中考英语写作复习课课件PPT

这是一份中考英语写作复习课课件PPT，共51页。PPT课件主要包含了Objective，Discuss，列list，加add， 我们应该节约纸张，方法二活用多种句型，加例子，方法四妙用谚语，覆水难收，活到老学到老等内容，欢迎下载使用。
Objective
What’s a perfect article like?Hw t write a perfect article?
What’s a perfect article like?
Let’s g fr it!
Dear Mr. Knw， First，sme f us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a bring thing. And then it’s s difficult fr us t remember all the wrds in the texts. S lts f us dn’t have enugh cnfidence t keep up English study. Can yu help us? Hw can we imprve ur English? Please give us sme useful advice. Thank yu very much. Write t me sn. Yurs, Mary
Dear Mr. Knw， I’ m pleased t write t ask fr sme help. I want t tell yu sme prblems we meet in English study. First，sme f us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a bring thing. And then it’s s difficult fr us t remember all the wrds in the texts. S lts f us dn’t have enugh cnfidence t keep up English study. Yurs, Mary
Dear Mr. Knw， I’ m pleased t write t ask fr sme help. I want t tell yu sme prblems we meet in English study. Can yu help us? Hw can we imprve ur English? Please give us sme useful advice. Thank yu very much. Write t me sn. Yurs, Mary
Dear Mr. Knw，
First，sme f us aren’t interested in English . We think studying English is such a bring thing. And then it’s s difficult fr us t remember all the wrds in the texts. S lts f us dn’t have enugh cnfidence t keep up English study.
I’ m pleased t write t ask fr sme help. I want t tell yu sme prblems we meet in English study.
Can yu help us? Hw can we imprve ur English? Please give us sme useful advice. Thank yu very much. Write t me sn.
Yurs, Mary
Basic structure
What’s a perfect article like?
a cmplete structure
I’m pleased t write t ask fr sme help. I want t tell yu sme prblems we meet in English study.
right tense
prper persn
right grammar
right wrd usage
prper cnjunctins
beautiful wrds and sentences
a cmplete structureright grammarprper cnjunctinsbeautiful wrds and sentences
写作指导Hw t write a perfect article?
basic steps (写作步骤)
1.search （审：文体；主题；时态；人称）2.list （列：要点；重要词汇；基本句型）3.expand (扩展：扩词成句)4.add (加: 开头和结尾) 5.cnnect (连：连词)6.beautify (美：高级词汇；多种句型；谚语/例子)7.crrect (修改:语法；拼写；大小写；标点等)8.cpy (誊写：书写)
Have a try!
地球是我们的家园。作为地球的主人，我们应该好好保护它。假如你们学校下星期要举行一次演讲比赛，主题为“如何保护地球”。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。
1.审(search)
提示：1、节约用水、用电； 2、节约纸张； 3、不乱丢垃圾； 4、 回收利用废品。
prtect the earthsave water and electricity save paperthrw away litterrecycle waste thingsWe shuld…We shuldn’t…
3.扩 (expand)
We shuld prtect the earth.
We shuld save water and electricity.
We shuld save paper.
We shuldn’t thrw away litter.
We shuld recycle waste things.
The earth is ur hme. It gets wrse and wrse because f the serius pllutin. We shuld prtect it well. We shuld d the fllwing things in ur daily life. （the beginning）We shuld save water and electricity. We shuld save paper. We shuldn’t thrw away litter. We shuld recycle waste things.All f us shuld play a rle in prtecting the earth . Let’s d it right nw.（the ending）
加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。
5.连(cnnect)
使用适当的关联词连接句子、段落。
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bth…and, what’s mre nt nly…but als, neither…nr2.表示选择: r, either…r3.表示转折: but,hwever,althugh\thugh,after all,anyway4.表示因果: because, s, therefre,since,fr,as a result5.表示条件: if , unless6.表示对比: instead, nt…but, while, in the same way, n the ne hand…n the ther hand7.表示解释: fr example, fr instance, such as, that is t say, in ther wrds,t tell the truth8.表示顺序: t begin with, firstly, first (f all), secnd(ly), next, later, since then, frm then n, finally, in the end9.表示强调: als, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示结论: all in all, altgether, in a wrd, generally speaking, in shrt
关联词(cnjunctin)
As we all knw ,the earth is ur hme. But it gets wrse and wrse because f the serius pllutin. We shuld prtect it well. T d this, we shuld d the fllwing things in ur daily life. Firstly, we shuld save water and electricity . Secndly, we shuld save paper. Then, we shuldn’t thrw away litter. What’s mre, we shuld recycle waste things. In a wrd , all f us shuld play a rle in prtecting the earth . Let’s d it right nw.
