专题20 话题写作-热点话题-2021高考英语写作复习大全

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专题20话题写作-热点话题-2021高考英语写作复习大全
应用文写作|建议信-沉迷于抖音的建议
假设你是李华，你的朋友John沉迷于抖音 (TikTok) 而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1. 表示理解和关心；
2. 沉迷抖音的影响；
3. 提出具体建议。
要求：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
请翻译：
1. 听说你沉迷于抖音，我很难过。
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2. 事实上，越来越多的青少年迷恋TikTok，花费大量时间在网上观看和分享视频，这使得他们无法集中精力学习。
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3. 因此，应立即采取措施加以制止。
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4. 你应该开始一些其他的爱好，如阅读，听音乐或下棋。
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5. 另外，你最好通过面对面的交流来结交更多的朋友。
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参考答案
1. 听说你沉迷于抖音，我很难过。
I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from TikTok addiction.

2. 事实上，越来越多的青少年迷恋TikTok，花费大量时间在网上观看和分享视频，这使得他们无法集中精力学习。
Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study.

3. 因此，应立即采取措施加以制止。
Therefore, immediate measures should be taken to stop it.

4. 你应该开始一些其他的爱好，如阅读，听音乐或下棋。
You should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music or playing chess.

5. 另外，你最好通过面对面的交流来结交更多的朋友。
Besides, you had better make more friends through face to face communication.

【答案】Dear John,
I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from TikTok addiction. Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study. Therefore, immediate measures should be taken to stop it. You should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music or playing chess. Besides, you had better make more friends through face to face communication.
I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem.（94words）
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友John回一封电子邮件，帮助他走出沉迷抖音。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分总法
要点：
1. 表示理解和关心；
2. 沉迷抖音的影响；
3. 提出具体建议。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
suffer from；TikTok；get crazy about；spend a lot of time in；focus on；listen to music；play chess；make friends；face to face
第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from TikTok addiction.
2. Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study.
3. Therefore, immediate measures should be taken to stop it.
4. You should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music or playing chess.
5. Besides, you had better make more friends through face to face communication.
6. I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides；and；
2.表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from TikTok addiction.使用了that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study.使用了it作形式主语和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型3] I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem.使用了that引导的宾语从句。













应用文写作|演讲稿-洪涝灾害
2020年8月份的洪涝灾害给全国人民带来了巨大损失，尤其是川渝地区，受灾非常严重。假定你是新华中学学生李华，即将为学校留学生部的同学做一次演讲，介绍此次灾情。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.简介灾情；
2.呼吁援助；
3.援助方式。
注意：1.适当增加细节，不逐字翻译；
2.词数100左右。
Dear all,
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请翻译：
1. 我很荣幸能站在这里发表演讲。
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2. 八月的洪水给我国造成了巨大的损失。
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3. 在四川和重庆，损失尤为严重。
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4. 因此，我呼吁大家伸出援手，帮助那些需要帮助的人。
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5. 我相信以下几点可以帮助他们。
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6. 首先，我想在班上筹集一笔小型基金，让那些需要帮助的人能够把钱花在使事情恢复正常方面。
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7. 此外，在周末，可以组织一次旅行去探望那些受到严重影响的人。
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8. 看看我们能做些什么来帮助现场。最后但并非最不重要的是，我们可以写下并寄出祝福卡，安慰他们，并祝他们重新安排工作一切顺利。
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9. 我怀着一颗真诚的心，希望大家在这个关键时刻伸出援助之手。我感谢你的好意。
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参考答案
1. 我很荣幸能站在这里发表演讲。
It is a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech.

2. 八月的洪水给我国造成了巨大的损失。
The flood in August has caused great damage to our country.

3. 在四川和重庆，损失尤为严重。
In Sichuan and Chongqing, the damage has been especially severe.

4. 因此，我呼吁大家伸出援手，帮助那些需要帮助的人。
Therefore, I'm appealing to everyone to reach out and help those in need.

5. 我相信以下几点可以帮助他们。
I believe the following can be done to help them.

6. 首先，我想在班上筹集一笔小型基金，让那些需要帮助的人能够把钱花在使事情恢复正常方面。
First of all, I'd like to raise a mini fund among the class so those in need can spend the money in bringing things back to normal.

7. 此外，在周末，可以组织一次旅行去探望那些受到严重影响的人。
Besides, over the weekend, a trip can be organized to visit those who were severely affected.

8. 看看我们能做些什么来帮助现场。最后但并非最不重要的是，我们可以写下并寄出祝福卡，安慰他们，并祝他们重新安排工作一切顺利。
See what we can do to help on site. Last but not least, we can write and send out cards of best wishes to comfort them and wish them every success in getting things reorganized again.

9. 我怀着一颗真诚的心，希望大家在这个关键时刻伸出援助之手。我感谢你的好意。
It is with a sincere heart that I hope everyone can extend a helping hand at this critical moment. I thank you for your gesture of kindness.

