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14直击2022高考 热点作文-爱护动物篇 爱护动物,就是爱护我们自己……【预测题目】(一)假定你是李华,你所住的社区里有流浪狗(stray dogs)和流浪猫。它们无人看管,境况堪忧。请写一封信,邀请你的英国交换生朋友Mike一起帮助这些动物,内容包括:1.表明目的;2.讲述流浪狗(猫)的现状;3.期待答复。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Mike,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,How are you doing? I’m writing to ask if you can do something for stray dogs and cats with me.It is common that I often see many stray dogs and cats in the community where I live. Some of them are in great danger and in bad condition. They often hide in some dark places and under the car. It's hard to imagine what will happen to them if they are left unnoticed and without care.I think it's high time that we did something for these poor animals. I do hope you can join me.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国交换生朋友Mike写封信,邀请他一起帮助社区里的流浪狗和流浪猫。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时,少量一般将来时。结构:总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求:1.表明目的;2.讲述流浪狗(猫)的现状;3.期待答复。第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)do something for stray dogs and cats; be an expert in; in great danger; in bad condition; hide in some dark places; be left unnoticed and without care; join me第三步:连词成句1.I’m writing to ask if you can do something for stray dogs and cats with me.2.It is common that I often see many stray dogs and cats in the community where I live. 3.Some of them are in great danger and in bad condition.4.They often hide in some dark places and under the car. 5.It's hard to imagine what will happen to them if they are left unnoticed and without care.6.I think it's high time that we did something for these poor animals.7.I do hope you can join me.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…, as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m writing to ask if you can do something for stray dogs and cats with me.(if引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]It is common that I often see many stray dogs and cats in the community where I live. (it作形式主语)[高分句型3]I think it's high time that we did something for these poor animals.(虚拟语气)(二)假定你是中学生李华,你校正在进行野生动物保护宣传周活动。请用英语写一封倡议书。 内容包括:1. 野生动物现状;2. 要采取的措施;3. 发出倡议。 注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear classmates,As we all know, all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature. Unfortunately, some wild animals are being over-hunted or dying out.So it is urgent to take measures to protect them. First, we should raise our awareness of animal protection, deeply understanding to harm animals is to harm ourselves. Besides, we must try our best to help build more nature reserves.I hope we can live harmoniously and happily with animals. Let’s take action!【解析】本文是一封倡议书。假定你是中学生李华,你校正在进行野生动物保护宣传周活动。请用英语写一封倡议书。 内容包括:1. 野生动物现状;2. 要采取的措施;3. 发出倡议。【详解】1.词汇积累众所周知:as we all know→ as is known to all→ It is known to all that…采取措施:take measures→ take steps→ take action伤害某人:harm sb. →do sb. harm→ do harm to sb. →be harmful to sb.另外,此外:besides→in addition→ furthermore→ moreover2.句式拓展同义句转换原句:As we all know, all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.拓展句:What is known to all is that all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.【点睛】[高分句型1 ] As we all know, all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.(句中as引导让步状语从句)[高分句型2 ] First, we should raise our awareness of animal protection, deeply understanding to harm animals is to harm ourselves.(现在分词作伴随状语)(三)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。目前,市动物园正在为一只幼虎全球征名。请给你的英国笔友Jim写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1. 介绍活动;2. 邀请参加。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,How are you doing recently? I’m writing to tell you some information. At present, the city zoo is seeking a name for a young tiger globally.The young tiger was born in the city zoo last month. The city zoo hopes to seek a name for it, which can not only meet the characteristics of tigers, but also represent Chinese culture. People from all over the world can participate in this activity.Since I know you are interested in animals, I sincerely invite you to join it. I wonder if you have any special thoughts about this activity. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加市动物园为幼虎全球征名的活动。【详解】1.词汇积累最近怎么样?How are you doing recently?→How is it going recently?现在:at present→now代表: represent →stand for参加:participate in→take part in2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:At present, the city zoo is seeking a name for a young tiger globally.拓展句:At present, the city zoo is holding an activity whose aim is to seek a name for a young tiger globally.【点睛】【高分句型1】Since I know you are interested in animals, I sincerely invite you to join it.(运用了Since引导的原因状语从句)【高分句型2】I wonder if you have any special thoughts about this activity.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)(四)为提高濒危野生动物保护意识,昨天你和你校部分学生参观了野生动物园。请写一篇英语日记记录此次活动。内容包括:1.活动目的;2.活动过程;3.感想与评价。要求:1.写作词数为100左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thursday December 23rd, 2021 WindyIn order to develop a sense of protecting wild animals,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thursday December 23rd, 2021 WindyIn order to develop a sense of protecting wild animals, yesterday some students of our school visited the wildlife park.Having gathering at the school gate, we took a taxi there early in the morning. When entering the park, we first enjoyed a wonderful video about safety rules and pictures of various wild animals. Later, we have an access to the wild area by bus to see wild animals, such as lions and tigers. For most of us, it was the first time we had been so close to wild animals. Finally, we went home tired but happy. What a thrilling experience it is.Through this activity, we’ve learned more about wild animals and raised awareness of preserving endangered animals. I sincerely hope to live on this earth with diverse creatures.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“昨天你和你校部分学生参观了野生动物园”一事,写一篇英语日记记录此次活动。【详解】1.词汇积累参观:visit→pay a visit to绝妙的:wonderful→fantastic兴奋的:thrilling→exciting提升:raise→promote2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Finally, we went home tired but happy.拓展句:Finally, although we went home tired, we felt happy.【点睛】【高分句型1】Having gathering at the school gate, we took a taxi there early in the morning. (现在分词作状语)【高分句型2】When entering the park, we first enjoyed a wonderful video about safety rules and pictures of various wild animals. (运用了When引导的时间状语从句)(五)假定你是李华,你了解到近日在某地举行的一次传统捕猎活动中,超过1400只海豚被捕杀。请你就此事件给某英文报环保专栏的编辑写一封邮件,内容包括:1. 你对海豚的了解;2. 你对这一事件的态度和建议。注意:1.词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:海豚dolphinDear editor,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours truly,Li Hua【答案】Dear editor,I am much shocked by the sad news that over 1,400 dolphins were killed recently.As is known to all, the dolphin is a kind of lovely sea animal, with a much higher IQ than most of the other animals. In some large aquariums, you can see dolphins performing various skills for visitors. Watching dolphins performing has now become a must for visitors to the aquarium, especially children.In my opinion, the outdated tradition of hunting dolphins must be stopped at once. We should take all necessary measures to educate people and give better protection to the dolphins.Hope we can do more to raise people’s awareness of wildlife protection.Yours truly,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给某英文报环保专栏的编辑写一封邮件,讲述对海豚的了解以及对于捕猎海豚行为的态度和建议。【详解】1.词汇积累震惊的:surprised→shocked各种各样的:all kinds of→various采取行动:take action→take measures提高:improve→raise2.句式拓展同义句改写原句:We should take all necessary measures to educate people and give better protection to the dolphins.拓展句:All necessary measures should be taken to educate people and better protection should be given to the dolphins.【点睛】【高分句型1】I am much shocked by the sad news that over 1,400 dolphins were killed recently.(运用了that引导同位语从句)【高分句型2】As is known to all, the dolphin is a kind of lovely sea animal, with a much higher IQ than most of the other animals.(运用了as引导非限制性定语从句)
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