中考英语写作指导：书面表达ppt课件 完整版

这是一份中考英语写作指导：书面表达ppt课件 完整版，共28页。PPT课件主要包含了brainstorm，My Father，Age，Apperances，Job，Hobbies，写作第一步，写作第二步，写作第三步，写作第四步等内容，欢迎下载使用。
The Man’s Lies
(2013山东聊城中考)在父亲节（6月16日）来临之际，请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇以“My Father”为题的英语作文，介绍其大体情况，并谈谈你对“父亲”的评价。
【注意】1. 字数：80左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。
用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。
加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。
恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。
选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。
书写美观、大方、清楚；时态、人称、大小写及标点运用准确无误；句子连贯完整，恰当使用连接词；能够部分或少量使用复合句。
My father is a 40-year-ld math teacher. He is tall and fat with shrt hair and big eyes. He always wrks hard. His class is lively and interesting and is deeply lved by his students.  My father is an hnest and kind man. He ften helps ther children and me with ur math. My father’s hbby is playing table tennis. We ften play table tennis tgether at weekends. My father is nt nly the sweetest ne in the wrld but als the greatest ne. I have learned a lt frm him. I lve my father very much. 
健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。
stay at hme
visit friends r parents
根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点
如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲
A lt f peple travel . Sme peple stay at hme. Sme ther peple visit friends r parents. A few peple wrk.Enjy yur vacatin.
Hw d peple spend their vacatin? We made a survey and here is ur survey reprt.
A lt f peple travel . Sme peple stay at hme. They watch TV r surf the Internet. Sme ther peple visit friends r parents. A few peple wrk.
Cme and enjy yur vacatin. The peple wh relax will wrk well.
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bth…and, nt nly…but als, neither…nr;2.表示选择: r, either…r;3.表示转折: but, hwever, thugh, after all, 4.表示因果: because, s5.表示条件: if , unless，as lng as6.表示对比: instead, nt…but, n the ne hand…n the ther hand;7.表示解释: fr example, such as, in ther wrds （ 换句话说）;8.表示顺序: t begin with, firstly, first (f all), secnd(ly), next, later, since then, frm then n, finally, in the end;9.表示强调: als, besides, what’s mre（此外）, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all（总的来说）, in a wrd
Hw d peple spend their vacatin? We made a survey and here is ur survey reprt.Accrding t it, mst peple travel. And sme peple stay at hme. Als sme ther peple visit friends r parents. Hwever, a few peple wrk. Cme and enjy yur vacatin. Peple wh relax will wrk well.
We interviewed peple abut the ways t spend the vacatin and here is ur survey reprt. Accrding t it, mst peple chse t travel t get away frm the busy wrld during the hlidays . Then sme peple like t stay at hme, watching TV r surfing the Internet t have a gd rest. And t visit friends r parents als makes them relaxed. Hwever, a few peple have t wrk. Cme and enjy yur vacatin. Peple wh relax will wrk well.
第一档：14-15分： 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误；
第二档：11-13分： 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少数语言错误；
第三档：8-10分： 内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚连贯，基本符合逻辑，有一些语言错误；
第四档：5-7分： 内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少量句子，但整体 表达不太连贯，且语言错误较多；
第五档：0-4分： 只能写出一些单词，不成句子，缺乏逻辑性， 语言错误多；
以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。Sentence patterns fr reference(以下句型供参考）My dream is t be…/t d…/t g…I enjy /like/prefer…T make my dream cme true, I …If my dream cmes true…
I have a dreamAnybdy has a dream. But different peple have different dreams.Mst peple always dream t be ppular r rich. But my dream is very special, I just want t be a bird. Why d I have such a dream? Just because I admire they’re free, they can d everything they want.When they’re flying in the sky, they lk beautiful, even they’re the mst beautiful animals. I really want t enjy the feeling f flying in the sky. Hwever, I knw it wn’t be achieved any mre.It’s just a dream, in my heart.
Passage One
I have a dreamMy dream is t be a basketball player. I like it because I think it very interesting. It can make me becme very happy and healthy. T make me dream cme true. I need try t d it. And I need t spend sme time n it. I need t practice every day. If my dream cmes true, I will try t d it.
All f us have hlidays in ur daily life, but hw d peple spend their hliday? We did a survey and here are the results. — frm Tian Wenhui
It’s nthing better than having a rest after wrking ! S hw d peple rest themselves n vacatin? Accrding t ur survey, there are several ways. — frm Lu Zhimin