【答案】Dear all,
It is a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech. The flood in August has caused great damage to our country. In Sichuan and Chongqing, the damage has been especially severe. Therefore, I'm appealing to everyone to reach out and help those in need.
I believe the following can be done to help them. First of all, I'd like to raise a mini fund among the class so those in need can spend the money in bringing things back to normal. Besides, over the weekend, a trip can be organized to visit those who were severely affected. See what we can do to help on site. Last but not least, we can write and send out cards of best wishes to comfort them and wish them every success in getting things reorganized again.
It is with a sincere heart that I hope everyone can extend a helping hand at this critical moment. I thank you for your gesture of kindness.
Thanks for your listening.
【解析】
这是一篇演讲稿。文章主要讲述2020年8月份的洪涝灾害的灾情。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
      总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.简介灾情；
2.呼吁援助；
3.援助方式。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
cause great damage to；appeal to；reach out；in need；first of all；would like to do；bring things back to；last but not least；send out
第三步：连词成句
1.It is a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech.
2.The flood in August has caused great damage to our country.
3.In Sichuan and Chongqing, the damage has been especially severe.
4.Therefore, I'm appealing to everyone to reach out and help those in need.
5.I believe the following can be done to help them.
6.First of all, I'd like to raise a mini fund among the class so those in need can spend the money in bringing things back to normal.
7.Besides, over the weekend, a trip can be organized to visit those who were severely affected. 8.See what we can do to help on site.
9.Last but not least, we can write and send out cards of best wishes to comfort them and wish them every success in getting things reorganized again.
10.It is with a sincere heart that I hope everyone can extend a helping hand at this critical moment. 11.I thank you for your gesture of kindness.
12.Thanks for your listening.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：Besides, over the weekend, a trip can be organized to visit those who were severely affected.中who引导定语从句，See what we can do to help on site.中what引导宾语从句，全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。




















应用文写作|邀请信-光盘比赛活动评委
假定你是李华，学校英语社将举行一次以“光盘行动”为主题的演讲比赛。你代表英语社给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件，邀请他做评委。邮件内容包括：
1. 演讲比赛的目的；
2. 比赛时间和地点；
3. 表达期待。
提示词：“光盘行动”(“Clear Your Plate” Campaign) 注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
请翻译：
1. 我叫李华，是我们学校英语俱乐部的成员。
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2. 为了唤起学生们节约食物的意识，我们俱乐部正在组织一场英语演讲比赛，主题是“清清你的盘子”，倡导节约而不浪费。
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3. 比赛定于11月4日在会议厅举行。
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4. 我们期待一位像你这样的专家来做我们的评委，如果你能接受我们的邀请并加入我们的行列，我们将不胜荣幸。
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参考答案
1. 我叫李华，是我们学校英语俱乐部的成员。
I am Li Hua, a member from the English Club of our school.

2. 为了唤起学生们节约食物的意识，我们俱乐部正在组织一场英语演讲比赛，主题是“清清你的盘子”，倡导节约而不浪费。
In order to arouse students’ awareness of saving food, our club is organizing an English Speech Contest themed “Clear Your Plate” Campaign, which advocates saving against wasting.

3. 比赛定于11月4日在会议厅举行。
The contest is scheduled to be held in the conference hall on November 4th.

4. 我们期待一位像你这样的专家来做我们的评委，如果你能接受我们的邀请并加入我们的行列，我们将不胜荣幸。
We are expecting an expert like you to be our judge, so it would be our great honor if you could accept our invitation and join us.

【答案】Possible Version 1:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, a member from the English Club of our school. In order to arouse students’ awareness of saving food, our club is organizing an English Speech Contest themed “Clear Your Plate” Campaign, which advocates saving against wasting.
The contest is scheduled to be held in the conference hall on November 4th. We are expecting an expert like you to be our judge, so it would be our great honor if you could accept our invitation and join us.
Thank you in advance and wish you all the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible Version 2:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua from the English Club. I’m writing to invite you to be the judge of an English Speech Contest to be held next Friday in the auditorium of our school.
With the theme of “Clear Your Plate” Campaign, the speech contest aims to arouse students’ awareness of saving food. As you are an expert, we sincerely hope that you can make it. Your participation means a lot. Please give me an early reply at your convenience.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表英语社给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件，邀请他做评委。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明写信目的
2.介绍相关情况
1）演讲比赛的目的；
2）比赛时间和地点；
3.表明期待外教来做评委。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
in order to; Campaign; advocates…against…; be scheduled to; accept one’s invitation; join; in advance; invite sb. to do sth.; aim to do sth.; at one’s convenience
第三步：连词成句
1. I am Li Hua, a member from the English Club of our school.
2. In order to arouse students’ awareness of saving food, our club is organizing an English Speech Contest themed “Clear Your Plate” Campaign, which advocates saving against wasting.
3. The contest is scheduled to be held in the conference hall on November 4th.
4. We are expecting an expert like you to be our judge, so it would be our great honor if you could accept our invitation and join us.
5. I’m writing to invite you to be the judge of an English Speech Contest to be held next Friday in the auditorium of our school.
6. As you are an expert, we sincerely hope that you can make it.
7. Please give me an early reply at your convenience.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… ,Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：In order to arouse students’ awareness of saving food, our club is organizing an English Speech Contest themed “Clear Your Plate” Campaign, which advocates saving against wasting.运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如in advance，invite sb to do sth，aim to do sth等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。























应用文写作|邀请信-邀请参加抗疫讲座
假定你是李华，为全面迎接开学，你市将邀请钟南山院士举办有关“抗疫”知识的在线讲座。请写信通知目前在某酒店隔离的你校英国留学生Johnny参加，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 主讲人简介；
3. 时间和方式：下周三上午9点到11点，钉钉（Ding Talk）在线。
参考词汇：COVID-19新型冠状病毒；anti-epidemic防疫
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Johnny,
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Yours,
Li Hua
请翻译：
1. 你最近怎么样？为迎接新学期开学，我市将邀请钟南山院士在网上发表防疫演讲。
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2. 所以我写信是想告诉你一些事情。
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3. 众所周知，钟南山院士带领中国人民抗击COVID-19取得了巨大成功。
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4. 鉴于此，下周三上午9点至11点，学校将组织学生通过丁谈学习防疫知识。
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5. 我相信COVID-19一定会结束，我们会有一个更光明的未来。
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参考答案
1. 你最近怎么样？为迎接新学期开学，我市将邀请钟南山院士在网上发表防疫演讲。
How are you doing these days? In order to welcome the opening of the new semester, our city will invite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic.

