中考英语作文训练：主题4 交通出行

这是一份中考英语作文训练：主题4 交通出行，共8页。

随着城市现代生活水平的日渐提高，城市的交通问题也愈来愈成为人们必须关注的问题了。由于私家车的增多，交通法规的遵守与否而引发的交通阻塞、交通事故等，已经成为我们亟待解决的问题。所以有关这一主题的讨论也是中考作文的重要考核点之一。
一.主题词汇
be getting mre and mre cnvenient
cause serius air pllutin and nise pllutin
take buses r the undergrund instead f driving cars
fllw the traffic laws
all the time
be filled with cuntless cars and buses
mre fly-vers
二．有用句型
1. It is hard t say...
is getting mre and mre cnvenient.
3. In my pint f view,we shuld...
4. In the past,..., but nw...
5. In rder t imprve the traffic, my suggestin is ...
三.模拟试题
请以“Traffic in ur city”为题写一篇短文。
参考句型：
1. What d yu think f the traffic in ur city?
2. Why d yu think s? (Give at least tw reasns)
3. What is/are yur suggestin(s) t imprve the traffic in ur city?
要点分析
1.这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。
a.必须写出你眼中的城市交通状况（可以是好的，也可以是糟的）。
b.必须写出你为什么认为会是这样的现状。（至少给出两条理由）
c.必须写出你对改善交通现状的建议。
2.时态：一般现在时。
写作素材
1.现代城市交通现状的句子
（1) Traffic in Shanghai is very heavy because Shanghai is an internatinal city.
（2) It's hard t say the traffic in ur city is gd. Actually, it's terrible enugh! Every day,there are lts f traffic jams in this busy city.
（3) Traffic plays an imprtant rle in every city.
（4) The traffic in ur city is getting mre and mre cnvenient.
2.造成城市交通现状的原因的句子
（1) The number f private cars is becming larger and larger. Mre imprtantly, this situatin causes serius air pllutin and nise pllutin.
（2) In Shanghai, traffic is a big prblem nwadays. The city is always crwded in the mrning and in the evening. The streets are filled with cuntless cars and buses. What's wrse. sme peple dn't fllw the traffic laws. They make the traffic even mre terrible.
（3) In the past, we culd nly get t Chngming Island by ferry and it tk us a lt f time. but nw we can g there by car and it nly takes us an hur. Mre tunnels have been built s that we can travel in the city mre easily.
（4)Sme car wners drive their cars,even thugh they haven't passed the driving test.This is against the law.
（5)Cars have plluted the envirnment. Peple in factries say they want t make cars that pllute less.But thers say making cars that pllute less will never be as gd as having fewer cars.
3.提出一些合理建议来改善城市交通的
（1)In rder t imprve the traffic,my suggestin is t widen the rads.The rads here are s narrw and crwded.
（2)I hpe there will be mre fly-vers in the future.I think the traffic in ur city will be better and better.
（3) In my pinin, we shuld take buses r undergrunds instead f driving cars when we g ut. We must fllw the traffic laws all the time as well.
（4) In my suggestin, we shuld be green cnsumers. We can try t ride bicycles every day. It is the basic way t imprve a city's traffic.
（5) T slve these prblems, the gvernment shuld limit the number f private cars and encurage citizens t chse public transprtatin.
（6) The gvernment shuld pass a law which asks all cars t take a test every tw years. This test is t make sure that the car is safe and in gd cnditin.
（7) I suggest peple use public transprt during the rush hurs.
（8) The gvernment shuld als take sme measures t slve the traffic prblems,such as widening the rads, building verpasses and s n.
4.结束语
（1) If we d this as much as pssible, I believe that ur traffic and envirnment will be better.
（2) We shuld bey the traffic rules as well. Better traffic, better life!
（3) If all the citizens f Shanghai can d these well, the traffic will n lnger be a prblem in the future.
（4) As lng as everyne des it well and the gvernment takes effective actins,I believe the prblem abut traffic jams can be slved sn.
例文分析
Traffic in Shanghai is very heavy because Shanghai is an internatinal city.With the develpment f transprtatin, the number f private cars is becming larger and larger. The rads are always crwded in the mrning and in the evening. The streets are filled with cuntless cars and buses. In additin, sme peple dn't fllw the traffic law. They make the traffic even wrse.
Fr these reasns, I think that the prblem f the heavy traffic must be slved. We can g t schl by bus instead f by car. If we d this as much as pssible, I believe that ur traffic and envirnment will be better.
