01读后续写：亲情类（故事构造“三板斧”）-2022年新高考英语读后续写核心技能突破（PPT课件版）

这是一份01读后续写：亲情类（故事构造“三板斧”）-2022年新高考英语读后续写核心技能突破（PPT课件版），共35页。PPT课件主要包含了母子关系，父子关系，父女关系，姐妹关系，兄弟之间，祖孙之间，夫妻之间等内容，欢迎下载使用。

第一板斧：冲突构造（误会、犯错等）
只有冲突才能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合（代沟）、误会等。
1、生气1. 我妈妈瞪着我，这是在我有一个重组家庭之前她从未做过的事。 “你可以捡起来的。”她说。“那才对。”（本可以，虚拟语气）My mther glanced at me. Smething she never did befre I had a stepfamily. “Yu culd have picked it up. ” she said. “That wuld have been the kind thing t d.”2.他生气地握紧拳头，但是弟弟却激动地挥着手。He flded his fist angrily, but his yunger brther waved his hands 试着说什么，但Carter太生气了，他一个字也听不进去。（对比，夸张）Jacksn kept saying smething, but s angry was Carter that he culdn’t even hear a wrd .
2、后悔1. 我意识到我裙子上的蝴蝶结打得很不好。我本应该请妈妈帮忙的。I realized hw prly I tied the string n my skirt which was ver leggings. I shuld have asked mm fr help.
3、内疚1.一想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像没休止的潮水一样向我袭来。Thinking abut what I had dne t him, regret and guilt verwhelmed me like endless tides. 2.每当我想到亨利湿了的书，我的脸都会变红了。Whenever I thught f Henry’s wet bk, my face turned red.
4、烦恼Watching Shirley’s smile fading away, Peter frwned.看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。（汕头市高三第一学期质量监测）
5、伤心当她望过她三岁妹妹的桌子时，Amanda感觉她的心情像天空一样灰暗。（比喻）Amanda felt as gray as the sky utside when she lked acrss the table at her three-year-ld sister.
6、犯错1.T cver his terrible actin（为了掩盖他糟糕的行为，不定式作状语）, the terrified by glued the pieces tgether hastily and put the vase back t its punishment（害怕惩罚，现在分词作状语）, the suddenly inspired by said that a neighbur’s cat jumped in frm the windw and he culdn’t drive it away n matter hw hard he at the chclates with hesitatin,(犹豫地看着着巧克力,非谓语), the by timidly raised his head befre his mther.
第二板斧：冲突化解（解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等）
1、道歉1.“对不起，”他说到，轻轻的摸摸Jacksn的头。（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）“I’m s srry.”he said, gently petting Jacksn’s head.2.他放下手，小心翼翼的看了Carter 一眼，然后低下了头。（动作链）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）He put dwn his hand, glanced cautiusly at Carter and lwered his her surprise, she smiled at me and expressed her aplgy fr ignring my lneliness （为她忽略我的孤独道歉）as well as my difficulty with English cmmunicatin.（2021年沈阳市一模）的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。（汕头市高三第一学期质量监测）
2、原谅1. 他妈妈把手指放在他嘴唇让他停止说话，在他额头上吻了一下，然后走出了书房。（动作链）（2021 广一模）His mther silenced him by gently putting her finger n his lips，gave a sft kiss n his frehead and walked ut f the study.
3、开心1. “我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。（with结构）“I wanted t surprise yu!” he pinted at a neatly wrapped bx with his eyes gleaming.2.看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，卡特感觉到一种幸福感。（ding非谓语）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）Seeing his families sitting tgether and staying tgether harmniusly, Cater felt a surge f happiness.3.欢快的歌唱飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美中。（独立主格）（2020.11温州一模） Cheerful singing flating in the rm, the tw sisters immersed themselves in the beauty f the music.
4、感激1.But fr Henry’s help, I wuldn’t have finished my perfrmance smthly. 如果没有亨利的帮助，我就不会顺利地完成我的演出了（2021年南通市二模）。2. I lked at her, tears f lve and gratitude welling(well) up in my eyes.(独立主格结构)我看着她，爱和感激的泪水在我的眼中涌起。（2021年沈阳市一模）3. Afterwards, it was my turn t give a small lecture,in which I expressed my sincere gratitude t my mm and friends, bwing(bw) t them several times. （定语从句，非谓语）之后，轮到我做一个小型讲座，在会上我向妈妈和朋友表达了真诚的感谢，多次向他们鞠躬
5、回忆1. 在这时，毫无预料地，Carter突然想起Billy躺在地上哭的回忆，一直在他脑海回旋，提醒着他一些事情。（无灵主语句；ding非谓语；and连接两个同时进行的动作）（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）At that mment, unexpectedly, the memry f the sight f Billy crying n the grund ccurred t Carter, hvering in his mind and reminding him smething .2.看着Jacksn，Carter忍不住想象他的弟弟花整天小心涂好那辆车的情景。（2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考）Lking at Jacksn, Carter culdn’t help imagining his little brther spending the whle day carefully painting the car.3. “我只希望我知道如何帮助她，”阿曼达自言自语，想起李惊恐的眼睛（2020.11温州一模） “I just wish I knew hw t help her,” Amanda said t herself, thinking f Li’s frightened eyes（想到Li害怕的双眼）.
