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热点06 应用文(新高考)
四|年|考|情
年份 卷别 命题形式 写作体裁 写作内容 词数要求 分值 难度
2021 全国甲卷 提纲 建议信 为中国传统文化节 100左右 25 中 班会征求意见
全国乙卷 提纲 建议信 学习建议 100左右 25 中
新高考全国卷 提纲 为报刊投稿 庆祝创刊十周年 80左右 15 难
读后续写 记叙文 亲情 150左右 25 中
2020
课标全国卷I 提纲 记叙文 人物介绍 100左右 25 易
课标全国卷Ⅱ 提纲 记叙文 介绍一次活动 100左右 25 易
课标全国卷Ⅲ 提纲 应用文 写邮件请外教帮忙
指导英文短剧 100左右 25 难
2019
课标全国卷I 提纲 应用文 写信中请做中国
画展志愿者 100左右 25 中
课标全国卷Ⅱ 提纲 应用文 写邮件告知
队友比赛信息 100左右 25 中
课标全国卷Ⅲ 提纲 应用文 写邮件邀请英国
朋友参加音乐节 100左右 25 易
2018
课标全国卷I 提纲 应用文 写邮件向新西兰朋友
介绍到中国做客习俗 100左右 25 中
课标全国卷Ⅱ 提纲 应用文 为校宣传栏写一则
观看英文短片的通知 100左右 25 难
课标全国卷Ⅲ 提纲 应用文 写信告知英国朋友
学生体育运动情况 100左右 25 中
“保住基本分,才能得高分”,本句话对于书面表达的应用文写作同样适用。无论是从写作体裁角度,还是从写作内容角度来说,写作首先要确保完成规定的写作任务,写得像模像样,抓牢基本保底分;然后在“完成”的基础上,再润色完善,写得潇潇洒洒,“洋”气十足,得高分甚至创满分。本专题正是基于这一思路展开编写设计。不但通过“写作语料库”的积累让写作“有话可说”,而且通过“亮点技法的点拨”让写作“有话会说”。
九类应用文写作主题的范式建构与语料积累
针对高考常考的9大写作主题进行分类点拨训练, 旨在让考生掌握写作范式, 积累写作素材, 背诵高考范文, 力争应用文创满分。
一 人物或活动描写类
[2020·全国卷Ⅰ改编]你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.
满分作文第一步:“三定”审题 “三段”谋篇
(一)“三定”审题
1.定体裁:本文为人物描写。
2.定人称:本文以第三人称为主。
3.定时态:主要使用一般现在时。
(二)“三段”谋篇
第一段(开篇点题):点名谁是你最爱戴的人及外貌描写;
第二段(2个要点,缺一不可):人物简介;尊敬和爱戴的原因;
第三段(巧妙收尾):再次表达对他/她的尊敬之情。
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.我最尊敬的人是我的物理老师。
(1)The person _____________________________________________________(定语从句)
(2)________________________________________________________________________
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2.是她的友善和责任感让我钦佩她。
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3.她不仅教我们如何获得知识,也教我们如何成为一个好人。
She teaches us ______________________________________________________(not only...but also...)
4.她为我们学生树立了一个好榜样,值得我尊敬。
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________________________________________________________________________(分词作状语)
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
一、人物描写类
(一) 谨记写作范式
引入话题(介绍人物的基本情况,如外貌、年龄等)
人物锚写 具体介绍(包括人物的性格、事迹等)
总结全文(对所介绍的人物进行整体评价)
(二)充盈写作语料库
1.Among the famous historical figures, I find Confucius impressive.
在著名的历史人物中,我觉得孔夫子令人印象深刻。
2.It goes without saying that Confucius has a great effect on the values of later generations.
毋庸置疑,孔子对后世的价值观有很大的影响。
3.[2020·全国卷Ⅰ]Old as Zhong Nanshan is, he fought bravely against COVID-19, making great contributions in the field of medicine.尽管钟南山年事已高,但他勇敢抗击新冠肺炎,在医学领域做出了巨大贡献。
4.Whenever people around get into trouble, she is willing to help them, which makes her respected by all our neighbours. 每当周围的人遇到麻烦,她乐意帮助他们,这使她受到所有邻居的尊敬。
5.She has been highly respected for her wisdom as well as courage by the Chinese people.
她凭借她的智慧和勇气受到中国人民的高度尊敬。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·曲师大附中高三检测]在你成长的过程中, 总有一个人对你的思想和行为产生过重大的影响。请你写一篇短文介绍这个人并向校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.对你的影响;
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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________________________________________________________________________二、活动描写
(一) 谨记写作范式
叙事短文也属于记叙文的写作范畴,文章多以事件为中心,以时间和空间为线索,按事件的发生、发展、结局展开故事。具体写作结构为:
点名故事发生的时间、地点、目的
叙事短文 介绍故事发展的详情
个人感受
(二)充盈写作语料库
活动介绍
1.[2021·四川成都一诊]In order to show artistic achievements of students and develop our school culture, our school successfully held a student art exhibition in our school hall yesterday.为了展示学生们的艺术成就,发扬学校文化,我校昨天在学校礼堂成功举办了一场学生艺术展。
2.[2021·四川成都一诊]First, the schoolmaster gave a speech, and then more than pieces of painting, photography, sculpture, and paper-cut were on show.首先,校长发表了讲话,然后展出了许多绘画、摄影、雕塑和剪纸。
3.[2021·泰安二模]Our school organised a campus chorus contest on Wednesday afternoon, the theme of which is “Love Our Motherland”.我们学校在周三下午组织了一场校园合唱比赛,主题是“爱我们的祖国”。
描写感受
1.[2021·陕西省模拟一]By doing interesting experiments myself, I had lots of fun as well as gaining knowledge.
通过亲自做有趣的实验,我既玩的开心也获得了知识。
2.Through the activity, I'm aware that I'm able to shoulder the responsibility and be stronger and more determined.
通过这次活动,我意识到自己能够承担起责任,变得更加坚强和坚定。
3.There is no denying that the activity is definitely meaningful to us students.
不可否认,这个活动对我们学生来说绝对是有意义的。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·山东日照二模]假定你是李华,上周末你班组织去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)参加志愿服务活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,内容如下:
1.活动时间;
2.活动内容;
3.你的感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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一 人物或活动描写类
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.(1)I respect most is my physics teacher.
(2)Who I respect most is my physics teacher.
2.It's her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her.
3.not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
4.Having set a great example to us students, she fully deserves my respect.
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. And the person I respect most is my physics teacher. She is so patient with each student that we all like her.
It's her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her. When I failed the exam last month and was in low spirits, she patted me gently on the shoulder and gave me great encouragement. She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
Having set a great example to us students, she fully deserves my respect.
参考范文:
The Person Who Influences Me Most
Many people has a great influence on me, but I think no one can compare with my mother.
Working as a civil servant, she works faithfully and devotedly. At the same time, she never puts her family aside. It is my mother who teaches me to be kind , optimistic and persistent. When I come across someone in need, I'm willing to give a helping hand. When I encounter difficulties, I always constantly seek for approaches to solving them.
She is not only my mother but also my life mentor. Indeed, she is just the person affecting me greatly.
