天津市各区2022年九年级英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达

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天津市各区2022届九年级英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达专题【和平区】66. 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike饱受肥胖的困扰，他向你求助，询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点提示，给他回复一封邮件。要点提示：（1）多吃水果蔬菜。（2）坚持每天锻炼，但是要适量。（3）保证充分的睡眠，绝不熬夜。（4）其他……要求：（1）词数：80词左右（邮件的格式、开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Dear Mike,I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your weight. I’d like to share some good ways to keep healthy with you.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope these rules will be useful for you.Yours,Li Hua【66题答案】【答案】例文Dear Mike,I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your weight I’d like to share some good ways to keep healthy with you. First, eat more fruit and vegetables. Say no to fast food such as hamburgers and chips. Eating too much of them may be harmful to your health. Second, do more exercise every day. Find out your favorite sport and keep doing it. But remember not to do too much at one time.Third, get enough sleep. As a teenager, you should sleep at least 8 hours every day. Never stay up too late. Finally, try to do things that make you happy such as talking with your friends and enjoying a relaxing movie.I hope these rules will be useful for you.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；内容是根据所给的要点给Mike写一封邮件，告诉他如何减肥来保持健康。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述邮件内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；分别从饮食、锻炼、作息和其他方面做介绍；最后是希望。 【河北区】66. 假如你是学生李华，你班将召开线上学习经验分享主题班会。请根据以下要点写一篇英文短文与同学们进行交流，介绍你在居家线上学习期间上好网课的方法，并表达你的想法。（1）课前准备好书本和笔，打开电脑。（2）认真听讲，积极回答提问。（3）记录学习内容，按时完成作业。（4）注意保护眼睛和锻炼身体。（5）你认为网课……要求：（1）词数：80~100个。（2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。How to Have Online Classes BetterWe have had online classes for several weeks. Here I’d like to share__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【66题答案】【答案】例文：How to Have Online Classes BetterWe have had online classes for several weeks. Here I’d like to share some ways to take online courses. First, get your books and pens ready before class. Second, turn on the computer. During the class, we should listen carefully and answer questions actively. We should also take notes and finish homework on time. Remember to take care of your eyes and exercise more. I think online courses are very important and we should try our best to learn them well.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“How to Have Online Classes Better”为题参照题中要点信息进行分析。写作时需包括所列提纲中所有要点，并适当拓展。2.写作指导：本文以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题；第二段介绍上好网课的方法；第三段总结全文，发表个人看法；保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。 【河东区】3月5日是学雷锋纪念日，你校师生去敬老院开展志愿者活动。假如你是李华，请通过邮件将此活动情况介绍给Mary。活动时间：3月5日活动地点：幸福敬老院(Nursing Home)参与人员：志愿者活动形式：1. 送鲜花、水果和美好的祝福。2. 帮老人整理房间、打扫卫生……3. 陪老人聊天；为老人表演（唱歌、跳舞），读报……活动感想：此活动很有意义，从中学会了关爱老人、尊重老人……要求：1. 要点齐全，条理清晰，语句通顺，不要逐字翻译，须适当发挥。2. 词数100字左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）Dear Mary,Thank you for your last E-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5thMarch.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us.Li Hua【86题答案】【答案】Dear Mary,Thank you for your last E-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5thMarch.As a member of volunteers, I got up early because I was too excited to sleep. In the morning, we volunteers brought some flowers and fresh fruit. As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we sent them our best wishes too. How happy they were!Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. After that, some of us performed activities for them, such as singing songs and dancing. Some of us read newspaper for them. Some of us chatted with them. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them. In our daily life, we should offer our seats to them on buses. And we should treat our own grandparents more kindly.If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us.Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，也是日记。本文时态主要是一般过去时。认为阅读料，认真审题，根据提示要点列出提纲，短文必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。注意语法和单词拼写。2.例文点评：例文符合题目要求，写出了去敬老院开展志愿者活动过程，包含了所有要点。本文格式时态使用正确，表达条理清楚连贯，没有语法单词拼写错误，符合英语的表达习惯，运用了合适的连接词或过渡词，文章思路清晰，富有逻辑性。3.高分亮点：（一）短语和连词的使用：As，because，too…to…，then，after，such as，when， if等。（二）句型：（1）As a member of volunteers, I got up early because I was too excited to sleep.（2）As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we sent them our best wishes too.（3）When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.(4) From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them.等。 【河西区】66. 假如你是中学生李华，本学期你的学校为学生开设了丰富的课后活动。根据以下提示，给你的朋友Tom写一封邮件，与他分享你所参加的活动和感受。（1）活动时间：每星期二、星期五，下午4:30—下午5:15（2）活动地点：教室、校内花园、学校操场（3）你参加了：美术、英语口语（4）你的感受：发现了校园的美丽，更加热爱自己的学校；结交了新朋友；英语学习有了很大进步（5）你的希望和建议：……参考词汇：oral English 英语口语   要求：（1）词数：80～100个。（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Dear Tom,This term my school has set up different kinds of colorful after-school activities for students. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Do you have any after-class activities? What do you think of them? Best wishes,Li Hua【66题答案】【答案】One possible versionDear Tom,This term my school has set up different kinds of colorful after-school activities for students. These activities are held in our classrooms, in the school gardens or on the playground from 4:30 p.m. to 5:15 p.m. every Tuesday and Friday. I choose art and oral English according to my interests. I have found how beautiful my school is by drawing my school. I love my school more. I have made some new friends when we practice oral English. Now I have made rapid progress in my English lesson. I hope to have these activities three times a week. Besides, there will be more activities for us to know about our society and learn new skills in life.  Do you have any after-class activities? What do you think of them? Best wishes,Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。根据所给的提示内容给你的朋友Tom写一封邮件，与他分享你所参加的活动和感受。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和现在完成时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时需把活动的时间、地点以及你参加的具体活动叙述清楚，同时要给出自己的感受、希望和建议。写作时注意语句要通顺，无单词语法错误。 【红桥区】66. 天津梁启超纪念馆（Liang Qichao Memorial Hall）在招募志愿者。假如你是某中学学生李华，请根据以下提示写一封自荐信。（1）热爱天津历史和文化；（2）能用英语讲好中国故事；（3）性格外向，喜欢与人沟通：（4）爱好广泛，乐于尝试新事物；（5）你认……要求：（1）词数： 80～100词；（2）短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。参考词汇：文化culture    外向的outgoingDear Sir or Madam,Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. May I have the honor to work as a volunteer at Liang Qichao Memorial Hall? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your early reply.Yours truly,Li Hua【66题答案】【答案】例文Dear Sir or Madam,Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. May I have the honor to work as a volunteer at Liang Qichao Memorial Hall? I know about Tianjin history and culture, which are my favourites. I am good at speaking English, so I can tell Chinese stories to foreign visitors in English. I’m such an outgoing boy that it’s easy for me to communicate with others. I’ve got many hobbies, such as reading books, doing sports. What’s more, I am ready to try something new all the time.    As far as I’m concerned, volunteer work is very important. From the volunteer work, I can meet different people and discover my own value. Besides, I’m healthy and hard-working. I promise to be an excellent volunteer if you choose me.    Looking forward to your early reply.                                                                    Yours truly,Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解析：本文是一篇书信写作，根据提示中的内容，写自荐信介绍自己的情况，介绍自己的优点，突出自己能够胜任志愿者的工作，可以适当发挥，要包含全部要点，开头结尾已给出，注意上下文连贯。2.写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，注意书信写作的格式，本文应该使用第一人称来介绍内容，时态使用一般现在时，介绍自己时，要求语言准确，可适当使用短语和句型，注意单词和语法不要出现错误，保证语言通顺，逻辑连贯。 【南开区】66. 假设你是David，一个来自英国的中学生。你爱好旅行。去年暑假，你去中国旅行。请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，讲讲你去过的地方以及对中国之行的感受。城市你的活动三亚欣赏碧海蓝天；学习冲浪和潜水。天津在水上公园赏花观鸟；去夜市品尝美食。北京骑自行车游走于胡同之间，体验胡同文化。参考词汇：dive v. 潜水Shuishang Park 水上公园night market 夜市 Hutongs 胡同要求：（1）词数：80～100个。（2）短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。I’m David, a middle school student from Britain. I have many hobbies. One of them is travelling. Last summer I___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【66题答案】【答案】I’m David, a middle school student from Britain. I have many hobbies. One of them is travelling.Last summer I went to visit China with my family. First, we flew directly to the city of Sanya and enjoyed the blue sea and the clear sky. There I also learned how to surf and dive. After staying in Sanya for nearly a week, we also went up to the north of the country-the city of Tianjin. It is really interesting to admire a variety of flowers and watch the different kinds of birds at the Shuishang Park. At nights, we preferred to taste the delicious Chinese food at the night market. Our last stop in China is Beijing city. Beijing is really worth a visit. During the daytime, we cycled through the Hutongs. It is a totally different experience to learn about the Hutong culture. China is such a wonderful country that I hope I can visit it again and experience the unique culture once more.【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时应承接短文开头；把题干要点中三个城市之行安排在第二段中进行叙述；最后一段表达中国之行的感受并结尾。2. 写作指导：本文应用第一人称来叙述中国之旅的行程中的所见、所闻、所做的事及所感；在记叙行程时应用一般过去时为主；按照时间顺序记叙三个城市的行程，描述时要保证条理清晰。 【北辰区】66. 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike饱受肥胖的困扰，他向你求助，询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点提示，给他回复一封邮件。要点提示：（1）多吃水果蔬菜。（2）坚持每天锻炼，但是要适量。（3）保证充分的睡眠，绝不熬夜。（4）其他……要求：（1）词数：80词左右（邮件的格式、开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Dear Mike,I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your weight. I’d like to share some good ways to keep healthy with you.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope these rules will be useful for you.Yours,Li Hua【66题答案】【答案】例文Dear Mike,I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your weight. I’d like to share some good ways to keep healthy with you. First, eat more fruit and vegetables. Say no to fast food such as hamburgers and chips. Eating too much of them may be harmful to your health. Second, do more exercise every day. Find out your favorite sport and keep doing it. But remember not to do too much at one time.Third, get enough sleep. As a teenager, you should sleep at least 8 hours every day. Never stay up too late. Finally, try to do things that make you happy such as talking with your friends and enjoying a relaxing movie.I hope these rules will be useful for you.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；内容是根据所给的要点给Mike写一封邮件，告诉他如何减肥来保持健康。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述邮件内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；分别从饮食、锻炼、作息和其他方面做介绍；最后是希望。