人教新目标 (Go for it) 版九年级全册Section A评课ppt课件

这是一份人教新目标 (Go for it) 版九年级全册Section A评课ppt课件，共18页。PPT课件主要包含了 Title，Discuss，美文标准的四维度， Homework等内容，欢迎下载使用。
垃圾分类是指按照一定的标准将垃圾分类储存、分类投放和分类搬运，从而转变成为公共资源的一项活动。 Grup A：可回收垃圾 Grup B： 厨余垃圾 Grup C: 其他垃圾 Grup D: 有害垃圾每位同学回答对一道问题，就可以上来选择一张卡片，将卡片正确投入自己的垃圾箱得1分，投入错误扣1分。
Grup Cmpetitin
Learning aims
Self-feedback自我反馈
品读作文，再现“心路历程”
自然环境与我们的日常生活息息相关，随着环境污染的愈加严重,《21世纪中学生英语报》组织了一次“给市长写一封信”的征文活动。
Write a letter t yur city mayr t give sme suggestins fr envirnmental prblems. Use the fllwing pints as a reference: * What's the prblem? * What caused the prblem? * Hw t slve the prblem? 注意：字数不少于 80词。
重审题目，明确写作要求
自我评价，逐条修改完善
The evaluatin standard fr an excellent cmpsitin优秀作文的评价标准？
· 格式正确· 详略得当· 逻辑清晰 Structure
· 书写工整· 开篇点题· 内容贴题 Cntent
Expressin· 语气恰当· 符合读者身份· 实用合理有创造性
Language·标点、大小写、拼写·主谓一致·词语贴切·句式多样·无“中式英语”
Dear mayr, I have sme suggestins abut ur city pllutin. Here are my pinins.
Sme rivers are dirty in ur city. Even the bttm f the rivers are full f rubbish. Peple thrw litter int the rivers s that there are n mre fish fr fishmen t catch. I think yu shuld develp laws abut water pllutin. I think anther prblem is that the air is badly plluted. I think that rads have mre cars. Factries that burn cal als pllute the air with a lt f black smke. I think we shuld take the bus r ride a bike , we shuldn't drive cars.
There are my advice. I believe that ur city will becme mre and mre beautiful.Yurs，Amy
格式正确，结构完整。内容详略安排不够得当，未能突出重点。
建议使用逻辑词使文章逻辑更清晰。
语言简练，词语运用恰当，无语法错误。
书写工整，卷面整洁。写作目的明确，开篇点题，内容齐全并且紧贴题目。
句意通顺，使用了被动语态，s that,I believe that等句式，但提建议部分的句式单一，建议适当使用更多样、复杂的句式。
表达不地道，有“中式英语”
可以在文章开头或末尾加入恰当的寒暄语,以表达对市长的敬意。本文共有两条建议。第一条建议符合目标读者身份，但语气不够委婉，并且缺少针对性，不够具体。第二条建议未能考虑目标读者市长的身份。
On the ne hand,
On the ther hand,
take the bus r ride a bike instead f driving cars
Hw/What dn't yu/ Why nt d wnder if yu 'd better we yu like t be suppsed t/ ught t
There are mre cars n the rads.
It's my great hnr if yu take my advice.
首先：t begin with/ first f all并列：at the same time/then/besides/what's mre/mre imprtantly/last but nt least转折：althugh/hwever/but结束：at last/finally/in a wrd
I’m srry t truble yu.
Peer feedback同伴反馈
Evaluate the cmpsitin accrding t the checklist in yur grup. Then give sme suggestins t make it better. Tips: One f the students shuld recrd the suggestins n the first draft.
Presentatin成果展示
Appreciate the well-written cmpsitin范文赏析
Dear Mayr, I'm srry t truble yu. But with the develpment f the sciety, the envirnmental prblems in ur city are becming mre and mre serius. As a citizen, I feel like t giving sme advice. Lately, Cars have made the air unhealthy fr peple t breathe. Black smke and pisnus gas are given ff by factries. Factries als put waste int the river. T reduce the pllutin, It's a great idea t make knwn t peple the danger f pllutin. Secndly, I wnder if the gvernments culd clse dwn sme factries and develp laws t stp factries frm puring waste warter. Last but nt least, why dn't we encurage peple t take public transprtatin? Of curse, the increasing number f private car als shuld be limited. I hpe the prblem will be slved in the near future and ur hme will becme better and better. Yurs,Amy
The mst useful way f writing a better passage is t edit it again and again.
好文章是改出来的。 --鲁迅
1.Finish Crrecting yur cmpsitin with yur grup members.
2.Srt ut different revisin pinins and hand in the final draft tmrrw.