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命题特点以提纲类为主要命题形式，提示内容较为简洁;体裁和题材相对稳定，以应用文为主，选材均与考生学习生活及社会热点相关。命题超势"命题将会保持稳定性，实用类将会成为发展趋势，内容上会灵活多变，加大开放性。
试卷 年份 体裁 话题 题材
全国卷 I 2021（甲卷）建议信 中国传统文化 哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友
2020 参赛短文 社会生活 身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人
2019 申请信 社会生活 画展志愿者
2018 建议信 社会生活 餐桌礼仪
2017 告知 语言学习 学习计划安排
全国卷 Ⅱ 2021（乙卷）演讲稿 学习生活 线上学习
2020 记叙文 学校生活 采摘活动
2019 告知信 学校生活 球队比赛事宜
2018 通知 学校生活 观看英文短片
2017 邀请信 艺术 参观剪纸艺术展
全国卷 Ⅲ 2021（新高考）略
2020 电子邮件 学校生活 征求英语短剧的意见
2019 邀请信 学校生活 邀请参加音乐节
2018 告知信 学校生活 体育活动项目开展情况
2017 邀请信 学校生活 邀请外国友人加入校队




一、解题步骤
书面表达分步骤：
1、审体裁 审人称 审时态 列要点 谋篇章
2、列出词汇和句型 连词成句段落 清晰完美收尾
3、检查拼写 核实标点 检查句子结构是否正确 检查要点是否遗漏 检查词数是否符合要求


二、实战技巧
写好高考“书面表达”绝非一日之功，关键在于平时扎扎实实的训练。但是，在夯实语言基本功的前提下，熟悉、掌握一定的应试技巧，也非常重要。根据“书面表达”常见错误及评卷要求，建议使用“一式，两头，三写，四关”的应试抢分技巧。具体为：
一式 写对格式
要求记住英语常用文体的格式和应用文体的写作方式和特点。
二头 写好两头
要求灵活运用熟悉的句式和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾结构正确，言简意赅。
三写 规范三写
在高考英语书面表达的评分标准中，正确拼写和使用标点符号及书写的美观程度也是影响得分的一个重要指标，因此考生要高度重视。许多考生只重视书面表达内容的训练和提高，却忽视了卷面规范书写的训练，导致本不该的失分。
四关 突破四关
所谓“四关”是指突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关和习惯表达关。要求内容要点准确全面，行文逻辑通顺严密，语言运用正确得当，表达方式符合英语习惯。
当然，在备考过程中，有针对性地背诵一些高分句式，套用合适的写作模块，可以帮助大家在短时间内在书面表达上抢得高分！

一
（2021年全国高考乙卷英语试题）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足；
2. 提出学习建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Be smart online learners











【答案】one possible version:
Be smart online learners
Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.
Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.
In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以 Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
充分利用：make full use of→ make the most of
扩宽,丰富：broaden→ enrich
各种各样： all kinds of→ varieties of
不完美：imperfection→ defect
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.
拓展句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages ， finding a proper way to make our study more efficient.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Faced with all kinds of information on the internet ,We can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life.（非谓语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
On the other hand ,online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.（现在分词作状语）



二
（2020年全国统一高考英语试卷（新课标Ⅱ））
上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:
1. 农场情况；
2. 采摘过程；
3. 个人感受
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
My Weekend













【答案】one possible version:
My Weekend
Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.
On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.
I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!

第一步：根据提示可知，上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括： 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety of animals, Using baskets and ladders, take a bite, be grateful for, get close to nature, feast on the sweetness.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如 Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. 和Using baskets and ladders运用了非谓语动词；We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. 运用了定语从句；Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!运用了连词not only…but…和倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

三
　(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)
假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：
1．时间；
2．活动安排；
3．欢迎他表演节目。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。













