专题08：指导性作文 -2022届上海高考名校模拟高三下试卷分项汇编 （含答案详解）

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2022年上海名校高三下试卷分项汇编集萃 Guided Writing  指导性写作 上师大附属外国语中学高三第二学期四月线上诊断上海第三女中2021-2022学年第二学期四月线上教学评估华东师大二附中2021-2022学年第二学期四月在线阶段检测4. 2022年复旦附中第十二次拓展考试5. 2022年上海中学东校高三英语阶段测试6. 2021-2022学年敬业中学第二学期期中质量调研7.上海市实验学校2021-2022学年第二学期高三四月线上考8.上海市建平中学2021-2022学年高三下学期3月考试9.上海市七宝中学2021-2022学年高三下学期3月考试10.上海市交大附中2021-2022学年高三下学期摸底考试                 1.上师大附属外国语中学高三第二学期四月线上诊断VI. Guided Writing56 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.广场舞 (Square Dance) 受到越来越多的人青睐。有人认为，广场舞充分利用公共资源，使人们强身健体。但也有人认为广场舞会给周围的居民带来噪音，影响人们的生活等。对此你有什么看法？请结合你的生活实际，谈谈你的想法和理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【56题答案】【答案】Square dancing is favored by more and more people. Some people believe that Square Dance makes full use of public resources to make people fit and healthy. But there are also some people who think that dancing in the square will bring noise to the surrounding residents and affect people's life.
I often wander on the square near my home and watch people dancing. I think Square Dance has more merits than shortages. Firstly, it consumes excess body heat, helping with weight loss or weight maintenance. Secondly, it helps to stretch the physique and reduce the backache. Thirdly, it provides opportunities to meet new friends and learn the spirit of cooperation in group activities.
In short, I think Square Dance is beneficial to our physical and mental health.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生谈谈对于广场舞的想法和理由。【详解】1. 词汇积累喜欢：favor→enjoy影响：affect→influence优点：merit→advantage充分利用：make full use of=make the most of2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly, it consumes excess body heat, helping with weight loss or weight maintenance.拓展句：Firstly, it consumes excess body heat, which helps with weight loss or weight maintenance.【点睛】[高分句型1]But there are also some people who think that dancing in the square will bring noise to the surrounding residents and affect people's life. （运用了who引导的限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句）[高分句型2]In short, I think Square Dance is beneficial to our physical and mental health.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
2.上海第三女中2021-2022学年第二学期四月线上教学评估Ⅵ. Guided Writing (25%)56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假如你是明启中学的学生李平，写信给你在海外的朋友Alice，与她分享居家线上学习的感受。你的信必须包括：● 线上学习和在校学习的不同；● 你更偏好的学习方式，并说明理由。【56题答案】【答案】Dear Alice,Good to hear from you again. Due to the outbreak of the COVID-19, all of us are obliged to study online. What a strange but meaningful experience! Online study is very convenient and resourceful. It saves me the time spent on the way to and back from school. Also, a lot of learning materials are available on the Internet. Compared with the traditional school learning, teachers don’t need to stand on the platform in the classroom facing us, which makes us feel more comfortable to some degree. I prefer traditional school learning, however. The efficiency will not be ensured without face-to-face communication between teachers and us. Besides, young people are not so mature as adults and lack self-discipline. As a result, most of us have much difficulty staying focused throughout the lesson. Our parents are thus forced to supervise us at home.  How about your experience abroad? Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerelyLi Ping【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给海外的朋友Alice写封信，与她分享居家线上学习的感受，必须包括：1.线上学习和在校学习的不同；2.你更偏好的学习方式，并说明理由。【详解】1.词汇积累有意义的：meaningful→significative然而：however→nevertheless另外：besides→moreover因：due to→because of2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Online study is very convenient and resourceful. It saves me the time spent on the way to and back from school.拓展句：Online study is very convenient and resourceful, which saves me the time spent on the way to and back from school.【点睛】[高分句型1] What a strange but meaningful experience! (感叹句)[高分句型2] Compared with the traditional school learning, teachers don’t need to stand on the platform in the classroom facing us, which makes us feel more comfortable to some degree. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和过去分词作状语) 3.华东师大二附中2021-2022学年第二学期四月在线阶段检测II. Guided Writing 25%56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.启明中学学生会对该校高三年级学生作了一项“中学生追求名牌现象”的问卷调查, 部分调查结果如下, 如果你是宣传部（Propaganda Department）负责人李群, 请写一份调查报告, 内容包括：1. 简述调查结果2. 谈谈你的看法购物档次选择买名牌父母不同意, 你采取何种态度？