写作强化1 语言 学案 2022届上海高考英语二轮专题复习

这是一份写作强化1 语言 学案 2022届上海高考英语二轮专题复习，共7页。学案主要包含了简单句优化，特殊结构，复合句的运用，修辞手法等内容，欢迎下载使用。
写作（语言）一、简单句优化简单句其实也可以不简单，若将简单句与非谓语动词短语、形容词短语、介词短语、同位语、独立主格结构等巧妙地合并在一起，不但可以表达更丰富的内容，而且也使句子变得更精彩。1. 同位语 1) Qinghai Lake, the largest inland body of salt water in China, lies 3,198 meters above sea level.2) He read all kinds of books, ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign.3) The man over there, a distinguished art critic, will visit the exhibition this evening. 2. 形容词短语1) Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and an inventor.2) Happy at his good marks at school, the little boy skipped on his way home.3) Afraid of being scolded, for a moment, little Franz thought of playing truant.  3. 非谓语形式 1) Living under the wings of my parents’ protection, I cannot learn to be independent.2) Compared with telephones, mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient.3) In order to gain a bigger share in the international market, many state-run companies are striving to make their products more competitive.4) He was lying on the grass, his hands crossed under his head.4. 介词短语 1) At the sight of the police, those people ran off in all directions.2) With night falling, the crowd gathering around the accident scene began to break up.3) The rich ladies, in their furs out of the cabins onto the deck for the last walk before bed, started their conversations with each other excitedly.  5. 词类活用1) The decision is an attempt to bridge the distance between the rich and poor. 2) Japanese cars have flooded the American market. 3) The shop features around-the-clock service.  6. 被动语态1) A film will be shot in memory of these brave fire fighters.2) Many streets are named after famous people or big cities. 二、特殊结构1. it句型a.强调结构1) It was through distance education that Mary learned how to make personal investment.2) It was their comment on our performance that showed we had already been on the right track. b.形式主语与形式宾语1) It is believed that the serious attitude towards things will lay the foundation for success.2) Different kinds of media make it possible that we obtain a large amount of valuable information in time. 2. 倒装结构1) Only when you will devote yourself to what you are doing can you do it well.2) So addicted to online shopping are many people that they will visit shopping websites every day. 三、复合句的运用1) In some cases, what matters is not the result but whether you have enjoyed the process.2) The language teachers association provides a medium through which ideas can be shared and discussed.3) There is no doubt that problems caused by psychological pressures have affected more and more middle school students in recent years. 四、修辞手法1. 比喻1) He was like a cock who thought the sun had risen to hear him crow.2) Hope is a good breakfast, but it is a bad supper. 2. 拟人1) I come to this restaurant because I’m hungry. →My hunger leads me to this restaurant.2) I think of my childhood when I see these old pictures. →These old pictures remind me of my childhood.3) From his office window, we can see a panoramic view of the town.A glance in his office window offers a panoramic view of the town.   3. 排比1) Studies serve for delight, for ornament and for ability.2) Some books are to be tasted, others to be swallowed and some few to be chewed and digested.3) Thinking logically, speaking eloquently and writing explicitly are important elements of good communication. 【随堂检测】改写句子1. It will cause serious damage to people’s health if they take in too much salt and sugar every day.→_______________________________________________________________________________【Keys】 Taking in too much salt and sugar every day will cause serious damage to people’s health. 2. The interviewers will ask you several questions that are related to the development of science and technology.→_______________________________________________________________________________【Keys】 The interviewers will ask you several questions related to the development of science and technology. 3. Mobile phones are not only a means of communication in modern society but also a means of entertainment.→_______________________________________________________________________________【Keys】 Not only are mobile phones a means of communication in modern society but also a means of entertainment. 4. His strong interest in nature in his childhood made him a world famous biologist.→_______________________________________________________________________________【Keys】 It was his strong interest in nature in his childhood that made him a world famous biologist. 5. You are generous, for you donate such a large sum of money to the children who can’t have access to school.→_______________________________________________________________________________【Keys】It's generous of you to donate such a large sum of money to the children who can't have access to school. 6. Though he lacked experience, he got the job. →_______________________________________________________________________________【Keys】 Despite his lack of experience, he got the job.  7. The funny film distracted my attention, which made me forget the difficult problem for the time being.→_______________________________________________________________________________【Keys】 The funny film distracted my attention, making me forget the difficult problem for the time being.  8. I was fascinated by the sight and sound of our jet. →_______________________________________________________________________________【Keys】The sight and sound of our jet filled me with special longing.   9. Many great historic events happened in Rome.→_______________________________________________________________________________【Keys】 Rome witnessed many great historic events. 10. After he practiced hard for one year, Henry became faster, stronger and more skillful. From this time, he distinguished himself from his teammates who abided by the regular training schedule.→ _______________________________________________________________________________   _______________________________________________________________________________【Keys】After one-year constant hard practice, Henry gained speed, strength, and mature skills, which distinguished Henry from his teammates who abided by the regular training schedule. 合并句子1. Most students cannot wait until semester break.Semester break is a time to relax and forget about deadlines and exams.→ _______________________________________________________________________________【Keys】 Most students cannot wait until semester break, a time to relax and forget about deadlines and exams. 2.  Soft music is supposed to attract people like Walter and Wilma.   Soft rock is background music often played in elevators.   Walter and Wilma are people who wear polyester suits.→ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【Keys】 Soft music, background music often played in elevators, is supposed to attract people like Walter and Wilma, people who wear polyester suits. 3. A group persuaded my cousin Brian to join them on a camping trip.The group was of outdoorsmen.My cousin Brian is from New York.The trip was to Yosemite national park.→ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【Keys】A group of outdoorsmen persuaded my cousin Brian from New York to join them on a camping trip to Yosemite national park. 4. He failed in the competition. This made him lose his fortune and fame. This became the turning point of his life.→ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【Keys】 His severe failure in the competition, which cost him a good fortune and his fame, became the turning point of his life. 5. When they awoke the next day, they discovered they had chosen campsite.   The campsite was under a pine tree.   The campsite was next to a sleeping bear.→ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【Keys】 When they awoke the next day, they discovered they had chosen a campsite under a pine tree, next to a sleeping bear. 6. She was faced with great challenges.  She didn’t feel frightened at all.  She felt more inspired than ever before.→ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【Keys】Faced with great challenges, she didn’t feel frightened at all; instead, she felt more inspired than ever before. 7. He answered the phone.  He rushed out of the office.  The door was still open and the lights were on.→ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【Keys】Having answered the phone, he left the office in a hurry with the door open and the lights on. 8. People all hold the same opinion.  We students should try to get good results.  We should study hard.  We should not cheat in the examinations.→ _______________________________________________________________________________   _______________________________________________________________________________【Keys】 It is generally believed that we students should try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in the examinations. 9. The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world.In spring time it often overflows its banks.The lives of many people are endangered. → ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【Keys】The Mississippi River, one of the longest rivers in the world, often overflows its banks in the spring time, endangering the lives of many people.  10. Natural resources are very limited. They will be exhausted in the near future. It is not true. But it becomes a major concern around the world. This is a widely accepted fact. → ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【Keys】It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future, though it is unlikely to be true.