参考范文:
Our class went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work last weekend.
Upon arrival, we started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. After that, we shared our fruits with the elderly people and chatted with them. The elderly people thanked us for our kindness, saying they had such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
I felt very happy as I brought joy to the elderly people and enriched my campus life as well.
二 演讲稿、新闻报道
[2021·浙江6月卷]昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.观展感受;
3.推荐观展。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分作文第一步:“五定”审题 “三段”谋篇
定体裁
定人称
定时态
定要点、定结构
宣传稿
第一人称
一般现在时、一般过去时
三段谋篇
第一段
点明写信目的
第二段
介绍画展情况及观展感受
第三段
推荐观展及表达祝愿
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.昨天我和朋友参观了我们学校举办的学生国画展览。
(1)Yesterday my friends and I __________________________________. It was held by our school.
(2)高级句式:Yesterday my friends and I visited the students' Chinese painting exhibition held by our school. (利用分词作定语升级)
2.据我所知,这次展览将在学校美术馆持续一个月。
____________________________________ in the school art gallery.
3.最让我高兴的是,他们的艺术天赋是极其惊人的。 (主语从句)
__________________________________ their artistic talent is extremely shocking.
4.我强烈呼吁我们学校的所有学生,他们应该利用他们的业余时间仔细品尝这些美妙的作品。
(1)I strongly ____________________________________________ to taste these wonderful works carefully.
(2)(高频短语)I strongly ____________________________________________________.
5.我坚信每个人都会得到意想不到的快乐。
(1)I believe every one is sure to receive an unexpected joy.
(2)(同位语从句)____________________________________________________
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
一、演讲稿
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、宣传稿、竞选稿等,该文体通常要有吸引力,明确发言的对象。演讲稿在语言使用上一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。具体写作结构为:
(一) 谨记写作范式
称呼语:最常用的是 ladies and gentlemen,也可根据情况选用my dear friends, hello,everyone 等
演讲稿 具体内容:开门见山,提出主题,对主题要进行清楚、客观内容的论述,最后简明扼要地总结发言
结尾: 最常用的结尾是 Thank you for your listening.
(二)充盈写作语料库
点名目的
1.[2021·浙江卷1月]I'm Li Hua. I'm honored to be here to extend a warm welcome to you on behalf of our school.
我是李华。我很荣幸能在这里代表我们学校向你们表示热烈的欢迎。
2.[2021·天津3月卷满分作文]As a Chinese who is particularly interested in travelling, I would like to introduce my favorite city—Beijing.作为一个对旅游特别感兴趣的中国人,我想向你介绍我最喜欢的城市——北京。
3.[2021·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文]Online learning has become an important way to learn recently. However, online learning has both advantages and disadvantages.网络学习已经成为一种重要的学习方式。 然而,在线学习有优点也有缺点。
介绍基本情况
1.[2021·天津3月卷满分作文]Firstly, Beijing is the capital of China. Besides, Beijing is not only the political center but also the economic center of our country. More importantly,it is the famous tourist spots of Beijing that attract a large number of tourists from all over the world every year.首先,北京是中国的首都。 此外,北京不仅是我国的政治中心,也是我国的经济中心。 更重要的是,北京的著名旅游景点每年都吸引着大量来自世界各地的游客。
2.[2021·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文]Its advantages are obvious. It allows us to learn at any time wherever we are. Besides, we can absorb all kinds of resources to learn more efficiently.它的优点是显而易见的。 它让我们可以随时随地学习。 此外,我们可以吸收各种资源来更有效地学习。
3.[2021·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文]However, its disadvantages cannot be ignored. Staring at the screen is harmful to our eyes. Worse still, we don't have many opportunities to interact with our teachers and classmates.
然而,它的缺点也不容忽视。 盯着屏幕对我们的眼睛有害。 更糟糕的是,我们没有很多机会与老师和同学互动。
4.[2021·鹰潭市一模]It is known to all that good living habits are important to our physical and mental health.
众所周知,良好的生活习惯对我们的身体和心理健康很重要。
总结感想和祝愿
1.[2021·河北邯郸高三第二次模拟]In conclusion, to realize a dream is not that easy, so we must study hard to fulfill our dreams.总之,实现梦想不是那么容易的,所以我们必须努力学习来实现我们的梦想。
2.[2021·南通市5月考前练习]The earth is our common home. Let's take action to build a better one for all of us!
地球是我们共同的家园。 让我们采取行动,为我们所有人建立一个更好的世界!
3.[2021·鹰潭市一模]Thank you for your listening (to my speech). 感谢大家倾听我的演讲。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·江苏省南通市考前练习]假定你是李华。6月5日是世界环境日 (World Environment Day),你校将开展一次以“Building a better home”为题的演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.世界环境日的宗旨;
2.你的做法;
3.你的呼吁。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
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二、新闻报道
(一) 谨记写作范式
新闻报道,就是对新近发生的事实的报道。新闻是对客观事实进行报道而形成的信息,反映在新闻信息中的内容必须具有真实性和可传达性,即用事实说话。具体写作结构为:
标题∶新闻的题目
新闻报道 导语∶揭示出新闻的核心内容主体∶对导语内容进一步展开和阐释
结语∶对全文内容作概括性总结
(二)充盈写作语料库
1.[2021·芜湖市教学质量检测]To relieve students' pressure from heavy study and inspire them to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a hiking activity on May Day.
为了减轻学生繁重的学习压力,鼓励他们多做户外运动,我们学校在五一组织了一次徒步旅行活动。
2.[2021·厦门外国语学校第五次适应性考试]To encourage students to take an interest in space exploration, this year's theme of our annual school Science Festival was “Space”.
为了鼓励学生对太空探索的兴趣,今年我们一年一度的学校科学节的主题是“太空”。
3.[2021·厦门外国语学校第五次适应性考试]On Monday afternoon, we attended a lecture about whether life can exist on other planets.星期一下午,我们参加了一场关于是否有生命存在于其他星球的讲座。
4.[2021·厦门外国语学校第五次适应性考试]In Thursday's Science Workshop, students tried different experiments with great interest.
在周四的科学研讨会,学生们非常有兴趣地尝试了不同的实验。
5.[2021·厦门外国语学校第五次适应性考试]On Friday afternoon, every class decorated their classroom and designed activities according to the theme of space.
周五下午,每个班级都根据太空的主题布置教室,设计活动。
6.[2021·厦门外国语学校第五次适应性考试]The festival attracted much interest from students and everyone is looking forward to next year's Science Festival.这个节日吸引了很多学生的兴趣,每个人都期待着明年的科学节。
7.[2020·新高考全国卷Ⅰ满分作文]In order to enrich our campus life, our school organized a 5km cross-country running race last Sunday.
为了丰富我们的校园生活,我校于上周日组织了一场5公里越野跑比赛。
8.[2021·菏泽一模]It was through this activity that we fully realized that the awareness of respecting the old should be raised.