【审题谋篇】
体裁
邀请信
人称
第一、二人称为主
时态
一般现在时和一般将来时为主
要点
1.音乐节举办的时间；2.活动内容安排；3.欢迎他表演节目

　
【提纲要点】
1.第一段——点明主题发出邀请，并介绍音乐节的具体内容
①点明主题
A Chinese classical music concert will_be_held in the music hall of our school.
②发出邀请
I'd like to invite_you_to_join me.
③活动安排
Many music masterpieces will_be_played by a famous band.
④欢迎他表演节目
You_are_welcome_to_give a performance.
2．第二、三段——表达期盼，期待回复
⑤表达期盼——我将在音乐厅入口等你
I'll meet you at_the_entrance_of the music hall.
⑥期待回复
Looking forward to your reply！
【润色升级】
1.将①句增加时间细节，并用宾语从句进行表达
I'm glad to_tell_you_that_a_Chinese_classical_music_concert_ will_be
_held_in_the_music_hall_of_our_school_on_November_8th.
2．将②句用非谓语动词作状语表达，并与④句合并
Knowing_that you are fond of classical music, I'd_like_to_invite_you
_to_join_me_and_you_are_welcome_to_give_a_performance.
3．将⑤句用if条件句表达，并增加细节
If_it_is_convenient_for_you,_I'll meet you at_the_entrance_
of_the_music_hall_at_7：00_that_evening.
【规范誊写】



四
(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括：
1．短片内容：学校的发展；
2．放映时间、地点；
3．欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　

【审题谋篇】

体裁
通知
人称
第三人称为主
时态
一般现在时为主
要点
1.短片内容；2.放映时间、地点；3.欢迎对短片提出意见

【提纲要点】
1.第一段——点题：你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片
①Rccently, an outstanding short film will_be_shown in our school. Welcome to join_us_and_enjoy_it!
2．第二段——主体段落展开：短片内容；放映时间、地点；欢迎对短片提出意见。
②短片内容：学校的发展
The movie is a documentary about the_development_of_our_school.
③放映时间、地点
It will_be_shown in the library on June 9th.
④欢迎参加会后讨论并对短片提出意见
Every one of you is be_welcome_to take part in the discussion held afterwards and give your comments.
⑤我们期待你的评论和反馈。
We are expecting_and_encouraging your comments and feedback.
3．第三段——表达期望
⑥I have the confidence that you will have_a_great_time then.
【润色升级】
1.句②通过增加定语从句来拓展要点
The name of the movie is Growing Together, which_is_a_documentary
_about_the_development_of_our_beloved_school.
2．句③通过增加具体时间和地点拓展要点
It_will_be_shown_on_the_fourth_floor_of_the_school_library_from_2：00_to_4：00_in_the_afternoon_on_June_9th.
3．句④和句⑤用非谓语动词作状语合并为一句，实现句式升级
Every_one_of_you_is_welcome_to_take_part_in_the_discussion_held_afterward
s,_expected_and_encouraged_to_give_your_comments_and_feedback.
【规范誊写】


五
(2017·北京高考)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：视频video

　
　
　
　

　
　
　
　

【审题谋篇】
体裁
图画类周记
人称
第一人称为主
时态
一般过去时为主
要点
1.激烈讨论后决定制作视频；2.准备素材，采访拍摄；3.后期制作；4.毕业典礼放映

【提纲要点】
1.第一段——点明主题
①毕业在即，激烈讨论后决定制作视频
Graduation finally came. After a_heated_discussion,_we agreed on
making_a_video.
2．第二段——主体内容
②准备素材——采访老师，拍摄学校生活
We interviewed_our_teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.
③后期制作——争论保留什么
We debated over what_to_put_into_the_video.
④典礼放映
The video was played on_the_graduation_ceremony.
⑤发表感悟——很有成就感
That surely gave us a_great_sense_of_achievement.
【润色升级】
1.将②句增加“花费时间”细节，并升级为定语从句
Material_collecting took us a whole week, during_which_we_interviewed
_our_teachers_and_took_pictures_of_every_aspect_of_school_life.
2．将③句增加细节，渲染讨论及效果
We_debated_over_what_to_put_into_the_video._Some_compromises_were_unavoidable,_but_the_video_turned_out_perfect.
3．将④句升级用when状语从句表达并增加“效果”细节
Several days later, when_the_video_was_played_on_the_graduation_
ceremony,_it_was_well_received













