专题06 近十年 （2021--2012）高考英语书面表达满分范文（六）-备战2022年高考英语满分作文万能模板

专题一 近十年（2021--2012）高考英语书面表达满分范文  （六） 书面表达(2017·全国卷I I)假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1. 展览时间、地点；2. 展览内容。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。写作情境设置真实，任务要求符合学生能力水平，自然地融入了我国优秀传统文化(剪纸paper cutting)的内容，能够引导学生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲中国故事，增强文化自信。该写作贴近学生生活，学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构采用三段成文：第一段自我介绍并引出话题；第二段具体交代活动时间、地点；第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2. 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。【满分范文】Dear Henry，I’m Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you’re interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms—paper cutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it. It’ll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like. You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper­cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting. Looking forward to your early reply.Regards, Li Hua(2017·全国卷III)假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：      球队活动；      报名方式及截止日期。注意：      词数100左右；      可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】该篇书面表达是书信类文体，但是与体育有关，要求考生按照所给提示进行写作，可增加细节以使行文连贯。在写作本文时考生需注意以下几点：1. 确定文章的结构：书信的开头、正文和结尾。2. 确定文章的要点：写信的目的；表示感谢。3. 确定文章的布局。4. 确定文章的时态，在本文中根据要求判断应该用一般现在时和一般将来时。5. 正确使用较高级词汇和多种句式，如定语从句、状语从句、主语从句等。6. 准确使用一些恰当的连接成分以使语意更连贯。【满分范文】Dear Eric,I am Li Hua. I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school. It is known that we can benefit a lot from playing table tennis. It can prevent us from getting shortsighted and it can keep us physically healthy. As to the activities, we plan to invite experienced players to give training to us every Friday afternoon. At the same time, we will divide the members into several groups to practice at 5:00 pm after school. If you are interested, sign up on our school website before August 10.I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua（2017·浙江卷）第一节 应用文写作假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1. 参加者；2. 时间、地点；3. 活动：登山、野餐等。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】本试题是一篇半开放的作文，写作文体是电子邮件，写一封邀请信给Chris。要点提示中只列出了大概内容，包括3点(参加者、时间、地点和活动)，具体细节需要考生自己发挥。邀请信一般分为以下几部分：首先，要列出写信的目的，并发出诚挚邀请；其次，要就邀请的具体内容给予明确的说明：什么时间、什么地点、做什么事情等；最后，要再次表示邀请，希望对方参加。【一句多译】①My intention to write this letter is to tell you an outing that we will make these days.②Our destination is Siming Mountain, where we will have a climb together with the local people. Also, we will hold a picnic party.【满分范文】Dear Chris,How are you now? ①The purpose of my writing is to tell you that there will be an outing for us these days. I would be honored to have you there with us, enjoying the colorful days.The occasion will start on the next Sunday morning. ②We will go to Siming Mountain, where we can have a climb. What’s more, we can also hold a picnic party with the local people.I really hope you can make it. And I do look forward to receiving your reply letter as soon as possible.（2017·天津卷）假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有机会重访天津。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：第十三届全运会  the 13th National GamesDear Mrs. Green,I’m glad to hear from you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Jin【解析】这是一封邮件，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时要注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般现在时和现在完成时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【满分范文】Dear Mrs. Green, I’m so glad to hear from you. While it has been more than a year since you taught us English, I’ve missed you a lot, thinking about those happy moments when we stayed with you. Actually, I’ve been doing pretty well in my studies as well as in my life. Apart from my academic studies, I always manage to find time for what I’m interested in. For example, I have successfully got admitted as a volunteer for the 13th National Games, which is scheduled to be held at the end of this August. To get admitted, I have made good preparations beforehand, trying to know as much as I could about my city, Tianjin.By the way, it’s my sincere hope that you can spare some time for a visit to Tianjin again, which has changed greatly since you left.Please let me know if you come to Tianjin.Yours,Li Jin（2017·北京卷）第一节 （15分）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1. 你建议的线路；2. 你的理由；3. 你的祝愿。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                      Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定的逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态和语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部分是本文的主体，要阐述你所建议的路线的原因，好让他们有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。【答案】Dear Jim, I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope you’ll have a good time in China.Yours,Li Hua【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用：That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高级词汇的使用：highly recommended。连接词的合理使用：Personally，moreover。  (2017·江苏卷)请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box­office income)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Saturday Afternoon. In a Shopping Centre.Li Jiang：Hi，Su Hua. Which movie shall we see?Su Hua：Whatever. We’ve got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey to the West…Each sounds great! Li Jiang：Yeah！And some movie stars are fantastic.Su Hua: And the high­tech！…Li Jiang：Perfect！Let’s get some food first. We only have 20 minutes left.Su Hua：No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.One Day in 2016. At Home.Son：Mum，shall we go and see a film tonight?Mother：Why bother? We can stay at home and watch films online. It’s convenient with our new and faster network.Son：But it feels good in a cinema.Mother：And the price…We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.Son：Only 10 yuan more than last year.Mother：But still we cannot get the money’s worth. Some films are just boring…【写作内容】1．用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；2．我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；3．谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。【写作要求】1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3．不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【解析】本题考查任务型读写。此类作文对考生的能力要求极高。首先考生要以30词左右概述短文内容。接下来要分析票房收入变化的原因并给出自己的看法，并谈谈自己对票房走向的看法。作文以第三人称和一般现在时为主。要点：1. 概述：中国电影票房在2012—2016年间呈现不断增长的趋势，但是2016年的增长相比于前几年很缓慢。 分析原因：票房增长与人们生活水平的不断提高息息相关，人们有了多余的钱，才可能消费、娱乐；另一方面，电影的制作技术日臻成熟，许多优质的电影不断上映；再者，互联网的普及无疑起到了很大的宣传作用。 看法和理由：票房增速将会小幅上涨或有所回落。只要给出恰当的理由，对票房看涨或是看落皆可。写30词的概述时，语言要简练、不拖沓。遣词造句要符合英语的表达习惯，尽量用上定语从句、状语从句和非谓语动词与倒装句等语法和句型。同时注意语句的连贯性。【参考范文】The box­office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box­office income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.China’s economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its box­office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.