04 书面表达润色提质技巧-冲刺2022年高考英语书面表达提分宝典

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Miss: hell!Freigner: hi!M: Yu have what thing?F: Can yu speak English?M:if I nt speak English, I am speaking what?F: Can anybdy else speak English?M: yu yurself lk. All peple are playing, n peple have time.F: Anybdy here can speak English?M: shut what shut, quiet a little, yu n earth have what thing?F: I want t speak t yur head.M: Head nt zai. Yu tmrrw cme.
Our English --Chinglish
We tw wh and wh?Hw are yu? Hw ld are yu?I give yu sme clr see see.Yu give me stp.Watch sisterHeart flwer angry penLet the hrse cme nRed face knw me Seven up eight dwn N three n fur
望词生义:I want t read a big schl. Ging t cllege can learn much knwledge.
上大学可以学到很多知识。
用词随心所欲:I gt this cell phne withut mney. I hpe that her bdy will stay healthy. pen a meeting/ the light/ TV
改：I gt this cellphne fr free.
改： I hpe that she will stay healthy.
改： hld a meeting/turn n the light/TV
堆词成句:I think yu sended the birthday card t me is s beautiful.students dn’t allw see/watch TVThe reasn f his success has many.Thrugh this jurney nt nly braden ur hrizns, but als enrich ur knwledge.
意义重复:I am happy t hear frm yur letter.My English level is gd.I want t invite yu t take part in my birthday party.Mr. Dragn is a nice teacher whm all students respect him.
逻辑主语错误:Studying hard can g t cllege.Have rich knwledge can cntribute t ur cuntry.My English spelling have made a big prgress.We nt nly can braden ur hrizns, but als enrich ur knwledge.
连词缺失或错用:There are 61% f the students agree with the pinin.There is a prblem has been bthering me.Tired and excited, we finally reached ur destinatin Shigatse, where is warm and fascinating.
1. “语”众不同，避免人云亦云
I d believe these arrangements will make yu have a wnderful and rewarding trip.
I d believe these arrangements will guarantee yu a wnderful and rewarding trip.
Successfully, we have helped her get used t her new schl life, which have been appreciated by bth teachers and classmates.
Successfully, we have lent a helping hand t her get used t her new schl life, which have been appreciated by bth teachers and classmates.
Frm this experience I have learnt that cmmunicatin can help us t strengthen ur friendship.
Frm this experience I have learnt that cmmunicatin can serve as a bridge that helps us t strengthen ur friendship.
2. 更新换代，避免重复
We may have different pinins in rganizing class activities. We may have different ways t deal with such a situatin.
Opinins may vary frm persn t persn in rganizing class activities. We may have varius ways t deal with such a situatin.
We’ve built a new experiment building beside the ld ne and we’ve als built a library where the ld playgrund used t be.
We’ve built a new experiment building beside the ld ne and we’ve als set up a library where the ld playgrund used t be.
①Of the tw, I think the latter is the better.②S I have t bther yu t crrect my mistakes in the material I attach t the letter.
①Of the tw, the latter wins my favr.②Therefre, I have n chice but t put yu t truble by crrecting my mistakes in the material I attach t the letter.
3. 单词与短语巧妙互用
We shuld try t imprve urselves thrugh learning and prepare fr the future.
We shuld spare n effrts t imprve urselves thrugh learning and get prepared fr the future.
As the number f English learners is increasing, it’s nt difficult fr them t understand these wrds in Chinese cntexts.
As the number f English learners is n the rise, it’s nt difficult fr them t understand these wrds in Chinese cntexts.
I sincerely hpe that yu will cnsider my suggestins.
I sincerely hpe that yu will take my suggestins int accunt/cnsideratin.
Quite a few things caused the traffic prblem.
Quite a few things cntributed t the traffic prblem.
4. 用高年级词汇代替低年级词汇
In the cming three years, ur schl life will be difficult.
In the cming three years, ur schl life will be challenging.
S lng as we hld fast t ur ideals and never give up, we are sure t achieve success.
S lng as we hld fast t ur ideals and never give up, we are bund t achieve success.
We ffer ht water 24 hurs every day and the swimming pl is free t use any time yu want.
