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备战2022年新高考英语写作三合一突破突破07 清晰传递信息的表达法（以咨询信、申请信与道歉信等为例）【技法演练】【典例分析】(2019·全国卷Ⅰ改编)假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.个人优势；3.能做的事情。注意：写作词数应为80左右。【写作示例】第一步　审五要素，三段谋篇 审主题审体裁审语言审格式审内容申请做美术馆志愿者申请信人称： 第一人称申请信可分三段第1段(开门见山)自我介绍，说明招聘信息，提出申请时态：一般现在时和现在完成时第2段(介绍自身优势)具体阐述个人优势：语言能力和相关经验尾段(巧妙收尾)说明申请获准后的打算并表示期待第二步　雕词酌句，设计亮点【技法强化】1．得知你们当地美术馆即将举办的中国画展需要志愿者，我迫不及待地想申请这个职位。①高级词汇和句式(被动句)：I've learned                                                            in your local art gallery, so                                                       . ②高级句式(利用非谓语动词作状语升级)：                                                                                               .2．如被录用，我会不遗余力地介绍那些展出的作品，耐心地回答问题。①高级词汇：If I am accepted,                                                                                                                         . ②高级句式(利用省略句升级)：                                                                                                                      .第三步　巧妙过渡，完美成篇 【语篇整合】1．咨询信满分句式记忆开头句(自我介绍，说明写信目的)①I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning the English summer camp.我写信是想看看你是否能给我提供有关英语夏令营的信息。②I'm writing to you in the hope of getting some details of the two­week journey.我写信给你是想了解这两周旅行的一些细节。③I'm wondering if/whether you could/would offer some specific information related to your advertisement.不知道你是否能够告知我有关你们的广告的一些具体信息。篇中句(咨询具体信息，强调所需信息的重要性)①Could you be so kind as to tell me the detailed arrangement for those online courses?您能告诉我这些网课的具体安排吗？②Another point I'm uncertain about is whether the meals are covered in the total expenses.我还不确定的另一点是餐费是否包含在全部费用之中。③I would be grateful if you could let me know if there are any special requirements for taking part in the voluntary activity.如果你能告诉我对参加这个志愿者活动是否有任何特殊要求， 我将不胜感激。④If there is anything else that needs special attention, please inform me at your convenience.如果还有什么需要特别注意的地方，请在方便的时候告诉我。⑤What deserves my special attention is whether there is enough time for shopping.我特别关注的是是否有足够的时间购物。⑥Nothing can be better if you can take the trouble to offer me some relevant materials about the course.如果您能给我提供一些这门课的相关资料，那就再好不过了。结尾句(表达想获取信息的强烈愿望，提供联系方式并表示感谢)①Thank you for your kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.感谢您的好意，如能及时关注此信，我将不胜感激。②Please share with me some specific information about your schedule. Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.请告诉我一些有关你们日程安排的具体信息。盼望尽快收到你的回信。③I would appreciate it if you could give me more detailed information about your schedule.如果您能给我更详细的日程安排，我将不胜感激。2．告知信告知信是告诉对方有关活动事宜、其他情况类变化或让对方执行有关事宜的应用文。满分句式记忆开头句(开篇表明目的)①Learning you are enthusiastic about the art festival, I'm delighted to share with you some details.得知你对艺术节很感兴趣，我很高兴告诉你一些细节。②I'm eager/excited to inform you of a voluntary activity that you may be interested in.我迫切/激动地告诉你一个你可能感兴趣的志愿者活动。③I can hardly wait to share with you the exciting news that a folk music festival is to be held in our city.我迫不及待地告诉你一个令人激动的消息。我们市即将举行民间音乐节。篇中句(说明相关情况)①The next class is about calligraphy, for which you are supposed to make some preparations.下一节课程是书法，你应做好上课准备。②I hope the change of the course arrangement will not cause you too much trouble/inconvenience.我希望课程安排的变化不会给你带来太多麻烦/不便。③Not only was the activity a fabulous feast for the eyes but it also inspired us to work harder. 这次活动不仅是一场视觉盛宴，也激励我们更加努力地工作。结尾句(结尾点题，期盼再次联系)①I'd appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience.如能尽早回复我将不胜感激。②If you want to know anything else, please don't hesitate to contact me.你如果想知道其他事情，请尽管联系我。3．申请信申请信是应用文中考查频率较高的形式，用于向组织或个人提出申请，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请或留学申请等。满分句式记忆开头句(自我介绍、说明招聘信息提出申请)①Learning the school basketball team is looking for new members, I'm excited to apply to be a member of it.得知校篮球队在招收新队员，我激动地申请成为其中一员。②From the advertisement I know a host is needed for the coming music festival, so I can't wait to apply for the position.我从广告中得知即将到来的音乐节需要主持人，我迫不及待地申请该职位。篇中句(阐述优势：资格、性格特征、交际能力、语言能力和相关经验)①I'm active and sociable, which equips me with good qualities that a host needs. 我很活跃，善于交际，这使我具备了主持人所需要的良好品质。②With a good command of English, I can communicate with foreign visitors with great ease.我精通英语能与外国游客轻松地交流。③I have taken part in several such great activities in which I have gained relevant experience.我参加过几次这样的大型活动，积累了相关经验。④Equally importantly, I previously served as a volunteer several times, which is also an advantage over other applicants.同样重要的是，我之前做过几次志愿者，这也是我相对于其他申请者的一个优势。结尾句(说明申请获准后的打算并表示期待)①Any favorable consideration of my application will be appreciated. I'm looking forward to your early reply.如蒙考虑，本人将不胜感激。期待您的早日回复。②If accepted, I would spare no effort to offer my best service.如被录取，我将不遗余力地提供我最佳的服务。4．道歉信道歉信应对自己具体的过失和疏忽作出解释一般要求考生自由发挥，道歉的原因一定要真实而且容易接受，语言要得体委婉，表示出诚意。满分句式记忆开头句(说明写信意图，对某事表示歉意)①I'm writing to convey my sincere apologies to you for not accompanying you to the gallery at our appointed time.我写信向你表达我诚挚的歉意，因为我没有在我们约定的时间陪你去画廊。②Now, I'm writing you this letter to show my deep regret.现在，我写信向你表达我深切的遗憾。篇中句(具体说明道歉的原因，提出补救措施)①The reason why I won't be available at that time as planned is that my grandfather fell ill suddenly yesterday and I have to care for him.我不能按计划届时去，因为我祖父昨天突然生病了，我必须照顾他。②I have just found I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause too much trouble.我刚发现我那天下午要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这种变化不会造成太大的麻烦。③I feel so sorry for not keeping my word, but would you give me a chance to say sorry to you face to face?我很抱歉没有信守诺言，但你能给我个机会当面向你道歉吗？④I'll appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another time. If not, please keep me informed in advance of what time suits you best.如果您能允许我另安排时间，我将不胜感激。如果没有，请提前告诉我何时最适合你。结尾句(再次表明歉意，请求谅解)①I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by the unexpected change.对于这个意外的变化给您带来的不便，我深表歉意。②Please allow me to say sorry again, and I'll try to make up for my fault.请允许我再次致歉，我将尽力弥补我的过错。5．推荐信推荐信是推荐事物包括人文历史、旅游观光和文体娱乐等、某事或某人的书信，写作时应先点题，表明收到对方的邮件，然后主体部分陈述详细的推荐理由。满分句式记忆开头句(说明写信目的及要推荐的对象)①Learning from your last letter that you are eager to explore traditional Chinese culture, I think the Ancient Poetry is your best choice.从你上一封信中得知你渴望探索中国传统文化，我认为古诗是你最好的选择。②Delighted/Pleased that you are going to pay a visit to Xi'an, I'm writing to recommend some tourist attractions deserving visiting to you.很高兴你要去西安游玩，我写信向你推荐一些值得一游的景点。③It makes me delighted that you show great interest in Chinese martial arts, and that you desire to learn, I'd like to recommend a martial arts teacher to you.我很高兴你对中国武术很感兴趣，并且想学习武术，我推荐一个武术老师给你。篇中句(具体说明推荐的理由)①Additionally, with a history of hundreds of years, the Summer Palace reflects typical ancient Chinese architectural art and wisdom.此外，有着数百年历史的颐和园反映了典型的中国古代建筑艺术和智慧。②As one of the world's wonders, the Great Wall is regarded as the symbol of China, which you can't afford to miss.长城是世界奇观之一，是中国的象征，不容错过。③Visiting the Summer Palace by yourself is bound to greatly promote your understanding of the profound traditional Chinese culture.游览颐和园一定会大大促进你对中国悠久传统文化的了解。结尾句(期待自己的推荐能让对方满意，期盼再次联系)①I do hope you can take my recommendation into account and whenever you need help, don't hesitate to let me know.我希望你能考虑我的建议。无论你何时需要帮助，请及时让我知道。 ②Hope my recommendation will help you. Wish you a good time/journey.希望我的推荐能帮到你。祝你玩得/旅途愉快。6．投诉信投诉信常被用来解决诸如消费者利益受损、正常生活或工作受到干扰等问题。投诉信不同于申请信或邀请信，要直截了当、掷地有声地表达自己的观点，不能拖泥带水。满分句式记忆开头句(表明身份，交代要投诉的问题)①Dissatisfied with your poor service, I couldn't feel more annoyed so I can not help but make an immediate complaint.我很不满意你们恶劣的服务，我非常生气，只得立即投诉。②There is much to be desired about your after­sales service, so I'm writing to make a complaint about the problems of it.你们的售后服务有很多不足之处，因此我写信投诉它的几个问题。③I'm Li Hua, a customer who bought a book from your website a week ago. There exists something wrong with several pages. That's why I'm writing to complain.我是李华，一周前在你们网站买了一本书。有几页有问题，所以我写信投诉。篇中句(描述投诉原因，问题的经过及产生的后果)①Personally, it's time your service should be improved to live up to the customers' expectations.依我看，现在是改进服务以满足顾客期望的时候了。②Worse still, several pages in the book are missing, which makes it impossible for me to make sense of the book.更糟糕的是，书里少了几页，这让我无法理解这本书。③Much to my dissatisfaction, the cellphone is not easy to operate, causing me much inconvenience. What's worse, it often breaks down for no reasons, which shows its poor quality.令我很不满意的是，手机不容易操作，给我带来了很多不便。更糟糕的是，它经常毫无理由地坏掉，这表明它的质量很差。结尾句(提出解决方案)①I do hope you will take my complaint seriously and get it settled as soon as possible. 我真的希望你能认真对待我的投诉，并尽快处理它。②I wonder if I can get my money back, or I wish you could have it repaired or changed. I hope you will do what you can to fix the problem.我不知道能否把钱拿回来，或者我希望你能把它修好或换掉。我希望你能尽力解决这个问题。【技法强化】Writing 1 告知信假定你是李华，你所在的书法班由于书画室修理门窗推迟课程，请给你同班的外国朋友Tom写信告知此事，内容包括：1．推迟原因；2．新的上课时间、地点；3．期待课上见面。注意：写作词数应为80左右。      Writing 2 道歉信假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tracy下个月将来你所在的城市参加夏令营活动，想要寄宿你家，但你有事无法接待。请你给她写一封邮件，内容包括：1．表示歉意；2．解释原因；3．提供帮助。注意：写作词数应为80左右。        【拓展运用】1假定你是李华，作为交换生在国外某学校学习，得知该校即将举办国际服装文化节(International Costume Day),你有意向参加服装展示环节，请你写一封邮件咨询相关信息，内容包括:1.写信目的:2.咨询信息(如服饰要求，展示形式等)3.表达期待注意:1. 词数100左右:2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2假定你是李华，得知学校要举办英语周活动，其间要举办多场晚会，需要招聘晚会主持人。请你给英语周组委会的刘老师写一封申请信。内容包括：1. 信息来源，申请意愿；2. 自我介绍，申请理由；3. 表示谢意， 盼望回复。注意：1.字数：100左右2.可适当补充细节________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3假如你是小区居民，昨天你误拿了别人的快递，拆开看见里面的东西不是自己预定的，你重新包装后将快递退回到快递点并且给收件人写一封道歉信。内容包括： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 说明原因。注意: 1. 词数应为120左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇： pickup point (快递收取点)； a community resident（小区居民）Dear Sir or Madam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________A community resident4阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Late again, Mavis! How many times have I told you to come back in time to help me cook dinner?” asked Mrs. Muntari.“But, mummy, I can’t just walk out in the middle of a game!” said Mavis, who was nearly breathless after running all the way home.“You shouldn’t be playing the game in the first place,” Mrs. Muntari said as she stopped cooking and looked at Mavis.“But, mum, I want to play football. Why can’t I? You never tell Adibe or Senzo not to play football. I had to leave the game at half time and rush back so you wouldn’t get cross with me,” said Mavis.“You’re a girl! It is as simple as that. Boys and girls have different roles to play. I have 11 hungry mouths to feed and I need your help!” Mrs. Muntari tasted the porridge and added some more water. You’re the oldest girl not working, so it is your job to help me. That is the way of our people. Now go and fry some more chicken. Kulu had to help me since you were not here. She burnt her finger and is still crying. I even had to ask your cousin from next door to come and help me.”At the dinner table, Adibe and Senzo were excitedly talking about today’s game, while eating the chicken that Mavis had fried. They talked about how Mavis scored in the first half with a power shot from the halfway line. It was a great goal as their team was losing 1-0 at that time.Dad came home then and brought the boys a local newspaper, in which there was news about football scouts from England visiting Ghana. These scouts had asked to be allowed to visit various schools to look for players of the future. Adibe and Senzo looked at each other and cheered, “Wow, I’m going to be like Essien!” And they started arguing which one would make it as a superstar.Mavis knew that her parents would never allow her to play football. But she decided to secretly take this chance. She began to think about what she could do.注意: 1. 续写词数为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Soon it came to the day when the scouts visited Mavis’s school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When Mavis arrived at the playground, it was at half time. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Nowadays, the Spring Festival parties are quite different from before. People are not together in the same home but in cyberspace. It is another symptom of the so-called smartphone reliance syndrome（智能手机依赖症）. For many people, they use the smartphone in office, at home, even on the road; they play with it while eating ,drinking, even while bathing. But really it is not the fault of our smartphones, which were created to help us communicate with one even thousand of kilometers away and bring more convenience to our lives.Ironically, we feel more distanced from each other in the real world. The reason is that we have more choices now, and we have to keep up with virtual conversations for fear of missing something. Smartphones and other smart devices have revolutionized the way we interact with each other. We have adapted to the technology.However, one group risks being left behind by this trend. The elderly do not accept new technologies as fast as the younger and they can not enjoy the convenience of new technologies either. They even don’t access the Internet much. According to a survey released by China Internet Network Information Center, there were 731 million netizens in China by the end of 2016, but only 4 percent were above the age of 60. The elderly face the loneliness of being “left behind” by their children working in cities far away. Spring Festival is almost the only chance for them to talk with the younger, yet smartphones rob them of this opportunity.The only way the younger and elder generations can meaningfully interact is that the former put down their smartphones during this holiday and talk with the elderly face to face. And it will also do us a favor. Actually, we won’t be the digital pioneers in 30 years. It is our children that will create and apply the latest technologies, and we, slow to accept new things, will be left to our own devices. If we hope our children will talk with us 30 years later, we need to set a good example for them now.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________