2020-2021学年Unit 1 Teenage life示范课ppt课件
展开这是一份2020-2021学年Unit 1 Teenage life示范课ppt课件,共33页。PPT课件主要包含了Writing,tips,建议信写作总结,建议信,Homework等内容,欢迎下载使用。
Reading fr Writing
D yu have such prblems as mentined by the fllwing teenagers?
Eric, 15, Chicarg
Xu Ting, 15, Hangzhu
Min H, 15, Seul
Susan Lu, an adviser fr teenagers, always receives many letters asking fr advice frm many wrried friends. In additin she is als respnsible fr prviding advice fr cnfused and wrried parents in a clumn called “Talking Teens”. Here is a letter f advice frm Susan. 苏珊·罗是一名青少年顾问,她经常收到许多来信,许多忧心忡忡的朋友来寻求建议。此外,她还负责在一个名为“会说话的青少年”的专栏中为困惑和担忧的父母提供建议。这是苏珊的一封建议信。
in additin 而且
in a clumn在一个专栏中
be respnsible fr负责...
Hw t write a letter f advice
Study the rganizatin and language features f such a letter研究这封信的组织和语言特征
What is the purpse f a letter f advice? What kind f aspects shuld be included in such kind f letter?
建议信的目的是针对有关问题进行分析,并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和合理的建议。建议信的基本框架:1.开头( beginning)—开门见山,向对方陈述自己的观点(state yur idea)。2.主体( bdy)—对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由,接着提出自己的建议(reasns and evidence)。3.结尾(ending)—呼应开头,重申观点(restate yur pinin)。
A letter f advice shuld include the fllwing parts:DateGreetingBdyClse结束语Signature
10 September 2018Dear Wrried Friend, Yu wrte that yu are very wrried abut yur friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that yu are anxius and feel terrible. Yu think that yur friend plays cmputer games t ften and spends t much time nline.I recmmend that yu talk t yur friend abut his behaviur. It is nt unusual fr teenagers f yur generatin t be attracted t cmputer games and the nline wrld. But spending t much time nline is unhealthy and makes it very difficult t fcus n ther things in life. Sme students even becme addicted t the Internet and cannt cncentrate n schl and family life. I think yu shuld encurage yur friend t try new hbbies. Why nt discuss the prblem tgether? I am sure he will listen t yu, since yu are his gd friend.All the best, (祝一切顺利,万事如意)
Translatin你在信中说你很担心你的朋友陈磊。我很理解你很焦虑,感觉很糟糕。你认为你的朋友太经常玩电脑游戏,花太多的时间在网上。我建议你和你朋友谈谈他的行为。对于你们这一代的青少年来说,被电脑游戏和网络世界所吸引是很正常的。但是花太多的时间上网是不健康的,而且会让你很难集中精力在生活中的其他事情上。一些学生甚至沉迷于网络,不能集中精力在学校和家庭生活上。我认为你应该鼓励你的朋友尝试新的爱好。为什么不一起讨论这个问题呢?我相信他会听你的,因为你是他的好朋友。
Yu wrte that yu are very wrried abut yur friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that yu are anxius and feel terrible. Yu think that yur friend plays cmputer games t ften and spends t much time nline.I recmmend that yu talk t yur friend abut his behaviur. It is nt unusual fr teenagers f yur generatin t be attracted t cmputer games and the nline wrld. But spending t much time nline is unhealthy and makes it very difficult t fcus n ther things in life. Sme students even becme addicted t the Internet and cannt cncentrate n schl and family life. I think yu shuld encurage yur friend t try new hbbies. Why nt discuss the prblem tgether? I am sure he will listen t yu, since yu are his gd friend.
I knw what the prblem is
I understand hw yu feel
This is my advice and reasns
I think my advice will help
The tense used in a letter f advice
★求助信中提到的问题为当前存在的问题,而不是过去或未来存在的事情,故建议信解决的是当前的问题,时态应为现在时:一般现在时为首选,次之为现在完成时have/has+过去分词,根据需要也会使用现在进行时主语+be动词+现在分词(ving),要灵活运用;★提出建议时要使用情态动词shuld, had better,can, 或者表示建议的句式Why 等,避免使用语气过于强烈的must或语气很犹疑的may/might
I always feel lnely after schl because my parents wrk in anther city. What can I d?