Ht water is available 24 hurs every day in ur htel and yu can have free access t the swimming pl any time yu want.
be suppsed t d
can’t help but d
in the curse f
try ne’s best t d
spare n effrts t d
put up with
make up ne’s mind
cme up with
be bred with
be fed up with
mre and mre
an increasing number f
be ccupied with
have a deeper insight int
Inviting; strng-minded; experienced; nutritius; breath-taking; endangered; charming; attractive; fabulus; challenging; tugh; unfrgettable; appealing; significant; abundant; picturesque; grand; sincere; heartfelt; prfund; fruitful; beneficial; hspitable; rewarding
embrace; highlight; utweigh; acknwledge; benefit; enable; enlarge; braden; experience; measure; balance; enjy; make a difference; prmte; beautify; imprve; take…int cnsideratin/accunt; understand; put up with; make sense f; figure ut; develp; have an effect n; take measures; fit in with; adjust t; get accustmed t; have a preference fr
setback; harmny; feedback; masterpiece; benefit; hrizn; vcabulary; experience; pprtunity; pinin; influence; hspitality; gratitude; appreciatin; descriptin; hspitality; respnsibility; entertainment; cnvenience; qualificatin; dissatisfactin; celebratin; cngratulatin
When we get int high schl, we are sure t meet with difficulties in ur study. A difficulty I met with was that I had strng Chinese accent while cmmunicating with thers in English, making everyne laugh at me.
Practice makes perfect
Facing the difficulty, I bught a lt f CDs f native speakers’ public speaking and tried t imitate every day. I ften asked the teacher fr help, wh always helped crrect my prnunciatin. As a result, I made great prgress.
As a cnsequence
We d meet sme difficulties in ur study, but each man is the architect f his wn fate and success always grws ut f struggles t vercme difficulties, due t which we becme strnger.
T slve ur difficulties in study, we shuld find ut the reasns first and then take effective measures. Besides, cnsulting ur teachers can cntribute a lt t slving the prblems. Only in this way can we perfrm well and gain success.
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1. 整齐和谐的并列句
①我知道你拍照好，并且总是想着为环境保护做些事情。I knw yu take gd pictures and yu've always wanted t d smething fr envirnmental prtectin.(全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)②所有的同学都非常友好和善良，因此你没必要担心有什么困难。All the classmates are friendly and kind, s yu dn't need t wrry abut the difficulty.(天津高考书面表达)
③众所周知，旅游对我们的身心都有益。As we all knw, travelling is beneficial t bth ur mind and ur health.④人们可以把它们当做礼物送出去，或者挂在自己的房 间里。Peple can either give them as gifts r hang them in their huses.(全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)
⑤昆明，一个四季如春的地方，非常受游客喜爱。Kunming, where it's neither t ht nr t cld all year arund, enjys great ppularity amng turists.⑥这项运动不仅增强了我的体质，训练了我的大脑，让我更加自信，同时也帮助我交到了很多朋友。Nt nly des the sprt help me build up my bdy, train my brains and keep me cnfident, but als it helps me make a lt f friends.
⑦对我们的工作最有益的，不是我们做了多少，而是我们把多少爱投入进去。It is nt hw much we d but hw much lve we put int what we d that benefits ur wrk mst.⑧这有利于一些人，然而却使他人陷入是否投票的困境。It is beneficial t sme peple, while it puts thers int a dilemma ver whether t vte r nt.(2016·江苏高考书面表达)
⑨记住它，逐渐地我们就能养成这个好的学习习惯并从中获益。Keep it in mind and gradually we can gain this gd learning habit and benefit frm it.(四川高考满分作文)
1. 正像我们所知道的，生气不仅有害健康，而且还严重影响人们之间的关系。2. 是你所说的话而不是你所做的事使你的同学感到生气。3. 一些人认为吸烟有害健康然而另外一些人认为吸烟有助于减轻工作压力。4. 首先，作为一名学生，最重要的是学习，因此你们所有人都有必要在学习中建立一个有效的方式。5. 我们英语俱乐部将组织各种各样的活动，在活动中我们不仅可以锻炼而且能学到更多的英语词汇。
1. As we knw, getting angry nt nly des harm t ne's health but als has a bad effect n the relatinship between peple.2. It is nt what yu had dne but what yu had said that annyed yur classmates.3. Sme peple believe smking is harmful t health while thers cnsider it is helpful reducing wrking pressure.4. Firstly, as a student, the mst imprtant thing is t study, s it’s necessary fr all f yu t build an effective methd in yur study.5. We'll rganize all kinds f activities in which we can nt nly practice but als learn mre English wrds in ur English club.
