人教版英语九年级全册U4L6 写作课 课件

这是一份人教版英语九年级全册U4L6 写作课 课件，共24页。
Unit 4 Section B 3a-3bI used to be afraid of the dark.学习目标通过分析阅读文本、添加连词、增加名言警句等形式丰富作文内容。通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享自己的观点，接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。通过运用五指法分析题干，起草大纲，构思作文。Let’s watch and think.Q1: What is the video about?Q2: What do you think of changes?Q3: Why do you want to change?It is about the things that make you change.It’s not easy but worth trying.Because we are not satisfied with the present situation. Let’s read and think.我们的每一次变化都见证着我们的成长。请以“The biggest personal change I’ve ever made”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。要点： 1. 变化是什么。 2. 变化是如何发生的。 3. 变化后有何感受。要求： 1. 不少于80词。 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 3. 短文要包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。审主题审文体审人称审时态审要点写作应试微策略：运用五指法分析题干，梳理文章脉络。写作步骤: 1. 审1. 变化是什么？2. 变化是如何发生的？3. 变化后有何感受？抓要点写作步骤: 2. 抓Let’s think and talk.APPEARANCEPERSONALITYHOBBYI used to be short, but now I’m tall.I didn’t use to like music, but now I’m crazy about it.Tom used to be serious, but now he is humorous.What can we say when we talk about one’s changes?outlineWhat’s your change?the past situationwhyhowthe present situationeffects of your changefeelings写作步骤: 2. 抓Beginning写作步骤: 3. 扩The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that ___________.What’s your change?写作步骤: 3. 扩DevelopmentI ___________ exercise at all.I used to enjoy _______________.In the past, ___________ used to be my favorite.didn’t use toplaying the pianowatching TVWhat was the past situation?What’s the reason for the boy’s change?写作应试微策略：以读促写（寻找相关话题的文章）写作步骤: 3. 扩写作步骤: 3. 扩DevelopmentPeopleThingsReasonWhat’s the reason for your change?WhereCauseDevelopmentEnding写作应试微策略：运用五指法梳理记叙文脉络。事物描述五要素suddenly/all of a suddenhoweverthereforewhen/whileneverthelessmoreoverthanks to写作小Tips:加上连词能让文章条理更清晰，逻辑性更强！ThingsWhenDevelopmentIt may be difficult to change at once.A good beginning is half done.I can’t help _____.With the help of ___, I began to _____ .At first, it was hard for me to stick to it.I gradually realized the importance of _____.As time went by, _____ seemed much easier for me ._____ was so fascinating that I was totally absorbed in it.As a saying goes, “where there is a will, there is a way”.We’re here to put a dent in the universe. Otherwise why else even be here? For what it’s worth, it’s never too late, or in my case, too early, to be whoever you want to be.写作步骤: 3. 扩How do you change?写作小Tips:加上名言警句可以让文章更加优美且有说服力！Now, I am able to ______.At present, I am even more interested in _____________.It seems much easier for me to _____________.swimplaying footballgive a speech写作步骤: 3. 扩What’s the present situation?DevelopmentThe effect of changeFeelingsTarget Language:I have changed a lot.I’m more _____ than before.____ has helped me to improve myself a great deal. ____ has benefit me a lot.Target Language:In my poinion, ...From my point of view, ...As far as I am concerned, ... There is no doubt that ...写作步骤: 3. 扩EndingEndingWhat’s the effect of your change?1. 按照题目要求顺序2. 连词的使用3. 逻辑连接词的使用叙事的写作方法写作步骤: 4. 连写作步骤: 4. 连Development连词让你的文章条理清晰，逻辑分明！写作步骤: 5. 查策略字母为首间距为辅压线保稳倾斜最美写作步骤: 6. 抄Let’s edit. The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that I’ve fallen in love with reading. When I was a child, I didn’t use to enjoy books at all. However, it’s not easy to change at once. To attract my attention, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books that were interesting. Gradually, I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Not just that, but reading is also a fantastic way to spend my free time. In a word, books are my friends. And they have benefited me and will benefit me a lot. It’s believed that the more you read, the better you will be.Let’s check.Homework.Redraft your passage.Search for more information about the advantages of change.Preview the new words of Unit5.