高中外研版 (2019)Unit 5 On the road学案及答案

Unit 5 On the road

写明信片

本单元的写作任务是要求写明信片。一般来说，明信片或告知自己的情况，或寄送节日祝福，或传达思念之情，或询问对方近况等。明信片符合书信的基本要求，但要简明扼要，目的明确，语言尽量口语化，使人感到亲切自然。

[基本框架]

1．开头：说明写信目的；

2．主体：详细介绍相关信息；

3．结尾：表达希望和祝愿。

[常用词块]

1．get close to nature 接近大自然

2．broaden our horizon 开阔我们的视野

3．many places of interest 许多名胜

4．keep healthy both physically and mentally 保持身心健康

5．enjoy a colorful and fruitful life 享受着丰富多彩的生活

6．greet every day with a smile 微笑迎接每一天

[常用语句]

精彩开头

1．How are you getting along with your study?

你的学习怎么样？

2．It is Teachers' Day/Mother's Day.

今天是教师节/母亲节。

3．We did have a wonderful time today.

今天我们确实玩得很愉快。

丰满主体

1．That was my first visit to the West Lake.

这是我第一次去参观西湖。

2．On the way to the Palace Museum，we saw the beautiful scenery.

在去故宫的路上，我们看到了美丽的风景。

3．We were all attracted by the beauty of nature.

我们都被这种自然美景吸引。

4．I can have a good rest and put trouble aside on this special day.

在这个特殊的日子里我可以好好休息一下，把烦恼丢到一边。

余味结尾

1．All my best wishes to you.

给你我最好的祝愿。

2．Please give my regards to your family.

请代我向你的家人问好。

3．I'm looking forward to receiving your reply.

期待你的回信。

假定你是李华，你的外教老师Ms.Li下个月就要退休，你得知她喜欢植物，想送给她一些特别的植物种子作为她的退休礼物。请用英语给她写一张明信片，并和礼物一起送给她。

注意：1．词数80左右；

2．明信片的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Ms.Li，

I've heard that you are going to retire soon._____________________________

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Love，

Li Hua

[学生习作]

Dear Ms.Li，

I've heard that you are going to retire soon.I want to thank for you because you are a very good teacher to me in the last three years.

I know you very like plants，and you can spend more time on your plants after you retire.Because we have many special plants in my hometown，I want to send you some seeds as my gift for your retirement.You can grow them in your garden.I believe you will be very surprised when you find what they are.

I wish you a happy retirement and we'll miss you.

Love，

Li Hua

名师点评：

1．习作中出现了些许错误，例如thank for you(应去掉for)，very like以及find(应改为find out)。

2．不要过多使用某一个单词，例如plants可考虑用gardening或hobby等替代。

3．尽可能使用高级词汇，例如表示“感谢”不一定用thank/thanks，也可以考虑gratitude/grateful。

4．可使用复合句替代简单句，例如可以用which将第二段第二、三句合并成一句。

[升格作文]

Dear Ms.Li，

I've heard that you are going to retire soon. And I'd like to express my gratitude.Thank you so much for being such a wonderful teacher to me in the last three years.

I know you like gardening，so you will be able to spend more time on your favourite hobby after your retirement.As we have many unusual plants in my

hometown，I'd like to send you some seeds as a retirement gift which you can grow in your garden.I believe you'll be surprised when you find out what they are.

Wish you a happy retirement and we'll miss you.

Love，

Li Hua

假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Anna近期将来你所在的城市旅游。请给她写明信片，告诉她你愿意为她安排住宿及旅游行程。同时，委托她帮你买一个钱包，你打算将其作为生日礼物送给妈妈。

注意：1．词数80左右；

2．开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；

3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Hi Anna，

Hearing that you will come to my city for sightseeing，___________________

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Yours，

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Hi Anna，

Hearing that you will come to my city for sightseeing, I will tell you my willingness to make arrangements for your tour.

As for accommodation，you have the option of staying either at my home or in a hotel，which I can reserve for you in advance if necessary.Besides，I'd like to help you work out a travel schedule.By the way，I was wondering whether you could do me a favor and buy a purse.With my mother's birthday approaching，I wish to present it to her as a birthday gift.

Looking forward to meeting you soon.I hope you will have fun here.

Yours，

Li Hua