专题17 书面表达之读后续写（野外求生型）-2022年高考英语毕业班二轮热点题型归纳与变式演练（全国通用）

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目录
TOC \ "1-3" \h \u \l "_Tc29376" 一、热点题型归纳
\l "_Tc17993" 【题型一】野外迷路型
\l "_Tc26924" 【题型二】野外遇到动物型
\l "_Tc21895" 二、最新模考题组练
读后续写中关于面对野外遇险，一般是表达主人公陷入困境时的动作描写、心理描写和神态表情，解决困境时的意志和心态，以及最后进行思想的升华。
【题型一】野外迷路型
【典例分析】
【2016年10月浙江卷】
读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started t quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm. “I'm ging t find a better spt fr us t camp" and walked away.
With n path t fllw,Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place. she turned arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. She suddenly realized that she was lst.
“Tm! "she cried. "Help!"
N reply. If nly she had nt left her mbile phne in that bag with Tm. Jane kept mving, but the farther she walked, the mre cnfused she became. As night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family. She wanted t hld him and tell him hw much she lved him.
Jane rse at the break f day, hungry and thirsty. She culd hear water trickling (滴落）smewhere at a distance. Quickly she fllwed the sund t a stream. T her great jy,she als saw sme berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling strnger nw. Jane began t walk alng the stream and hpe it wuld lead her t the lake.
As she picked her way carefully alng the stream, Jane heard a helicpter. Is that fr me? Unfrtunately, the trees made it impssible fr peple t see her frm abve. A few minutes later, anther helicpter flew verhead. Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.
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It was daybreak when Jane wke up.
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【答案】
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay dwn near a stne, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memry crwded in and she culdn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarreled with Tm, walked away and climbed t the high place, I wuldn't be trapped in this awful place, cnfrnted with the danger f dying." She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.
It was daybreak when Jane wke up. Weak as she was, she struggled t her feet, cntinuing searching fr assistance. T her great jy, a helicpter was flying verhead again and again. Eager and excited, she flagged her yellw bluse and spared n effrt t yell s as t attract thers'attentin. Frtunately, she was eventually nticed and brught int the helicpter. There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expressin f relief. As tightly as pssible, she hugged him and was t thrilled t say anything. Besides, they agreed never t quarrel again, determining t live the life t the fullest.
【解析】
首先，在逻辑上，要做到了合理合情：起初，主人公身陷森林，内心充满了悔恨，在面对困难时焦虑、畏惧；之后，主人公努力求生，最终获救，并且领悟到了一定的人生道理。纵观整个故事，情节发展不仅符合两段给出的开头所限定的情景要求，而且还设置了一定的悬念，增强了故事的可读性。
文章第一句 "an abslute darkness ruled the frest" 中， "rule" 一词就使用了拟人的修辞手法，让森林阴森黑暗的一面展露无遗，同时描绘出主人公身处绝境的紧迫性。在 "Eager and excited, she flagged her yellw bluse…" 一句中，直接将情绪形容词放在句首，使用了非谓语动词的语法，表达精练。
此外， "There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expressin f relief." 一句中，使用了几个短句，却包含了两处非谓语动词语法，同时活用了 "wear" 一词，把两个人相见时的场景生动地描绘了出来。
【提分秘籍】
1） 表示并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, r ，Nt nly … but als
2） 表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, hwever , althugh , thugh …
3） 表示时间关系的过渡词：first, secnd, third, and then, finally, after, befre, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
【变式演练】
【2018年6月浙江卷】
读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West.
We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.
His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning, Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn n my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze(吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. "Dn’t be late fr supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his fam huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven(编织的）blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
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We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
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【答案】
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But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had t stay alne in the frest fr anther cld night. At that mment (时间), she felt a little sad, but she wasn’t s frightened (情感). She reminded herself cnstantly, (心理) “ Tm must have called fr thse helicpters. Maybe (情感) he was in ne f them and will return sn(动作)! I have t guide him tmrrw.” She felt asleep (动作) and dreamed f seeing Tm (动作).
