人教版新目标八年级下册英语第八单元书面表达

人教版新目标英语八年级下册第八单元书面表达攻略
Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet ?
    英语里的书面表达，顾名思义，就是根据内容提示，围绕话题和中心，用语言来“达意”。它本身并不困难，但要顺利的完成必须要经历“读懂题意——分析后确定人称和时态——写出关键词——连词成句——检查、完善”这样一个过程，很多同学在第一步或者第二步就“卡”住了，以至于后面就无法进行了。有的同学好不容易进入第三步了，可是由于平时的基础弱，单词不会写，短语不会用，所以又“无从下笔”了。在第四步的时候，由于对句子结构、语法等不太熟悉，导致写的句子不成句子，或者不能“达意”。偶有进入最后一关的，由于平时积累的句子比较少，不会使用关联词和优美的句子，也使得文章空空动动，没有亮色。为了解决大家的实际问题，今天，我就来给大家讲一讲八年级下册英语书面表达如何突破。
    以人教版英语八年级下册第八单元为例，这个单元的标题是:Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet ? 中文意思是:“你读过金银岛这本书吗？”。书面表达，是要围绕一定话题进行的，而这个“话题”，一般都会在标题中折射出来。从标题以及这个单元的教学内容可以看出，本单元的写作主要是以曾经读过的书为话题，在写作过程中体现“现在完成时”这个语法。我们以书上64页的3b写作训练为例，谈一谈怎么进行这个单元的书面表达。根据书上的要求，写一段关于“歌手”或者“作家”  的文章，为了完成这篇书面表达，我们结合前面3a的信息。在63页的3a部分，提示写一个作家或者歌手，假设我们写一个歌手，以下问题是帮助大家拓展思路的。1、Who is the singer ?2、When did the singer first become famous？3、How and why did he \ she become famous？4、What famous songs did he \ she recorded?5、How many CDs has he \ she sold?6、How did you find out him \ her?7、Is he \ she still popular today?8、Have you introduced this singer to others?9、How do you feel about his \ her music?10、Have you ever played \ sung his\her songs yourself?为了完成这篇书面表达，我们先积累素材。在本单元的第一页、第二页，我们要积累这样一些句子，例如：1、I have already read it.2、I haven’t read Little Woman yet?注意：现在完成时中，肯定句和否定句的不同表达。3、Treasure Island is about a boy who goes out to sea and finds out an island full of treasures.（金银岛讲述的是一个男孩儿出海找到了一个充满财富的岛屿。）4、Tom Sawyer is about a boy who lives in the United States . Many exciting things happen to him.（汤姆索亚历险记是关于一个住在美国的男孩儿的故事。很多令人兴奋的事情发生在他身上。）5、I haven’t finished reading it yet. I’m only on page 25.（我还没读完，我只读到了25页。）在本单元第三页的Reading部分和语法部分，也有一些用于书面表达的句子，可以为书面表达“锦上添花”，它们是:1、I named him Friday because that was the day I met him.（我把他命名为星期五，因为我是在那天碰到他的。）2、He is smart and I have taught him some English.（他很聪明，我已经教了他一些英语。）3、Sally loves reading .She has already read more than 100 different books.（Sally喜欢读书，他已经读了100多本书。）4、She is interested in science and technology and loves to imagine what the world will be like in 50 years.（她对科学和技术感兴趣并且喜欢想象50年以后世界会像什么样子？）5、She can’t wait to read the books.（他迫不及待地要读这些书。）另外，在Section B部分的listening以及长文章(Reading)中也有一些书面表达会用到的句子，可以积累一下。1、The Toms music sounds more like rock.（汤姆乐队的音乐听起来更像摇滚乐。）2、Ever since then , she has became a fan of American country music.（从那时起，他已经成为美国乡村音乐的一个粉丝。）3、Country music is a traditional kind of music from the southern states of America.（乡村音乐是美国南部州的一种传统音乐。）4、It reminds us that the best things in life are free - laughter, friends, family, and the beauty of nature and the countryside. （它提醒我们生活中最好的事情就是自由——笑声、朋友、家人以及大自然和乡村的美。）5、She has already read a lot about the place and done some research on it.（她已经阅读了大量关于这个地方的书籍而且做了一些研究。）6、He has sold more than 120 million records. I hope to see him sing live one day.（他已经卖了1.2亿的专辑，我希望有一天能够去看他的现场演出。）有了这些前期准备工作以后，我们就可以进行刚才那篇书面表达了。
    解题思路:
    第一步，根据提示，回答问题。1、Who is the singer ?    Jack Chou2、When did the singer first become famous？    In 2000 , he made his first record.3、How and why did he \ she become famous？    He wrote his own songs and sang them by himself.4、What famous songs has he \ she recorded?    Shuang Jiegun. And he has recorded 9 albums5、How many CDs has he \ she sold?    We don’t know , but it’s sure he has sold many CDs.6、How did you find out him \ her?    When I first heard his song Shuang Jiegun.7、Is he \ she still popular today?    Yes , he is so popular that many people like him.8、Have you introduced this singer to others?    Yes, I have introduced him to many of my friends.9、How do you feel about his \ her music?    His music is different and it can make me feel relaxed.10、Have you ever played \ sung his\her songs yourself?    I have ever sung his song on my friend’s party.第二步，根据书上3b的提示，连成句子。  Jack Chou is my favorite singer. I knew him when he made his first record in 2000. He is very popular because he wrote his own songs and sang them by himself. His favorite song is Shuang Jiegun. And he has recorded 9 albums since his first record.We don’t know how many records he has sold, but it’s sure he has sold many CDs.When I first heard his song Shuang Jiegun , I have became a fan of him.Now he is so popular that many people like him. I like him so much that I have introduced him to many of my friends.His music is different and it can make me feel relaxed. I have ever sung his song on my friend’s party. I hope his music will be better and better.        第三步，检查、修改。