2. 所以我写信是想告诉你一些事情。
So I’m writing to tell you something about it.

3. 众所周知，钟南山院士带领中国人民抗击COVID-19取得了巨大成功。
As is known to all, academician Zhong Nanshan led the Chinese people to achieve great success in the fight against COVID-19.

4. 鉴于此，下周三上午9点至11点，学校将组织学生通过丁谈学习防疫知识。
In view of this, the school will organize students to learn the knowledge of anti-epidemic through Ding Talk from 9 am to 11 am next Wednesday.

5. 我相信COVID-19一定会结束，我们会有一个更光明的未来。
I believe COVID-19 will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.

【答案】Dear Johnny,
How are you doing these days? In order to welcome the opening of the new semester, our city will invite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic. So I’m writing to tell you something about it.
As is known to all, academician Zhong Nanshan led the Chinese people to achieve great success in the fight against COVID-19. In view of this, the school will organize students to learn the knowledge of anti-epidemic through Ding Talk from 9 am to 11 am next Wednesday.
I believe COVID-19 will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.100
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封通知，通知目前在某酒店隔离的你校英国留学生Johnny参加有关“抗疫”知识的在线讲座。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.写信目的；
2.讲座的具体信息
1）主讲人简介此次舞会的大体介绍。（introduction to this dance）
2） 时间和方式：下周三上午9点到11点，钉钉（Ding Talk）在线。
3.邀请参加
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
in order to；give an online speech on；lead to, fight against, in view of, from…to…
第三步：连词成句
1. How are you doing these days?
2.In order to welcome the opening of the new semester, our city will invite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic.
3.As is known to all, academician Zhong Nanshan led the Chinese people to achieve great success in the fight against COVID-19.
4. In view of this, the school will organize students to learn the knowledge of anti-epidemic through Ding Talk from 9 am to 11 am next Wednesday.
5.I believe COVID-19 will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如I believe COVID-19 will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.这句话运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如in order to；give an online speech on；lead to, fight against, in view of等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。


应用文写作|倡议信-世界助残日
12月3日是世界助残日（the World Disability Day),请你以学校英语俱乐部的名义向同学们写一封倡议信，内容包括：
1.倡议的主题：我为残疾人做点什么？
2.活动安排：世界助残日当天，访问残疾人。
3.今后的打算。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Classmates,
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The Students English Club
请翻译：
1. 12月3日，世界残疾日即将到来。
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2. 为了表达我们对残疾人的关心，我们学生会将组织一个主题为“我们能为残疾人做些什么”的活动。
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3. 任何志愿者都受欢迎。在那一天，我们将拜访学校附近的一些残疾人，为他们做一些工作，例如打扫他们的房子和洗衣服。
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4. 为了使这种活动成为一种规则，我们每个人都欢迎找一个残疾人作为伙伴，并将尽我们所能帮助他们。
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参考答案
1. 12月3日，世界残疾日即将到来。
December 3, the World Disability Day, is around the corner.

2. 为了表达我们对残疾人的关心，我们学生会将组织一个主题为“我们能为残疾人做些什么”的活动。
To show our great concern about the disabled, we Students Union will organize an activity with the theme “What can we do for the disabled”.

3. 任何志愿者都受欢迎。在那一天，我们将拜访学校附近的一些残疾人，为他们做一些工作，例如打扫他们的房子和洗衣服。
Anyone who volunteers is welcome. On that day, we will visit some disabled people near our school, doing some work for them, such as cleaning their houses and washing clothes.

4. 为了使这种活动成为一种规则，我们每个人都欢迎找一个残疾人作为伙伴，并将尽我们所能帮助他们。
To make this kind of activity a rule, every one of us is welcome to get a disabled person as a partner, and will do what we can to help them.

【答案】Dear classmates,
December 3, the World Disability Day, is around the corner. To show our great concern about the disabled, we Students Union will organize an activity with the theme “What can we do for the disabled”. Anyone who volunteers is welcome. On that day, we will visit some disabled people near our school, doing some work for them, such as cleaning their houses and washing clothes. To make this kind of activity a rule, every one of us is welcome to get a disabled person as a partner, and will do what we can to help them.
The Students English Club
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生学校英语俱乐部的名义向同学们写一封倡议信。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：总分法
要求：
1.倡议的主题：我为残疾人做点什么？
2.活动安排：世界助残日当天，访问残疾人。
3.今后的打算。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
the World Disability Day；around the corner；concern；disabled；organize；volunteer；cleaning the house；washing clothes；
第三步：连词成句
1. December 3, the World Disability Day, is around the corner.
2. We Students Union will organize an activity with the theme “What can we do for the disabled”
3. Anyone who volunteers is welcome.
4. On that day, we will visit some disabled people near our school, doing some work for them, such as cleaning their houses and washing clothes.
5. Every one of us is welcome to get a disabled person as a partner, and will do what we can to help them.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition ;including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), On the one hand…
4.表因果关系：Consequently , Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰
第五步：润色修改。
【点睛】
范文内容符合题目要求，格式正确，运用的语言和句式合乎英语的表达规范并且运用了高级句式如：Anyone who volunteers is welcome.这句话使用who引导定语从句；Every one of us is welcome to get a disabled person as a partner, and will do what we can to help them.这句话使用what引导宾语从句；此外还使用了较多的高级词汇：around the corner；concern；disabled；organize；volunteer等。



