正是通过这次活动,我们充分认识到应该提高尊老意识。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·江苏省常熟中学三模]假如你是李华,上星期四你班举行了一个关于感恩父母的主题班会。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括。
1.班会目的;
2.班会过程;
3.班会反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Theme Class Meeting
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二 演讲稿、新闻报道
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.(1)visited the students' Chinese painting exhibition
2.As far as I know this exhibition will last for a month
3.What pleases me most is that
4.(1)call on all the students in our school to make use of their spare time
(2)appeal to all the students in our school to make use of their spare time to taste these wonderful works carefully
5.(2)I hold the firm belief that every one is bound to receive an unexpected joy.
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
Yesterday my friends and I visited the students' Chinese painting exhibition held by our school.
As far as I know, this exhibition will last for a month in the school art gallery. What pleases me most was that their artistic talent was extremely shocking. Therefore, I strongly appeal to all the students to make use of their spare time to taste these wonderful works carefully.
I highly recommend that you should spare some time to visit the students' Chinese painting exhibition . I hold the firm belief that every one is bound to receive an unexpected joy.
参考范文:
Dear teachers and fellow students,
World Environment Day is marked on June 5 every year, which aims to encourage awareness and action for the protection of the environment.
To answer its call, I go to school by bike or on foot instead of taking the bus. At home I turn off the tap while brushing my teeth. Besides, I often donate the used textbooks to the students of lower grades. I believe all these steps taken can help lower my impact on the environment.
The earth is our common home. Let's take action to build a better one for all of us!
That's all. Thank you!
参考范文:
A Theme Class Meeting
To enhance the students' awareness of gratitude, Class 5 Senior 3 held a theme class meeting on being grateful to our parents last Thursday.
The class meeting, composed of three parts, began with a touching video about a girl tending her sick mother. After that, we talked about the topic freely in groups. Finally, some students shared their personal feelings and experiences in front of the class, which impressed us deeply.
Through the class meeting, not only do we better understand our parents' hardships in raising us, but also we're determined to repay them with practical actions.
三 通知 & 告知
[2021·沈阳市质量监测三]假设你是国际学校学生会主席李华,你校决定本周五在教学楼举行一次紧急疏散演练(emergency evacuation drill),请用英语写一则书面通知,内容包括:
1.演练目的;
2.具体安排;
3.注意事项。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.请按如下格式作答。
NOTICE
Student Union
满分作文第一步:“五定”审题 “三段”谋篇
定体裁
定人称
定时态
定要点、定结构
通知
第三人称、第二人称
一般现在时、一般将来时
三段谋篇
第一段
点明演练目的
第二段
介绍具体安排及注意事项
第三段
表达希望
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.为了更好地做好面对危险的准备,学生会打算在本周五下午3点在我们的教学楼组织一次紧急疏散演习。(不定式作目的状语)
________________________________, the Student Union intend to organize an emergency evacuation drill at 3 p.m. this Friday in our teaching building.
2.我们将为参与者安排许多实践活动。
We will ________________________________ for the participants.
3.你不仅可以了解火灾和其他紧急情况下的疏散路线,还可以接受急救培训。
(1)You can learn about the evacuation routes in case of fire. You can also get trained in first aid.
(2)____________________________________________. (用not only...but also合并,升级为倒装句型)
4.积极的态度,清晰的头脑和生存技能将拯救你的生命,我们保证你不会感到失望。
Positive attitude, clear mind and survival skills will save your life and ______________________________.
5.不要错过这个机会,一定要准时参加我们的演习。
________________________________________________________________________.
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
一、通知
通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等情况时使用的一种应用文体,通常分为口头通知和书面通知两种。具体写作结构为:
(一) 谨记写作范式
明确通知形式∶口头通知/书面通知
通知 通知内容∶时间、地点、人物、事由、注意事项等
结束语
(二)充盈写作语料库
吸引阅卷人开头句
1.Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
女士们先生们,请大家注意一下?我要宣布一件事。
2.Attention, please. I have something important to tell you.
请注意。我有重要的事要告诉你。
吸引阅卷人篇中句
1.[2021·四川内江市三模]We regret to inform you that we have to put off the sports meeting to be held this Friday for foreign students.我们很遗憾地通知你,我们不得不推迟本周五举行的外国学生运动会。
2.As arranged, the film is to be shown in the school hall from 2:00 to 3:00 this Friday afternoon.根据安排,这部电影将于本周五下午2点到3点在学校大厅上映。
吸引阅卷人结尾句
1.Please attend it on time and don't be late.
请按时参加,不要迟到。
2.Hopefully, you can send your advice or opinions to us by the school QQ or WeChat at your earliest convenience.
希望您可以在方便的时候通过学校QQ或微信发送您的建议或意见给我们。
3.[2021·烟台高三模拟]Everyone is welcome to take part in it.欢迎所有人参加。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·青岛市高三自主检测]假定你是李华,你校将在端午节期间组织一次去敬老院的志愿者活动。请用英语给你校外国留学生写一个通知,内容包括:
1.活动时间、地点;
2.活动内容。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________二、告知
告知分为两类:
1.告知某人有某事将要发生;
2.回复某人关于某事的询问。
(一) 谨记写作范式
说明写信目的,告知某人某事
告知信 相关事宜
期盼回复
(二)充盈写作语料库
吸引阅卷人开头句
1.[2021·广东佛山质检]I'm writing to inform you of the school's class schedule adjustment during the coming Labor Day holiday.
在即将到来的五一假期,我写信通知您学校的课表调整。
2.Here is a piece of good news!/I have a piece of good news to tell you!
这里有一条好消息!/我有一条好消息要告诉你!
吸引阅卷人篇中句
1.[2021·广东佛山质检]Please remember to read the attached file and make sure you know about the new class arrangement in advance.
请记得阅读附件,并确保您提前知道新的上课安排。
2.[2021·呼和浩特市第一次调研]What's more, inspired by the activity, students will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland.
更重要的是,在活动的启发下,学生们将表达对国家的热爱,以及努力学习、为祖国做出贡献的决心。
吸引阅卷人结尾句
1.If you want to know anything else, please don't hesitate to contact me.如果你还想知道什么,请不要犹豫与我联系。
2.Hopefully, our efforts will pay off in the end.
希望我们的努力最终会有回报。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·华师附中综合测试]假定你是校足球队队长李华。你校将与到访的国际学校足球队进行一场友谊赛(a friendly game),请写封邮件告知对方球队队长Jim相关的安排。内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.相关安排(时间、地点,赛后安排等);
3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
三 通知 & 告知
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.In order to get better prepared in face of danger
2.arrange a variety of practical activities
3.(2)Not only can you learn about the evacuation routes in case of fire and other emergencies, but also you can get trained in first aid
4.we promise you will not feel disappointed
5.Don't miss the chance and be sure to be punctual for our drill
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
NOTICE
In order to get better prepared in face of danger, the Student Union intends to organize an emergency evacuation drill at 3 p.m. this Friday in our teaching building.
We will arrange many practical activities for the participants. Not only can you learn about the evacuation routes in case of fire and other emergencies, but also you can get trained in first aid. Positive attitude, clear mind and survival skills will save your life and we promise you will not feel disappointed. Please join us.
Don't miss the chance and be sure to be punctual for our drill.
