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专题一 近十年（2021--2012）高考英语书面表达满分范文  （九） 书面表达(2014·福建卷)如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.”—Sir Winston Churchill内容要求：1．你对该引语的理解；2．你的相关经历；3．恰当的结尾。注意：1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息；3．词数120左右。This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】 本文要求表达出“对成功的理解”，属于议论文，同时还要求写出“相关经历”，故可以理解为这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。根据提示和要求可知，文章应分为三个部分，也就是三个段落，分别为：一、如何理解该引语；二、相关的经历；三、切题的、恰当的结束语。考生们写作时还要注意：1. 第一、三段的时态应以一般现在时为主，第二段以一般过去时为主；2. 注意恰当使用连词，使文章自然、流畅。3. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高文章档次。One possible version: This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.Actually, we can’t succeed in everything we try. What’s important is that we should stick at it.(2014·湖北卷) 请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.注意：1．无须写标题；2．除诗歌外，文体不限；3．内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例； 4．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；5．词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。【思路点拨】 我们所做的微小的事情对我们的社会能产生很大的影响，这告诉我们要关注生活中的小事。该作文属于夹叙夹议文，在描述的过程中注意使用合适的事例。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段式，第一段根据提供的句子提出自己的观点；第二段通过事例证明自己的观点；第三段再用一两句话回归主题。第二段是本文的重点内容，需要多用一些笔墨。2. 时态：以一般过去时为主，辅以一般将来时；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当地使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文的档次。【参考范文】It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society. I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten years old was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.  （2014·山东卷）某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：1. 该谚语的含义；2. 体现该谚语含义的个人经历。①A friend in need is a friend indeed. ②Where there’s a will, there’s a way.注意：1. 词数120～150；2. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。参考词汇：谚语 proverb 【思路点拨】 本篇写作要求是根据谚语写一篇短文，对于山东的考生来说是个新的题型，类似于湖北的高考写作，是半开放的文章，所提供的信息内容贴近学生的生活，学生有内容可写，难度不大。写作该文章时应用第一人称，时态可用过去时和一般现在时。文章可分三段来写。第一段解释谚语的含义；第二段描述体现谚语的个人经历；第三段总结你对谚语在生活中的理解。注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【2013年】（2013·浙江卷） 请以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题，用英语写一篇100～120词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1. 记述事情经过；2. 简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。注意：文章的标题已给出（不计词数）。One Thing I’m Proud of________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】 从文章体裁分析，这是较典型的开放式记叙文写作，主要让考生就one thing I’m proud of展开叙述，同时写出自豪的原因和启示。考生要根据自己的经历，先要详细叙述事情，然后补充一定的自我剖析以及对此的看法和评述等。文章可以从三方面来写：第一部分简要叙述自豪的事情；第二部分重点讲述事件的经过，可以按照事件发展的顺序写；第三部分则要说明自豪的理由。在写作过程中，要注意好词好句的运用，可以使用remember, be amazed at, be determined to do, learn the techniques, keep practising, at the end of, be proud of, fulfil one’s potential, achieve one’s goal等重要的词汇和词组。句式要多样化，如可以用名词性从句：it helps me realize that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work；状语从句：Then I kept practising until I became confident…；非谓语结构：Amazed at how skilful they were, I was…等等。One possible version：One Thing I’m Proud ofI still remember how I became a good table tennis player.The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skilful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect.”（2013·湖北卷）请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；④词数为120左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】 本文以“我们应该意识到，言语也可能会伤害别人”为题，让学生写一篇短文。体裁可为记叙文、议论文和说明文。但根据考生的实际情况，还是记叙文好些，可以通过自己的亲身体验来证明这句话。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题；第二段讲自己的亲身体验；第三段说自己的认识，回归主题。2. 时态：以一般过去时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。One possible version：My classmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.One day, when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. I volunteered to do it by saying “My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.” Hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmate’s face turned red. After class, I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadn’t been helped by others. My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative. We should avoid hurting others if we can’t always be encouraging when we speak.（2013·江苏卷） 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题，用英语写一篇作文。参考词汇：banner（横幅）；stump（树桩）你的作文应包括以下内容：1. 简要描述两幅图的内容；2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；3. 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。注意：1. 可参照图片适当发挥；2. 作文词数150左右；3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Actions Speak Louder than Words________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】此题为情景作文，延续了往年漫画的形式，试题提供了两幅图，主要是有关地球日和植树的，这是学生熟悉的话题，人人有话可说，有感而发。对于考生来说应该是得心应手的，但是应注意以下三点：(1) 在构思时要格外细心，试题给出的两幅图片中的内容要点提示是我们写作的重点，不要遗漏内容要点，应围绕其展开，并注意文章的逻辑性和段落层次性。(2) 注意写作时的身份限制，切记不能透露自身的具体信息。同时把握好文体、人称、时态进行有条理地叙述，这就把握住了文章的大方向。开放式作文立意较为明确，不易出现理解偏差、跑题等严重错误。(3) 对画面进行描述时要精准恰当，之后适当升华，点明寓意。最后在构思过程中要考虑运用适当的过渡性词语（如：but，instead of），以及复杂的句式或句型（如：分词短语作定语、宾语和状语、不定式作状语、状语从句、it形式主语、倒装句式和名词性从句等），这样可以使行文更加流畅。【参考范文】Actions Speak Louder than WordsPeople celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture l, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.The message conveyed here is clear: “Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment.Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.（2013·四川卷）某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。1．说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；2．介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；3．描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。注意：1．词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】 习惯成就未来。好习惯铸就美好未来。这也是近年来中学生常常讨论的话题。考生成文时应注意：1．结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题，说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；第二段介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；第三段描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。2．时态：以一般现在时为主。3．人称：第一人称。4．注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5．适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【参考范文】It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As we all know, good learning habits can make your study go to succeed. As a student, we should pay more attention to our habits which we develop in our study.I’m sure “repeat” is a best habit. Do you develop the habit? If we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers have taught us again and again, and then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master. How to develop the habit? Set a timetable, and stick to carrying out the plan; don’t stop.When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness. How to overcome the shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework. And then I do it little by little. Maybe I can correct my mistakes in this way.（2013·安徽卷）假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1. 遵守交通法规；2. 注意举止文明。注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4. 短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】 1. 认真阅读、理解和思考题目中给出的所有信息点。2. 这个题目的信息点应该是：①交通法规；②文明举止；③上学路上；④从我做起。3. 理清以上信息点之间的逻辑关系。4. 用所掌握的词汇、词组、固定句型将所有信息点表现在文章中。One possible version：On the Way to SchoolThese days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on my way to school.I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I’ll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference.（2013·辽宁卷）一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点：1．它是中国的传统节日之一；2．家人团聚；3．赏月、吃月饼；4．还有旅游、访友等其他活动。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival；农历 lunar calendar；赏月 enjoy the full moon；月饼 moon cakeThe Mid-Autumn FestivalThe Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】 中秋节是中学生日常生活中熟悉的节日，这种主题的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到有话可说，有内容可发挥。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：首先简单介绍话题，然后严格按照四个写作要点展开，要点可适当增加细节，不可遗漏；最后简单总结一下。2. 时态：这是一篇说明文，应以一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。One possible version：The Mid-Autumn FestivalThe Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat mooncakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.