应用文写作|介绍信-介绍厕所革命
假设你叫李华，你的美国笔友Joe对中国新农村建设中正在实施的“厕所革命”很感兴趣。因此，他写信向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信，就相关问题作一番简单的回答。内容包括:
1. 什么是“厕所革命”；
2.“厕所革命”的意义；
3. 具体措施有哪些。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:“厕所革命”(“toilet revolution”)改造(transform)排(水)(drain)
Dear Joe,
I’m so glad to hear from you again after so many days.
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请翻译：
1. 过了这么多天又收到你的来信，我真高兴。
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2. 在你的信中，你说你对中国的“厕所革命”很好奇，所以我想对它作一些解释。
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3. 所谓“厕所革命”，是指农村为改造厕所而采取的一些措施。
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4. 你可能对这些厕所的结构和设计不太清楚。
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5. 事实上，他们大多数都是不科学的。
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6. 随着中国的发展，我们的政府已经开始重视环境和人民的福祉。
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7. 我们意识到厕所是文明的象征，也是乡村美丽的关键因素。
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8. 因此，我们在厕所的设计上做了很大的改变。
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9. 例如，我们把重点放在如何把废水排到一些集中的地方，然后我们处理这些水，以防它随机流动。
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10. 希望我的信能澄清你的困惑。
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参考答案
1. 过了这么多天又收到你的来信，我真高兴。
I’m so glad to hear from you again after so many days.

2. 在你的信中，你说你对中国的“厕所革命”很好奇，所以我想对它作一些解释。
In your letter, you say you are curious about the “toilet revolution” in China, so I’d like to cast some light on it.

3. 所谓“厕所革命”，是指农村为改造厕所而采取的一些措施。
The so-called “toilet revolution” is a term used to refer to some measures carried out in rural areas to transform the toilets.

4. 你可能对这些厕所的结构和设计不太清楚。
You may not have a clear concept about the structure and design of these toilets.

5. 事实上，他们大多数都是不科学的。
The fact is that most of them are unscientific.

6. 随着中国的发展，我们的政府已经开始重视环境和人民的福祉。
With the development in China, our government has begun to attach significance to the environment and the well-being of the people.

7. 我们意识到厕所是文明的象征，也是乡村美丽的关键因素。
We realize the toilet is a symbol of civilization and a key factor to the beauty of the rural areas.

8. 因此，我们在厕所的设计上做了很大的改变。
Consequently, we are making a great change in the design of the toilets.

9. 例如，我们把重点放在如何把废水排到一些集中的地方，然后我们处理这些水，以防它随机流动。
For instance, we focus on how to drain away waste water into some centralized places and then we deal with the water in case it will flow at random.

10. 希望我的信能澄清你的困惑。
Hopefully my letter may clarify your puzzlement.

【答案】Dear Joe,
I’m so glad to hear from you again after so many days. In your letter, you say you are curious about the “toilet revolution” in China, so I’d like to cast some light on it. The so-called “toilet revolution” is a term used to refer to some measures carried out in rural areas to transform the toilets. You may not have a clear concept about the structure and design of these toilets. The fact is that most of them are unscientific. With the development in China, our government has begun to attach significance to the environment and the well-being of the people. We realize the toilet is a symbol of civilization and a key factor to the beauty of the rural areas. Consequently, we are making a great change in the design of the toilets. For instance, we focus on how to drain away waste water into some centralized places and then we deal with the water in case it will flow at random. Hopefully my letter may clarify your puzzlement.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封回信：假设你叫李华，你的美国笔友Joe对中国新农村建设中正在实施的“厕所革命”很感兴趣。因此，他写信向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信，就相关问题作一番简单的回答。内容包括:1. 什么是“厕所革命”；2.“厕所革命”的意义；3. 具体措施有哪些。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； toilet revolution（厕所革命），transform（改造），drain（排水），measure（措施）， well-being（幸福），civilization（文明）及symbol（标志）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有 be curious about（对……好奇），cast light on（阐明某事），carry out (实施)，refer to(涉及)，attach...to （把……放在），in case(万一)以及at random（随意地），而且还使用了定语从句“The so-called “toilet revolution” is a term used to refer to some measures carried out in rural areas to transform the toilets.”，表语从句“The fact is that most of them are unscientific. With the development in China, our government has begun to attach significance to the environment and the well-being of the people.”，宾语从句“We realize the toilet is a symbol of civilization and a key factor to the beauty of the rural areas.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。






















应用文写作|介绍信-介绍中国农村现象
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jerry上周来信想了解一下目前中国农村的现状，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1． 国家重视农村发展；
2．农村的显著变化（如住房、公路、教育等）；
3．邀请Jerry有机会来参观；
注意：1． 词数100左右．
2． 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Jerry，
I'm glad to hear from you last week．
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Yours，
Li Hua
请翻译：
1. 我很高兴上周收到你的来信。
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2. 既然你对中国农村的现状很感兴趣，我写信给你介绍一下。
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3. 近年来，我国政府更加重视农村的发展，使之与过去大不相同。
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4. 不仅修建了许多高楼大厦和宽阔的公路，教育也得到了更多的关注和支持。
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5. 所有这些变化都增加了农村人民的方便和幸福。
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6. 因此，我诚挚地邀请您前来参观。
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参考答案
1. 我很高兴上周收到你的来信。
I'm glad to hear from you last week．