2. 富有文采的状语从句
①每当你想在生活中获取什么时，总会有这样或那样的问题。Whenever yu want t achieve smething in life, there will be prblems f this r that kind.②我们做得那么好以至于被邀请与全校同学分享观点和经验。We did s well that we were invited t share ur idea and experience with all the students f ur schl.(北京高考书面表达)
③你们来我们学校参加交流活动已经两周了，这项活动让我们所有人都受益。It has been tw weeks since yu came t ur schl fr the exchange prgram, which has benefited all f us.(天津高考书面表达)④我记得上次你参观我们学校时给我展示了那个主题的一些照片。I remember yu shwed me sme phts n that theme the last time yu visited ur schl.⑤如果你方便的话，咱们8：30校门口见吧！If it’s cnvenient fr yu, let's meet at 8：30 utside the schl gate.
⑥尽管我们的计划到目前为止执行得很顺利，我们仍然有很长的一段路要走。We still have a lng way t g even if/thugh ur prject has been carried ut smthly s far.(浙江湖州中学期中)⑦每天晚上，我们可以通过视频聊天相互联系，用英语聊半个小时，再用汉语聊半个小时，目的是提高口语。We can cntact each ther by vide chat every night fr half an hur in English and half an hur in Chinese, s that we can imprve ur ral speaking.(四川高考书面表达)⑧为了使他能有机会接受大学教育，他的父母日夜辛苦地工作。In rder that he can have a chance t receive university educatin, his parents wrk hard day and night.
1.他做的面人如此漂亮，以至于我们迫不及待地想亲自试一试。2. 尽管有规律的锻炼很重要，但临睡前锻炼不是个好主意。3.只要有善良和美德，世界将变得更加美丽。4.最后，与英国朋友相处时，你要注意个人礼貌，保持谦虚和诚实。5.每当见到有人需要帮助，我就会尽力去帮助他。
1. The dugh figurine he made was s beautiful that we culdn't wait t have a try urselves.2. Thugh/Althugh/While regular exercise is very imprtant, it's never a gd idea t exercise t clse t bedtime.3. As lng as there is kindness and virtue, the wrld wuld becme mre beautiful.4. Finally, mind yur wn manners and remain mdest and hnest when yu get alng with yur British friends.5. Whenever I see smene in need f help, I will spare n effrts t help him.
3. 吸引眼球的定语从句
①常言道，熟能生巧。As the ld saying ges, “Practice makes perfect.”②作为一名外向的学生，我善于同其他人交往，这使我对这个职位感到自信。As an utging student, I am gd at cmmunicating with thers, which makes me feel cnfident abut this psitin.
③我认为你总是发脾气的原因可能是学习上的巨大压力。I think the reasn why yu are always angry may be the high pressure f study.④在假期，我会住在乡下，那里空气新鲜而且人们友好。During hliday seasns, I will live in the cuntryside, where air is fresh and peple are friendly.⑤听和说对于语言学习来说非常重要，通过它们你一定会取得很大进步。Speaking and listening are very imprtant fr language learning, by which yu are sure t make great prgress.
⑥众所周知，由于全球气候变化，地球正变得越来越暖和。As we all knw/As is knwn t all, the earth is becming warmer and warmer due t the glbal climate change.⑦按照他常说的，大学教育决定一个人的命运。As he ften puts it, university educatin determines ne's future.⑧长城是吸引大批游客的世界著名的建筑之一。The Great Wall is ne f the wrld-famus buildings that attract lts f visitrs.
1.我最大的爱好是读书看报，这已经成为我日常生活中不可或缺的一部分。2. 我们到了一座小山，山脚下有一条小河在流淌。3. 为了帮助学生获得更好的节日体验，下周五学生会将举办一场圣诞晚会。4. 届时将会举办各种各样的活动，我相信大家一定感兴趣。
My favrite hbbies are reading bks and newspapers, which have becme a necessary part f my daily life.2. We arrived at a hill, at the ft f which there flws a small river.3. In rder t help the students wh want t have a better festival experience, the Students' Unin will rganize a Christmas party next Friday.4. There will be all typical activities, in which I believe we all have a strng interest.
4. 灵活好用的名词性从句
①最后，我代表我们学校的所有学生，希望你们返程安全愉快，并希望将来会有更多这样的活动安排。At last, n behalf f all the students in ur schl, I hpe yu will have a safe and happy jurney hme and that there will be mre prgrams like this in the future.②正重要的是你是否集中注意力在你的学习上。What really matters/ cunts is whether yu can cncentrate n yur lessns.
