专题08 应用文分类写作-介绍信-2021高考英语写作复习大全

这是一份专题08 应用文分类写作-介绍信-2021高考英语写作复习大全，共22页。试卷主要包含了 个人的感受以及对高三的规划等内容，欢迎下载使用。
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tm来信询问你的近况。请根据以下提示给他回复一封邮件
1. 上周刚参加了高三开学典礼,并代表高三学生发言;
2. 个人的感受以及对高三的规划
注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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翻译小练习：
1. 听到你的消息我非常高兴。到目前为止，我一切顺利。
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2. 上周，我参加了学校为高三学生设计的开学典礼。
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3. 在典礼上，我代表高三的全体同学致辞，感谢老师们的辛勤工作和帮助。
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4. 我还承诺我和我的同学们会尽一切努力实现我们的梦想。
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5. 如你所知，在中国，必须参加高考的学生在高中最后一年总是很艰难，我也是。
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6. 但我会勇敢地接受挑战，充分利用我的时间提高我的学习水平，同时努力保持良好的身体状态。
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参考答案：
1. 听到你的消息我非常高兴。到目前为止，我一切顺利。
I am mre than delighted t hear frm yu. Everything has been ging well with me s far.
2. 上周，我参加了学校为高三学生设计的开学典礼。
Last week, I attended the pening ceremny designed fr Senir Three students in ur schl.
3. 在典礼上，我代表高三的全体同学致辞，感谢老师们的辛勤工作和帮助。
At the ceremny, I delivered a speech n behalf f all the Senir Three students, expressing ur thanks t all the teachers fr their hard wrk and help.
4. 我还承诺我和我的同学们会尽一切努力实现我们的梦想。
I als prmised that all my schlmates and I wuld spare n effrt t achieve ur dreams.
5. 如你所知，在中国，必须参加高考的学生在高中最后一年总是很艰难，我也是。
As yu knw, in China, the students, wh have t take cllege entrance examinatins, will always have a tugh time in the last year in senir high schl, and s will I.
6. 但我会勇敢地接受挑战，充分利用我的时间提高我的学习水平，同时努力保持良好的身体状态。
But I will take the challenge bravely, making full use f my time t imprve my study, and meanwhile, trying t keep in a gd state physically.
参考范文
Dear Tm,
I am mre than delighted t hear frm yu. Everything has been ging well with me s far.
Last week, I attended the pening ceremny designed fr Senir Three students in ur schl. At the ceremny, I delivered a speech n behalf f all the Senir Three students, expressing ur thanks t all the teachers fr their hard wrk and help. I als prmised that all my schlmates and I wuld spare n effrt t achieve ur dreams.
As yu knw, in China, the students, wh have t take cllege entrance examinatins, will always have a tugh time in the last year in senir high schl, and s will I. But I will take the challenge bravely, making full use f my time t imprve my study, and meanwhile, trying t keep in a gd state physically.
Best wishes！
应用文写作|介绍信-介绍游学团活动安排
假如你是精英中学学生会主席李华，你校将于2月25日接待美国某中学的游学团。你受学校委托，给美国的领队格林先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动安排并征求对方的意见。内容包括：
1.上午参观学校并交流校园文化；2.中午在学校食堂吃中国传统美食；3.下午与你校学生游览本地博物馆。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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翻译小练习：
1. 我是李华，晶莹中学学生会主席。
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2. 我很高兴得知你将于2月25日来我校参观。
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3. 我写信是想告诉你我们为你安排了什么。
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4. 上午，我们将带您参观学校，参观期间，我们学校的参观者和学生可以相互交流，谈论学校生活和文化差异。
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5. 中午，我们邀请你到我们学校食堂吃午饭。
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6. 你可以品尝饺子、月饼和其他中国传统食品。
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7. 下午，我们学校的学生会带你参观我们当地的博物馆，那里有很多中国古董。
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8. 你觉得这些安排怎么样？我希望你在这里过得愉快。
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参考答案：
1. 我是李华，晶莹中学学生会主席。
I'm Li Hua, chairman f the Student Unin at Jingying High Schl.
2. 我很高兴得知你将于2月25日来我校参观。
I'm pleased t knw that yu are cming t visit ur schl n February 25.
3. 我写信是想告诉你我们为你安排了什么。
I'm writing t tell yu what we have arranged fr yu.