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【规范誊写】



第1部分　考场作文常见的错误及防范措施
一 考场作文常见的三类错误
考场作文常见的错误主要分为三类：词汇类错误、语法类错误和汉语式英语。
——　　(一)词汇类错误　　——
考试时，考生很容易出现单词拼写错误和词形变化错误；而词性不清和词汇用法方面的错误主要还是受汉语思维的影响。其应对措施是在备考时要多注意容易拼错或容易出现词形变化错误的单词，真正用心去体会英语词汇的词性和运用，对一些固定习语更不能想当然地改动。
1．单词拼写错误
误：By the way, he's a senior High School student named Lihua from Tian Jin, china.
正：By the way, he's a senior high school student named Li Hua from Tianjin, China.
2.词形变化错误
误：People throwed cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water.
正：People threw cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water.
3．词性不清错误
误：Everyone in my family is like the dog.
正：Everyone in my family likes the dog.
4．词汇用法错误
误：He opened the light after he entered the room.
正：He turned on the light after he entered the room.
5．擅自改动习语
误：Nowadays most parents attach much importance with education.
正：Nowadays most parents attach much importance to education.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　(限时：10分钟)
改正下列句子中的错误
①Doing a part­time job always effects study.
_________________________________________________________________
②There is no doubt that keeping an English diary helps you a lot with writen English.
_________________________________________________________________
③In my surprise, he has got the first prize.
_________________________________________________________________
④We must pay attention our pronunciation when we speak English.
_________________________________________________________________
⑤We are all entire responsible for our actions and for our reactions.
_________________________________________________________________
答案：①effects→affects　②writen→written　③In→To
④attention后加to　⑤entire→entirely
——　　(二)语法类错误　　——
一个正确的句子除了用词得当外，语法也应该准确无误。如果语法不正确，再好的构思也难以正确地表达，语法类错误的多少会直接影响作文的档次。英语书面表达中语法类错误主要表现在：
1．时态错误
误：When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to hed.
正：When he came back, he found that his wife had gone to bed.
2．语态错误
误：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.
正：Children who are raised in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.
3．主谓一致错误
误：Some students like books that is written by Lu Xun.
正：Some students like books that are written by Lu Xun.
4.比较级使用错误
误：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting more and more smaller.
正：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting smaller and smaller.
5．非谓语动词使用错误
误：The teacher came into the lab, following by some students.
正：The teacher came into the lab, followed by some students.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(限时：10分钟)
改正下列句子中的错误
①If it won't rain tomorrow, we'll go camping.
__________________________________________________________________
②Not only Tom but also I are tired of one examination after another.
__________________________________________________________________
③They think students should have their own time to study and it is more quieter at home.
__________________________________________________________________
④There are a lot of students stand in a queue to welcome the old soldier.
__________________________________________________________________
⑤She said she would pay a visit to Suzhou in the next month.
__________________________________________________________________
答案：①won't→doesn't　②are→am　③more→much或去掉more　④stand→standing　⑤去掉in
——　　(三)汉语式英语　　——
一般来说，英汉两种语言既有许多相似之处，又有许多不同之处。在写作时如果想当然地去写，会出现许多汉语式英语，其中主要包括：
1．纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序
误：At this school studying, I really very happy.
正：Studying at this school, I am really very happy.
2．句子成分残缺
①误：There are many students don't support the project.
正：There are many students who don't support the project.
②误：He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.
正：He told me that all my classmates were sitting in the classroom.
3．句子粘连
误：The old man has two sons, both of them work in the same company.
正：The old man has two sons, and both of them work in the same company.
正：The old man has two sons, both of whom work in the same company.
4．主谓搭配不当
误：He happened an accident yesterday.
正：An accident happened to him yesterday.
5．动宾搭配不当
误：They are trying their best to improve their production.
正：They are trying their best to increase their production.
6．形容词和名词搭配不当
误：We walked a far way before planting trees.
正：We walked a long way before planting trees.
7．动词和副词搭配不当
误：My grandfather very likes black tea and has it every day.
正：My grandfather likes black tea very much and has it every day.
8.介词和宾语搭配不当
误：They will build a monument on memory of the national hero.
正：They will build a monument in memory of the national hero.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(限时：10分钟)
改正下列句子中的错误
①We are impossible to finish the work in such a short time.
__________________________________________________________________
②It's known that the cost in big cities is very expensive.
__________________________________________________________________
③He came here to attend the meeting in car.
__________________________________________________________________
④I haven't heard from your letter for a long time and I miss you very much.
__________________________________________________________________
⑤I have many collections of stamps, some of them are my favorite.
__________________________________________________________________
答案：①We are impossible→It is impossible for us
②expensive→high　③in→by　④your letter→you
⑤some前加and或them→which
二 防范出现错误的两个措施
句子正确是作文得高分的关键和保证，考场上要避免上述低级错误，可采取以下两个措施。
——　　(一)确定主语　　——
英语句子无论多长都有自己的主语(祈使句省略了主语you)。写句子前首先要确定主语，其次要特别注意汉语与英语的区别。例如：
1．北京八月多雨。
误：Beijing rains much in August.
正：It rains much in Beijing in August.
2．写得很匆忙，我们发现书中满是错误。
误：Written in a hurry, we found the book full of mistakes.
正：Written in a hurry, the book was found full of mistakes (by us)．
——　　(二)确定谓语动词　　——
英语中没有动词就构不成句子，但动词千变万化，稍不注意就会写错句子。在写句子时应特别注意以下几个方面。
1．注意及物与不及物动词的正确运用
误：The living standard of the people has raised in the past twenty years.
正：The living standard of the people has risen/has been raised in the past twenty years.
2．注意延续性与非延续性动词的正确运用
误：His grandmother has died for fifteen years.
正：His grandmother has been dead for fifteen years.
3．注意一些不可用于被动语态的动词或动词短语
误：That dictionary is belonged to the library.
正：That dictionary belongs to the library.

