2022中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范热点 热点20 旅游

热点20 旅游 旅游无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了许多美好。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：旅游。【预测题目】（一）旅游是一种非常好的活动，许多人对于旅游都怀有浓厚的兴趣。读了上面旅行社推介的几条旅游线路，请写一篇文章，内容包括：1. 简述外出旅游的好处。（至少两点）2. 上面的旅游线路哪条你去过？说明你选择这条线路的原因并介绍你该次旅游经历。如果这些线路你还没去过，请为即将到来的暑假选择一条线路，说明你选择该条线路的原因，并为自己设计一个旅行计划。要求：1. 不得照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。2. 语句通顺，书写规范， 词数80个左右，作文的开头结尾已经给出，不记入总词数。 Nowadays many people have great interest in travelling because_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Nowadays many people have great interest in traveling because traveling can make them relaxed and they can open their eyes during the journey. I like traveling, too. I’ll go on a trip to Hainan in the coming summer holiday because I like water sports very much. I’ll have a four-day trip with my parents and we’ll go by plane. We are going scuba diving, fishing and boating there. In the evening, we’ll walk along the beaches. And having nice seafood is also in our plan. I hope we can have a good time there.【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。 （二）随着人们生活水平的提高，很多人喜欢选择在假期去国内外旅游，体验美景美食或不同的文化习俗。你有特别想去旅游的地方吗？请就以下几个方面谈谈你的想法。1.你最想去哪里旅游？为什么？    2.在选择旅游的地方的时候应该注意什么？（两个注意事项）3.当人们在旅行中遇到危险时，应该如何解决？（两条建议）。注意：词数不少于80._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】The place I want to go is Hawaii. There are beautiful beaches and delicious food. I think I can go on holiday with my family, we will have a good time there. The destination we choose should suit our holiday needs .we should pay attention to the price, safety . We should book the rooms in advance to avoid the height of tourist season. When people meet danger, they should keep calm first and seek help from staff and the police .If you are capable of solving it, make sure you are safe first.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求包含最想去哪里旅游及为什么？在选择旅游的地方的时候应该注意什么？两点即可。当人们在旅行中遇到危险时，应该如何解决？两点即可。可以分三段就写，包括这些内容，表述完整就可以。2.例文点评：例文通过对最想去哪里旅游及为什么？在选择旅游的地方的时候应该注意什么？当人们在旅行中遇到危险时，应该如何解决等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。3.高分亮点：There be句型；have a good time；pay attention to；in advance to；the height of tourist season；keep calm；seek help from；if从句等。 （一）山东泰山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你学校参观后准备去旅游。请结合以下要点和图片向外国友人简单介绍泰山：1.位于山东中部，是中国著名旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客去旅游观光。2.乘汽车大约要2个小时，也可以乘火车。3.登山便可领略。注意：字数不少于80词，可适当发挥，不要逐字翻译。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Mount Tai is one of the most famous mountains in China. It is in the middle of Shandong Province. Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners visit there. It’s not far from here. It takes you about two hours to get there by bus. You can also go there by train. Autumn is the best season to climb Mount Tai. On the top of the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines, unique rocks around you and the sunrise. And the sunrise is wonderful. Mount Tai is really a nice place to visit.【解析】本文是一篇旅游景点的介绍, 英语作文一般分为三个部分第一部分：交代写作的目的：介绍泰山的情况——是我国最著名的山峰之一。第二部分：文章主体部分：介绍泰山的具体信息——地理位置，交通方式，旅游季节等。第三部分：总结全文。 （二）安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假定外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据以下要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山（the Yellow Mountain）。1.黄山位于安徽南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。2.乘汽车去大约要花3个小时；也可以乘火车或飞机去。3.登山便可领略其云海（the sea of clouds）及其秀丽的风景，我们还尝到了许多美食。4.旅游尽管很疲劳，但我们玩得很开心，希望将来再次去黄山。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】The Yellow Mountain is in the south of Anhui . It’s one of the most famous places of  interest in China . Every year lots of tourists go sightseeing . If you want to go sightseeing , It will take you about three hours to go there by bus . You can also go there by train or by plane . While you are climbing the mountain , you can enjoy the sea of clouds and the beautiful view . It’s really a nice place to visit . We tasted many famous delicious foods . Although we felt very tired , we enjoyed ourselves very much . I hope to visit Anhui again very soon .【解析】这是一篇要求向外国游客介绍黄山。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 （三）目前，外出旅游已成为我们生活中的一个重要部分，但是，包括我们一些中学生随父母旅游时，会出现一些不文明行为。如：乱扔垃圾，制造噪音，在著名景点或文物（relics）上乱刻乱画等。