4. 上午，我们将带您参观学校，参观期间，我们学校的参观者和学生可以相互交流，谈论学校生活和文化差异。
In the mrning, yu will be shwn arund the schl, during which, visitrs and students frm ur schl can cmmunicate with each ther, talking abut schl life and cultural differences.
5. 中午，我们邀请你到我们学校食堂吃午饭。
At nn, yu are invited t have lunch in ur schl canteen.
6. 你可以品尝饺子、月饼和其他中国传统食品。
Yu can taste dumplings, mn cakes and ther traditinal Chinese fd.
7. 下午，我们学校的学生会带你参观我们当地的博物馆，那里有很多中国古董。
In the afternn, students in ur schl will shw yu arund ur lcal museum, where there are many Chinese antiques.
8. 你觉得这些安排怎么样？我希望你在这里过得愉快。
What d yu think f the arrangements? I hpe yu will have a nice time here.
范文赏析
Dear Mr.Green,
I'm Li Hua, chairman f the Student Unin at Jingying High Schl. I'm pleased t knw that yu are cming t visit ur schl n February 25. I'm writing t tell yu what we have arranged fr yu.
In the mrning, yu will be shwn arund the schl, during which, visitrs and students frm ur schl can cmmunicate with each ther, talking abut schl life and cultural differences. At nn, yu are invited t have lunch in ur schl canteen. Yu can taste dumplings, mn cakes and ther traditinal Chinese fd. In the afternn, students in ur schl will shw yu arund ur lcal museum, where there are many Chinese antiques.
What d yu think f the arrangements? I hpe yu will have a nice time here.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
应用文写作|介绍信-介绍大学报考的专业
假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Gerge来信，询问你的近况及上大学准备报考什么专业。 请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 正在认真备考；
2.学医学专业；
3.报考理由。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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翻译小练习：
1. 我希望你一切都好。收到你的来信真是令人振奋，因为我正全力以赴准备考试。
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2. 至于我的专业，我会选择医学，我知道，这是一个长期的承诺，是一个不能轻易做出的决定。
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3. 但是，能够治愈人，甚至拯救人们的生命是非常值得的。
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4. 尽管医生们面临着很大的压力，但我对医疗保健和帮助他人的热情告诉我，我在医学和健康领域的学习和工作不会出错。
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5. 此外，医生在中国备受尊敬，需求量也很大，尤其是高素质的专业人士。
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6. 衷心希望我的梦想早日实现。最美好的祝福。
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参考答案：
1. 我希望你一切都好。收到你的来信真是令人振奋，因为我正全力以赴准备考试。
I hpe yu’re ding well. Receiving yur letter is such a refresh since I’m fully engaged in preparing fr the exam.
2. 至于我的专业，我会选择医学，我知道，这是一个长期的承诺，是一个不能轻易做出的决定。
As fr my majr, I will chse Medicine, which, I knw, is a lng-term cmmitment and a decisin that shuldn’t be taken lightly.
3. 但是，能够治愈人，甚至拯救人们的生命是非常值得的。
But being able t cure peple r even save peple’s lives is s rewarding.
4. 尽管医生们面临着很大的压力，但我对医疗保健和帮助他人的热情告诉我，我在医学和健康领域的学习和工作不会出错。
Thugh dctrs are faced with much stress, my passin abut healthcare and helping peple tells me that I cannt g wrng with studying and wrking in Medicine and Health.
5. 此外，医生在中国备受尊敬，需求量也很大，尤其是高素质的专业人士。
Besides, dctrs are highly respected in China and in great demand t, especially highly qualified prfessinals.
6. 衷心希望我的梦想早日实现。最美好的祝福。
Sincerely hpe my dream will cme true sn. Best wishes.
【答案】Dear Gerge,
I hpe yu’re ding well. Receiving yur letter is such a refresh since I’m fully engaged in preparing fr the exam.
As fr my majr, I will chse Medicine, which, I knw, is a lng-term cmmitment and a decisin that shuldn’t be taken lightly. But being able t cure peple r even save peple’s lives is s rewarding. Thugh dctrs are faced with much stress, my passin abut healthcare and helping peple tells me that I cannt g wrng with studying and wrking in Medicine and Health. Besides, dctrs are highly respected in China and in great demand t, especially highly qualified prfessinals.