2. 既然你对中国农村的现状很感兴趣，我写信给你介绍一下。
Since you are interested in the current situation of the countryside in China， I'm writing to introduce it to you．

3. 近年来，我国政府更加重视农村的发展，使之与过去大不相同。
In recent years， our government attaches much greater importance to the development of the countryside， making it quite different from the past．

4. 不仅修建了许多高楼大厦和宽阔的公路，教育也得到了更多的关注和支持。
Not only are many high buildings and broad highways built， but education has been given more attention and support．

5. 所有这些变化都增加了农村人民的方便和幸福。
All of these changes have added to the convenience and happiness of the people in the countryside．

6. 因此，我诚挚地邀请您前来参观。
Therefore， I sincerely invite you to come for a visit．

【答案】Dear Jerry，
I'm glad to hear from you last week． Since you are interested in the current situation of the countryside in China， I'm writing to introduce it to you．
In recent years， our government attaches much greater importance to the development of the countryside， making it quite different from the past．Not only are many high buildings and broad highways built， but education has been given more attention and support．All of these changes have added to the convenience and happiness of the people in the countryside． Therefore， I sincerely invite you to come for a visit．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封回信。
第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jerry上周来信想了解一下目前中国农村的现状，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1． 国家重视农村发展；
2．农村的显著变化（如住房、公路、教育等）；3．邀请Jerry有机会来参观。
第2步：the current situation of the countryside in China（中国农村目前的境况）；attaches much greater importance to the development of the countryside（重视农村的发展）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。In recent years， our government attaches much greater importance to the development of the countryside， making it quite different from the past．该句中making it quite different from the past为现在分词短语作结果状语，attach importance to 重视；Not only are many high buildings and broad highways built， but education has been given more attention and support．该句为not only和but also连接的两个句子，not only引导的句子要用部分倒装的结构。
























应用文写作|邀请参加针对低头族的活动
假定你是李华，你和你的同学们将在下周末举办一次活动，针对“低头族”这一问题， 提醒过往的人们不要在行走时看手机，尽量抬起头来，注意安全与健康。请给你的英国朋 友Henry写封邮件，邀请他一起参加。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
注意：1.行文连贯流畅；2.参考词汇：低头族：phubber 3.词数100词左右 Dear Henry,
How's everything going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
请翻译：
1. 一切都好吗？下个周末，我的同学们将在街上举行一次反对布巴人的活动。我写信是想邀请你参加。
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2. 移动电话给我们带来了很多方便。
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3. 然而，越来越多的植物人，尤其是年轻人，随处可见，他们从不关心周围发生的事情。
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4. 显然，这会对他们的身体健康和安全造成危害。
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5. 因此，让我们一起努力，呼吁大家对此多加关注，在街上抬起头来。
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6. 如能早日答复您的最终决定，我们将不胜感激。
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7. 如果你愿意的话，我们下星期天早上8点在学校门口见面。
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参考答案
1. 一切都好吗？下个周末，我的同学们将在街上举行一次反对布巴人的活动。我写信是想邀请你参加。
How’s everything going? Next weekend my classmates will hold an activity against phubbers in the street. I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.

2. 移动电话给我们带来了很多方便。
The mobile phone has brought us much convenience.

3. 然而，越来越多的植物人，尤其是年轻人，随处可见，他们从不关心周围发生的事情。
However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around.

4. 显然，这会对他们的身体健康和安全造成危害。
Obviously, it can be harmful to their physical health and safety.

5. 因此，让我们一起努力，呼吁大家对此多加关注，在街上抬起头来。
Therefore, let’s work together to call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold their heads up in the street.

6. 如能早日答复您的最终决定，我们将不胜感激。
An early reply about your final decision will be highly appreciated.

7. 如果你愿意的话，我们下星期天早上8点在学校门口见面。
If you are willing, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 o’clock next Sunday morning.

【答案】Dear Henry,
How’s everything going? Next weekend my classmates will hold an activity against phubbers in the street. I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.
The mobile phone has brought us much convenience. However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around. Obviously, it can be harmful to their physical health and safety. Therefore, let’s work together to call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold their heads up in the street.
An early reply about your final decision will be highly appreciated. If you are willing, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 o’clock next Sunday morning.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封邀请信：假定你是李华，你和你的同学们将在下周末举办一次活动，针对“低头族”这一问题， 提醒过往的人们不要在行走时看手机，尽量抬起头来，注意安全与健康。请给你的英国朋 友Henry写封邮件，邀请他一起参加，时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； phubber（低头族），convenience（保便利），invite（邀请），harmful（有害的），physical health（身体健康）及safety（安全）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有take part in（参加），care about（关心），happen around (在身边发生)，be harmful to（对……有害），call on（号召）以及pay attention to（注意），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around.”，状语从句“If you are willing, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 o’clock next Sunday morning.”，非谓语动词“I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。