　 　
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Ⅰ.以下句子含有考生常犯的错误，请改正
1．It is high time that we do something to reduce traffic accidents.
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答案：do→did或在do前加should
2．While having our dinner, the doorbell rang.
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答案：having前加we were或the doorbell rang→we heard the doorbell ringing
3．Recently our village has taken place great changes.
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答案：Recently great changes have taken place in our village.
4．Dr Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive on the evening flight.
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答案：are→is
5．Eating at school is very convenient for students.
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答案：It is very convenient for students to eat at school.
6．Would you please meet my uncle at the airport because this is his first time visit to the US?
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答案：去掉time
7．The car hitted the old man and drived away.
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答案：hitted→hit; drived→drove
8．I have two friends, their names are Tom and Jim.
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答案：their→whose或their前加and
9．There are many students are planting trees on the hill.
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答案：去掉第二个are或在students后加who
10．At weekends, we would play basketball, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic.
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答案：swimming→swim
Ⅱ.下面的考生作文中共有10处语言错误，请改正
　假定你是李华，最近与好朋友Lucy吵架了，现在给外教Melinda写一封邮件请求帮助。邮件内容包含：
1．吵架的原因；
2．吵架后的心情；
3．请求Melinda给出解决办法。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Melinda，
The reason why I am writting to you is because I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now.
The quarrel was occurred when we were discussing whether we should go shopping at last weekend. Because the coming examination, she insisted on studying at school while I opposed strongly. After the incident, we have not chatted any more, caused me great depression. I am sincere sorry to see things going like this and I have been felt frustrated ever since.
I really don't want to lose this friend. Could you please offer me some effective and practical advices? Looking forward to you reply.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
第一句：________________　第二句：________________
第三句：________________　第四句：________________
第五句：________________　第七句：________________
第八句：________________
答案：
第一句：writting→writing; because→that
第二句：去掉was; 去掉at
第三句：Because后加of
第四句：caused→causing
第五句：sincere→sincerely; felt→feeling
第七句：advices→advice
第八句：you→your