四.写作操练
1.现在由于种种原因，交通事故在逐年增加，所以我们每个公民都应遵守交通规则。请
以“Obey traffic rules”为题写一篇短文。
参考范文与答案:
Obey traffic rules
With the develpment f technlgy, nwadays, mre and mre families have their wn cars. But mre accidents cme with it. Car accidents are happening arund us. We can usually hear the news f the traffic accidents between cars and citizens. T keep urselves safe, we shuld bey traffic rules. When we crss a rad, we shuld make sure the traffic light is green, and then we shuld ntice there are n cars driving fast r turning left r right. On the ther hand, drivers shuld drive slwly when there are peple crssing the rad,r wait and let them g first. In additin, they shuld never drive after drinking. I believe if everyne can d his part well, accidents will happen less s that we can be safer in the future.
2.拥有私家车的利与弊已经成为大家都热切关心的社会热点问题之一。请以“My view n wning a car”为题写一篇短文。
Suggested questins:
a. Des yur family wn a car?
b. Are yu fr r against wning a car? Why? (Give at least tw reasns.)
参考范文与答案:
My view n wning a car
Tday family cars are becming mre and mre ppular because they're cnvenient and
fast. But cars may bring us truble. S I am against wning family cars. Firstly, traffic becmes busier and mre accidents happen. Traffic accidents kill thusands and thusands f peple each year.Secndly,cars drink up huge amunts f fuel and thrw ut huge amunts f pllutants. The nise they make als pllutes the envirnment.Furthermre,with the increase f cars, parking places will be a big prblem, t. In a wrd,I'm against wning family cars.
3. 请以“Shared bike, a new way f life!”为题写一篇短文。
Questins fr reference:
a. Why d yu think it is a new way f life?
b. Culd yu give sme suggestins n making better use f the shared bikes?
参考范文与答案:
Shared bike, a new way f life!
Bicycle-sharing has cme int peple's life in China. It's clear that bicycle-sharing has a lt f advantages. It enables peple t slve the “last mile" prblem. Shared bikes can be fund almst everywhere at anytime, s it is f great cnvenience fr peple t travel arund and it desn't cst much. Mst imprtantly, cycling means a green way f transprtatin. The mre yu use shared bikes, the less pllutin yu'll prduce.
Hwever, after the use f the bike-sharing, peple's wrngdings have caused sme prblems. Sme users park the bikes in wrng places. Furthermre, sme peple keep the bikes as their wn. What's wrse, a few users even damage the bikes.
All f us shuld try t bey the rules and take care f shared bikes while making use f them. The gvernment and cmpanies shuld als imprve their management.
4.社会发展与人们生活水平提高的同时也引发了不少问题，比如交通阻塞现象。那么如何解决这一问题呢？你有哪些好的建议？请以“Hw t slve traffic jams”为题写一篇短文。
参考范文与答案:
Hw t slve traffic jams
With the develpment f the sciety and the imprvement f peple's life, private cars are getting mre and mre ppular. As a result, there are lts f traffic jams, and the air becmes mre and mre terrible.
I think there are sme measures t slve these prblems. First, we shuld ride a bike r take a bus t g t schl r wrk fr they are mre envirnment-friendly. I suggest we shuld use public transprt during the rush hurs. The gvernment shuld als take sme measures t slve the traffic prblems, such as widening the rads, building verpasses and s n.
As lng as everyne des his bit and the gvernment takes effective actins,I believe the prblems abut traffic jams can be slved sn.
5.每逢黄金周七天小长假，越来越多的人们涌入旅游者的行列。你觉得在黄金周旅游是否值得推崇？请发表你的观点。请以“My view n travelling during Glden Week hliday”为题写一篇短文。
The fllwing pints are fr yur reference:
a. Is travelling during Glden Week hliday a gd idea?
b. What's yur view?(Give sme advantages and disadvantages)
参考范文与答案:
My view n travelling during Glden Week hliday
Fr the 7-day Glden Week hliday,travelling has already becme a part f peple's relaxatin activities. Sme peple are in favr f this decisin, while thers d nt agree with it. I have my wn view abut it.
There are sme advantages fr travelling during Glden Week hliday.First,the hliday ecnmy will greatly raise peple's cnsumptin.In additin,it benefits turism, transprtatin, htels and service industries and enables them t thrive,which in turn adds fuel t the verall ecnmic grwth.
Hwever,it als has sme disadvantages.First,the travel craze puts a heavy burden n the traffic system,causing serius traffic jams. Besides,thusands f turists fld int scenic spts, jamming railway statins and airprts, causing sme safety prblems.