③你应该记住的最后一件重要事情是在6月28日前把文章发给我。The last imprtant thing yu shuld remember is that yu have t send the article t me befre June 28th.④尽可能多地练习就是秘密之所在。T practice as much as pssible is where the secret lies.⑤只要有乐观的态度和坚强的决心，我们能够克服我们遇到的一切困难并实现我们的目标。With an ptimistic attitude and a strng will, we can vercme whatever difficulties we might meet with and achieve ur gals.
1.我选择成为一名清洁工的原因是我想使我们的城市成为一个更美的居住地。2.顺便说一下，我确实希望你能帮助我提高英语写作能力，尤其是正确使用词汇和一些重要语法的能力。3.作为社会中的一员，我知道责任感是使社会更美好所需要的东西。4.我从你的帖子上了解到你想要提高你的普通话水平，我非常乐意帮助你学习普通话。5.通过上面的讨论，我们可以得出结论：如果你想实现目标，你一定要自信。6.我强烈认为应该采取措施阻止中国游客在公共场所的不良行为。
The reasn why I chse t be a dustman is that I want t make ur city a mre beautiful place t live in.By the way, I d hpe that yu can help me imprve my English writing ability, especially the prper use f vcabulary and sme imprtant grammar.As a member f the sciety, I am aware that being respnsible is what it takes t make a better sciety.I learned frm yur pst that yu want t imprve yur Mandarin. I am mre than willing t help yu with yur Mandarin.Frm what has been discussed abve, we may draw the cnclusin that yu must have self-cnfidence if yu want t achieve yur gal.I strngly hld the view that measures shuld be taken t stp Chinese turists (frm) behaving badly in public places.
7.另外，可能最使你感兴趣的是，考试时我真的既紧张又烦躁。8.消息传来说您要来我校当老师，我们都盼望着您的到来。9.谁也不可否认的事实是，环境污染越来越严重了。10.我想知道你是否能告诉我有关活动的更多的信息。11.她是一个热心肠的人，因此她经常帮助那些处于困境的人们就不足为怪了。12.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
In additin, what may interest yu mst is that I am really nervus and upset when taking the exam.Wrd came that yu are cming t ur schl as a teacher and we are lking frward t yur cming.N ne can deny the fact that the envirnment is getting plluted mre and mre seriusly.I am wndering if yu culd tell me mre abut this activity.She is warm­hearted, s it is n surprise/wnder that she always helps thse wh are in truble.An advantage f using the slar energy is that it wn't create/prduce any pllutin.
5. 避免头重脚轻的it句
①与此同时，政府有必要鼓励人们在公共场所举止行为要适当。Meanwhile, it is necessary fr the gvernment t encurage peple t behave prperly in public places.②确实，智能手机在我们日常生活中扮演重要的角色。It is true that a smartphne plays an imprtant rle in ur daily life.③帮助需要帮助的人是我们中华民族的优良传统和美德。It is a virtue and traditin fr us Chinese peple t help thse in need.
④的确遗憾的是没能与你面对面交流，为此我非常抱歉。It's really a pity that I can't make it t cmmunicate with yu face t face, and I'm srry fr that.⑤在这儿与来自英国的朋友共度此刻是我的莫大荣幸。It's my great privilege t be here, sharing this mment with ur friends frm the Great Britain.⑥Talking f energy saving and greenhuse reductins, it happens that I have read a reprt n this tpic in a newspaper.
⑦是该采取有效措施来阻止疫情传播。It’s high time fr us t take effective measures t cntain the spread f epidemic.⑧因此，不用说是这句箴言给我带来了动力和鼓励。Therefre, it ges withut saying that it is this mtt that brings me mtivatin and encuragement.
1.不言而喻，一个良好的校园环境对我们的成长非常重要。2.遵守规则让社会发展平稳、人民生活安定是每个人的责任。3.而且，多与你的美国朋友一起参加户外活动对你更好，这可以有助于你放松，玩得开心。4.既然寒假即将来临，如果你尽快按新地址给我邮寄新书我将感激不尽。5.我不喜欢中国主人不停地给我夹我不喜欢的菜。6.当谈到我最喜欢的季节，我会立刻想到春天。7.作为中学生，我们应该把对食物浪费说“不”当成一项规定。8.它给像你和我一样的青少年提供了一个享受运动和了解中国文化的机会。
It ges withut saying that a gd campus envirnment is f great imprtance t ur grwth.It is everyne's respnsibility t bey the rules t keep the sciety in rder and peple's lives safe.What’s mre, it is better fr yu t jin in mre utdr activities with yur American friends, which may help yu relax and have fun.