　 　
(一)(限时：45分钟)
Ⅰ.按分类提示，改正下列句子中的唯一一处错误
题组1　连词类错误
1．In addition, the climate here is very similar to that in the USA, thus there is no need for you to worry about it.
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答案：In addition, the climate here is very similar to that in the USA,
thu there is no need for you to worry about it.
2.Although it was not expensive, in order to buy me the gift, but my dad made every effort to earn the money.
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答案：Although it was not expensive, in order to buy me the gift, /
my dad made every effort to earn the money.
3.The reason is often because the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.
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答案：The reason is often the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.
4.Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use that we've learned in order to have a better grasp of it.
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答案：Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use we've learned in order to have a better grasp of it.
5.Around 540 million people are affected by second－hand smoke, that causes 100,000 deaths per year.
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答案：Around 540 million people are affected by second－hand smoke, causes 100,000 deaths per year.
6.Our class is made up of 52 students, all of them are friendly and hard－working.
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答案：Our class is made up of 52 students, all of them are friendly and hard－working.或Our class is made up of 52 students, all of are friendly and hard－working.
题组2　动词类错误
7.Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confusing about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
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答案：Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
8.Secondly, if I were you, I will bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country.
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答案：Secondly, if I were you, I bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country.
9.What's more, in order to have much knowledge of Chinese culture, it of importance for you to be aware of the content, Tang poetry.
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答案：What's more, in order to have much knowledge of Chinese culture, it of importance for you to be aware of the content, Tang poetry.
10.If you want to have a DNA detection, you have to pay for 125 pounds.
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答案：If you want to have a DNA detection, you have to pay 125 pounds.
11.Only in this way they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.
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答案：Only in this way they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.
12.Last of all, to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two countries, I hope you can do something, such as help us practice our spoken English.
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答案：Last of all, to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two countries, I hope you can do something, such as us practice our spoken English.
13.Known that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions.
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答案： that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions.
14.Weather permits, we will have a picnic tomorrow.
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答案：Weather ， we will have a picnic tomorrow.
15.We offer a wide range of holidays to choose.
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答案：We offer a wide range of holidays to choose .
题组3　介词、冠词、代词类错误
16.By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express me clearly.
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答案：By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express clearly.
17.Good opinions are worth sticking because they can benefit us all.
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答案：Good opinions are worth sticking because they can benefit us all.
18.When I have different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.
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答案：When I have different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.
19.Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer for a difficult math problem in class.
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答案：Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer a difficult math problem in class.
20.The blackboard is in front of the classroom.
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答案：The blackboard is in front of the classroom.
21.Nowadays there are still many poor students. They cannot afford to go to the school.
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答案：Nowadays there are still many poor students. They cannot afford to go to
school.
22.She met and eventually married with a man considerably younger than herself.
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答案：She met and eventually married a man considerably younger than herself.
23.Several years later, a word came that he had succeeded in solving the difficult problem.
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答案：Several years later, word came that he had succeeded in solving the difficult problem.
24.Bicycles are environmentally friendly because it won't give off waste gas.
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答案：Bicycles are environmentally friendly because won't give off waste gas.
25.As is known to we all, with the improvement of people's living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life.
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答案：As is known to all, with the improvement of people's living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life.
26.Contrary with people's expectations, most of the Chinese mothers are not in favor of the author's way she educated children.
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答案：Contrary people's expectations, most of the Chinese mothers are not in favor of the author's way she educated children.
题组4　形容词和副词类错误
27.That sure gave us a great sense of achievement.
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答案：That gave us a great sense of achievement.
28.We are now living in an information age, in which TV, cellphones and the Web are wide used.
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答案：We are now living in an information age, in which TV, cellphones and the Web are used.
29.I think it's a more perfect opportunity for me to further develop my abilities.
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答案：I think it's a perfect opportunity for me to further develop my abilities.
30.He is a bored boy and we all dislike him.
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答案：He is a boy and we all dislike him.
31.Only brave ones can watch sharks in the deeply ocean.
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答案：Only brave ones can watch sharks in the ocean.
32.As soon as she saw the results, she got an exciting look in her face.
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答案：As soon as she saw the results, she got an look in her face.
Ⅱ.修改下面学生高考书面表达中的六处错误
(2019·天津高考)假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件：
(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一)；
(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
(3)希望从中有何收获。
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. My classmates and I are overjoyed to hear because you'll stay in our school for one week in this summer vacation, during that time you'll give us a presentation about art in western countries. Now that you're asking our opinion about what we want to listen to most, I feel much honored to take the chance to make my voice hear.
Personally, I'd want to learn about western painting. Several reason may account for my preference. For one thing, I'm interested to learn how western painting has developed into what it is today through history, and the most influential artists in each period of its development. Additional, I'm crazy to learn how to appreciate western paintings, and it can't be better if you can tell us some tricks about how to paint.
Thank you for your time.
Yours，
Li Jin