第三板斧：亲情升华（诚实、珍惜等）
1. Frm then n, the three chclates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended t lie, reminding him t be hnest提醒他要诚实(非谓语).（2021 广一模）2. I ndded firmly, knwing a flwer f kindness and friendship began t blssm（善良和友谊之花开放） in bth f ur hearts.（2021年南通市二模）
3.This experience transfrmed my attitude twards Henry and ur relatinship has als been harmnius（我们的关系变得和谐） since then.（2021年南通市二模）4. 正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。（2021年南通市二模）It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth frm ur family. I will treasure it with all my heart.
亲情类场景描写（七大关系）
1.D yu mean that eve flwer has its wn beauty asked my mther thughtfully.I ndded withut hesitatin, as if a secnd wasted culd deprive the dandelins f thei life."The same t yu," she added, her vice sft""Nt everyne can be a rse,and it is als an hnr t be a dandelin." Knwing that my mther had realized my pain, I tk ff the mask that I had wrn fr the whle lunch time and pured ut my unease heartily She listened t me patiently and patted me n the back tenderly.Suddenly she stpped, as if t say smething.“你的意思是那朵夜花有它自己的美丽吗？”妈妈沉思地问。 我毫不犹豫地点点头，仿佛一秒钟的浪费就能剥夺蒲公英的生命。 “你也一样，”她又说，“不是每个人都能成为一朵玫瑰，成为蒲公英也是一种荣誉。” 我知道妈妈已经意识到了我的痛苦，我摘下了我整个午餐时间戴的面具，尽情地倾诉我的不安。她耐心地听着我的话，温柔地拍了拍我的背。 突然，她停了下来，好像在说什么。
"But yu will be a beautiful narratr." Mm said. She reminded me f hw fluently I culd deliver my part at hme.It was at that time that I understd that maybe I was mre suitable fr a rle back stage like a narratr. Frm then n, I practiced my lines heart and sul with my mther at lunch time fr weeks. And the perfrmance apprached ultimately Standing backstage, nervusness came flding in me.What encuraged me t vercme it was the inspiratin frm the beautiful yellw dandelins. The perfrmance that night was eventually a big success.Hearing the thunderus applause, I tk pride in my rle and firmly believed that even a dandelin had its wn beauty. “但你将会成为一个美丽的叙述者。”妈妈说。她让我想起了我在家里可以多么流利地扮演我的角色。正是在那个时候，我明白也许我更适合像叙述者这样的角色。从那时起，我在午餐时间和母亲一起练习了好几周。演出最终站在后台，紧张情绪涌上心头。鼓励我克服它的是灵感来自于美丽的黄色蒲公英。当晚的演出最终大获成功。听到雷鸣般的掌声，我为自己的角色感到自豪，坚信甚至蒲公英也有自己的美。
The man, seeing that the by already had mney started t get angry again."Hw can yu be s selfish?Why d yu want mre mney since yu already have these bills?" the father culd hardly hld his anger back and inquired with tw eyebrws knitted int ne. With held-back tears in his eyes, the little by slwly and carefully cunted ut his mney, and then lked up at his father, replying,"Because I didn't have enugh befre, but nw I d." with big blue eyes]shining with tears.那个男人，看到那个男孩已经有钱了，又开始生气了。 “你怎么这么自私？ 既然你已经有了这些账单，你为什么还要更多的钱？” 父亲几乎不能忍住他的愤怒，用两个眉毛编织成一个。 小男孩含着泪水，慢慢地小心地数出他的钱，然后抬头看着他的父亲，回答说：“因为我以前没有足够的钱，但现在我有了。” 带着蓝色的大眼睛]眼泪闪闪发光。
Nt knwing what his sn meant, the father just std there, waiting fr his by's explanatin.Wiping away his tears and an inncent smile appearing n his face, the by requested in a relieved vice,"Daddy, I have $20 nw. Can I buy an hur frm yu?Please cme hme early tmrrw.I want t have dinner with yu." Hearing the by's small but sincere request, the father culdn't hld back his tears.Realizing he was t busy with his business t spare sme time with his belved nes, he gathered his sn int his arms and aplgized again and again,"Srry., and I prmise I'Il be back early tmrrw."他不知道儿子的意思，父亲就站在那里等着儿子的解释。男孩擦去眼泪，脸上露出天真的微笑，用松了一口气的声音问道：“爸爸，我现在有$20了。我能从你那里买到一个小时吗？请明天早点回家。我想和你共吃晚饭。”听到男孩小而真诚的请求，父亲忍不住流住了眼泪。意识到自己忙了，没有时间和心爱的人在一起，他把儿子抱在怀里，一遍又一遍地道歉：“抱歉。我保证明天早点回来。”