Use what yu have learnt t write a letter f advice t the teenager belw.
____________ Shw the reader yu knw a prblem is. Dear______ Yu wrte that ___________________I understand that______________I think____________________Because_____________.I am sure_______________ Best Wishes, (clse and sign the letter). ______
Tell the reader yu understand he/she feels. Tell the reader what yu think he/she shuld d. Explain yur reasns. Tell the reader what yu think will happen.
write the date and greet the reader
8 Octber 2019 Dear Xu TingYu wrte that yu always feel lnely after schl because my parents wrk in anther city. I understand hw yu feel quite well.I think it is a gd idea t make sme gd friends in yu class and have fun with them after schl. In this way, yu will feel less lnely because yu can talk t each ther abut the unhappy things t reduce yur bad feelings and have fun tgether. It is a gd idea nt t be alne, trying t be with yur best friends.I am sure finally yu will be cheerful and get used t yur present life.Best Wishes, Yurs sincerelySusan
15 September 2020Dear Eric, Yu wrte that yur parents wn't listen when yu tell them things. I understand quite well that yu are a little disappinted and upset and feel terrible. Yu think that yur parents can't understand yu.I recmmend that yu talk t yur parents abut yur feelings and yur expectatins. When yu want t tell them smething, try t d it in a respectful way. Althugh it is cmmnly seen that there is a generatin gap betwwen parents and teenagers, sharing ideas amng family members is very imprtant. I think yu shuld tell them yu are ld enugh t d smething r make a decisin n yur wn. I am sure they will listen t yu, since they are yur parents and what they d is t d gd t yu. All the best,
是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信有可能是写给某个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可能是写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容和提出建议的理由。提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly, secndly, thirdly或t begin/start with, then, later, last but nt least等依次陈述建议,具体为:
首段:表明写作意图。陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气。主体段落:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后指出需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让对方认为是投诉,而不是建议。结尾段:对提出的建议进行总结。注意要有礼貌,使对方容易接受。建议信常用句式:1.段首常用语(照应材料,表明写作意图):①I am writing t express my views cncerning...②After I read yur letter in the newspaper, I am srry t knw that...③Yu have asked fr my advice I will try t make sme suggestins.④I am very glad t hear that yu want t...
2.表达建议常用语:①I think the mst yu is...②I wuld like t suggest that...③Yu'd 's better t...④As far as I am my pinin/...⑤Fr ne thing...; fr anther...⑥If I were yu, I wuld...⑦It seems t me that yu culd...⑧I think it wuld be mre beneficial if yu culd...
3.段尾常用语:①In the end, I will be glad if yu find my suggestins useful.②I believe yu will take my advice int accunt/cnsideratin.③I hpe yu will find these prpsals建议书/suggestins practical/useful/helpful.④I will be mre than happy t see imprvements in this regard.我将非常高兴看到这方面的改进。
假定你是李华。某中学生英语报社准备增设一个Envirnmental Prtectin栏目,为此报社就报道内容与方式向读者征求建议。请你根据以下提示给编辑写封信,提出你的建议。1.报道内容广泛;2.报道应包括原因、危害并重点突出应对方法;3.语言简单易懂,适合更多的读者。注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题导引】1.本题要求写一封建议信,文体上是应用文。人称是第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主,一般将来时为辅。2.环保问题一直以来都是一个热点话题,学生对此并不陌生,同时提示较为详细。3.本书信的难点是提出这些建议的理由要具体、得当,具有较强的说服力。
【参考范文】
Dear editr,I'm glad t knw frm yur paper that yu are asking readers fr suggestins n yur new sectin, Envirnmental Prtectin. Mine are as fllws:It is practical that the sectin cvers a wide range f envirnmental cncerns and meanwhile, each reprt shuld include causes, effects and mre imprtantly, effective measures, thus making the public aware that everyne shuld and can d smething t deal with envirnmental prblems. Besides, reprts shuld be written in simple English in rder t attract as many readers as pssible.I'd appreciate it if yu culd take my tips int accunt and I d hpe that yur paper will make a difference t envirnmental prtectin.Yurs truly,Li Hua
亲爱的编辑:我很高兴从您的文章中得知,您正在就您的新栏目“环境保护”征求读者的意见。我的建议如下:这个部分很实用,它涵盖了广泛的环境问题,同时,每个报告应该包括原因,影响,更重要的是,有效的措施,从而让公众意识到每个人都应该和可以做一些事情来处理环境问题。此外,报告应该用简单的英语写,以吸引尽可能多的读者。如果您能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。我也希望您的论文能对环境保护有所帮助。李华
Sme new wrds and expressins in this part
I recmmend yu talk t yur friends abut his behavir. 我建议你和你的朋友谈谈他的行为。
★单词回顾recmmend v.推荐,建议recmmended adj.备受推崇的recmmend fr admissin t a schl推荐入学recmmend ding建议做某事recmmend sb t d sth建议某人做某事recmmend that sb (shuld) d sth...