第2部分　高分亮点塑造

一 吸引眼球的亮点词汇
要想写出一篇水平比较高的书面表达，高级词汇的使用必不可少，它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：
——　　(一)使用亮点词汇的四种方法　　——
1．标新立异　“语”众不同
在写作时，恰当地使用一些别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会体现出自己的高水平。
①Our team, besides regular training, will join in a variety of activities.
→Our team, apart/aside from regular training, will join in a variety of activities.
②Several days later, when the video was played at the graduation ceremony, it was very popular.
→Several days later, when the video was played at the graduation ceremony, it was well­received.
2．多样表达　避免重复
在写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的单词或短语，要尽量用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。
③We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have different ways to deal with such a situation.
→We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.
④We've built a new experiment building and we've also built a library where the old playground used to be.
→We've built a new experiment building and we've also set up a library where the old playground used to be.
3．单词短语　短语优先
在单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。
⑤There is no doubt that you should know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.
→There is no doubt that you are supposed to know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.
⑥Firstly, the final exam of this term is coming so I am busy preparing for it.
→To begin with, the final exam of this term is around the corner so I am busy preparing for it.
⑦I hear that he is ill, and I decide to visit him this Sunday.
→I hear that he is ill, and I decide to pay a visit to him this Sunday.
4．用高级词汇取代简单词汇
为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应尽量避免反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。
⑧I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
→I should make an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
⑨So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up, we are sure to achieve success.
→So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up, we are bound to achieve success.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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用高级词汇完成句子
①Of the two, I think the latter is better.
→Of the two, the latter ________________.
②Quite a few things caused the traffic problem.
→Quite a few things ________________ the traffic problem.
③We can look at this problem in many ways.
→We can ________ this problem in many ways.
答案：①wins my favor　②resulted in/led to/gave rise to　③view
——　　(二)必备升级词汇　　——
1．动词：have→possess; develop→promote; replace→substitute; bear→put up with/tolerate; consider→take into account/consideration; understand→make sense of/figure out
①I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into account.
我真诚地希望你能考虑我的建议。
2．名词：chance→opportunity; choice→alternative; course→curriculum; people→individuals; result→consequence; shortcoming→drawback
②Different individuals have different opinions about the safety of food.
不同的人对食品安全问题有着不同的看法。
3．形容词：enough→adequate/plentiful; useful→advantageous;
difficult→challenging; proper→appropriate/suitable; important→vital/significant; interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing/attractive
③In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.
在随后的三年里，我们的学校生活将会是具有挑战性的。
4．副词：finally→eventually; hardly→barely/scarcely/hardly ever;
immediately→in a flash/in no time; nowadays→currently
④Eventually your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully
independent adult.
最终，你的孩子会离开家，作为一个完全独立的成年人过她自己的生活。
5．连词：so→therefore; and→as well as/together with
⑤Therefore, its box office receipts/takings will probably enjoy a slight increase.
因此票房收入极可能略有增长。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　 　(限时：5分钟)
同义句改写
①We will try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.
→We'll try our best to ________ the traditional friendship between us.
②This phenomenon may lead to important changes towards environmental protection.
→This phenomenon may lead to ________ changes towards environmental protection.
答案：①promote　②significant
——　　(三)必备加分词汇　　——
1．表达关注的名词：attention, focus, concern
①Meanwhile, owing to my great interest in sports, I pay close attention to the 32nd Olympic Games to be held in Tokyo in 2020.
与此同时，由于我对体育运动很感兴趣，我密切关注2020年将在东京举办的第三十二届奥运会。
2．表达争论的名词：discussion, debate, argument
②Faced with such an argument, different individuals may have different opinions.
面对这样的争论，不同的人可能有不同的观点。
3．表达现象的名词：phenomenon
③The sentence suggests a common phenomenon: many teenagers care more about their phones than their friends nowadays.
这个句子表明了一种常见现象：当今许多青少年关注他们的手机胜过关注他们的朋友。
4．表达优缺点的名词：advantage, disadvantage, strength, weakness
④Besides, every student may have different weak and strong subjects, so they should learn from each other so that they can have more advantages than disadvantages.
此外，每个学生可能有不同的弱科和强科，因此他们应该互相学习以便比起劣势来他们拥有更多的优势。
5．表达增长或下降的动词：increase, accumulate, decrease, decline
⑤Long hours of surfing the Internet would lead to declining health.
长时间上网将导致健康状况下降。
6．表达导致后果的动词短语：result in, lead to, bring about, contribute to, give rise to
⑥Computers have brought about many changes in our daily life.
电脑给我们的日常生活带来了很多变化。
7．表达支持、反对的动词短语：approve of, be in favor of, object to
⑦The majority of the senior citizens don't approve of the proposal of celebrating Western festivals in China.
大多数老年人不赞同在中国庆祝西方节日的提议。
8．表达可能性的形容词：likely
⑧If you come to our school, you are likely to meet some difficult problems in your life.
如果你来我们学校，很可能会在生活中遇到一些难题。
9．表达有好处的形容词：beneficial
⑨From my point of view, our library should buy some popular science books and literary books because they are beneficial to us.
按照我的观点，我们的图书馆应该买一些科谱书和文学类图书，因为这些书对我们有益处。
10．表达强调的副词：particularly, especially
⑩The more people earn, the more they seem to want, particularly when others earn more than they do.
人们赚得越多，似乎想要的也越多，尤其是当其他人赚得比他们多的时候。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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同义句改写
①The new teaching method will do good to every student.
→The new teaching method will ________________ every student.
②It was his carelessness that caused his failure this time.
→It was his carelessness that ________________ his failure this time.
③Most of us were against his plan, which made him angry.
→Most of us ________________ his plan, which made him angry.
答案：①be beneficial to　②resulted in　③objected to
二 夺人耳目的开头和结尾
——　　(一)引人入胜的开头　　——
开头一般来说要做到开门见山，使读者了解要谈什么，最好能立刻吸引读者的兴趣。下面介绍几种开头的常见写法：
1．书信的常用开头法——开门见山法
①I'm writing to invite you to see the Chinese papercutting exhibition.
我写信邀请你来观看中国剪纸艺术展。
②I am writing to tell you some good news.
我写信告诉你一些好消息。
2．记叙文的常用开头法
(1)故事背景法——交代人物、事件、时间、地点、背景等
③A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.
地球日前的一周，我们学校贴了很多海报，号召我们加入到让地球更绿色环保的行动中。
(2)往事追忆法——回忆过去发生的某件事
④I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in the new school three years ago, when I found it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class.
我仍旧记得三年前我进入这所学校的第一天，在第一节英语课上我听不懂老师讲课，我是多么紧张。
3．说明文的常用开头法