Abve all,I suggest the gvernment take effective measures t slve these prblems. We hpe travelling in Glden Week hliday will make ur life mre wnderful.
6.交通与安全是息息相关、不可分割的两个大问题，如何安全出行、文明驾驶、解除危险
隐患是大家密切关心的。请以“Whse duty is ur safety?”为题写一篇短文。
参考范文与答案:
Whse duty is ur safety?
There happened a lt f accidents t ur middle schl students in the past few years.Our teachers and parents are always wrried abut ur safety. Many peple think it is ur schl's duty t keep us safe while thers think it's ur families'. But I think it is mainly ur wn duty. As we knw, ur teachers and parents ften ask us t keep safe whether when we are at schl r at hme. They ften tell us t keep t the right n the rad, nt t eat junk fd, nt t tuch electricity buttns, nt t swim in deep water, nt t g t dangerus places. We have accidents mstly because we frget what ur teachers and parents have tld us. S dn't cmplain much abut thers; think mre abut ur wn duty. We shuld learn t prtect urselves at any time.
7.随着社会的发展和进步，解决交通问题已经迫在眉睫，请你以Li Lei的名义，以“A
letter abut dealing with traffic prblems”为题给City Daily的编辑写一封信谈论这个话题。
A letter abut dealing with traffic prblems
Dear Editr,
参考范文与答案:
A letter abut dealing with traffic prblems
Dear Editr,
I'd like t express my thughts n dealing with ur city's traffic prblems. As yu knw,the streets in Shanghai are usually crwded. There are hundreds f private cars. That's because the public transprt isn't cnvenient enugh. It's t slw fr peple wh are in a hurry. As a result, many citizens chse private cars. But with s many private cars, the air pllutin will be wrse. In my pinin, peple shuldn't drive private cars t ften. I believe if the public transprt is imprved,there will be less traffic in the city. I hpe yu can help spread the imprtance f public transprt by the City Daily News s that mre and mre peple will take public transprt t travel. And then I think ur envirnment will becme better.
I'm lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Lei
8.为了缓解城市的交通压力，越来越多的城市引入了大量的共享单车，但之后出现了诸多问题，比如共享单车被乱扔、被破坏等。请以“There's always hpe”为题写一篇短文谈谈你对解决这些问题有什么想法。
参考范文与答案:
There's always hpe
T relieve traffic jams and air pllutin, many cities have intrduced bike-sharing services.But prblems keep shwing up.
At first,when peple are dne using the bike, sme f them just thrw it nt streets. sme bikes are stlen r lcked up in chains. Besides,the damage t the OR cdes n the bikes has brught huge lsses t bike-sharing cmpanies.
T imprve this situatin, there's always hpe. Nw I have a gd suggestin. Bike-sharing cmpanies shall have 100 credit scres fr each user. Penalty pints will be taken in case f users' bad behavirs. Furthermre, bike-sharing services will wrk well nly if peple fllw the rules and shw respect fr the bikes and ther users.
Hwever, punishment may nt be the best way t stp shared bikes frm being stlen r damaged. I hpe everyne is respnsible fr the shared bike he is using and becmes a gd user.
9.城市交通在人们的生活中扮演了十分重要的角色，然而道路狭窄、私家车的增多、高峰时段的交通堵塞等等，都是亟待我们去解决的现实问题。请你以“Traffic and ur life”为题写一篇短文。
Suggested questins:
a. Is the traffic in yur city gd r bad?
b. What kind f traffic prblems d yu knw?
c. Hw t slve these traffic prblems?
参考范文与答案:
Traffic and ur life
The traffic in ur city is getting mre and mre cnvenient. But it is hard t say the traffic in ur city is gd. Actually, it's terrible enugh! Every day, there are lts f traffic jams in this busy city.
Everyne wastes s much time n the rad. What's mre,there are lts f car accidents in Shanghai. A great number f peple lst their lives r gt seriusly injured. Besides, the rads are always crwded in the mrning and in the evening. The streets are filled with cuntless cars and buses. What's wrse, sme peple dn't fllw the traffic law.They make the traffic even mre terrible.
In rder t imprve the traffic, my suggestin is t widen the rads, fr the rads here are s narrw and crwded. We shuld bey the traffic rules as well. In additin,we shuld take buses r undergrunds instead f driving cars if we g ut. We must fllw the traffic law all the time as well. If all the citizens f Shanghai can d these well, the traffic will n lnger be a prblem in the future.