中高档mid-high grade低档 low grade无所谓愤怒自己积蓄就这样算了61%21%18%46%24%30%_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【56题答案】【答案】To whom it may concern,As head of the Propaganda Department, I am writing this report to present some findings of the survey conducted recently into students’ pursuit for famous brands, and share my perspective on the craze for brands.As far as the purchase-level is concerned, respondents keen on renowned brands account for 61, which far out percentage those either interested in low-end products(21%)or indifferent to the prestige with which these products are tagged (18%). In terms of the way students react to parents’ disapproval, 46% of those surveyed are wild with anger, nearly a quarter(24%)attempt to save up for their desired goods, and the ones doing nothing constitutes the remaining 30%.In my opinion, the tendency for students to pursue famous brands comes as an inevitable result of our rapidly evolving information society where we are exposed to large volume of ads and product publicity. This tendency is then further fueled by what is found widely persistent in schools: the increasingly intense peer pressure. Fearful of being left behind, adolescent buyers become obsessed with name brands. And to satisfy children's urge to be trendy, some families are reportedly struggling to make ends meet.In fact, not only does brand-pursuing pose a drain on some households' finance, but also it has damaging effects on teenagers’ emotional well-being. It is high time that parents and schools made combined efforts to keep the phenomenon in check.Yours,Li Qun【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生作为宣传部（Propaganda Department）负责人李群，写一份启明中学高三年级学生作一项“中学生追求名牌现象”的问卷调查报告。【详解】1.词汇积累对……感兴趣：be keen on →be interested in对……而言：In terms of →As for在我看来：In my opinion →as far as I can see冲动：urge →impulse2.句式拓展句式转换原句：Fearful of being left behind, adolescent buyers become obsessed with name brands.拓展句：It is due to the fear of being left behind that adolescent buyers become obsessed with name brands.【点睛】[高分句型1] As far as the purchase-level is concerned, respondents keen on renowned brands account for 61, which far out percentage those either interested in low-end products(21%)or indifferent to the prestige with which these products are tagged (18%).（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。）[高分句型2] This tendency is then further fueled by what is found widely persistent in schools: the increasingly intense peer pressure.（运用了what引导的宾语从句。） 4. 2022年复旦附中第十二次拓展考试IV. Guided Writing   (25%)41. Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.目前,网络语言（Internet Slang）在青少年中极为盛行，你校学生会在同学中就对网络语言的看法进行了调查，调查结果见下面饼状图（pie chart）。请根据图中信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍同学们的看法，并表达你自己的观点。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【41题答案】【答案】 With the increasing popularity of Internet Slang among teenagers, our school has carried out a survey. The results are as follows.
Some students are in favor of it while some are opposed. 35% students feel it active and fashionable to say Internet Slang. And 33% students think it is full of humor and wisdom. Quarter students hold the opinion that it is more convenient to use Internet Slang. While 7% students view it as a simple thing. They think Internet Slang wasn't used by most people and if it is used too often, it will cause misunderstanding.
As far as I am concerned, Internet Slang is a double-edged sword. If we use it in a proper way, our online communication will be more colorful.
 【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生就网络语言在同学中极为盛行的现象的调查结果进行阐述，并表达自己的观点。【详解】1.词汇积累越来越多：more and more→increasing支持：support→in favor of认为：think→hold the opinion that我认为：I think→As far as I am concerned2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：With the increasing popularity of Internet Slang among teenagers, our school has carried out a survey. The results are as follows.拓展句：With the increasing popularity of Internet Slang among teenagers, our school has carried out a survey, whose results are as follows.【点睛】[高分句型1]With the increasing popularity of Internet Slang among teenagers, our school has carried out a survey.(with的复合结构)[高分句型2]Quarter students hold the opinion that it is more convenient to use Internet Slang. (同位语从句) 5. 2022年上海中学东校高三英语阶段测试VI. Guided Writing 共25分56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese假设你是李红，你的学校即将迎来100 周年的校庆，校长就如何举行校庆活动向在校学生广泛征求建议。请你用李红的名义给校长写一封信，就校庆活动提出你的建议，并陈述理由。信的内容需包括：1. 校庆的形式。内容和参加对象2. 你的理由_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【56题答案】【答案】Dear Principal，
I am a student of the school whose name is Li Hong. Knowing that our school is celebrating its 100th anniversary soon, you have asked a wide range of students for advice on how to hold the celebration. I would like to make two suggestions to you for your adoption.
First, I think our school should invite the well-known alumni to attend the 100th anniversary of our school to witness the 100th birthday of our school. Secondly, I think our school should make the same short sleeves for the 100th anniversary of our school for all the staff and students to celebrate this together.
  Finally, the 100th anniversary of our school is held, which is something worth looking forward to.