应用文写作|介绍信-介绍全国抗击新冠肺炎疫情表彰大会
假定你是李华，你的美国的好友Jack想了解一下在2020年9月8日上午北京人民大会堂隆重举行的“全国抗击新冠肺炎疫情表彰大会”（the meeting commending role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic)的情况，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表彰大会举行的时间及地点；
2.简要介绍受表彰的对象及奖项（钟南山－共和国勋章，张伯礼等－人民英雄）；
3.表彰大会的意义及目的。
参考词汇：共和国勋章：the Medal of the Republic
人民英雄：People's Hero
注意：1.词数80左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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1. 我知道你们很想知道“全国抗击COVID-19疫情模范表彰会”，我非常荣幸地向大家介绍一下。
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2. 会议于2020年9月8日在北京人民大会堂举行，旨在表彰中国抗击COVID-19疫情的榜样。
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3. 会见中，习近平向钟南山颁发了共和国勋章，向张伯力、张定宇、陈伟颁发了全国“人民英雄”荣誉称号，以表彰他们为国家抗击“科维德-19”作出的突出贡献。
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4. 正是这些榜样和他们“以人为本”的精神，保护了我们免受可怕病毒的侵袭，拯救了数百万人的生命。
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参考答案
1. 我知道你们很想知道“全国抗击COVID-19疫情模范表彰会”，我非常荣幸地向大家介绍一下。
Knowing that you are eager to know “the meeting commending role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic”, I’m more than honored to introduce you more about it.

2. 会议于2020年9月8日在北京人民大会堂举行，旨在表彰中国抗击COVID-19疫情的榜样。
Held at the Great Hall of the People in Beijing on Sep 8, 2020, the meeting was aimed to to commend role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic.

3. 会见中，习近平向钟南山颁发了共和国勋章，向张伯力、张定宇、陈伟颁发了全国“人民英雄”荣誉称号，以表彰他们为国家抗击“科维德-19”作出的突出贡献。
During the meeting, Xi presented the Medal of the Republic to Zhong Nanshan, and the national honorary title "People's Hero" to Zhang Boli, Zhang Dingyu, Chen Wei for their outstanding contributions to the country's fight against COVID-19.

4. 正是这些榜样和他们“以人为本”的精神，保护了我们免受可怕病毒的侵袭，拯救了数百万人的生命。
It’s the role models and their spirits of “putting people’s lives first” that protected us from the horrible virus and saved millions of lives.

5. 所有的中国人都对他们表示尊敬和崇拜，并决定向他们学习，团结起来建设更好的社区。
All Chinese show respect and worship to them and decide to learn from them to unite together to build better communities.

【答案】Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are eager to know “the meeting commending role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic”, I’m more than honored to introduce you more about it.
Held at the Great Hall of the People in Beijing on Sep 8, 2020, the meeting was aimed to to commend role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic. During the meeting, Xi presented the Medal of the Republic to Zhong Nanshan, and the national honorary title "People's Hero" to Zhang Boli, Zhang Dingyu, Chen Wei for their outstanding contributions to the country's fight against COVID-19. It’s the role models and their spirits of “putting people’s lives first” that protected us from the horrible virus and saved millions of lives. All Chinese show respect and worship to them and decide to learn from them to unite together to build better communities..
Pray the crisis will end as soon as possible. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇应用文。文章主要写一封信介绍全国抗击新冠肺炎疫情表彰大会的相关情况。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，描述颁奖过程使用一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.说明表彰大会举行的时间及地点；
2.简要介绍受表彰的对象及奖项（钟南山－共和国勋章，张伯礼等－人民英雄）；
3.说明表彰大会的意义及目的。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
Be eager to；fight against；be more than honored to do sth.；aim to do；outstanding contributions；protect sb. from；the horrible virus；show respect and worship to sb.；decide to do sth.；learn from；as soon as possible
第三步：连词成句
1.Knowing that you are eager to know “the meeting commending role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic”, I’m more than honored to introduce you more about it.
2.Held at the Great Hall of the People in Beijing on Sep 8, 2020, the meeting was aimed to to commend role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic.
3.Xi presented the Medal of the Republic to Zhong Nanshan, and the national honorary title "People's Hero" to Zhang Boli, Zhang Dingyu, Chen Wei for their outstanding contributions to the country's fight against COVID-19.
4.It’s the role models and their spirits of “putting people’s lives first” that protected us from the horrible virus and saved millions of lives.
5.All Chinese show respect and worship to them and decide to learn from them to unite together to build better communities..
6.Pray the crisis will end as soon as possible.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：Knowing that you are eager to know “the meeting commending role models in the country's fight against the COVID-19 epidemic”, I’m more than honored to introduce you more about it.中that引导宾语从句。也使用了特殊句式，如：It’s the role models and their spirits of “putting people’s lives first” that protected us from the horrible virus and saved millions of lives.中使用了强调句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
























应用文写作|邀请信-邀请参加鼠年画鼠绘画比赛
假定你是一所国际学校的学生会主席李华。你校学生会将举办 2020 年国际中学生鼠年画鼠“Draw rats for the Year of the Rat”绘画比赛。请你给你的英国同学 Agnes 写封信，邀请她参赛。信的内容包括：
1. 比赛主题；
2. 比赛时间；
3. 作品交付地址：the Student Union Office。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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请翻译：
1. 这些天你的学习进展如何？现在，你有一个很好的机会。我校正计划举办一次世界中学生绘画比赛，主题是“鼠年画老鼠”。
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2. 我知道你很喜欢画画，而且很擅长画画，我强烈建议你加入进来，我想你会得到很好的效果。
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3. 由于比赛将于2020年1月10日举行，请于2020年1月1日前将您的绘画作品送交学生会办公室。
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4. 最重要的是，你有必要用一句中国话来描述这幅画。祝你好运！
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参考答案
1. 这些天你的学习进展如何？现在，你有一个很好的机会。我校正计划举办一次世界中学生绘画比赛，主题是“鼠年画老鼠”。
How are you getting along with your study these days? Now, there is a good chance for you. Our school is planning to hold a drawing competition for middle school students from around the world, whose theme is“Draw rats for the Year of the Rat”.