Sincerely hpe my dream will cme true sn. Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
应用文写作|介绍信-介绍中医药学
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack听说你大学准备攻读“中医药学”专业，发邮件向你询问原由，请你回复邮件。内容包括：
1. 中医简介；
2. 家庭影响；
3. 个人愿望。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中医药学 Traditinal Chinese Medicine(TCM)
Dear Jack,
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Yurs,
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请翻译：
1. 谢谢你的来信！我很高兴回复你邮件，与你分享我在大学继续学习中医的想法。
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2. 中医药已有两千多年的历史，形成了一套独特的诊疗体系，一代又一代中国人受益匪浅。
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3. 每当我看到我父亲和祖父的病人带着满意和希望离开他们的诊所时，我感到非常自豪。
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4. 所以我下定决心要继承他们的事业，主修中医，成为一名医生。
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5. 我相信这将是我追求的一个极好的事业。
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参考答案：
1. 谢谢你的来信！我很高兴回复你邮件，与你分享我在大学继续学习中医的想法。
Thanks fr yur letter! I’m very glad t share with yu my idea abut furthering my study in Traditinal Chinese Medicine at university in reply t yur email.
2. 中医药已有两千多年的历史，形成了一套独特的诊疗体系，一代又一代中国人受益匪浅。
With a histry f ver 2000 years, TCM has frmed a unique system t diagnse and cure illness, frm which generatins and generatins f Chinese peple benefit.
3. 每当我看到我父亲和祖父的病人带着满意和希望离开他们的诊所时，我感到非常自豪。
I feel really prud whenever I see patients f my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfactin and hpe.
4. 所以我下定决心要继承他们的事业，主修中医，成为一名医生。
S I’ve made up my mind t succeed their career and majr in TCM t becme a dctr.
5. 我相信这将是我追求的一个极好的事业。
I believe it’ll turn ut an excellent cause fr me t pursue.
【答案】Dear Jack,
Thanks fr yur letter! I’m very glad t share with yu my idea abut furthering my study in Traditinal Chinese Medicine at university in reply t yur email.
With a histry f ver 2000 years, TCM has frmed a unique system t diagnse and cure illness, frm which generatins and generatins f Chinese peple benefit. I feel really prud whenever I see patients f my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfactin and hpe. S I’ve made up my mind t succeed their career and majr in TCM t becme a dctr. I believe it’ll turn ut an excellent cause fr me t pursue.
Best wishes.
Yurs
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文，要求考生写一封信向朋友解释自己大学选择中医药学的原因。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：总分
要求：
1.回信的目的
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1）中医简介（中医的历史，中医对国人的或世界的影响）
2）家人的影响（祖辈行医，耳濡目染）
3）个人愿望（成为出色的中医）
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be glad t d /diagnse / cure illness / made up ne’s mind t d/ majr in /turn ut
第三步：连词成句
I am glad t share with yu why I chse TCM as my majr when I attend university.
With a histry f ver 2000 years, TCM has frmed a unique system t diagnse and cure illness.
It has left a lng-lasting influence n Chinese even peple frm ther cuntries.
As yu knw, my father, grandfather and great grandfather are all dctrs.
I am deeply impressed when watching them treating their patient, and feel really happy and prud when the patients get well. As if they were cured by myself.
I’ve made up my mind t succeed their career and majr in TCM t becme a dctr.
I believe after sme studying and training, I will turn ut a gd dctr.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词和从句）
1. 表并列补充关系：what’s mre,；besides; in additin; as well as；last but nt the least…
2. 表转折对比关系：hwever/ n the cntrary/ but/ althugh/ in spite f/ despite/ n the ne hand, ne the ther hand/ as fr
3. 表文章结构顺序：first f all/ firstly/ secnd/ and then/ finally/ in the end/ at last
4. 表因果关系：because/ s/ as/ thus/ therefre/ as a result
第五步：修改润色(加入从句)
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：With a histry f ver 2000 years, TCM has frmed a unique system t diagnse and cure illness, frm which generatins and generatins f Chinese peple benefit.中的which引导非限定性定语从句；I feel really prud whenever I see patients f my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfactin and hpe. 中的whenever让步状语从句。范文看似短小，却言简意赅。尤其是第二自然段，总共4句话，但包括了题干要求的内容。几处长句子的使用显示了考生扎实的语言基础和表达能力。
应用文写作|介绍信-介绍高三年级高考百日誓师大会
假如你是高三年级学生李华，请根据以下内容，写信给你在美国的笔友Petersn，告知他今年你校高三年级高考百日誓师大会（Cllege Entrance Examinatin 100-day Oath Meeting的情况。
内容要点：
1. 大会时间、地点；
2. 大会主题；3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 词数：100字左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现校名、姓名等真实信息。
Dear Petersn，
Hw is it ging with yu recently?