Yours,
Li Hong【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给用李红的名义给校长写一封信，就校庆活动提出你的建议，并陈述理由。【详解】1.词汇积累庆祝：celebrate→observe全体员工：staff → what’s more出名的： well-known →famous采纳：adoption→ acception2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I would like to make two suggestions to you for your adoption.拓展句：I want to give you two suggestions, which I hope to adopt.【点睛】[高分句型1]I am a student of the school whose name is Li Hong.（运用了whose引导的限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Finally, the 100th anniversary of our school is held, which is something worth looking forward to.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 6. 2021-2022学年敬业中学第二学期期中质量调研VI. Guided Writing 56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假定你是明启中学的高中学生李华。某电视台线上学习节目打算增设两个栏目。初步拟定从“Reading for Fun”、“Textbook Learning”、“Homework Guidance”、“Online Listening”以及“Questions and Answers”五个栏目中选取两个，特此向所有在线学习者征求意见。请你给电视台写封邮件，推荐两个栏目。邮件内容须包括:1) 你推荐的两个栏目；2) 你推荐这两个栏目的理由。注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。【56题答案】【答案】Dear editors,    I know you’re going to set up new programs on line. So I’m writing to suggest two programs---“Reading for Fun” and “Homework Guidance” as an online learner.    First of all, I think reading is of great significance to the whole life of people. “Reading for Fun” can create a good language environment for online learners, broaden their horizons, and encourage them to absorb rich language, in order that learners can better use the language.    Secondly, homework allows us to master what we have learned, which can deepen understanding and memory. However, many of our students’ parents are usually busy and have no time to guide their homework. And students do homework at home, where there no teachers. “Homework Guidance” not only can help complete homework, but also can improve the enthusiasm of students. Besides, under the guidance of the program, students can develop good study habits and not worry about their homework any more.     That's why I recommend the two programs. I am sure they will be well-received by the online learners. I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.                                                                  Sincerely yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给电视台写封邮件，推荐两个栏目，并写出推荐这两个栏目的理由。【详解】词汇积累建议：suggest→ propose→ advise鼓励：encourage→ urge有益的：helpful→ significant→ be of great significance培养：develop→ bring up2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：However, many of our students’ parents are usually busy and have no time to guide their homework.拓展句：However many of our students’ parents are usually busy, who have no time to guide their homework.【点睛】[高分句型1] Secondly, homework allows us to master what we have learned, which can deepen understanding and memory. (运用了what引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] That's why I recommend the two programs. (运用了why引导的表语从句) 7.上海市实验学校2021-2022学年第二学期高三四月线上考VI. Guided Writing56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假如你是实验中学高三学生龚瞩， 下个月学校即将迎来 35 周年校庆，现在策划团队向全校同学征集校庆当天各项活动的“金点子”。请给学生会写一封电子邮件，谈谈自己的方案并说明理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【56题答案】【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I’m Gong Zhu, a senior three student. I am writing to share my thoughts on the 35th anniversary.In my opinion, we can make the 35-year development of the school into PPT and play it on the big screen, so that all teachers and students can know more about our school. Besides, we can invite alumni who have graduated to come back and tell us something about the past of the school and how they spent their youth here, which can inspire us students to work hard. In addition, a live painting can be held to let students draw a picture of their ideal campus. I believe that this activity will encourage students to build a better campus.If my suggestions can be adopted I will be grateful.Yours,Gong Zhu【解析】【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给学校35周年校庆策划团队写一封邮件，谈谈自己的方案并说明理由。【详解】1.词汇积累想法：idea→thought在我看来：as far as I am concerned→in my opinion更了解：have a better understanding of→know more about感激的：thankful→grateful2.句型拓展合并简单句原句：In addition, a live painting can be held to let students draw a picture of their ideal campus. I believe that this activity will encourage students to build a better campus.拓展句：In addition, a live painting can be held to let students draw a picture of their ideal campus, which I believe will encourage students to build a better campus.【点睛】[高分句型1]In my opinion, we can make the 35-year development of the school into PPT and play it on the big screen, so that all teachers and students can know more about our school.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句）[高分句型2]Besides, we can invite alumni who have graduated to come back and tell us something about the past of the school and how they spent their youth here, which can inspire us students to work hard. （运用了who引导的限制性定语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句） 8.上海市建平中学2021-2022学年高三下学期3月考试II. Guided Writing (25%)56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.近年来，随着我国经济和社会建设的高速发展，教育的发展也达到了一个空前的水平，但区域的教育不公平受到人们的关注。请你谈谈造成这一问题的原因及解决的措施。