人教版初中英语九年级全册U12L6 写作课 课件

这是一份人教版初中英语九年级全册U12L6 写作课 课件，共25页。
Life is full of the unexpectedUnit 12 Section B 3a-3b学习目标通过老师提供的故事，剖析故事的构成，提升故事的逻辑性。通过老师的引导，能拓展词汇、扩充内容、起草作文。通过小组讨论，能够乐于与同伴分享，接纳建议并修改作文，提高写作的自我效能感。Let’s listen and guess.Q: What happened to the singer?When he__________, he had__________.Let’s read and think. 在你的生活中，总会遇到幸运的或者不幸运的事，请你以 A lucky day或者An unlucky day为题，根据下面的提示写一篇短文。提示：1. 叙述一个你生活中幸运的或者不幸运的事情；2. 说清事情的经过。要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。写作步骤: 1. 审审体裁 __________审人称 __________ 审时态 __________记叙文审第一人称一般过去时&过去完成时在你的生活中，总会遇到幸运的或者不幸运的事，请你以 A lucky day或者An unlucky day为题，根据下面的提示写一篇短文。提示：1. 叙述一个你生活中幸运的或者不幸运的事情； 2. 说清事情的经过；要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。写作步骤: 2. 抓本文要求叙述一件事情；2. 一次幸运的或者不幸的事 / 怎样发展；（时间顺序）3. 你的感受 / 决定。抓要点在你的生活中，总会遇到幸运的或者不幸运的事，请你以A lucky day或者An unlucky day为题，根据下面的提示写一篇短文。提示：1. 叙述一个你生活中幸运的或者不幸运的事情； 2. 说清事情的经过。要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。Let’s think.What can we say when we talk about an unlucky day? BeginningBodyEndingoutlineWhat?How did you feel?Background of the storyLet’s make up a story.costume partyOlafhappydropdanceYou were invited to a costume party and dressed like Snow White. What happened？写作步骤: 2. 抓outline who when where weather?What happened to me?(unlucky)(时间顺序）How did I feel after the party?写作步骤: 3. 扩1. It was _________(time).2. It was a ________(weather) day.3. In my life, there were many things impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. The following is one of them.4. I will always remember the date...5. This was the luckiest / unluckiest day of my life…BeginningWhen was the day?Let’s read and think.When I got up this morning, I had a strange feeling that it just wasn’t going to be my day. First, I got up too late and missed breakfast. Then as I was dashing to the bus stop to catch my bus, I stepped on a banana peel, slipped and fell on my backside. To make matters worse, the bus didn’t stop for me because it was packed. I had no choice but to take a taxi. Not until the taxi got to my school did I realize, I had left my wallet at home. After I did a lot of explaining and apologizing, the driver let me go. Finally, I arrived at the school gate. To my astonishment, I suddenly realized it was a school holiday. It never rains but it pours.Q1: What is the writer’s strange feeling?Q2: What makes matters worse? Q3: When did the writer realize he had left his wallet at home?The writer had a strange feeling that it just wasn’t going to be his day.To make matters worse, the bus didn’t stop for him because it was packed.Not until the taxi got to his school did he realize, he had left his wallet at home.It was an unlucky day. What happened in the morning?写作步骤: 3. 扩1. I had a strong feeling that ___________. 2. When I ___________, I _____________.3. To make matters worse, ____________ .4. Not until _____did I realize, I had _________ .developmentWhat kind of sentence pattern can we use to narrate a story in the past?Let’s tell the story.I sang and danced with my friends at the party. My friends invited me to a costume party.I dressed up like Snow White. I enjoyed myself at first.But then I didn't hold my cup of coffee carefully. It dropped on the floor. The coffee splashed on my dress.They laugh at me that I had peed on my trousers.Finally I had to go home to change my clothes .写作微策略：写出动词短语按照时间顺序排序写作步骤: 3. 扩 17:0018:0019:00dress updroplaugh atpeesing and dance20:00go home and changeinviteDevelopment 写作步骤: 3. 扩 17:0018:0019:00dress updroplaugh atpeesing and dance20:00go home and changeinviteDevelopment Can you tell the story again?Let’s listen and think.Q: What did the writer decide to do?A: He decided to forget this day.unlucky day写作步骤: 3. 扩I think it is ________________________________.My feeling:________________________________.My decision: ______________________________.EndingWrite down key words for your ending.unlucky写作步骤: 4. 连Write it in order of time. (按照时间顺序)2. 连接词的使用叙事的写作方法写作步骤: 4. 连1. At the party, ____________________.2. At first, then/After that, … Finally, … __________.3. However, ________________________.What happened?Development 写作步骤: 5. 查写作步骤: 6. 抄Tips：字母为首间距为辅压线保稳倾斜最美学生习作字较小不饱满Let’s edit.学生习作In my life, there were many things impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. I will always remember that day. It’s the unluckiest day of my life.Last week ,my friends invited me to a costume party. I was very happy because it was my first time to attend that kind of party. I prepared a lot. I dressed up like Snow White. At the party, I sang and danced with my friends . I enjoyed myself at first. However, the bad things happened. I didn't hold my cup of coffee carefully. It dropped on the floor. The coffee splashed on my dress. I was so embarrassed, and my face turned red. At that time, my friends came over. They all laughed at me and said I had peed on my trousers. I cried. Finally I rushed out of the party and went home. What an unlucky day!Self-check.Homework.1. Polish your writing according to your peers’ and your teacher’s advice.2. Draw a mind map to review Unit 12.