陕西省部分学校2020-2021学年高一上学期第一次月考英语试题汇编：应用文写作专题

陕西省部分学校

2020-2021学年高一上学期第一次月考英语试题汇编

应用文写作专题

陕西省咸阳市实验中学2020-2021学年高一上学期第一次月考英语试题

第二节 书面表达

52. 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom刚刚转入新的学校，感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境。请你按照以下要点回信。

1.多跟同学交流沟通；2.积极参加学校活动；3.向老师寻求帮助。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

陕西省延安市第一中学2020-2021学年高一上学期第一次月考英语试题

第二节 书面表达(满分25分)

61. 假如你的好朋友李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于100字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。

提示词：give up（放弃）  concentrate on（集中精力于）

LiHua spent too much time playing computer games

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I’m sure he will make great progress soon.

陕西省榆林市第一中学2020-2021学年高一上学期第一次月考英语试题

61. 某英文网站正在举办以"My School Life"为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。

注意:

(1)文中必须包括表格中全部内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；

(2)文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；

(3)词数:70—80左右；

(4)短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My School Life

I'm Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. I'd like to share my school life with you.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

陕西省渭南市临渭区尚德中学2020-2021学年高一上学期第一次月考英语试卷

第二节 书面表达(满分25分) 

     假定你是中学生李华,从校英文报上看到一封求助信:从美国来的交换生John感到很难适应新环境,非常孤独,希望得到同学的帮助。

请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括:

1．表达关心;

2．关于如何交朋友给出自己的建议;

3．邀请来家里做客。

注意:

1．词数100左右;

2．可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3．邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Dear John,

I'm Li Hua, one of your schoolmates.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

I hope everything will be fine with you in the future.

Yours,

Li Hua

陕西省西安市长安区第一中学2020-2021学年高一上学期第一次月考英语试卷

第二节 书面表达(满分15分)

82. 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack正在为即将到来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。

1、制定复习计划，树立信心。

2、坚持锻炼身体。

3、保持良好睡眠,。

注意：词数100词左右。

可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

参考答案

陕西省咸阳市实验中学2020-2021学年高一上学期第一次月考英语试题

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful.

Firstly, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. In this way, you will get to know each other better. Secondly, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which are good for developing friendly relationship. Lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might ask your teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．

I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is anything more I can do to help，please let me know．

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封回信。

【详解】第一步：

审题：回信   提出建议

人称：第二人称

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分写信目的，第二部分提出具体的建议，第三部分希望建议有帮助。

要点：

1.写信目的：得知Tom难以尽快融入新环境，给他提出一些建议

2．具体的建议

①多跟同学交流沟通

②积极参加学校活动

③向老师寻求帮助

3．希望建议对Tom有帮助

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

have trouble doing…； fit in；helpful；communicate with；as much as possible；get to know；take part in；be good for ；develop relationship；be faced with；offer sb. suggestions；be of help to 

第三步：连词成句

(1)I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school.

(1)Such problems are quite normal.

(3) The following suggestions may be helpful.

(4) You may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. 

(5) You will get to know each other better.

(6) It might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities.

 (7) These activities are good for developing friendly relationship.

(8) When you are faced with some tough problems you might ask your teachers.

(9)The teachers can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．

(10) I hope my advice will be of some help to you.

(11)If there is anything more I can do to help，please let me know．

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序： first of all; to begin/start with in the beginning

firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。

【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 have trouble doing…；fit in；communicate with；get to know；take part in；be good for；develop relationship；be faced with；offer sb. suggestions；be of help to 等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如it作形式主语句式的运用 it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities；定语从句的运用…which are good for developing friendly relationships；过去分词作状语的运用faced with some tough problems, you might ask your teachers等。

陕西省延安市第一中学2020-2021学年高一上学期第一次月考英语试题

【答案】       Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.

Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I’ll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I’ll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I’m sure he will make great progress soon.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇开放作文。要求考生写一篇文章，说说如何帮助沉迷于电脑游戏的朋友李华。

【详解】第1步：假如你的好朋友李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于100字的短文。提示词：give up（放弃）  concentrate on（集中精力于）

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：spend time in doing/on sth.（花时间做某事/在……上花费）; do harm to（对……有害）; be addicted to（沉迷于）; concentrate on（集中精力于）; ask sb. to do sth.（请求某人做某事）; turn to sb. for help（向某人求助）; give up（放弃）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.中使用了that引导宾语从句；If I try these, I’m sure he will make great progress soon.中使用了if引导条件状语从句。

陕西省榆林市第一中学2020-2021学年高一上学期第一次月考英语试题

【答案】My School Life

I'm Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. I'd like to share my school life with you.

We have many subjects at school such as Chinese, English and so on. I am focused more on

Chinese, for I think it's getting more and more widely used throughout the world. Our teachers are kind and helpful. Whenever I have problems, they are always ready to give me a hand.

   School activities are rich and colorful. I often play basketball with my classmates, which brings me lots of fun. I like reading as well. So I often spend my free time reading in the school library.

My school life is wonderful and I enjoy it very much.

【解析】

【分析】本文属于结合提纲完成的给材料作文。

【详解】这是一篇投稿作文。某英文网站正在举办以"My School Life"为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点可能要用到的表达；之后紧扣要点进行写作。写作时要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时注意语言的表达应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句。尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率。词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以给文章增色添彩。

【点睛】本文表达上层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时词汇、句式丰富多样。高分句型如下：使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句： I often play basketball with my classmates, which brings me lots of fun.使用了spend...doing...的表达：So I often spend my free time reading in the school library.使用让步状语从句：Whenever I have problems, they are always ready to give me a hand.

陕西省渭南市临渭区尚德中学2020-2021学年高一上学期第一次月考英语试卷

Dear John,

　 I'm Li Hua, one of your schoolmates. I'm sorry to hear that you are lonely in this new school. Now I'd like to offer you some suggestions.

　To start with, it's normal for you to feel lonely, because you are living in an entirely new environment. What’s more, you'd better take an active part in class and after-- school activities, which can help you make more friends. Don't be afraid to show people what you are really good at, because it's easier to make friends with those who share the same hobby. Last but not least, I'd like to be your friend and invite you to come to my home on weekends. My mother will be pleased to cook delicious food and you are sure to enjoy it.

I hope everything will be fine with you in the future.

陕西省西安市长安区第一中学2020-2021学年高一上学期第一次月考英语试卷

【答案】Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you feel extremely nervous before an important exam. I'd like to give you some suggestions.

First of all, you’d better make careful plans before exams to master what you've learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence. Besides, why not take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. Last but not least, don't stay up late studying. It's very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.

I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封书信：假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack正在为即将到来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。1、制定复习计划，树立信心。2、坚持锻炼身体。3、保持良好睡眠,。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：feel extremely nervous before an important exam（在一次考试前感到非常紧张）；make careful plans before exams（考试前做详细计划）；build up your confidence（增强你的自信）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文是一封书信，格式正确，，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I am sorry to hear that you feel extremely nervous before an important exam.句中that引导宾语从句；you’d better make careful plans before exams to master what you've learned completely.句中what引导宾语从句；why not take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic.句中which引导非限制性定语从句；另外，First of all, Besides, why not take proper exercise regularly, Last but not least,等的运用为文章增色添彩。