作为一名中学生，就请“如何文明旅游”这一话题用英语写一篇90词左右的短文，谈谈你自己的看法。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Nowadays travelling is becoming an important part of our life. But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest，including our middle school students. Some make loud noise in public places. Others throw rubbish everywhere，and some write or draw somewhere and so on.As a middle school student，I think we should pay attention to our behaviors. For example，throw rubbish into dustbins and don’t write or draw on the relics. Don’t make noises in public places. We’d better follow guides and obey orders. At the same time, we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions.【解析】试题分析：要用正确的格式去写，会用一些短语，了解英语的句子结构与汉语的不同，这里在文中介绍旅游时的一些不文明行文，并提出建议。注意用一般现在时，用第一人称来叙述。【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和固定句式，为文章增色不少，如：We’d better follow guides and obey orders.等，为了上下文的衔接还用了一些过渡词如：but，for example，at the same time等。 （四）假期许多同学都外出旅游，旅游不但让我们开阔眼界，也让我们放松心情。《21世纪英文报》正在开展“快乐旅游”的征文活动。请你写一篇作文投稿，谈谈你难忘的一次旅游经历，包括：你什么时间去哪儿旅游了，在那儿做了什么，旅游的感受如何。提示词：visit, delicious, photos, scenery, exciting, enjoy, ... 提示问题: 1. When and where did you go? 2. What did you do there?3. What do you think of your trip?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】I went on a trip to Shanghai with my parents last summer holiday. We visited Yuyuan. It is a Chinese traditional building. And we enjoyed various kinds of delicious food from all over China. We had a long walk on the bund of Shanghai. There are many old tall buildings along Huangpu River. Some of them have a history of hundreds of years. We went to the landmark – the Oriental Pearl TV town. You went to the top of it to enjoy the beautiful scenery of Shanghai. We took many photos there. What an exciting trip we had in Shanghai!【解析】本篇为话题作文，要求按照提示完成一篇短文，讲述自己的一次旅行经历。要求短文要包含题干所有的提示信息，适当发挥，语言连贯，逻辑清晰。【详解】1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求用第一人称讲述自己的一次旅行经历。讲述发生过的事情，用一般过去时；文中包含什么时候去哪儿、做了什么、觉得这次旅行怎么样；书写时要注意文句通顺，内容完整。2.例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。开篇紧扣主题，介绍自己旅行的时间和地点，接下来介绍自己和父母在上海的行程，最后评价自己的这次旅行，文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。3.高分亮点：本篇例文短语丰富、句式多样。用短语go on a trip to Shanghai with a Chinese traditional building；enjoy various kinds of delicious food from all over China；have a long walk on the bund of Shanghai；have a history of hundreds of years；enjoy the beautiful scenery of Shanghai描述这次的行程；文句简短，行文流畅。【点睛】本篇是话题作文，书写前要认真他阅读题干，了解题干的要求，确定用第一人称、一般过去时书写，描述上海的景点特色用一般现在时；书写时要围绕题干的三个问题展开：什么时候去哪儿、做了什么、觉得这次旅行怎么样；短文要层次分明，逻辑清晰。 Now more and more people like traveling around the world. Because that can make them relax.When it comes to traveling ways, different people will offer different opinions.The trip was so wonderful．1 will never forget it．It was a busy and tired day but happy.The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders of the world. I enjoyed the beauty of the mountains and took a lot of photos.Don’t make noises in public places. We’d better follow guides and obey orders. At the same time, we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions.Nowadays travelling is becoming an important part of our life. Although we felt very tired , we enjoyed ourselves very much . There are beautiful beaches and delicious food.I think I can go on holiday with my family, we will have a good time there. I hope we can have a good time there.                    （一）你一定外出旅游过吧?你乘坐什么交通工具去旅游的?你住在哪里?看到了什么?感受如何?请叙述你的一次旅游经历。写一篇英语短文。要求：1．条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；2．必须叙述完整，并可适当发挥；3．不少于60词。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Last summer holiday，I visited the Fanjing Mount with my friends．We took a bus to arrive there．We tried our best to climb up to the top of the mountain．When we got there, all of us felt very tired．At night we stayed in a small hotel there．The next morning we got up so early that we could see the sun rising．The rising sun was really beautiful．We were all excited to see it．    The trip was so wonderful．1 will never forget it．【解析】这篇作文要求我们来叙述自己的一次旅行经历，这个经历是已经发生过的事情，因此这篇作文我们应使用一般过去时态来叙述，要特别注意，将每句话的谓语动词都变成过去式形式，尤其要注意不规则动词形式的变化。在文章中，我们应讲清楚这次旅行去的地方、乘坐的交通工具、在那里做了什么以及自己的感受等等，使用连词串联文章，使整篇短文节奏紧凑，内容完整，表达连贯。还应使用自己积累的短语和句型去表达自己的思想，写出符合英语表达习惯的句子。