★ behaviur/behavir n. 行为,举止;态度gd behavir良好的行为举止scial behavir 社会行为behaviral adj. 行为的the behaviral respnses 行为上的反应behave vi. 表现;(机器等_运转;举止端正behave neself 使举止规矩Children must learn __________ at table. Bys and girls may ________differently. Their _________ twards me shws that they d nt like me.
小孩在饭桌上要学会守规矩
learn t d sth 学习做某事learn ding sth 学过什么
It is nt unusual fr teenagers f yur generatin t be attracted t cmputer games.对你们这一代的青少年来说,被电脑游戏所吸引并不罕见。
attract vt. 吸引;引起 ;be attracted t...被...所吸引attractive adj. 吸引人的;有魅力的;引人注目的attractin n. 吸引,吸引力,引力attractins n.吸引人的事物Venice is ne f the great turist ___________ 旅游景点f the wrld.She tried __________the attentin f the waiter. Ice-cream is __________t children.
attractive
generatin n.代 (通常约为三十年) generatin gap代沟
But spending t much time nline is unhealthy and makes it very difficult t fcus n ther things in life.但是花太多时间在网上是不健康的,而且会让你很难专注于生活中的其他事情。
★动名词作主语一般表示经常性、习惯性的动作; 常常被看作是不可数名词,作主语时,谓语用第三人称单数形式;★动名词有时用it作形式主语,而把动名词后置常用在以下句型中It is n use/n gd ding...是没有用的/没有好处的It is a waste f time ding...是浪费时间It is fun ding...是开心的
★动名词作主语练一练1. 在夏天游泳是一项很好的运动。2. 爬山真是有趣。 3. 劝说这样的人加入真是浪费时间。 4. 和孩子们一起玩真好。5. 告诉他不要着急没有用。6. 在这种工作条件下工作不是一件愉快的事而是一件痛苦的事。
Swimming is a gd sprt in summer.
Climbing muntains is really fun.
It is a waste f time persuading such a persn t jin us.
It is fun playing with children.
It is n use telling him nt t wrry.
Wrking in these cnditins is nt a pleasure but a suffer.
fcus n. 焦点;中心;清晰;焦距;vt. 使集中;使聚焦;vi.集中;聚焦过去式 fcused,过去分词 fcused,现在分词 fcusingfcus ne's attentin n...集中注意力于 n...关注 fcus f ...的焦点把下面的句子翻译成汉语The UN's rle in prmting peace is increasingly the fcus f internatinal attentin.The study will fcus n a number f areas in Wales.
联合国在促进和平方面的作用越来越成为国际关注的焦点。
这项研究将重点针对威尔士的很多地区。
Sme students even becme addicited t the Internet and can't cncentrate n schl and family life.一些学生甚至沉迷于网络,无法专注于学校和家庭生活。
addicted adj. 沉溺于某种(尤其是不良的)嗜好的;入迷的,上瘾的be adicted t sth 对...上瘾addictin n.瘾根据汉义补全句子其中的一些人吸食海洛因成瘾。Sme f the peple _______________ herin.
are addicted t
Dear Talking Teens(会说话的青年), I have a daughter wh has just started senir high schl. She wants t chse her wn curses and decide everything by herself. In the past, she wuld always ask me fr advice, but nw she talks t her friends instead. Why desn't she want my advice any mre?Best regards,(最好的问候,诚挚的祝福) Cnfused Mum
Please write a letter f advice t the cnfused mther.
Seeyu next time
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