T my surprise, Mlly gave the bag t me nce again several days later. The same bag and same stuff inside.I felt frgiven,and trusted and lved.And a little mre cmfrtable wearing the title f father. Over several mnths, the bag with the nte in went with me frm time t time.In time Mlly turned her attentin t ther things. She fund ther treasures,lst in new games, and grew up.I was left hlding the bag.She gave it t me ne mrning and never asked fr its return. And s I have it still.令我吃惊的是，几天后莫莉又把这个包给了我。同样的袋子和同样的东西。我感到被宽恕，被信任和被爱。穿上父亲的头衔会更舒服一点。几个月多了，那个带着纸条的包不时地跟着我走。不久，莫莉把注意力转向了其他事情。她还发现了其他在新游戏中丢失的宝藏，然后长大了。我一直拿着袋子。一天早上，她把它给了我，但从来没有要求让它回来。所以我还在那里。
Ali lked up and saw the ther bys rushing ahead. Refusing t give up at this pint, he jumped t his feet and ran as fast as he culd.He dashed acrss the finish line and wn the furth prize. Thinking he wuld let her sister dwn, Ali culdn't help sbbing.Just then he suddenly heard the annuncement frm the bradcast that he wn the third prize as the runner wh cllided with Ali was disqualified fr breaking the rule.Hlding the shes clse t his chest during the award ceremny, Ali felt verjyed and relieved as he eventually wn the shes fr his sister.阿里抬起头，看到其他男孩冲在前面。 在这一点上，他拒绝放弃，他跳起来，跑得尽可能快。 他冲过终点线，获得了四等奖。 以为他会让她妹妹失望，阿里忍不住抽泣起来。 就在这时，他突然听到广播中宣布，他赢得了三等奖，因为与阿里相撞的跑步者因违反规则而被取消资格。 在颁奖典礼上，阿里把鞋子紧贴在胸前，感到欣喜若狂，松了一口气，因为他最终为他的妹妹赢得了鞋子。
There was n fence at all.It was a bridge! A bridge stretched frm ne side f the creek t the ther!Jhn was abut t cmplain abut everything,when he fund the neighbr,his yung brther,was cming acrss the bridge,his hands utstretched."Yu are quite a fellw t build this bridge after all I have said and dne," said Jhn's brther. The tw brthers met in the middle,taking each ther's hand and hugging each ther.根本没有栅栏。 是一座桥！ 一座桥从小溪的一边延伸到另一边！ 约翰正要抱怨一切，当他发现邻居，他的弟弟，正在过桥，他的手伸出。 约翰的哥哥说：“我说了这么多，你真是个造桥的好朋友。 两兄弟在中间相遇，牵着对方的手，互相拥抱。
The envelpe was frm grandma. She had knwn hw sick she was.In the envelpe was enugh mney t pay fr the rest f my cllege year and a request that I take pian lessns in her memry. Mved t tears,I determined t learn pian lessns by heart and my memry f grandma mtivated me t practice day and night.I dn't think the pian piece was even played with mre feeling than it was my secnd year in cllege. Nw,years later, when I walk by a pian, I smile and think f Grandma. She is playing the pian smilingly in heaven,I am sure. 那个信封是从奶奶那里寄来的。她已经知道自己病得有多厉害了。信封里有足够的钱来支付我大学剩下的时间，并要求我为她上钢琴课。我哭了，决心用心学钢琴，对奶奶的记忆激励我日夜练习。我甚至不认为这首钢琴曲比我上大学的第二年更有感情。几年后，当我走过钢琴时，我微笑着想起了奶奶。我相信，她是在天堂微笑着弹钢琴的。
Tears f happiness pured dwn Susan's cheeks.With tears f happiness in her eyes, she std mtinlessly facing the ppsite side f the street, as if gazing at smene.Althugh she culdn't physically see him, she definitely felt Mark's presence. Susan thught she was actually lucky,fr he had given her a gift mre pwerful than sight, a gift f lve that can bring light where there is darkness.Just as Mark grew a little wrried,he saw his wife break in t a radiant smile and blw a kiss t his directin. Finally she fund back herself, blind but attractive and cnfident as she used t be. 幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。 她眼里含着幸福的泪水，一动不动地站在街道对面，仿佛在凝视着某人。 虽然她看不到他的身体，但她绝对感觉到马克的存在。 苏珊认为她实际上是幸运的，因为他给了她一份比视力更强大的礼物，一份爱的礼物，可以在黑暗中带来光明。 就在马克有点担心的时候，他看到他的妻子露出灿烂的微笑，朝他的方向吹了一个吻。 最后，她发现自己回来了，她失明了，但像以前一样有吸引力和自信。