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者记叙了自己去年暑假去梵净山旅行的事情，整篇短文内容完整，结构清晰，叙述清楚明了。短文里使用了正确的时态，一般过去时态，每个句子中都使用了动词的过去式形式，尤其是不规则动词形式的变化，都非常准确。短文里还使用了很多从句，如时间状语从句、结果状语从句等，还使用了一些较好的短语，如try one’s best to do sth.,  the top of the mountain, so…that, be excited to do sth.等。 （二）按要求写一篇关于旅行的文章，以“My happy trip”为题，字数70词左右，要求包括以下内容：1. 旅游地点2. 和哪些人一起去的3. 天气情况，交通方式4. 旅游过程中所经历的活动5. 旅游感受。My happy trip _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】My happy tripI went to climb the Great Wall with my parents this summer vacation. I’m glad to know you’re interested in this trip. I’ll tell you as much as possible now.The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders of the world. It attracts thousands of tourists  both at home and abroad every day. It runs across the mountains, like a dragon.When we got there we were very excited that we began to climb immediately. The steps sometimes were very flat, but sometimes very steep. After two hours of climbing, we got to the top at last. I enjoyed the beauty of the mountains and took a lot of photos. I felt really proud and thought of the famous saying: He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.If you come to China, I’ll be glad to take you to the Great Wall so that you can appreciate the beautiful scenery of the Great Wall.【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。写作亮点：这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders of the world。I enjoyed the beauty of the mountains and took a lot of photos.等，When，if等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 （三）假期许多同学外出旅游，旅游不但让我们开阔眼界，也让我们放松心情。某英文报正在开展快乐旅游的征文活动。请根据所给提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你难忘的一次旅游经历。提示：（1）When and where did you go?（2）What did you do there?（3）What do you think of your trip?要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。（3）词数60-80个_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】My classmates and I took part in the tour to Shuihu Town on April 15th. Shuihu Town is one of the most beautiful scenery spots. It attracts a lot of tourists to come every year, including many foreign tourists from different countries. I volunteered as a guide to introduce Shuihu culture to some foreigners. They were very happy. Protecting its environment is also very important. So I helped the manager to stop bad behaviors, for example, telling them not to throw litter here and there. There were many tourists today. A couple put their hearts into the beautiful scenery. As a result, their child was lost. At last, I helped the lost child to find his parents.It was a busy and tired day but happy.【解析】1.题干解读：该文要求描述一次难忘的旅游经历，属于记叙文，介绍时间和地点，在景点做的事情和对这次旅游的感想。2.例文点评：介绍自己的一次难忘的水浒城旅游经历，用第一人称，时态用一般过去时。描述了自己在旅游过程中助人为乐的好人好事。3.高分亮点短语：take part in；for example；here and there；put one’s heart into；atl ast句型：one of +形容词最高级+可数名词；动名词作主语；so that引导结果状语从句。 （四）现代人的生活压力都很大，所以人们喜欢通过旅游来缓解压力，请围绕下列内容写一篇短文：1.的人喜欢独自旅游，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行．2.种旅游方式的好处．3.更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么？作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名．2.语句连贯，词数80个左右．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Now more and more people like traveling around the world. Because that can make them relax.When it comes to traveling ways, different people will offer different opinions. Some like to travel alone, but some like to travel with their friends or parents. I think traveling alone is good for enjoying more freedom. And I think traveling with others who have the same interest can share something happy with others. As for me, I prefer to travel with friends rather than travel alone. Because we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. If you would like to travel, with wish you have a great trip!【解析】试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，话题是旅游。认真阅读提示：1.人们喜欢通过旅游来缓解压力；2.有的人喜欢独自旅游，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行；3. 各种旅游方式的好处；4. 你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么？动笔前要认真思考，列好提纲，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，字数在80左右，不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。写完以后，再读一遍，检查是否有写和语法错误，语言是否通顺，要点是否齐全，条理是否清楚。【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，表达清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语言通顺，要点齐全，字数符合要求，没有拼写和语法错误，上下文意思连贯，条理清楚。