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Best wishes.
Yurs，
请翻译：
1. 你最近怎么样？我写信告诉你上周在我们学校举行的精彩的高考百日宣誓会。
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2. 2月27日下午4点，包括学生、老师和来宾在内的1000多名参与者聚集在操场上参加这场激动人心的活动。
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3. 今年的主题是“为高考而战”，校长在讲话中明确指出，学生要想在这次大考中取得成功，需要极大的勇气和努力。
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4. 这次会议给我带来了很多力量，现在我坚信信心和毅力能给我带来光明的未来。
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5. 如果你身边有什么有趣的事，请写信告诉我。
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参考答案
1. 你最近怎么样？我写信告诉你上周在我们学校举行的精彩的高考百日宣誓会。
Hw is it ging with yu recently? I’m writing t tell yu the brilliant Cllege Entrance Examinatin 100-day Oath Meeting held in ur schl last week.
2. 2月27日下午4点，包括学生、老师和来宾在内的1000多名参与者聚集在操场上参加这场激动人心的活动。
Mre than 1,000 participants, including the students, teachers and guests, gathered n the playgrund fr the exciting event at 4:00 p. m. n Feb. 27th.
3. 今年的主题是“为高考而战”，校长在讲话中明确指出，学生要想在这次大考中取得成功，需要极大的勇气和努力。
The theme this year was “fighting fr the Cllege Entrance Examinatin” and in the headmaster’s speech, he made it clear that students need great curage and hard wrk t succeed in this big examinatin.
4. 这次会议给我带来了很多力量，现在我坚信信心和毅力能给我带来光明的未来。
The meeting brings me a lt f strength, and nw I firmly believe cnfidence and perseverance can bring me a bright future.
5. 如果你身边有什么有趣的事，请写信告诉我。
If there is anything interesting arund yu, d write t tell me, please.
【答案】Dear Petersn,
Hw is it ging with yu recently? I’m writing t tell yu the brilliant Cllege Entrance Examinatin 100-day Oath Meeting held in ur schl last week. Mre than 1,000 participants, including the students, teachers and guests, gathered n the playgrund fr the exciting event at 4:00 p. m. n Feb. 27th. The theme this year was “fighting fr the Cllege Entrance Examinatin” and in the headmaster’s speech, he made it clear that students need great curage and hard wrk t succeed in this big examinatin. The meeting brings me a lt f strength, and nw I firmly believe cnfidence and perseverance can bring me a bright future. If there is anything interesting arund yu, d write t tell me, please.
Best wishes
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假如你是高三年级学生李华，请根据以下内容，写信给你在美国的笔友Petersn，告知他今年你校高三年级高考百日誓师大会的情况。
内容要点：1. 大会时间、地点；2. 大会主题；3. 你的感受。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；Cllege Entrance Examinatin 100-day Oath Meeting（高考百日誓师大会），participant（参与者），gather（聚集），theme（主题）， curage（勇气），strength（力量），cnfidence（自信），perseverance（坚持不懈）及firmly（坚定地）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有fight fr（为……而奋斗），a lt f（很多），succeed in (在……方面取得成功)，bring sb sth（给某人带来……）以及hw is it ging with sb?（某人过得怎么样？），而且还使用了宾语从句“I firmly believe cnfidence and perseverance can bring me a bright future.”，状语从句“If there is anything interesting arund yu, d write t tell me, please.”，形式宾语“he made it clear that students need great curage and hard wrk t succeed in this big examinatin.”，非谓语动词“I’m writing t tell yu the brilliant Cllege Entrance Examinatin 100-day Oath Meeting held in ur schl last week.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
应用文写作|介绍信-大学专业学习计划
假如你是李明，刚刚高中毕业，你的美国好友 Jim 给你写信祝贺并想了解你大学的专业学习计划。请你根据自己的情况用英语写封回信，主要内容包括：
1. 你的专业选择；
2. 你选择该专业的理由；
3. 为此你打算怎么做。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 文中不得出现人名、校名等真实个人信息；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
4. 可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
5. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
Thanks fr yur best wishes!