6.beautify (美）
方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇
Which is better?
他们在海滩上听音乐。
A. They listened t the music n the beach.
B . They enjyed the music n the beach.
最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。
A . His dg was saved at last. He was very surprised.
B. T his surprise, his dg was saved at last.
A . We shuld save paper.
B. We shuld put paper t gd use.
她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A. She is very yung. She can’t carry the heavy bx.B. She is t yung t carry the heavy bx.C. She is s yung that she can’t carry the …D. She is nt ld enugh t carry the…
方法三:妙用引文和例子 （多用于“bdy”）
We shuld try ur best t prtect the envirnment and save the earth.
Fr example, we can stp using napkins s that we can save paper.
在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。
I ften help my parents d husewrk,
such as washing dishes, flding the clthes and taking ut the trash.
加谚语(prverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。
我们应该竭尽所能拯救地球。
We shuld try ur best t save the earth.
As the saying ges, “Nthing is difficult if yu put yur heart in it.” If we try ur best t save the earth, we will make it.
Enjy sme prverbs
1.Practice makes twice befre yu d. 4.D as the Rmans d.
5.The early bird catches the wrm.
3.Where there is a will, there is a way.
6.Failure is the mther f success.
7.It is n use crying ver spilt milk. 8.An apple a day keeps the dctr away. 9.All rads lead t Rme. 10.Never t ld t learn.
一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。
Tday I’d like t say smething abut prtecting the earth . As we all knw ,the earth is ur hme. But it gets wrse and wrse because f the serius pllutin. S we shuld prtect it well. T d this, we shuld d the fllwing things in ur daily life. Firstly, we shuld save water and electricity . Secndly, we shuld save paper. Then, we shuldn’t thrw away litter. What’s mre, we shuld recycle waste things. In a wrd , all f us shuld play a rle in prtecting the earth . Let’s d it right nw.
7.crrect (修改)
名词的单复数问题主谓一致问题时态和语态问题Chinglish 现象行文的逻辑性问题词类错用应用文格式错误
1. 湖里有许多的鱼。 There was much fish in the lake.
2. I bught tw bk yesterday.
There were many fish in the lake.
I bught tw bks yesterday.
1. And nw many rivers becmes very dirty.
2. Everything are ging very well.
And nw many rivers becme very dirty.
Everything is ging very well.
1. I miss the bus yesterday mrning.
2.The 29th Olympic Games held in China.
I missed the bus yesterday mrning.
The 29th Olympic Games was held in China.
Chinglish 现象
1. I very like English.
I like English very much.
2. We usually by bus g t schl.
We usually g t schl by bus .
Because I didn’t g t the mvie, it rained heavily last night.
I didn’t g t the mvie, because it rained heavily last night.
1.I friend is mre ppular .
My friend is mre ppular .
2.His sister sings gd.
His sister sings well.
Nice handwriting is very imprtant!
Hell, everyne! As we all knw , the earth is ur hme, s we shuld prtect it well. T d this, we shuld d the fllwing things in ur daily life. First, t save water and electricity, we shuld turn ff the taps, TV sets and lights when we dn’t use them. Secnd, we shuld put paper t gd use. Third, we shuld walk t schl r wrk, because the air pllutin is becming wrse and wrse. Furth, we can’t thrw away litter everywhere.Bttles and paper shuld be reused by us. Let’s take actin frm nw n. Thanks fr listening.
search （审）list （列）expand (扩展)add (加) cnnect (连)beautify (美)crrect (修改)cpy (誊写)