2. 我知道你很喜欢画画，而且很擅长画画，我强烈建议你加入进来，我想你会得到很好的效果。
Knowing that you are so fond of and good at drawing, I strongly recommend you join in it and I think you will get good results.

3. 由于比赛将于2020年1月10日举行，请于2020年1月1日前将您的绘画作品送交学生会办公室。
As the competition is to be held on Jan. 10, 2020, your drawing should be sent to the Student Union Office before Jan. 1, 2020.

4. 最重要的是，你有必要用一句中国话来描述这幅画。祝你好运！
Most importantly, it’s necessary that you describe the drawing with a Chinese saying. Wish you good luck!

【答案】Dear Agnes,
How are you getting along with your study these days? Now, there is a good chance for you. Our school is planning to hold a drawing competition for middle school students from around the world, whose theme is“Draw rats for the Year of the Rat”. Knowing that you are so fond of and good at drawing, I strongly recommend you join in it and I think you will get good results.
As the competition is to be held on Jan. 10, 2020, your drawing should be sent to the Student Union Office before Jan. 1, 2020. Most importantly, it’s necessary that you describe the drawing with a Chinese saying. Wish you good luck!
Looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义用英语给英国同学 Agnes 写封信。
这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要为假定你是一所国际学校的学生会主席李华。你校学生会将举办 2020 年国际中学生鼠年画鼠“Draw rats for the Year of the Rat”绘画比赛。请你给你的英国同学 Agnes 写封信，邀请她参赛。信的内容包括：1. 比赛主题；2. 比赛时间；3. 作品交付地址：the Student Union Office。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。定语从句的使用：Our school is planning to hold a drawing competition for middle school students from around the world, whose theme is “Draw rats for the Year of the Rat”.非谓语动词的使用：Knowing that you are so fond of and good at drawing, I strongly recommend you join in it and I think you will get good results.










应用文写作|介绍信-介绍中医药治疗新冠肺炎的作用
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Leslie写邮件向你了解中医药，并询问中医药在中国治疗新冠肺炎中的作用。请你回复邮件。内容包括：
1.简介中医药；2.抗疫作用；3.祝愿。
参考词汇：新冠肺炎 COVID-19；针灸 acupuncture；大流行病 pandemic
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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1. 谢谢你给我写信！中医已经有几千年的历史了，医生们用各种各样的方法和草药来解决健康问题。
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2. 例如，针灸可以用来治疗疼痛，通过将细针插入我们的身体来改善整体健康状况。
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3. 如果你想知道更多，网上有更多的信息。
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4. 在最近一次对抗COVID-19的战斗中，中医药已经证明了它在增强人体免疫系统、缓解疾病症状和防止轻微症状恶化方面的有效性。
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5. 总的来说，它有助于降低死亡率和提高病人康复的机会。
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6. 向你的家人致以最良好的祝愿，在大流行中照顾好自己！
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参考答案：
1. 谢谢你给我写信！中医已经有几千年的历史了，医生们用各种各样的方法和草药来解决健康问题。
Thank you for writing to me! Traditional Chinese medicine (TCM) has been around for thousands of years, and doctors use various practices together with herbal medicine to address health problems.

2. 例如，针灸可以用来治疗疼痛，通过将细针插入我们的身体来改善整体健康状况。
For instance, acupuncture can be used to treat pain and improve overall wellness by inserting thin needles into our body.

3. 如果你想知道更多，网上有更多的信息。
If you want to know more, there is more information available online.

4. 在最近一次对抗COVID-19的战斗中，中医药已经证明了它在增强人体免疫系统、缓解疾病症状和防止轻微症状恶化方面的有效性。
In the most recent battle against COVID-19, TCM has proved its effectiveness in boosting people's immune system, relieving disease symptoms and preventing mild symptoms from getting worse.

5. 总的来说，它有助于降低死亡率和提高病人康复的机会。
Overall, it helped to reduce death rate and improved patients' chances of recovery.

6. 向你的家人致以最良好的祝愿，在大流行中照顾好自己！
Best wishes to your family and take care of yourself in the pandemic!

【答案】Hi Leslie,
Thank you for writing to me! Traditional Chinese medicine (TCM) has been around for thousands of years, and doctors use various practices together with herbal medicine to address health problems. For instance, acupuncture can be used to treat pain and improve overall wellness by inserting thin needles into our body. If you want to know more, there is more information available online.
In the most recent battle against COVID-19, TCM has proved its effectiveness in boosting people's immune system, relieving disease symptoms and preventing mild symptoms from getting worse. Overall, it helped to reduce death rate and improved patients' chances of recovery.
Best wishes to your family and take care of yourself in the pandemic!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。要求以李华的名义，给朋友Leslie写一封关于中医药以及针灸在治疗新冠病毒期间的作用。
第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你是Li Hua，你要给朋友Leslie回复一封邮件，内容包括对中医药的简介、针灸疗法在治疗新冠病毒期间的作用，以及对Leslie的祝愿。题目要点明确，利于学生进行表达。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：herbal medicine（中药），For instance（例如；举例来说），effectiveness（效果；有效性），immune system（免疫系统），disease symptoms（疾病症状）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）连词成句，需注意这是一封与朋友之间的电子邮件，可使用较为口语的语气。本篇电子邮件主要为介绍中医药的内容，以及针灸的作用，因此时态使用一般现在时即可。
第4步：连句成文，可使用连词对文章进行润色，如For instance（例如；举例来说），Overall（总而言之）等高频词，全篇书写要清晰、规范、不得有涂改、书写错误等。
【点睛】
整篇文章要点明确，分段合理，字数适当，文章开篇点题，在介绍了中医药的简单情况后，使用了for instance具体阐述了针灸的作用。第二段则是描写了中医药在抗疫期间所发挥的作用，如可以增强人的免疫力，减缓病情，等。第三段则是表达了作者对朋友在疫情期间希望他保重身体的美好祝愿。综上所述，本文题目中提到的所有信息点，并使用了简洁明了的语言进行阐述，是一篇比较标准的应试作文。



















