(用宾语从句 what they like t d升格)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文升格】Weekend r Nt?Jack has t attend lts f classes at weekends.He has little time fr his favrite sprt—sccer.①Still, his parents are pushing him t d mre math exercises,which wrries him a lt.Nwadays,many students are under much pressure like Jack.②Their parents believe it necessary fr them t make full use f the weekends and learn as much as pssible.As a result,sme students are stressed ut and therefre lse interest in learning anything.What is wrse,they may nt be able t learn t manage their wn life.③I d hpe all the children can have the freedm t chse what they like t d and enjy their weekends.
【参考谚语】1.A gd medicine tastes bitter.良药苦口。2.Time tries all things.时间检验一切。3.Sharp tls make gd wrk.工欲善其事,必先利其器。4.All wrk and n play makes Jack a dull by.只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
【开头句】1.不同的学生对此有不同的看法。(abut)____________________________________________2.每个硬币都有两面。它既有优点也有缺点。(bth…and…)_____________________________________________________________3.最近我们就“改变”这一话题进行了讨论。(have a discussin abut;T change r nt)________________________________________________________________
Different students have different pinins abut it.
Every cin has tw sides.It has bth advantages and disadvantages.
Recently we had a discussin abut the tpic “T change r nt”.
【中间句】1.他们担心如果家里又多了一个孩子,他们会从父母那里得到更少的爱。(get…frm;cme t)_____________________________________________________________________________________2.随着互联网的发展,许多学生喜欢在业余时间上网。(with the develpment f…;enjy surfing;in ne's spare time)______________________________________________________________________________________
They wrry that they will get less lve frm their parents if anther child cmes t the family.
With the develpment f the Internet,many students enjy surfing in their spare time.
3.约75%的人认为这是一种流行的娱乐形式,可以给他们带来更多的乐趣。(a ppular frm f entertainment;bring sb.sth.)____________________________________________________________________________________4.如果他们的父母变老或生病,他们可以轮流照顾他们。(take turns t d;lk after)__________________________________________________________________5.长时间看屏幕对眼睛有害。(be harmful t)____________________________________________________________________6.如果我们答应做某事,我们最好尽力遵守诺言。(prmise t d;try ne's best t d)__________________________________________________________________
Abut 75% f peple think it is a ppular frm f entertainment and can bring them mre fun.
If their parents get lder r ill,they can take turns t lk after them.
Lking at the screen fr t lng is harmful t peple's eyes.
If we prmise t d smething,we'd better try ur best t keep the prmise.
【结尾句】1.In a wrd,facing prblems,we shuld take actins t change.Surely it will make a great difference.2.As fr me,I'd lve t have a brther r sister as cmpany s that we can share ur happiness and srrw any time.3.In my pinin,children between the ages f 9 and 14 shuld nt have smart phnes.4.I d believe that we children need t relax urselves after wrking s hard at schl.
注意:(1)短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;(2)词数:80-100;(3)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。参考词汇:无作业日 Hmewrkfree Day短文首句: I've dne a survey abut whether it is necessary t have Hmewrkfree Day.Here are the results.【定人称、定时态】人称:________________ 时态:________________
【巧衔接】1.成文时,用________引导目的状语从句,说明设立“无作业日”可以使学生有更多的空余时间;2.介绍反面观点时,可用________与正面观点进行对比;3.考生可用副词________进一步陈述设立“无作业日”可以使孩子们放松身心;可用连词________串联反对设立“无作业日”的两个理由,使文章更加紧凑。
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