牛津译林版选择性必修第三册UNIT1 Wish you were here表达作文巧升格学案
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UNIT 1 Wish you were here写一封介绍家乡的电子邮件本单元的写作项目是写一封介绍家乡的电子邮件，属于书信的写作范畴。[基本框架]开头(the beginning)——引出写邮件的目的主体(the body)——详细介绍你的家乡结尾(the ending)——发出邀请[常用词块]1．be located/situated in/on...坐落在……2．cover an area of...占地……3．has a large population人口众多4．date back to the Tang Dynasty追溯到唐朝5．has many places of interest有很多名胜6．is famous for its beautiful West Lake因美丽的西湖而闻名[常用语句]★精彩开头1．I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit.Now let me introduce something about Tibet for you.我很高兴知道你会来西藏参观。现在让我简要介绍一下西藏。2．I'm pleased that you're coming to tour in China.我很高兴你要来中国观光。★正文佳句1．It is located in the southwest of China.It has a population of about 2.8 million，covering an area of more than 1.2 million square kilometers.它位于中国的西南部。约有280万人口，占地面积达120多万平方公里。2．Yibin is an important transportation center of Sichuan Province，with highspeed rail，expressways，waterways and airlines conveniently available to the city.宜宾是四川省重要的交通枢纽，高铁、高速公路、水路和航空交通都十分便利。★余味结尾1．Looking forward to seeing you.I believe we'll have a good day.很期待见到你。我相信我们会有美好的一天。2．Provided you can visit my school some day，I will show you around it.假如有一天你能参观我的学校，我就带你参观一下。假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，发邮件向你询问改建后的前门大街的情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1．简况：长 800 余米、 600 多年历史、 300 余家商铺；2．位置：天安门广场南面；3．交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；4．特色：步行街、铛铛车、茶馆、剧院等。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street；铛铛车trolley car；地铁 subwayDear Sarah，Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt of Qianmen Street.Here is something about it. I'm sure you'll like it.Yours，Li Hua[学生习作]Dear Sarah，Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt of Qianmen Street.Here is something about it.Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old.On this 800metre street，there are more than 300 shops.As the street is in the center of Beijing，just on the south of Tian'anmen Square，it's very convenient to get there by bus.You may take buses No.11，69 or 59！Subway Line 2 has a stop there too.Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street，but it has trolley cars to take you not only to the shops，but also to the theaters and tea houses where you can experience a true Chinese way of life.I'm sure you'll like it.Yours，Li Hua 点评：1.本文能够概括介绍前门大街的情况。2.有两次关于介词on的错误使用。3.个别句式有错误。如：...it has trolley cars to take you...[升格作文]Dear Sarah，Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt of Qianmen Street.Here is something about it. Qianmen Street is a famous street，dating back to over 600 years ago.There are more than 300 shops along this 800metre street.Just to the south of Tian'anmen Square，it's very convenient to get there by bus.You may take buses No.11，69 or 59！Subway Line 2 has a stop there too.Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street，but you can take trolley cars to the shops，the theaters and tea houses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life.I'm sure you'll like it.Yours，Li Hua假定你是李华，你的朋友Jack要来你的家乡参观。请给他写封邮件表示欢迎并简要介绍你的家乡，内容包括：1．自然环境；2．人文环境(交通、生活等)；3．表示欢迎。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【参考范文】Dear Jack，I'm very glad to hear that you are going to pay a visit to my hometown.Yibin is located in the south of Sichuan Province，in the intersection of Jinsha River，Min River and Yangtze River.It is a beautiful city with green water and green hills all around it.Yibin is an important transportation center of Sichuan Province，with highspeed rail，expressways，waterways and airlines conveniently available to the city.The new airport，about 10 km from the city's downtown area，operates flights to major cities.People who are happily living here are kind and hardworking.They enjoy the convenience brought by modernization.Can't wait to show you around in Yibin soon.Yours，Li Hua