应用文写作|感谢信-感谢外教疫情期间做志愿者
前段时间，受新冠肺炎疫情影响，大家都自我隔离在家。你校英国外教Simon从英国购买5万只口罩捐赠给市人民医院，自愿在社区做志愿者，为社区居民服务。校学生会得知情况后，请你以校学生会的名义给Simon写一封感谢信，要点如下：
1. 表达对他的谢意；
2. 阐明其行为的意义和影响；
3. 提醒他注意自身防护。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：COVID-19新冠肺炎
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翻译小练习：
1. 听说你慷慨捐赠口罩和无私的志愿服务，我们很感动。
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2. 我谨代表学生会致函，以表达我们最深切的谢意。
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3. 受新发冠心病肺炎影响，我市几天前急需口罩等防护用品。
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4. 如果没有你捐赠的5万个口罩，医务人员仍将左右为难。
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5. 另外，我们特别感谢您放弃整个春节假期，自愿为社会服务。
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6. 这确实减少了志愿者的工作量，使居民的生活更轻松。
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7. 请接受我们诚挚的谢意，感谢您及时无私的帮助，在这个特殊的时期，一定要保护好自己的安全。
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参考答案
1. 听说你慷慨捐赠口罩和无私的志愿服务，我们很感动。
Hearing of your generous donation of masks and selfless voluntary service, we’re quite touched.

2. 我谨代表学生会致函，以表达我们最深切的谢意。
On behalf of the Students’ Union I am writing to express our deepest gratitude.

3. 受新发冠心病肺炎影响，我市几天前急需口罩等防护用品。
Affected by the new coronary pneumonia, our city was in urgent need of protective articles such as masks a few days earlier.

4. 如果没有你捐赠的5万个口罩，医务人员仍将左右为难。
Without the 50,000 masks you donated, medical workers would still be in a dilemma.

5. 另外，我们特别感谢您放弃整个春节假期，自愿为社会服务。
In addition, we especially appreciate your giving up the whole Spring Festival holiday and volunteering to serve people in the community.

6. 这确实减少了志愿者的工作量，使居民的生活更轻松。
It really reduces the volunteers’ workload and makes residents’ life easier.

7. 请接受我们诚挚的谢意，感谢您及时无私的帮助，在这个特殊的时期，一定要保护好自己的安全。
Please accept our sincere thanks for your timely and selfless help and do take great care of your own safety during this special period.

【答案】Dear Simon,
Hearing of your generous donation of masks and selfless voluntary service, we’re quite touched. On behalf of the Students’ Union I am writing to express our deepest gratitude.
Affected by the new coronary pneumonia, our city was in urgent need of protective articles such as masks a few days earlier. Without the 50,000 masks you donated, medical workers would still be in a dilemma. In addition, we especially appreciate your giving up the whole Spring Festival holiday and volunteering to serve people in the community. It really reduces the volunteers’ workload and makes residents’ life easier.
Please accept our sincere thanks for your timely and selfless help and do take great care of your own safety during this special period. Best wishes!
Students’ Union


应用文写作|感谢信-感谢抗击疫情医护人员
假定你是李华，你所在的福州国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。
1. 表达谢意； 2. 个人感受； 3. 表达信心。
注意：
1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇：流行病epidemic 疫情 epidemic situation 新型冠状病毒 novel corona virus
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翻译小练习：
1. 我来自福州安华国际学校。
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2. 我谨代表我校，对你们在抗击新型冠状病毒的斗争中所付出的奉献和牺牲表示衷心的感谢。
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3. 在这场流行病中，是你不顾设备的短缺和感染的可能性，拼命抢救那些被感染但仍在挣扎求生的人。
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4. 也正是你们用专业知识对病毒有了新的认识，以建立我们战胜它的信心。
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5. 我相信在我们的共同努力下，中国一定会打赢这场战争，并迅速恢复。
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参考答案：
1. 我来自福州安华国际学校。
I am Li Hua from an international school in Fuzhou.

2. 我谨代表我校，对你们在抗击新型冠状病毒的斗争中所付出的奉献和牺牲表示衷心的感谢。
On behalf of my school, I would like to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in the battle against the novel corona virus.

3. 在这场流行病中，是你不顾设备的短缺和感染的可能性，拼命抢救那些被感染但仍在挣扎求生的人。
In this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but struggling for life.

4. 也正是你们用专业知识对病毒有了新的认识，以建立我们战胜它的信心。
It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it.

5. 我相信在我们的共同努力下，中国一定会打赢这场战争，并迅速恢复。
I believe with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.

Dear Medical workers，
I am Li Hua from an international school in Fuzhou. On behalf of my school, I would like to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in the battle against the novel corona virus.
In this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but struggling for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it.
I believe with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Good luck and stay well!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua