人教版初中英语九年级全册U11L6 写作课课件

这是一份人教版初中英语九年级全册U11L6 写作课课件，共40页。
Sad movies make me cry.Unit 11 Section B 3a-3b学习目标通过复习和分析文本，能够把握讲述回忆/经历的关键信息和框架。通过分析阅读文本，能够扩充内容，起草作文。通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享自己的观点，接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。The winning teamLet’s discuss and retell the story.He was happy that his teammates could _________him.He felt to be on a winning team.He thought he had let the whole team down.He was worried his coach might ____ ____ ____ the team.Peter’s worriesSoccer is about , so everyone should support each other.They should learn to each other and learn from their mistakes.Peter’s actionsPeter’s team lost a game when he missed __________He went to the soccer practice with in his heart and said sorry to his teammates.He encouraged his teammates to continue to .Peter’s feelingsscoring a goal.kick him offteam workcommunicate withcouragepull togetherunderstandluckyDaddy’s adviceLet’s read and find what information you can get from it?Let’s read and think.人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第一次......。请根据提示，就你的第一次......写一篇短文。 要点提示:  1.第一次......的整个过程； 2.你的感受。 要求： 1. 词数：80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。  As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time .英语写作写作步骤: 1. 审审体裁 _____________________审人称 _____________________审时态 _____________________记叙文审第一人称为主以一般过去时为主BeginningDevelopmentEndingoutline第一次做某事的经历是什么2. 这次经历是怎样度过（时间顺序）3. 你的感受抓要点写作步骤: 2. 抓Let’s think what we can say when we talk about experiences. 0103040502When did it happen?What happened?Where did it happen?Why did it happen?How did it make you feel?outlineDo you still remember the first time you...?whenwherewhythe things I didfeelings写作步骤: 2. 抓写作步骤: 3. 扩Please share with us your first experience to...in details.Beginning写作步骤: 3. 扩I still remember the first time I_______________._________________ was the most unforgettable experience in my life.learned to swimLearning to swimBeginning写作步骤: 3. 扩I still remember the first time I_______________._________________ was the most unforgettable experience in my life.cookedCooking by myself Beginning写作步骤: 3. 扩I still remember the first time I ____________________.__________________ was the most unforgettable experience in my life.traveled with my parentsTraveling with parents Beginning写作步骤: 3. 扩I still remember the first time I ____________________________.___________________________ was the most unforgettable experience in my life.attended an English competitionAttending the English competitionBeginning写作步骤: 3. 扩Task 2Put the sentences in the right order.1. I went to a theater.2. My father felt sad and disappointed.3. My father decided to walk home.4. I lied to my father about being late.5. I drove and followed my father, begging him to get in the car.6. I drove my father to a faraway village.7. I went to pick up my father.6-1-7-4-2-3-5Try to write your experience according to the order of time.Development写作步骤: 3. 扩Development写作步骤: 3. 扩Development写作步骤: 3. 扩I went to the swimming pool. The coach taught me how to hold breath.I could stay in water for a long time.The coach taught me some movements.I could swim by myself.Ending写作步骤: 3. 扩My feelings changed during the process of learning.At first:Then:At last:meaningfulWrite down key words for your ending.Development写作步骤: 3. 扩Development写作步骤: 3. 扩Development写作步骤: 3. 扩• I decided to make dinner for them.• I surfed the Internet for some information on how to make...• I followed the instructions to make some dishes.• I got the dinner ready.Ending写作步骤: 3. 扩My parents’ feelings: My parents returned from work and they__________________.My feelings: ___________.Write down key words for your ending.meaningfulDevelopment你和父母准备外出旅游。请根据提示做出你们的出游计划。（只填写字母代码）1. I would like to go somewhere _____, _____, _____ or _____.2. By the end of June, we will have _____, _____, _____ and _____3. Some of the things that we are going to carry can be used for and . D F J K A. exciting B. taking photos C. peacefulD. packed the suitcase E. exoticF. asked my neighbor to look after my dogG. contacting my friends H. education I. fascinatingJ. prepared a camera K. bought a mobile phone L. travelB A C E I G写作步骤: 3. 扩Ending写作步骤: 3. 扩My parents’ feelings: _________________________.My feelings: ________________________________.Write down key words for your ending.meaningful写作步骤: 3. 扩DevelopmentHow do you prepare for an English competition? Please put the pictures into the correct order. _____  _____  _____  _____  _____ CAEBDEnding写作步骤: 3. 扩My feelings changed during the process of the competition.Before the competition:During the competition:After the competition:Write down key words for your ending.meaningful1. 按照时间顺序2. 逻辑连接词的使用使用叙事的写作方法写作步骤: 4. 连Development写作步骤: 4. 连1.To start with, ________.2. Then, ________.3. ... hour(s) later, ________.4. When ________.5. Although ________.What’s your experience?写作步骤: 5.查策略：字母为首间距为辅压线保稳倾斜最美写作步骤: 6. 抄Let’s edit. As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I cooked, which was the most unforgettable experience in my life. Last summer, my parents were so busy that we couldn’t have dinner on time. Considering my parents’ hard work, I decided to make dinner for them.Let’s edit. To start with, I surfed the Internet for some information on how to make tomato soup and Mapo Tofu. Then, I followed the instructions to make them step by step. An hour later, I got the dinner ready. When my parents returned from work, they were surprised and happy. They praised me for what I had done. Let’s edit. Although my dishes were not so delicious, I felt excited to share housework. I will never forget the sweet memory. Let’s edit. As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I cooked, which was the most unforgettable experience in my life. Last summer, my parents were so busy that we couldn’t have dinner on time. Considering my parents’ hard work, I decided to make dinner for them. To start with, I surfed the Internet for some information on how to make tomato soup and Mapo Tofu. Then, I followed the instructions to make them step by step. An hour later, I got the dinner ready. When my parents returned from work, they were surprised and happy. They praised me for what I had done. Although my dishes were not so delicious, I felt excited to share housework. I will never forget the sweet memory. Let’s check.Homework.Redraft your writing.Choose another unforgettable experience and write a passage about it.Choose an extract from The adventure of Tom Sawyer, read and find how Mark Twain described the adventure vividly.