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Best wishes. I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Ming
请翻译：
1. 我写信是想告诉你我将在大学里选择的专业。
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2. 我决定主修计算机科学。我做出这样的决定是有原因的。
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3. 首先，随着社会的发展，计算机在我们生活的许多方面扮演着重要的角色。
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4. 其次，上网是我的爱好之一，所以我可以更好地学习计算机科学。
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5. 最后但并非最不重要的是，擅长计算机科学可能会帮助我在大学毕业后找到一份好工作。
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6. 我知道还有很长的路要走。所以现在我必须全身心投入学习，尽我所能在所有科目上取得好成绩。
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7. 如果我能随心所欲地学习计算机科学，我会专注于它，努力学习开发一些软件。
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参考答案
1. 我写信是想告诉你我将在大学里选择的专业。
I’m writing t tell yu abut the majr I will chse in the university.
2. 我决定主修计算机科学。我做出这样的决定是有原因的。
I have decided t majr in cmputer science. There are sme reasns why I made such a decisin.
3. 首先，随着社会的发展，计算机在我们生活的许多方面扮演着重要的角色。
Firstly, with the develpment f sciety, cmputers are playing an imprtant rle in many aspects f ur life.
4. 其次，上网是我的爱好之一，所以我可以更好地学习计算机科学。
Secndly, brwsing the Internet is ne f my hbbies, s I can study cmputer science better.
5. 最后但并非最不重要的是，擅长计算机科学可能会帮助我在大学毕业后找到一份好工作。
Last but nt least, being gd at cmputer science may help me find a gd jb after graduating frm cllege.

6. 我知道还有很长的路要走。所以现在我必须全身心投入学习，尽我所能在所有科目上取得好成绩。
I knw there is a lng way t g. S nw I must devte myself t study and try my best t get gd grades in all subjects.
7. 如果我能随心所欲地学习计算机科学，我会专注于它，努力学习开发一些软件。
If I can learn cmputer science as I wish, I will fcus n it and study hard t develp sme sftware.
【答案】Dear Jim,
Thanks fr yur best wishes!
I’m writing t tell yu abut the majr I will chse in the university. I have decided t majr in cmputer science. There are sme reasns why I made such a decisin. Firstly, with the develpment f sciety, cmputers are playing an imprtant rle in many aspects f ur life. Secndly, brwsing the Internet is ne f my hbbies, s I can study cmputer science better. Last but nt least, being gd at cmputer science may help me find a gd jb after graduating frm cllege.
I knw there is a lng way t g. S nw I must devte myself t study and try my best t get gd grades in all subjects. If I can learn cmputer science as I wish, I will fcus n it and study hard t develp sme sftware.
Best wishes. I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Ming
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，向朋友讲述自己大学的专业学习计划。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：四段式结构。第一段表示感谢（已给出）；第二段讲述大学专业学习和理由；第三段讲述为此打算如何做；第四段寒暄结束并表达期待（已给出）。
要求：1.表达感谢（已给出）
2.讲述大学专业选择及理由
1）专业选择：计算机科学专业（majr in cmputer science）
2）理由（play an imprtant rle; ne f my hbbies; find a gd jb）
3.打算如何做。（fcus n; study hard）
4.寒暄结束并表达期待（已给出）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
decide t d; majr in; play an imprtant rle; graduate frm cllege; devte neself t; try ne’s best t; fcus n
第三步：连词成句
1. I have decided t majr in cmputer science.
2. Firstly, with the develpment f sciety, cmputers are playing an imprtant rle in many aspects f ur life.
3. Last but nt least, being gd at cmputer science may help me find a gd jb after graduating frm cllege.
4. S nw I must devte myself t study and try my best t get gd grades in all subjects.
5. If I can learn cmputer science as I wish, I will fcus n it and study hard t develp sme sftware.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：first f all; firstly/first; secndly/secnd…; and then; finally; in the end; at last
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：
I’m writing t tell yu abut the majr I will chse in the university.(我写信是想告诉你我将在大学选择的专业。)这句话中“I will chse in the university”为定语从句，修饰先行词the majr，从句中作宾语，关系代词可省略。
There are sme reasns why I made such a decisin.(我做出这样的决定是有原因的。)这句话中why引导定语从句。
If I can learn cmputer science as I wish, I will fcus n it and study hard t develp sme sftware.( 如果我可以如我所愿学习计算机科学，我会专注于它，努力学习，开发一些软件。)这句话中if引导条件状语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如decide t d; majr in; play an imprtant rle; graduate frm cllege; devte neself t; try ne’s best t; fcus n等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。