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It was daybreak when Jane wke up. She ate sme berries and then(时间) walked alng the stream, hping (心理) t find a suitable place t guide the helicpter. She walked and walked,exhausted but full f hpe. Suddenly (时间), she sptted (动作) a huge flat rck. She managed (动作) t climb nt it and waited with patience. The mment (时间) the helicpter appeared (动作) again. The nearer it gt (动作), the mre she waved (动作) the yellw bluse. T her great jy, (情感) the helicpter didn’t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rck slwly. Tm jumped ff the helicpter and rushed (动作) twards Jane. They hugged each ther tightly (情感) and burst int tears (情感).
【题型二】野外遇到动物型
【典例分析】
【2020年7月浙江卷】
读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside "the plar bear capital f the wrld"—the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada.
Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears—like all wild animals—shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I'm face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.
As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread.
The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh—he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws（爪子）.
I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter（相遇）, I tk sme pictures f the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wuldn't last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes, but desn't hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar（吼叫）, the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.
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At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.
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【答案】
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A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. Munting anger mingled with hunger verwhelming him, he smashed his paws frantically against the wire fence, thrusting his sharp claws at us. Panicked as we were, Elli and I squealed at the tp f ur lungs, wave ur fists at him and stamped heavily n the grund in an attempt t intimidate and scare him away. T ur dismay, all these effrts were in vain. This sturdy bear relentlessly banged and shved the wden psts which were evidently n the verge f cllapsing! This bulky and furius beast within a stne's thrw, I flinched back and huddled with Elli tightly. Chilly winds whipping ur faces, I culd hear nthing but the sund f ur hearts thrbbing vilently in ur chests.
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At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. The gusting wind frm the hvering vehicles wept away ur chking fear immediately. Out f the helicpter descended a rpe t haul us up. Thrilled yet relieved, we clutched the rpe and eventually landed n the helicpter safe and sund. While verlking the chunky bear frm high abve, I was amazed t spt this stubbrn guy had crushed the fence and headed tward ur camp fr the inviting garlic bread. At this nce-in-a-lifetime mment, I reached int my backpack and pulled ut the camera, phtgraphing that impressive scene. Gazing at his brad back in the melting ice field, I wndered if it was the warmer planet that had frced the bear t hunt fr fd frm the human regins.
【解析】
主要讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为 "北极熊之都" 的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊。夫妻二人做饭之时，一头饥饿的雄性幼熊循着面包的蒜香味，靠近了营地，猛烈撞击营地边上的铁丝围栏，试图击溃它。作者和妻子使出浑身解数，想吓退这头熊，不料他 "不破篱笆誓不归" 。无奈之下，作者求助营地管理员，被告知救援直升机要30分钟后才能赶到，只得先尝试用胡椒喷雾喷洒北极熊的眼睛，希望他知难而退。果然，眼睛被辣椒水刺激后，他愤怒跑开，到河边去清洗眼睛。
第一段：几分钟之后，这头北极熊又回到了营地边……由故事发展可推知，该段重点描写夫妻二人如何再次对付熊及两人在过程中的紧张害怕。
第二段：在这千钧一发之际，直升机赶到了……该段出现直升机，可知二人获救。重点描述获救后的心情。
【词句拓展】
关键词组：
rugh treatment 粗暴对待 apprach sth 接近某物 thrust at 戳
give a gasp f relief 如释重负
【提分秘籍】
使用高级句型：非谓语作状语、宾语从句、定语从句
例如：Gazing at his brad back in the melting ice field, I wndered if it was the warmer planet that had frced the bear t hunt fr fd frm the human regins.
凝视着融化的冰原上它宽阔的脊背，我想知道是不是地球变暖迫使它从人类地区寻找食物。
【变式演练】
【2017年6月浙江卷】
读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternn, Mac Hllan, a primary schl teacher, was cycling frm his hme t Alaska with his friends. One f his friends had stpped t make a bicycle repair, but they had encuraged Mac t carry n, and they wuld catch up with him sn. As Mac pedaled (骑行) alng alne, he thught fndly f his wife and tw yung daughters at hme. He hped t shw them this beautiful place smeday.
Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dg!” he thught. But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dg at all, but a wlf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He fund ut his can f hear spray. With ne hand n the bars, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back f Mac's bike, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back nly t quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
Mac was pedaling hard nw. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful nt t shw dwn. He saw a steep uphill climb befre him. He knew that nce he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wlf’s teeth wuld be tearing int his flesh.
At this mment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car n their way t Alaska. They didn’t think much f it when they saw tw cyclists repairing their bike n the side f the rad. A bit later, they sptted what they, t, assumed was a dg running alngside a man n a bike. As they gt clser, they realized that the dg was a wlf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in frnt f it as the wlf was catching up fast, just a dzen yards away nw.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The car abrubtly stpped in frnt f him.
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A few minutes later,the ther tw cyclists arrived.
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【答案】
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The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Paul and Becky gt ut f the carimmediately t give help. But with the bare hands, they didn't dare t fight with the wlf. Hwever, they still apprached t the wlf bravely. At the same time, the wlf als nticed them and turned its head back, shuting ludly at Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped ff the bicycle and was ready t fight against the wlf. That reached deadlck.
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A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. They fund the dangerus situatin, where three men circled the wlf. Mac's friends als jumped ff their bicycles and jined the fight with the wlf. Mre and mre cars stpped. Sme drivers tk ut the sticks frm the cars, and sme tk ut the knives, even the guns twards the wlf. Just at that time, the wlf might feel the threats frm the peple, starting t withdraw. Sn, it ran away ff the rad and disappeared in the distance.
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Steve was the mst amazing persn in all f Minneaplis, and he was my cusin. By the age f 19, Steve was a star baseball player at the University f Minnesta. I wanted t be exactly like him. S when Steve asked me t g with him n a spring fishing trip in nrthern Minnesta, I was excited!
After planning the trip, we gathered clthes and supplies, and began ur great adventure. We reached the Superir Natinal Frest in nrthern Minnesta by early evening. On ur way t the campsite, Steve pinted t a small huse faraway in ne f the muntains, saying that it was the ranger statin (护林站) where the frester wrked.
Finally, after a lng walk, we reached the campsite and set up the camp as the sun was setting. Steve knew all the tricks f an experienced wilderness camper. After we gathered enugh wd frm the frest, he started the campfire using nly stne and steel — n matches. Fr supper we feasted n freeze-dried beef, wild rice and pea sup. I ate greedily after all that wrk.
Tired enugh, we climbed int ur sleeping bags early and talked abut ur plans fr fishing the next day. We were still talking quietly when a sudden nrth wind picked up; the temperature drpped and it began t snw. Steve fund a way t increase the temperature inside the tent. He dragged a lg (原木) frm the frest t the ppsite side f the campfire. Then he wrapped (包裹) aluminum fil (铝箔) arund the lg. The heat frm the fire reflected ff the fil and int the tent. Sn images f lake fish were filling my dreams.
The snw had stpped, but smetime later a pwerful wind must have kicked up the flames f ur dying fire. I was abruptly awakened by Steve. Our tent was n fire. Frightened, I ran ut f the tent immediately. The tent cllapsed (倒塌) with Steve inside. Withut any thught f endangering myself, I reached int the burning tent and pulled him t the icy lake. Frtunately, we were nt seriusly hurt.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Later, as we std by the burning tent t keep warm, we cnsidered ur difficult situatin.
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Suddenly, we heard a nise in the frest.
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Later, as we std by the burning tent t keep warm, we cnsidered ur difficult situatin. Our campsite was in the deep f the frest, really far away frm the highway. We were in the middle f nwhere, wearing nly underwear, with ur supplies burnt int ashes, including ur cellphnes. Even Steve was unsure what t d next. The nly thing we culd d was just sitting in the cld air and wndering hw t get ut f the frest.
Suddenly, we heard a nise in the frest. Anxiusly we listened and stared int the darkness. A jeep appeared. A frester had sptted the light frm the fire and had cme t have a check. We jumped int the warm vehicle and the frester drve us t the ranger statin, where we were given clthes and were able t call ur parents. Steve and I had many mre camping adventures frm then n, but it was n this trip that Steve began t treat me mre like a friend and equal, rather than a yunger cusin. Our friendship cntinues t this day.