Student Union
参考范文:
Notice
I am writing to tell you that there will be a volunteer activity held by our school from 8.am to 3.pm during the Dragon-Boat Festival. Happiness Nursing Home which is next to our school is our destination.
After arriving there, we will clean the windows and sweep the floor for them. Then some of us will perform activities for them,such as singing songs and dancing. Some of us will read newspaper for them. From this meaningful activity,we will know that we should treat our own grandparents more kindly.
Anyone who is interested in it will be welcomed.
参考范文:
Dear Jim,
As captain of our school football team, I'm delighted to learn you're coming to play a friendly game against us. I'd like to inform you of some relevant information.
The match will be held on June 10 at our school stadium, followed up with a party, where we can interact with each other and improve our understanding of each other. I believe the day will be a cross-cultural feast, where our players can enjoy the game to the fullest and develop sportsmanship.
Looking forward to our competition and cooperation. For any further information, please don't hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
四 请求帮助 & 表达祝贺
[2020·全国卷Ⅲ改编]假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1.剧情简介;
2.指导内容;
3.商定时间、地点。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.结束语已为你写好。
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
满分作文第一步:“三定”审题 “三段”谋篇
(一)“三定”审题
1.定体裁:本文为求助信。
2.定人称:本文以第一人称为主。
3.定时态:主要使用一般现在时。
(二)“三段”谋篇
第一段(开篇点题):点名写信目的;
第二段(3个要点,缺一不可):剧情简介;指导内容;商定时间和地点;
第三段(巧妙收尾):表达期待。
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.我写信是想请您指导一部根据我们的一篇课文改编的短剧。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________(高频词汇+定语从句+被动语态)
2.这篇课文讲述了一个名叫黛西的女孩的故事,她和一些野生动物交谈,并下定决心帮助保护环境。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________(非谓语动词作定语+定语从句)
3.如果您方便的话,我们可以在本周日早上8点在我们学校的艺术大厅见面吗?
(1)Could we meet in our school art hall at 8:00 am this Sunday ________________________?(高频词汇)
(2)Could we meet in our school art hall at 8:00 am this Sunday ________________________?(if条件状语从句)
4.我们真诚地希望你能帮我们这个忙,帮助我们提高演技。
We sincerely hope you can __________________________________________.(词汇不重,彰显水准)
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
一、请求帮助
求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型,因此整篇文章应用一般现在时。
(一) 谨记写作范式
开门见山表明求助意图(针对陌生对象需自我介绍)
求助信 求助事由
期盼回复并表示感谢
(二)充盈写作语料库
吸引阅卷人开头句
1.The reason why I am writing to you is that I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now. 我给你写信的原因是我和我的朋友露西吵架了,我现在需要你的帮助。
2.[2021·1月新高考八省联考]An English Poetry Reading Contest will be held next weekend in our school. I am eager to have a try, so I'm writing to turn to you for help.
下周末我们学校将举行一场英语诗歌朗诵比赛。我渴望尝试一下,所以我写信向你寻求帮助。
吸引阅卷人篇中句
1.[2021·1月新高考八省联考]To start with, would you please be so kind to give me some recommendations on which poem to choose?首先,你能给我推荐一首诗吗?
2.[2021·1月新高考八省联考]Besides, what I need are the skills of recitation, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my performance.此外,我需要的是朗诵技巧,包括发音和语调,这将使我的表现更完美。
吸引阅卷人结尾句
1.I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour and spare some time to polish my application letter and resume.
如果您能帮我一个忙,抽出时间来润色我的求职信和简历,我将不胜感激。
2.I'm eager for your timely help./I'm eager to get your timely help.我渴望得到你的及时帮助。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·河北省张家口市高考二模]假定你是李华,你校即将举办“英文读书月”活动——阅读并写读书笔记。请你给外教Alex写一封邮件求助,内容包括:
1.介绍活动内容;
2.请他推荐英文书;
3.请教如何写读书笔记。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Alex,
I'm writing to ask for your help._______________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、表达祝贺
祝贺信是向对方表示祝贺的信件,一般用于对方有什么喜事或取得了什么成绩,以及节日寿宴等。祝贺信是人们情感交流的一种方式,写祝贺信可以使亲戚朋友同事之间加强联系, 增进了解,彼此关心。
(一) 谨记写作范式
写信目的∶表示祝贺,为之高兴
祝贺信 祝贺缘由∶劳有所获
寄予期望∶取得更大成就
(二)充盈写作语料库
吸引阅卷人开头句
1.I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of Chinese Bridge Chinese Composition Competition.
得知你获得汉语桥中文作文比赛一等奖,我写信向你表示最衷心的祝贺。
2.Congratulations on your winning the prize in the photo taking competition with the title of Charming School which was held last week.
祝贺你在上周举行的“魅力学校”摄影比赛中获奖。
吸引阅卷人篇中句
1.I know you have worked very hard in the past years, so I'm not a bit surprised at your remarkable achievement.
我知道你在过去几年里工作很努力,所以我对你的非凡成就一点也不感到惊讶。
2.It's the great efforts which you have made that result in this excellent achievement. The prize is a reward you deserve.
正是你所付出的巨大努力才使你取得了这一卓越的成就。你受到奖励是当之无愧的。
吸引阅卷人结尾句
1.Congratulations to you again from the bottom of my heart!
再次向你表示衷心的祝贺!
2.Please accept my warmest congratulations and the best wishes for you!请接受我最热烈的祝贺和最好的祝愿!
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·金华十校模拟]假定你是李华,你的好友Steven即将代表学校参加全市留学生中文演讲比赛,写信向你求助。请你给他回一封信,内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.提供建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
四 请求帮助 & 表达祝贺
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.I'm writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from one of our texts.
2.The text tells a story about a girl named Daisy, who talks with some wild animals and makes up her mind to help protect the environment.
3.(1)at your earliest convenience
(2)if it is convenient for you
4.do us a favour and help improve our performance
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
Dear Miss Evans,
I'm writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from one of our texts.
The text tells a story about a girl named Daisy, who makes up her mind to help protect the environment.I wonder if you can give us some expert guidance on dialogue between characters, plot, setting and so on. Could we meet in our school art hall at 8:00 am this Sunday if it is convenient for you? We sincerely hope you can do us a favour and help improve our performance.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Alex,
I'm writing to ask for your help. Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read an English book and take notes.
I hope you can recommend an English book to me. Considering I'm not an advanced English learner, the book needs to be suitable for my level. It will be better if the book is about the life of teenagers. Meanwhile, I also feel confused about taking notes. Could you offer me some guidance?
I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Steven,
I'm overjoyed to hear that you will represent our school to be engaged in the city's Chinese speech contest for overseas students. Congratulations! And I am here willing to offer some relevant suggestions.
First, you can seek Chinese teachers' professional guidance to reinforce your language proficiency and accuracy. Second, watch videos of previous speech contests, which will help better your speech skills, like the application of gestures. Additionally, staying self-assured is what it takes to guarantee your performance and bring out the best in you.
I genuinely hope that your unremitting effort will pay off ultimately.
