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押天津卷第61题
书面表达（书信电邮类）

应用文是最贴近日常生活的文体，它包括通知、广告、便条、申请书、个人简介、商品说明与介绍、新闻报道等，形式多样，题材各异，如图示、表格等。书信电子邮件类应用文写作连续三年都有涉及，在天津新高考中占有极大的比重。写作内容贴近学生现实生活，贴近时代特点，更有话题性和真实性。因此，可以大胆推测未来天津新高考英语书面表达会重点倾向书信和电子邮件类的写作，命题类型仍然属于半开放性，写作信息点明确具体，让考生发挥自己的逻辑辩证思维进行写作。

题型
体裁
话题
分值
2019
应用文
电子邮件 （告知类）
回复有关西方艺术讲座的话题
25
2020.07
应用文
电子邮件 （告知类）
介绍有关成人礼的活动
25
2021.06
应用文
电子邮件 （告知类）
感谢并告知上大学选择哪个专业
25

书信和电子邮件的写作，一定注意以下几个要点，才能写出高分作文。开始段一定要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力，并注意要礼貌当先。中间段落属于文章主体，内容上需要更充实，展现自己较强的写作能力。结尾段落属于文章的总结段，尽量做到回扣文章开篇段，让文章看起来环环相扣，形成一个闭环，形式上呈现两头小，中间大的语篇布局。因此，书信电邮类应用文写作一般采用“三段式”行文结构：
首段
开门见山，说明写信目的或意图
主体
覆盖写作要求中的所有信息点
尾段
表达祝愿，或盼望回复
[审题谋篇] 第一步： 审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。定时态，一般来说人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语。第四步：确定较为高级的句子，如定语从句、倒装句和强调句等。第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接：After that, besides, however。第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。






Passage 1（2021•天津6月卷•第61题）
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢并问候；
2. 计划与家人一起做的事情；
3. 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾巳给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I’m going to Tian’ anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
照顾：take care of→look after
另外，此外：in addition→besides→what’s more
雇佣：employ→hire
既然：now that→since
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
拓展句：As the Internet industry develops rapidly，the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2（2020•天津7月卷•第61题）
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况，内容包括:
1. 成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；
2. 对活动的感受；
3. 对自己未来的展望。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony
新冠脑炎 COVID-F9
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.
Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.
Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2. 对活动的感受。3. 对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.；
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.
第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that, besides, however.
第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
Passage 3（2019•天津卷•第61题）
假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
1. 你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
2. 选择该话题原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
3. 希望从中有何收获。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100：
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris，
I’m Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity, you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my personal note,music is my priority.
I am interested in all kinds of music, among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of jazz, and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇分析】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李津的名义用英语给英方教师Chris写一封电子邮件。
【详解】
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。写作提要为假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；（3）希望从中有何收获。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
【点睛】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。定语从句的使用：I am interested in all kinds of music，among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of jazz，and some famous jazz singers. 名词性从句的使用：I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.
Passage 4（2018•天津卷•第61题）
假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
1. 比赛的时间、地点；
2. 邀请他的原因；
3. 训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. ________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. There will be a month before the end of October, when the World Adolescent Robotics Competition is scheduled to be held in my province, Anhui. With my great enthusiasm about robotics and my progress, I am made head of a team devoted to the competition.
When we are making preparations for the event, it occurs to me that you once took a prize in a similar competition. Therefore, it can’t be better if you can join my team and show your talent. Meanwhile, what is attached to this email is the training plan I have worked for my team, and I hope you’ll read and offer some suggestions. After all, you have lots of practical tricks which will be of great use to us.
I would appreciate it if you could join us.
Looking forward to your reply.
                                                                                                    Yours,
                      Li Jin
【语篇分析】
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一封电子邮件，属于邀请信。要求邀请你的美国朋友Chris加入你的团队，参加即将于10月底在安徽举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
结构：三段式：第一段写出写信目的，介绍比赛的时间和地点；第二段写出邀请朋友的原因并请他针对训练计划提出建议；第三段表示期待对方的加入。
要求：1. 比赛的时间和地点；
2. 邀请他的原因；
3. 训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）
schedule (安排); enthusiasm (热情); devote to… (致力于……); preparation (准备); similar (类似的); competition (比赛); attach to (附属，依附); suggestion (建议); practical (实际的，有用的); appreciate (感激，感谢); look forward to (期待，盼望)
第三步：连词成句
1. There will be a month before the end of October.
2. With my great enthusiasm about robotics and my progress, I am made head of a team devoted to the competition.
3. When we are making preparations for the event, it occurs to me that you once took a prize in a similar competition.
4. It can’t be better if you can join my team and show your talent.
5. You have lots of practical tricks which will be of great use to us.
6. I would appreciate it if you could join us..
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last
2. 表并列补充关系：What’s more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…
3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…;   some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so; since; thus; therefore(本篇文章使用过); as a result; why
5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。
“Meanwhile, attached to this email is a training plan I have worked for my team.”本句用来告知对方邮件中附加了训练计划。可以使用定语从句，表示希望对方阅读计划并提出建议。润色修改为：Meanwhile, attached to this email is a training plan I have worked for my team, which I hope you’ll read and make some suggestions.
试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
点睛：书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。

Passage 1（2022届天津市西青区高三下学期一模）
假如你是李津，你的加拿大的朋友 Tim 在邮件中谈到他们那里也出现了很多新型冠 状病毒肺炎的病例，他有些紧张，并感觉网络信息的传播加剧了人们的恐慌。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下：
1. 对他的恐慌表示理解，谈谈你的境况；
2. 简单阐述如何对待网络信息，说明理由；
3. 给 Tim 提一些建议(如：勤洗手，少出门，戴口罩)。
注意：
1. 词数不少于 100；
2. 内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：新型冠状病毒肺炎 coronavirus； 口罩 mask
Dear Tim,
I’ve got your email and know that…
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Tim,
I’ve got your email and know that I’ve got your email and know that many cases where people unfortunately get infected with coronavirus have been found in Canada. Learning that you are worried about it and feel that the spread of news in the website adds to people’s panic, I am writing to show my concern about you and tell you something about my situation.
Firstly, it’s natural that people will get panic when faced with unknown things. At the beginning of the outbreak of the disease, I was also very worried, just like you. But now with more and more patients with coronavirus being cured, I am quite confident. What’s more, I think it necessary for us to hold an objective attitude to the news in the website where there is always much false news. Don’t focus too much on it. Finally, at this particular time, in order not to get infected, you ‘d better wash hands more. Meanwhile, it couldn’t be better if you stay indoors as much as possible. If you have to go out, you must wear protective mask to keep yourself from getting infected.
I firmly believe that we are able enough to defeat the coronavious in the near future.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假如你是李津，你的加拿大的朋友 Tim 在邮件中谈到他们那里也出现了很多新型冠 状病毒肺炎的病例，他有些紧张，并感觉网络信息的传播加剧了人们的恐慌。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下：（1）对他的恐慌表示理解，谈谈你的境况；（2）简单阐述如何对待网络信息，说明理由；（3）给 Tim 提一些建议(如：勤洗手，少出门，戴口罩)。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； coronavirus（新型冠状病毒肺炎），mask（口罩），panic（恐慌），outbreak（爆发），natural（自然的），worried （担心的），cure（治愈），infect（感染），objective（客观的）及protective（防护的）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有add to（增加），show sb’s concern about sth（表达对某事的关心），hold a(n)+adj+ attitude to （对某事持一种……的态度），in order not to（为了不……）以及keep sb from doing（防止某人做某事），而且还使用了宾语从句“I firmly believe that we are able enough to defeat the coronavious in the near future.”，状语从句“If you have to go out, you must wear protective mask to keep yourself from getting infected.”，定语从句和形式宾语“What’s more, I think it necessary for us to hold an objective attitude to the news in the website where there is always much false news.”，非谓语动词“Learning that you are worried about it and feel that the spread of news in the website adds to people’s panic, I am writing to show my concern about you and tell you something about my situation.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
Passage 2（2022届北京市顺义区高三下学期二模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李津。你的英国笔友Jim在邮件中提到他将来的生活，也想了解你的职业设想，请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 你想从事的职业；
2. 选择该职业的原因；
3. 实现该目标的方法。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
Having heard about your plan for the future, I’m happy to share mine with you.
Becoming a journalist has always been my dream. When I was a child, I thought it was a great job as it offered journalists lots of chances to travel. Over time, I have come to feel that the responsibilities of revealing facts and spreading inspiring stories make the job more meaningful and attractive. In my opinion, writing ability is very important for a journalist, so I practise it almost every day. In addition, I plan to study journalism at Communication University of Beijing and currently I am preparing for the entrance exam.
How’s your life now? Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim写信，告诉他自己想从事的职业、选择该职业的原因和实现的方法。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→happy
机会：opportunity→chance
有吸引力的：appealing→attractive
现在：at present→currently
2. 句型拓展
变强调句
原句：I have come to feel that the responsibilities of revealing facts and spreading inspiring stories make the job more meaningful and attractive.
拓展句：I have come to feel that it is the responsibilities of revealing facts and spreading inspiring stories that make the job more meaningful and attractive.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When I was a child, I thought it was a great job as it offered journalists lots of chances to travel.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和as引导的原因状语从句）
[高分句型2]Having heard about your plan for the future, I’m happy to share mine with you.（运用了现在分词的完成式作状语）
Passage 3（2021届天津市河西区高三下学期二模）
假设你是高三学生李津，毕业后想去香港大学。请你给该校领导写一封电子邮件， 询问一些相关事宜。
1. 对该校的法学院感兴趣，如何才能被相关专业录取；
2. 是否需要参加英语考试；
3. 该校的奖学金、学费、食宿安排和生活费用等情况。
注意：
1. 邮件须包含以上所有内容，可适当增加细节；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数，不少于100词。
参考词汇：
香港大学 University of Hong Kong 法学院 Faculty of Law
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Jin,________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Jin, a Senior 3 student. Soon I will graduate and I plan to study in your university, so I'm writing to ask for some information.
I’m desperately interested in law and the subjects in your university are particularly famous. We all know that law is the principle of the society. Furthermore, helping the people in trouble is always my dream and I really want to be something in this field. So I wonder how I can be a student in your Faculty of Law. Do I have to take the English tests? How can I apply for the scholarship? How do you arrange accommodations for mainland students? What will the usual living costs be like?
Your timely reply would be much appreciated.
Yours truly,
Li Jin
【语篇分析】
本篇书面表达考查应用文写作。
【详解】
第一步：明确要求。假设你是高三学生李津，毕业后想去香港大学。请你给该校领导写一封电子邮件， 询问一些相关事宜。
1. 对该校的法学院感兴趣，如何才能被相关专业录取；
2. 是否需要参加英语考试；
3. 该校的奖学金、学费、食宿安排和生活费用等情况。
第二步：列关键词。
Graduate；ask for；desperately；interested in；principle；in trouble；wonder；take the test；apply for；scholarship；arrange accommodation；the usual living cost等等。
第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。
第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
注意，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。高级句型有：Furthermore, helping the people in trouble is always my dream and I really want to be something in this field.使用了动名词做主语；Your timely reply would be much appreciated.使用了被动语态。文章没有汉氏英语，体现了作者较高的英语能力。

Passage 1
假设你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2：00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》。请你根据以下提示，用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。
1. 提出邀请并简述原因；
2. 提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等）
3. 请求对方回复
注意：
1. 请使用规范英语，词数不少于100；
2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
越剧：Shaoxing Opera
《梁山伯与祝英台》 Butterfly Lovers
天津大剧院Tianjin Grand Theater
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you._______________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. A Shaoxing Opera named Butterfly Lovers will be on show in Tianjin Grand Theater, which was just completed, at 2:00 p.m. on August 5th. It is because I know you like the culture of China, especially drama, that I would like to invite you to admire it.
As we all know, Butterfly Lovers is a traditional drama, telling about two young person’s moving love story. After watching it, shall we visit some places nearby, such as the art museum, in which lots of rich art will appeal to you enormously?
I would be very glad if you come.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2：00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》。请你根据以下提示，用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。内容包括：提出邀请并简述原因；提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等）；请求对方回复。人称使用第一、三人称，时态使用一般现在时、一般将来时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：be on show（上演），was just completed（新落成的），at 2:00 p.m. on August 5th（8月5日下午2：00），because（因为），the culture of China（中国文化），the art museum（艺术博物馆），Looking forward to your early reply.（期待您的早日回复）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如A Shaoxing Opera （过去分词）named Butterfly Lovers will be on show in Tianjin Grand Theater,（非限定性定语从句）which was just completed, at 2:00 p.m. on August 5th.；（强调句）It is （原因状语从句）because I know you like the culture of China, especially drama, that I would like to invite you to admire it.； As we all know, Butterfly Lovers is a traditional drama,（现在分词）telling about two young person’s moving love story.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
Passage 2
假设你是晨光中学高三一班的李津。你的英国笔友Chris发来邮件告诉你，他很高兴在当地孔子学院主办的“汉语桥”世界中学生中文比赛中荣获诗歌朗诵一等奖，但还想更深入的学习中文，希望你能给他一些建议。请你根据以下提示，用英文给Chris回复一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1. 祝贺Chris获奖；
2. 提供深入学习汉语的建议（如：读中文原著，用中文记日记等）；
3. 邀请Chris来中国学习交流。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100词；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
孔子学院 Confucius Institute
汉语桥 Chinese Bridge
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
Hearing that you won the first prize in the poetry recitation contest Chinese Bridge hosted by local Confucius Institute, I am so glad and sincerely sending my congratulations to you.
As to the suggestions on how to further learn Chinese, it’s advisable that you should be exposed to Chinese literature, which helps you build a good sense of Chinese language. What’s more, you might as well try keeping a diary in Chinese in that more practice contributes to better mastery. Last but not least, how about finding a Chinese language partner with whom you can communicate if you would like to improve your Chinese fluency?
Hope my advice is worth taking. Meanwhile, I’d love to invite you to learn and exchange in China one day.
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris回复邮件，就如何深入学习中文给出建议并表达祝贺，同时邀请对方来中国学习交流。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
举办：host→hold
真诚地：sincerely→genuinely
有助于：contribute to→make for
提升：improve→advance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hearing that you won the first prize in the poetry recitation contest Chinese Bridge hosted by local Confucius Institute, I am so glad and sincerely sending my congratulations to you.
拓展句：Since I hear that you won the first prize in the poetry recitation contest Chinese Bridge hosted by local Confucius Institute, I am so glad and sincerely sending my congratulations to you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】As to the suggestions on how to further learn Chinese, it’s advisable that you should be exposed to Chinese literature, which helps you build a good sense of Chinese language. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】What’s more, you might as well try keeping a diary in Chinese in that more practice contributes to better mastery.（运用了in that引导的状语从句）
Passage 3
假定你是李津，为了庆祝新年，你所在的社区将举办一次剪纸（paper﹣cutting）展览。你校交换生Mike对这一中国传统民间艺术非常感兴趣，请你用英语写一封邮件邀请他参加。要点如下：
1. 展览时间及地点；
2. 展览内容．
要求：
1. 字数：100字左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to attend a paper﹣cutting exhibition which is going to be held in my neighborhood in celebration of Chinese New Year.
Aimed at displaying the amazing folk art, the exhibition will be open from 9am to 5 pm from this Monday to next Friday on the Renmin Square. Apart from admiring a great number of wonderful paper﹣cutting works, beginners can even learn some basic skills of this traditional art at the exhibition. Since you are really interested in paper﹣cutting and always eager to know more about it, this is a rare chance that you can’t miss.
I wonder if you’ll be free this Sunday morning. If so, let’s go to the exhibition together.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇分析】
本文是一篇开放性书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，为了庆祝新年，社区将举办一次剪纸（paper﹣cutting）展览，你校交换生Mike对这一中国传统民间艺术非常感兴趣，请用英语写一封邮件邀请他参加。考生要自拟要点介绍这一展览的有关信息并邀请对方参加，有一定难度。
【详解】
第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一封邀请信，要求考生给交换生Mike写信，介绍社区次剪纸展览的有关信息并邀请对方参加。文章以一般现在时、一般进行时和第三人称为主。
第2步：组织要点。（1）展览时间及地点：人民广场；本周一至下周五上午9点至下午5点；（2）展览内容：展览剪纸艺术品，学习剪纸基本技巧‘’
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为in celebration of 、be aimed at、admire a great number of wonderful paper﹣cutting works、learn some basic skills。写作时注意邀请信的格式和惯用语。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇和短语结构，如in celebration of、apart from、be eager to do sth等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如分词做状语Aimed at displaying the amazing folk art，the exhibition will be open from 9am to 5 pm from this Monday to next Friday on the Renmin Square．定语从句which is going to be held in my neighborhood in celebration of Chinese New Year．同时文章还运用了一些串联成分，这些串联词让各个要点更紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。
Passage 4
假设你是李津，最近，你的英国笔友Tricia发来电子邮件，询问你校下学期开设选修课 (optional courses) 的情况。请你给她回一封email，要包括以下内容：
1. 选修课的时间；
2. 可选课程；
3. 你喜欢的课程和选择的理由。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tricia,
Thank you for your email. I am writing to tell you________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Could you tell me something about your school life?
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Tricia,
Thank you for your email. I am writing to tell you the optional courses we will have next term. Our school provides various optional courses for us, including calligraphy, drama, photography, computer science, cooking, martial arts and so on. We students can choose from those optional courses based on our interests. Students can attend the optional courses on Friday afternoon from 4 p.m. to 6 p.m. Excellent teachers and professionals are invited to give us lectures. My favorite courses are drama and photography. I think the optional courses can bring great benefits to us students, because they can broaden our horizons, enrich our knowledge and make our school life colorful.
Could you tell me something about your school life?
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Tricia回一封email，告知选修课的时间，可选课程，自己喜欢的课程和选择的理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
提供：provide→offer
选择：choose→select
参加：attend→participate in
优秀的：excellent→outstanding
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We students can choose from those optional courses based on our interests.
拓展句：We students can choose from those optional courses which are based on our interests.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
I am writing to tell you the optional courses we will have next term.( the optional courses we will have next term.为省略了that的宾语从句，we will have next term为省略了that的定语从句)
[高分句型2]
I think the optional courses can bring great benefits to us students, because they can broaden our horizons, enrich our knowledge and make our school life colorful.(think后面为省略了that的宾语从句，because引导原因状语从句)