Nw that the winter hliday is arund the crner, I wuld appreciate it if yu culd pst the new bk as sn as pssible accrding t the new address.I dislike it when a Chinese hst keeps serving me the fd I dn't like.When it cmes t the seasn I like best, spring will always ccur t me in n time.As middle schl students, we shuld make it a rule t say “N” t fd waste.It ffers teenagers, like yu and me, a chance t enjy sprts and learn abut Chinese culture.
6. 言简意明的非谓语
① In the newspaper f ur schl there is a clumn called “Freign Cultures”． It aims t intrduce American custms and the life f high schl students.In the newspaper f ur schl there is a clumn called “Freign Cultures”， aiming t intrduce American custms and the life f high schl students.
②人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。Peple can enjy the mn while eating mncakes, which are the special fd fr this festival.③随着太空技术的快速发展，我们一定会在将来某一天奔赴月球。With space technlgy develping s rapidly， we are sure t make a visit t the mn sme day.④These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are nt uncmmn, causing serius harm t life and the envirnment.
⑤With the sun setting in the west, we had t wave gdbye t the wrkers.⑥我们应该感谢他们为环境保护所做的努力。we shuld appreciate the effrts made by them fr envirnment prtectin.⑦ I dn’t knw abut thers, but I used t have t wrk even at weekends ding endless hmewrk and attending classes as well.
7. 强调句、倒装句和 there be 句型
①不仅是你的热情，而且团队合作和良好的精神状态给我们留下了深刻的印象。It is nt nly yur enthusiasm but als yur teamwrk and gd spirits that impress us.② It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmnius atmsphere.③直到经历了真正的苦难，他才意识到我们对家人的爱是多么重要。It was nt until he went thrugh real hardship that he realized the lve we have fr ur families is imprtant.④我们确实希望今后有更多有意义的活动。We did hpe there wuld be mre meaningful activities in the cming future.
⑤只有共同努力我们才能创建一个节能的社会。Only with jint effrts can we help t cnstruct an energy-saving sciety.⑥只有以这种方式，我们学生才能愉快、有效地学习。Only in this way can we students study happily and effectively.⑦如果还有什么我可以为你做的事情，请尽快与我联系。If there is anything else I can d fr yu, please cntact me as sn as pssible.⑧不可否认，是老师的鼓励和帮助让我稳步前进。There is n denying that it was my teacher's encuragement and help that resulted in my steady prgress.
⑨毫无疑问，这是一个我们彼此相互学习和相互了解的好机会。There is n dubt that it is a gd chance fr us t learn frm each ther and knw mre abut each ther.There is n dubt that keeping an English diary helps yu a lt with written English.⑩没必要为此担心，因为现在政府正在尽一切努力提供更多的工作岗位。There is n need t wrry abut it as the gvernment is nw making every effrt t prvide mre jbs.⑪把重要决定留给没有经验的人是没有道理的。There is n sense/pint in leaving imprtant decisins t inexperienced peple.
1.是我们的父母给了我们无条件的爱，这确实值得我们感激和报答。2.只有通过练习你才能发现这种语言的魅力。3.刚好在我们房子的前面有一棵1 000年树龄的大树，现在它已经被政府保护起来了。4.毫无疑问，它能增强人们的健康意识，但更有可能引起过度焦虑。
It’s ur parents that/ wh have devted their uncnditinal lve t us, which indeed deserves ur appreciatin and reward.Only thrugh practice can yu find the beauty f this language.Just in frnt f ur huse stands a tall tree with a histry f 1,000 years, which is prtected by the gvernment nw.There is n dubt that it can enhance peple's cnsciusness f health, but it is mre likely t result in ver­anxiety.
8. 被动句、虚拟语气、倍数和比较句型
①正如从表中所看到的，如今在中国拥有手机的人越来越多。As can be seen frm the chart, mre and mre peple wn mbile phnes in China nw.② Mre effective measures shuld be taken t prtect endangered animals as sn as pssible.(t make small changes)③我很抱歉地告诉你我不得不改变我们七月份去云南旅游的计划，因为我的一只脚受伤了。I’m feeling very srry t tell yu that I have t change ur plan t visit Yunnan in July, because ne f my feet gt injured.