Yours,
Li Hua
Li Hua
五 活动邀请 & 表达感谢
[2019·全国卷Ⅲ改编]假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:
1.时间;
2.活动安排;
3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分作文第一步:“五定”审题 “三段”谋篇
定体裁
定人称
定时态
定要点、定结构
邀请信
第一人称、
第三人称
一般现在时、一般将来时
三段谋篇
第一段开篇点题
发出邀请
第二段(3个要点,缺一不可)
1.介绍音乐节时间
2.介绍音乐节活动安排
3.介绍音乐节相关细节
尾段(巧妙收尾)
欢迎Allen参加音乐节并表演节目
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.更重要的是,一些著名的中国音乐家将现身表演。
(1)(高级词汇+正确时态)More importantly,__________________________________.
(2)高级句式(利用主语从句+表语从句升级)________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
2.我知道你对中国音乐很着迷,如果你能来,我相信你一定会玩得很开心。
(1)(高级词汇+宾语从句+状语从句)I know __________________________________________________________________,so I'm sure __________________________________________________________________.
(2)高级句式(利用非谓语动词作状语升级)________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
一、邀请信
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,在写作时,语气要热情真挚,不要强人所难。
(一) 谨记写作范式
表明写作意图,向某人发出邀请
邀请信 说明邀请的具体原因和邀请的内容
期待对方接受邀请,并表示感谢
(二)充盈写作语料库
吸引阅卷人开头句
1.[2021·湖北黄冈4月调研] There's a live concert this Saturday evening at Xinhua Concert Hall. I'm writing to invite you to go with me.本周六晚上在新华音乐厅有一场现场音乐会。我写信是想邀请你和我一起去。
2.[2021·山东济南模拟]I'm Li Hua,chairman of the Students' Union. It's my great honour to invite you to give a speech on English original reading.我是学生会主席李华。很荣幸邀请您来做一个关于英语原著阅读的演讲。
3.[2021·邯郸市三模]I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 1. On behalf of our class, I'm writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony.我是一班班长李华。我代表我们班写信邀请你参加我们的毕业典礼。
吸引阅卷人篇中句
1.Here are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.
这次活动的一些细节如下。
2.[2021·南宁市第一次适应性测试]The English Club of our school is going to hold the activity from 3:00 pm to 5:00 pm this Friday in the lecture hall of our school, whose theme is “ I love Chinese Calligraphy”.
英语俱乐部将于本周五下午3点到5点在我们学校的报告厅举办活动,其主题是“我爱中国书法”。
吸引阅卷人结尾句
1.I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration at your early convenience.
如果你能尽早在你方便时考虑我的邀请,我将不胜感激。
2.I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.
我想在那里见到你,请尽快告诉我你的决定。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·山东省烟台市三模]假如你是李华, 中国传统佳节“端午节”即将到来, 你校计划下周举办以“品味鲜香粽子, 感悟端午文化”为主题的一系列活动, 请给你校外教Elizabeth写一封电子邮件, 邀请她参加活动。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇: 端午节Dragon Boat Festival;
粽子rice dumpling
Dear Elizabeth,
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
二、表达感谢
吸引阅卷人开头句
1.I'm Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Middle School. I'm writing to express our thanks to you on behalf of my whole class.我是李华,来自新华中学的一名学生。我写这封信是代表全班向您表示感谢。
2.I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in Denmark, without which I wouldn't have enjoyed it so much.我写信表达你对我在丹麦期间的帮助与关心的感谢,没有你的帮助和关心,我不会玩得那么开心。
吸引阅卷人篇中句
1.Honestly speaking, it's so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills.诚实地说,你给我上了一堂实际有效的学习技能课,真是太好了。
2.Under your guidance, I have made great progress in English and therefore, I have kept up with my classmates.
在您的指导下,我的英语取得了很大的进步,因此,我跟上了我的同学。
吸引阅卷人结尾句
1.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for all you did for me.
我衷心感谢你为我做的一切。
2.I sincerely express my thanks to you for your help/ advice again. 我再次真诚地感谢您的帮助/建议。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·浙江省绍兴市二模]假定你是李华,你班外教Smith先生即将回国。为感谢他在过去一年中所给予的帮助,你班将举行一次告别班会。请代表班级写一篇感谢信,内容包括:
1.表示道别;
2.感谢帮助;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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五 活动邀请 & 表达感谢
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.(1)some famous Chinese musicians will show up to perform
(2)What is more important is that some famous Chinese musicians will show up to perform
2.(1)you are crazy about Chinese music you will have fun if you can come
(2)Knowing you are crazy about Chinese music,I'm sure you will have fun if you can come
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
Dear Allen,
How is everything going? I'm glad to invite you to a music festival to be held next Sunday morning in the school hall.
The music festival will last four hours in total and have many wonderful performances, including some traditional music pieces . Additionally,some traditional Chinese dances will be performed by students. What's more important is that some famous Chinese musicians will show up to perform. Knowing you're crazy about Chinese music, I'm sure you will have fun if you can come.
Looking forward to your coming and your wonderful performances.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Elizabeth,
Another Chinese traditional festival—Dragon Boat Festival is on the way. It is a very important festival for Chinese. Our school will hold a series of activities whose theme is “Tasting fresh rice dumplings and feeling Dragon Boat Festival culture”. All the activities will be attractive, including poem competition, studying to make rice dumplings. After making rice dumplings, we can enjoy the fruits of our labor. All the students are very excited about the activities to be held. I think you will be interested too.
Looking forward to your participation in them.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I feel greatly honored to be here and extend our heartfelt respect and thanks to you on behalf of my fellow students. How I wish that you could continue to be with us.
In the past year, we have benefited much from your wonderful work. We'll always cherish the wise guidance and the encouraging smiles you offered when we were discouraged. Meanwhile, your selflessness, optimism and kindness will be engraved in our memory and inspire us forward.
Thank you again. Wish you a pleasant journey home and all the best for the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
六 提出建议 & 咨询请教
[2021·景德镇市高三第三次质检]假定你是李华,你的美国交流生朋友Lucy发邮件给你,希望你能帮助她使用筷子,因为她要参加学校为交流生举办的比赛活动。请你给她发送一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表达理解和安慰;
2.提出建议;
3.表示祝福。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分作文第一步:“五定”审题 “三段”谋篇
定体裁
定人称
定时态
定要点、定结构
建议信
第一、二
人称为主
一般现在时、一般将来时
三段谋篇
第一段
点名写信目的、提出建议
第二段
建议的具体内容
第三段
表达祝愿
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.我很高兴得知你们将参加我校为交换生举办的关于中国文化知识的比赛。
(1)I'm very happy to know that you will compete in a contest about the Chinese culture for you exchange students. It will be held by our school.
(2)高频词汇/ 高级句式:I'm ________________ to know that you will ________________ a contest about the Chinese culture ________________ for you exchange students.(不定式作定语升级)
2.对于你这样的初学者来说可能有点困难,但我相信你在我的指导下会表现得很好。
(1)It may be a little difficult for the beginners like you. I believe you can perform well under my guidance.
(2)________________________________, I believe you can perform well under my guidance. (升级为让步状语从句)
3.首先,我们通常用右手拿筷子,这样更方便拿起食物。(it作形式主语,非限制性定语从句)
To begin with, __________________________________.
4.使用筷子时,你最好注意手指的协调性。(省略句)
You'd better pay attention to the coordination of your fingers ____________________________________.
5.我强烈建议你尽可能多地练习使用筷子。
(1)I strongly suggest that you should practice using chopsticks as much as possible.
(2)________________________________, I strongly ________________ that you can practice using chopsticks as much as possible.(增加名言,词汇升级)
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
一、建议信
建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确,具有合理性和说服力。
具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least 等依次陈述建议。
(一) 谨记写作范式
表明写作目的是提出建议
建议信 具体的建议及理由
指出采纳建议的好处,表达愿望
(二)充盈写作语料库
吸引阅卷人开头句
1.[2021·陕西省西安中学高三模拟]I'm writing to give you some tips/suggestions on how to get along well with your parents.
我写信是想给你一些关于如何与父母和睦相处的建议。
2.[2021·湖北八校联考]Knowing that you are really into Chinese culture, I'm writing to advise you to participate in a Chinese Reading Contest.得知你对中国文化很感兴趣,我写信建议你参加中文阅读比赛。
吸引阅卷人篇中句
1.[2021·湖北八校联考]First of all, by reading Chinese poems or essays, you can improve your knowledge of Chinese culture.首先,通过阅读中国诗歌或散文,你可以提高你的中国文化知识。
2.What's more, I am convinced that reading Chinese poems or essays will also be great fun and beneficial to your language learning. 更重要的是,我相信阅读中国诗歌或散文也会很有趣,对你的语言学习有益。
3.Last but not least, having a face-to-face talk with your parents peacefully and listening patiently is a better choice.
最后但同等重要的是,心平气和地与父母面谈并耐心地倾听是一个更好的选择。
吸引阅卷人结尾句
1.I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you./I hope you will find these suggestions useful.我希望我的建议对你有益。/我希望你认为这些建议有帮助。
2.Personally/In my opinion/As far as I'm concerned,it would be wise to take the following actions.
在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·浙江省五校联考]假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Leo准备来中国学习,他来信向你咨询有关学习汉语的建议。
请用英语给他写一封回信。内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.提出建议;
3.表达期望。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________
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二、咨询请教
咨询信,又称询问信,是写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解详细信息的信件。
(一) 谨记写作范式
说明自己的计划或目的,也就是询问信息的原因
咨询信 征询具体信息
期待回复并表示感谢
(二)充盈写作语料库
吸引阅卷人开头句
1.[2021·湖北武汉五月供题]I'm writing to you to ask about how you spent your May Day holiday.
我写信给你是想咨询你是如何度过五一假期的。
2.I'm more than delighted to join in a poetry recitation competition to be held in our school. But I feel puzzled about how to make a good preparation for it. So I'm writing to consult you about something relevant to it.
我非常高兴参加在我们学校举行的诗歌朗诵比赛。但如何做好准备,我感到困惑。所以我写信是想咨询您一些与之相关的事情。
吸引阅卷人篇中句
1.First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?
首先,课程什么时候开始,每周有多少课时?
2.As for the money you charge, I'm wondering if it covers the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? 关于你收取的费用,我想知道它是否包含了参观所列景点的入场费?
吸引阅卷人结尾句
1.I'm looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. 我期待着尽快收到您的来信。
2.I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. 如果您能在方便的时候尽早回复,我将不胜感激。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·秦皇岛高三质检]假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Terry一行人要来你市体验元宵节,她请你帮他们预订酒店。请你给他回复一封电子邮件,要点如下:
1.表示欢迎;
2.询问到达时间;
3.询问具体要求(价位、房间数等)。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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六 提出建议 & 咨询请教
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.(2)more than delighted participate in to be held by our school
2.(2)Although it may be a little difficult for the beginners like you
3.it is common that we hold the chopsticks in the right hand, which is more convenient to pick up the food
4.while using chopsticks
5.As the old saying goes that practice makes perfect recommend
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
Dear Lucy,
I'm delighted to know that you will participate in a contest about the Chinese culture to be held for exchange students. Although it may be a little difficult for you, I believe you can perform well under my guidance. My suggestions are as follows:
To begin with, it is common that we hold the chopsticks in the right hand, which is more convenient to pick up the food. What’s more, as the old saying goes that practice makes perfect, I strongly suggest that you can practice using chopsticks as much as possible.
I wish you a good result in the competition.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Leo,
Delighted to know that you are coming to study in China, I am writing this to discuss with you on how to learn Chinese.
First, it's essential to enlarge your vocabulary to overcome your reading difficulties. You should also take any opportunity to communicate in Chinese. Plus, getting to know the culture and history of China will help you learn Chinese better and increase your interest in learning this language.
I hope my suggestions are helpful to you and feel free to drop me a line if you have any other questions.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Terry,
I'm delighted to learn that you will taste the Lantern Festival in our city. Please give me some detailed information about your schedule, so I can reserve a hotel for you in advance.
Firstly, when will your flight arrive at the airport? Besides,prices of a hotel room range from $399 to $999,so which kind of rooms do you prefer?And more importantly,how many rooms do you exactly need?Only if I figure out all of the questions can I make reservations for you.
Looking forward to your early coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
七 申请 & 推荐
[2019·全国卷Ⅰ改编]假定你是李华,暑假期间要去伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.结束语已为你写好。
Yours,
Li Hua
满分作文第一步:“三定”审题 “三段”谋篇
(一)“三定”审题
1.定体裁:本文为申请信。
2.定人称:本文以第一人称为主。
3.定时态:主要使用一般现在时。
(二)“三段”谋篇
第一段(开篇点题):介绍写信的目的;
第二段(2个要点,缺一不可):介绍个人优势及能做的事情;
第三段(巧妙收尾):表达期待。
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.得知贵画廊将举办中国画展,我想为画展做一些义务工作。
________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________________________(非谓语作状语)
2.我精通英语;因此,向国际友人介绍一切对我来说是小菜一碟。
________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________________________(高频词汇+It is+n. for sb. to do sth.)
3.我的目标是让中国走向世界,让世界了解中国。
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________________________________________________________________________(动词不定式作表语)
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
一、申请
申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请等。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点。
(一) 谨记写作范式
点名写信目的,自我介绍,点出信息来源
申请信 详述个人优势
表达感谢,简述获准后的打算,期盼批准
(二)充盈写作语料库
吸引阅卷人开头句
1.[2021·河北省高三模拟]I am Li Hua, a student in Class 2, Grade 3. Having heard that the school's English newspaper is recruiting part-time reporters, I'm writing to apply for the position.我叫李华,是三年级二班的学生。听说学校的英文报招聘兼职记者,我写信申请这个职位。
2.[2021·烟台模拟]My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games. So I am writing to apply to be a volunteer.我叫李华。我想成为 2022 年北京-张家口冬奥会的志愿者。
吸引阅卷人篇中句
1.[2021·山东省日照市5月校际联考]First of all, I'm willing to provide service for the public. The International Tourism Fair is such an important event to be held in our city. I feel honored if I have a chance to do voluntary work for the guests from all over the world.
国际旅游博览会是我市举办的一项重要活动。如果有机会为来自世界各地的客人服务,我会感到很荣幸。
2.[2021·山东省日照市5月校际联考]Secondly, I speak English fluently, which enables me to communicate well with foreigners. Last but not least, I have the experience of doing voluntary work.其次,我会说一口流利的英语,这使我能够很好地与外国人交流。最后但同等重要的是,我有从事志愿工作的经验。
吸引阅卷人结尾句
1.[2021·山东省日照市5月校际联考]I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I'm looking forward to your early reply. 如果您考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激,我期待着您的早日回复。
2.I would be very grateful if you could offer me a chance to be a volunteer.
如果你能给我一次当志愿者的机会,我将不胜感激。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·山东省日照市校际联考]假定你是李华, 你所在的城市将举办“国际旅游博览会(the International Tourism Fair)”, 计划招募志愿者, 你希望报名参加。请你用英语写一封申请信, 内容包括:
1.表达意愿;
2.你的优势。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
3.recruitment information招聘信息
________________________________________________________________________
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二、推荐
从推荐者的情况来分,可以分为自荐信和推荐信两种。
(一) 谨记写作范式
自我介绍并点明写信目的
推荐信 做出推荐并说明推荐理由
表达期待(希望提议被接受),并表示感谢
(二)充盈写作语料库
吸引阅卷人开头句
1.[2021·日照检测]I'm so delighted to have received your email, telling me that you intend to attend university in China. I'm writing to recommend Beijing University to you.很高兴收到你的邮件,告诉我你打算去中国上大学。我写信是为了向您推荐北京大学。
2.I'm more than glad/pleased/delighted to learn that you are going to Beijing, and I'd like to offer my recommendation.
得知你要去北京我很高兴,我想向你提一些建议。
吸引阅卷人篇中句
1.[2021·日照检测]Beijing University is one of the top universities in China offering some majors in Chinese culture.
北京大学是中国最顶尖的大学之一,开设了一些中国文化专业。
2.Moreover, Beijing University is located in Beijing, the capital of several dynasties, which has a profound cultural background. 而且,北京大学坐落在几朝古都北京,有着深厚的文化背景。
吸引阅卷人结尾句
1.I do hope you can take my recommendations into account/consideration and make a final decision.
我真希望你能考虑我的建议并做出最后的决定。
2.I truly hope that you can come to Beijing to start your study and I'm looking forward to your arrival.
我真心希望你能来北京开始你的学习,我期待着你的到来。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·潍坊市高考模拟]假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Noah在给你的邮件中说他对中国古代建筑很感兴趣,并打算利用暑假参观一下。请你给他回封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐要参观的建筑;
2.约定参观的时间;
3.提出其他建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________
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七 申请 & 推荐
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.Knowing that your gallery will hold a Chinese painting exhibition, I would like to do some voluntary work for the exhibition.
2.I have a good knowledge of English; as a consequence, it is a piece of cake for me to introduce everything to international friends.
3.My aim is to let China go to the world and let the world understand China.
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
Dear Sir/Madam,
Knowing that your gallery will hold a Chinese painting exhibition,I am writing to apply to do some voluntary work for the exhibition.
To begin with, I have a good knowledge of English. Besides, I would like to introduce Chinese paintings,spread Chinese culture and strengthen world cultural exchanges. My aim is to let China go to the world and let the world understand China. Last but not least, I am kind, patient and always ready to help others.
I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into account. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have seen your recruitment information for volunteers on the newspaper. I’d like to apply to be one.
First of all, I’m willing to provide service for the public. The International Tourism Fair is an important event to be held in our city. I’d feel honored if I have a chance to do voluntary work for the guests from all over the world. Secondly, I speak English fluently, which enables me to communicate well with foreigners. Last but not least, I have the experience of doing voluntary work.
Please take my application into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Noah,
I'm really glad that you take great interest in ancient Chinese architecture.
Millions of ancient buildings have survived in China's history. However, there is no better place to visit than the Forbidden City in Beijing. It served as a royal palace for centuries. Summer is a good time for traveling, so shall we go there on August 1? I believe you'll have a better experience if you know its history. You'd better do some research online.
Please let me know if you need further information.
Yours,
Li Hua
八 道歉 & 倡议
[2021·济宁市高三模拟]假定你是李华,在五一劳动节即将到来之际,你受学生会委托,围绕“培养劳动习惯,提高生活技能”这一主题,为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一封倡议书。内容包括:
1. 倡议的原因和目的;
2. 倡议的具体内容;
3. 发出倡议。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
Students' Union
满分作文第一步:“三定”审题 “三段”谋篇
(一)“三定”审题
1.定体裁:本文为倡议书。
2.定人称:本文以第一人称为主。
3.定时态:主要使用一般现在时。
(二)“三段”谋篇
第一段 点名倡议的原因和目的;
第二段 列举倡议的具体内容;
第三段 (巧妙收尾): 表达希望。
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.总有一天我们会长大,离开父母,独自面对生活的挑战。(非谓语动词作结果状语)
We'll finally grow up someday, ____________________________________.
2.为了应对未来的问题,我们应该养成良好的工作习惯,提高生活技能。(定语从句)
________________________________________, we should develop good working habits and improve our life skills.
3.试着在家里做些家务是很有好处的。 我们每年可以掌握一到两种生活技能。
Trying to do some chores at home ________________. We can ________________________________________.
4.这些技能包括做饭、洗衣服和整理房间。
These skills can __________________________________.
5.与此同时,我们也可以参加一些活动,让我们有真实的工作经验。
①Meanwhile, we'd better join in some activities . They give us real-world work experience.
②Meanwhile, ________________________________________________.(词汇升级/ 升级为定语从句)
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
一、道歉
道歉信是要向对方陈述自己不当行为给对方造成不利影响的歉意,或者无法答应对方不违常理的所托的原因。
(一)谨记写作范式
表明写信意图,对某事表示歉意
道歉信 说明道歉的具体原因
再次表明歉意,请求谅解,并提出补救措施
(二)充盈写作语料库
吸引阅卷人开头句
1.[2021·长沙高三模拟]I'm writing to make an apology to you because I cannot make it to see you off at the airport this Saturday as scheduled.我写这封信的目的是向您道歉,因为我本周六不能如期到机场给您送行。
2.I would like to offer my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday.
我非常抱歉本周六不能教你制作中国结了。
吸引阅卷人篇中句
1.[2021·长沙高三模拟]The reason why I can't get away is that I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend.我不能离开的原因是我要帮助准备本周末举行的英语演讲比赛。
2.I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.我刚发现那天下午我要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这个变动不会给您带来太多麻烦。
吸引阅卷人结尾句
1.Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.
对于我的缺席给您带来的不便,我再次表示歉意。
2.[2021·长沙高三模拟]I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand my situation. Wish you a safe and happy journey!
我真诚地希望你能接受我的道歉,理解我的处境。祝您旅途平安快乐!