【56题答案】【答案】        In recent years, with the rapid development of China's economic and social construction, the development of education has reached an unprecedented level, but the regional education inequity has attracted people's attention.In my opinion, there are three reasons for this phenomenon. The first is the unfair investment in education. The investment in urban schools is much more than that in rural schools. The second is the inequality of educational resources. Some schools have advanced facilities, which provide their students with a good learning environment. However, some schools only have basic ones. Finally, inequality is also reflected in the allocation of teachers. The teaching ability of teachers in developed areas is generally better, while most of the teachers in less developed areas are supporting teachers or substitute teachers.So how to solve this problem? Firstly, increase investment in education to narrow regional differences. Secondly, the allocation of resources should be reformed, and the compulsory education should be allocated as a whole. Finally, encourage experienced or highly educated teachers to teach in remote areas. At the same time, real-time courses can be applied to promote the equality of teachers.【解析】【分析】这是一篇开放作文。要求考生谈谈造成区域教育不公平的原因和解决措施。【详解】1.词汇积累吸引某人的注意：draw one’s attention→attract one’s attention设备：equipment→facility给某人提供某物：offer sb. sth.→provide sb. with sth.解决：solve→settle2. 句型拓展简单句变复杂句原句：Firstly, increase investment in education to narrow regional differences.拓展句：Firstly, investment in education should be increased, which can help to narrow regional differences.【点睛】[高分句型1]Some schools have advanced facilities, which provide their students with a good learning environment.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]The teaching ability of teachers in developed areas is generally better, while most of the teachers in less developed areas are supporting teachers or substitute teachers. (运用了while表示前后对比) 9.上海市七宝中学2021-2022学年高三下学期3月考试VI. Guided writing56. 随着学校新大楼投入使用，心理中心的老师为同学申请到了几间阳光房，现在心理中心希望同学们可以给出意见，说说如何使用这些房间来让同学们保持身心健康。假如你是李明，请你给心理中心写一封信，谈谈你的想法.【56题答案】【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
We middle school students are under increasing pressure and are nervous from time to time. I am glad to hear that the teachers of psychological center have applied for several sunshine rooms for students. Now I am writing to express my suggestions.
First of all, I think the sand table game area is essential, which can show their inner interpersonal interaction in the way of games, and then understand the real state of inner feelings and emotions, and make it heal wounds in the process of games.
Secondly, I suggest setting up a psychological catharsis room, which is a special area for students to vent their emotions and release pressure. It can stimulate students’ suppressed emotions and let off steam to their hearts’ content.
I believe that with the efforts of teachers, we students with psychological problems will be able to overcome psychological barriers and actively overcome difficulties in study and life.
Yours
Li Ming
 【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给心理中心写一封信，谈谈你对于心理中心的想法。【详解】1. 词汇积累压力：pressure→stress高兴的：glad→delighted必不可少的：essential→indispensable建议：suggest→advice2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：We middle school students are under increasing pressure and are nervous from time to time.拓展句：We middle school students are under increasing pressure, which makes us nervous from time to time.【点睛】[高分句型1]First of all, I think the sand table game area is essential, which can show their inner interpersonal interaction in the way of games, and then understand the real state of inner feelings and emotions, and make it heal wounds in the process of games.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Secondly, I suggest setting up a psychological catharsis room, which is a special area for students to vent their emotions and release pressure.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)10.上海市交大附中2021-2022学年高三下学期摸底考试  VI. Guided Writing66. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.你们班最近就手机使用的话题，在班会课上展开了一次讨论。请结合你自身的感受写一篇发言稿，谈谈你的看法，并对于课余时间在家如何合理使用手机，提出你的建议.【答案】Good afternoon everyone,It is my honor to stand here to give a speech. It is whether mobile phones should be brought to school that is heatedly discussed recently. There are two different opinions on the question.Some students think students can bring a mobile phone to school. For one thing，it is convenient for a student who carries a mobile phone to get in touch with his/her parents and friends. For another，he/she can also search for some important information on the Internet by the phone. While others are against the view. In their opinion, with mobile phones, some students may have a chat on the Internet and spend much time playing games, which has a bad effect on their study and health. What’s worse, one mobile phone may cost much money and it’s likely to be lost in the school.As far as I’m concerned, students should place their study before other things and there is no need for us to use mobile phones. In a word, I don’t think it’s a good idea to bring mobile phones to school. If you really want to have one，you’d better limit the time you spend on it. That’s all! Thank you.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇议论文。要求考生就手机使用的话题写一篇发言稿，并发表自己的意见。【详解】1.词汇积累寻找：search for→look for与……取得联系：get in touch with→keep in touch with对……有影响：have an effect on→have an influence on有可能：be likely to do→be possible2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：As far as I’m concerned, students should place their study before other things and there is no need for us to use mobile phones.拓展句：As far as I’m concerned，there is no need for us to use mobile phones because students should place their study before other things.【点睛】[高分句型1]For one thing，it is convenient for a student who carries a mobile phone to get in touch with his/her parents and friends.（it为形式主语，动词不定式为真正的主语；who引导定语从句）[高分句型2]In their opinion, with mobile phones, some students may have a chat on the Internet and spend much time playing games, which has a bad effect on their study and health.(which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分举行3]It is whether mobile phones should be brought to school that is heatedly discussed recently.（it is…that…引导强调句，whether引导主语从句）