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·长沙高三模拟]假定你是李华,你的英国朋友David本周六即将结束在中国的旅行,乘飞机返回英国,你因有事无法按原定计划去机场为他送行,只好写信向他道歉,内容如下:
1.表达歉意;
2.说明不能送行的原因。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
二、倡议
倡议书属于应用文的一种,是为倡议或是发起某项活动而写的号召性的公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。
(一)谨记写作范式
点名发出倡议的背景和目的
倡议书 列举倡议的具体内容
表明倡议者的决心和希望
(二)充盈写作语料库
吸引阅卷人开头句
1.[2021·内蒙古赤峰市3月模拟]I am writing to call on everyone to move against wasting food and take an active part in saving food.
我写信呼吁大家反对浪费食物,积极参与节约食物。
2.[2021·广东省测试二]On behalf of the Students' Union, I am writing to call on everyone to take part in our summer program named Care for the Aged.我代表学生会写信呼吁大家参加我们名为“关爱老人”的暑期项目。
吸引阅卷人篇中句
1.[2021·湖北武汉三月质检]To meet the challenges of the senior year, it's high time that we should take action to say no to the unhealthy lifestyle.为了迎接高中的挑战,现在是我们采取行动拒绝不健康生活方式的时候了。
2.[2021·湖北武汉三月质检]We are supposed to go to bed early and get up early and take meals regularly and slowly enough.我们应该早睡早起,定时进餐,细嚼慢咽。
吸引阅卷人结尾句
1.Let's join our hands and take action immediately.
让我们携起手来,立即采取行动。
2.[2021·内蒙古赤峰市3月模拟]I am convinced that, with our joint efforts, the happening of wasting food will disappear.
我深信,在我们的共同努力下,浪费食物的现象将会消失。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·泰安检测]为了使同学们意识到劳动的重要性和培养良好的劳动习惯,你校准备开设劳动课程(labor courses)。请你写一封英语倡议书,号召全体同学积极参加。要点如下:
1.开设课程情况;
2.课程内容(到学校农场劳动、参加社区服务、志愿者活动等);
注意:1. 词数80左右(开头、结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear schoolmates,
May I have your attention, please?
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
That's all. Thank you.
八 道歉 & 倡议
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.leaving our parents and facing life challenges alone
2.To cope with the problems that we may meet with in the future
3.is of great benefit master one or two life skills every year
4.include cooking, washing our own clothes and tidying our rooms
5.(2)we might as well participate in some activities that give us real-world work experience
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
Dear friends,
How lucky we are under our parents' wings! However, we'll finally grow up some day, leaving our parents and facing life challenges alone. To solve the problems, we should develop good working habits and improve our life skills.
Trying to do some chores at home is of great benefit. We can master one or two life skills every year. These skills can include cooking, washing our own clothes and tidying our rooms. Meanwhile, we might as well participate in some activities that give us real-world work experience.
Let's respect work. Work harder and be well equipped for our future life.
Students' Union
参考范文:
Dear David,
I'm writing to make an apology to you because I cannot make it to see you off at the airport as scheduled.
The reason why I can't get away is that I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend. As a matter of fact, I have just been informed of this plan by the schoolmaster. Moreover/In addition, as the chairman of the Student Union, I feel responsible for this job.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand my situation.Wish you a safe and happy journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear schoolmates,
May I have your attention, please? I have good news to tell you. The labor courses will be started in our school, which is intended to improve students' awareness of labour and help form a good habit.
To start with, colorful labour programs are open every week in our school. With the guidance of our teachers, we can help plant vegetables and feed chickens in the school-run farm. Besides, we participate in community service and voluntary work.
Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome to join in the activity. Not only are we relaxed but we have gained a better understanding of labour.
That's all. Thank you.
九 电子邮件
[2021·全国甲卷改编]假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;
2.征求建议;
3.表示感谢。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分作文第一步:“三定”审题 “三段”谋篇
(一)“三定”审题
1.定体裁:电子邮件。
2.定人称:本文以第一、三人称为主。
3.定时态:主要使用一般现在时。
(二)“三段”谋篇
第一段(开篇点题):点明写信目的;第二段(2个要点,缺一不可):学校计划举办中国传统文化的主题班会, 并在英文网站上展示;向外国朋友征求哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国人;第三段(巧妙收尾):表达感谢。
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.为了弘扬中国传统文化,并在英语网站上发布一些班会,我们学校将组织以中国传统文化为主题的班会。
____________________________ and post some class meetings on English websites, our school is going to organise class meetings, ______________________________________.(高频词汇+定语从句)
2.我们可以选择各种各样的主题。
We can choose a variety of themes, ______________________________________.(通过举例增加细节)
3.我想知道你是否能告诉我你最喜欢他们中的哪一个,以及哪些外国人更可能对他们感兴趣。
I'm wondering if you can let me know _______________________________________.(运用复合句, 彰显写作水准)
4.谢谢你的帮助。如果你能在方便的时候尽早回复,我将不胜感激。
Thank you for your help. ________________________________________________.(词汇不重,彰显水准)
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
电子邮件
电子邮件指用电子手段传送信件、资料等信息的通信方法,英文电子邮件和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同。
(一) 谨记写作范式
引入话题,说明写作目的
普通书信 /电子邮件 表述具体信息及要求与希望
重申愿望,期待回复
(二)充盈写作语料库
吸引阅卷人开头句
1.I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two days ago.
我很高兴收到你两天前寄给我的信。
2.I'm glad to hear from you and I'd like to share my experience of helping my parents do housework.
很高兴收到你的来信,我想和你分享我帮助父母做家务的经验。
吸引阅卷人篇中句
1.If necessary, we can arrange a face-to-face discussion sometime this week.
如果有必要,本周我们可以找个时间安排一次面谈。
2.Of all the courses, I like Chinese Painting best because it helps us experience the inner harmony of man and nature and taste the beauty of Chinese culture.
在所有的课程中,我最喜欢中国画,因为它让我们体会到人与自然的内在和谐,品味中国文化之美。
吸引阅卷人结尾句
I'd appreciate it if you could make a response at your earliest convenience.
如果您能在方便时尽早回信,我将非常感激。
(注意卷面书写哟)
[2021·济南市高考针对性训练]假定你是李华,在即将毕业之际,请你代表全班同学给外教Frank写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回忆美好瞬间;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Frank,
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
九 电子邮件
满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.In order to promote Chinese traditional culture the theme of which is traditional Chinese culture
2.such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, paper-cutting and so on
3.which of them you like best and which of them people from outside of China are more likely to be interested in
4.I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience
满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
Dear Chris,
How are you doing these days? I'm writing to ask you some advice.
To promote Chinese traditional culture and post some class meetings on English websites, our school is going to organise class meetings, the theme of which is traditional Chinese culture. We can choose various themes, such as calligraphy, oil paintings, paper-cutting and so on. I'm wondering if you can let me know which of them you like best and which of them people from outside of China are more likely to be interested in.
I'd appreciate it if you can reply to me at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Frank,
On the occasion of graduation, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want to send our sincere gratitude for your kind help with our English learning on behalf of the whole class. I still remember what you have devoted to improving our oral English and English writing. Besides, you also frankly shared your learning experience with us. Additionally, without your help, I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the English Speech Contest. All in all, words fail to express our thankfulness to you. I do hope that you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever!
Yours,
Li Hua
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