(1)点明中心法——开门见山点明所要介绍的事物
⑤The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.
鼠标是人们借以使用电脑的一种非常有效的设备。
(2)引入数据法——运用数据引出所要论证的主题
⑥A recent survey shows that more than 40% of the school kids don't have breakfast.
最近的调查表明，有超过40%的学生不吃早饭。
4．议论文的常用开头法
(1)点明主题法——提出一个观点，作为文章要阐明或论述的主题
⑦Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important to me.
多年的学校生活教会我很多东西，其中团队协作对于我来说最为重要。
(2)引用名言法——摘录或引用某些名人的名言或常见的习语、谚语作为文章的开头
⑧When it comes to how to succeed, many people may think of the proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way.”
当谈及如何成功时，很多人或许会想起了谚语“有志者，事竟成”。
(3)列举事例法——通过一个事例或现象引出话题
⑨Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school.
三年前我在人生的一次重要考试中失利，成为普通学校的一名学生。
5．图画作文的常用开头法
描述图画法——描写图画内容，为下文做好铺垫
⑩In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.
在图画中我们可以看到一个穿着破衣服的男孩，坐在破旧的木头桌子旁，桌子上是一摞书。
常见开头句式：
As everybody knows/As is known to all 众所周知
As the proverb says 正如谚语所说
As the saying goes 俗话说
As we can see from the table 正如表中所看到的
When it comes to ... 当提到……
It is said that ... 据说……
It is generally agreed that ... 人们通常认为……
It is believed/thought that ... 人们认为……
It is reported that ... 据报道……
It is well known that ... 众所周知……
It goes without saying that ... 不言而喻/不用说……
There is no denying that ... 不可否认的是……
There is no doubt that ... 毫无疑问……
　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　(限时：5分钟)
根据提示翻译句子
①我想请你给我们学校的英语报纸写一篇文章。(开门见山法)
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②上周日，我和同学们去了香山公园。(故事背景法)
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③俗话说，“没有努力，就没有收获。”(引用名言法)
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④人们普遍认为阅读能增长我们的知识，拓展我们的视野。(点明主题法)
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⑤每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪，就忍不住感到悲伤。(往事追忆法)
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答案：①I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.　②Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to Fragrant Hills Park.　③As the saying goes, “No pain, no gain.”　④It is universally acknowledged that reading increases our knowledge and broadens our horizons.　⑤Whenever I think of the clean stream near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.
——　　(二)回味无穷的结尾　　——
结尾有概括全文内容，进一步强调中心思想、升华主题的作用。主要有以下写法：
1．书信的常用结尾法
(1)表示感谢法
①I'd appreciate it if you could reply to my letter at your earliest convenience.
如果您尽早给我回信，我会非常感谢。
②I'd appreciate it if you could do me a favor.
如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。
③I must thank you again for your generous help.
我必须对你慷慨的帮助再次表示感谢。
(2)表示期待法
④Hope you'll have a good time in China.
希望你在中国玩得开心。
⑤Looking forward to your reply.
期待着您的回复。
⑥I hope we'll get together again next year.
希望我们明年再聚。
2．记叙文的常用结尾法
(1)主题升华法
⑦My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.
我的经历告诉我：决定你成为什么样的人，不是你被给予了什么，而是你怎样利用它。
(2)问题设问法——通过问答形式总结全文
⑧Isn't it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?
你在阅读时，内心非常平静不是一种快乐吗？
3．说明文的常用结尾法
总结全文法——总结说明的事物，进一步说明其特征
⑨In a word, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us convenience and comfort.
总之，过去20年里我们生活中的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。
4．议论文的常用结尾法
(1)得出结论法——结尾总结全文，得出结论
⑩Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.
所以，电影业应该做出更大努力来吸引更多观众。
(2)深化中心法——结尾进一步深化主题
⑪In reality, we should learn from the black pencil: not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.
事实上，我们应该向这支黑色铅笔学习：只要我们对自己做过的事情有信心，就不要去介意别人说什么。
(3)提出建议法——结尾提出建议以及应对措施
⑫I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.
我认为，我们都应该注意自己在公共场合的行为。只有这样我们才能生活在更舒服和美丽的环境中。
(4)引用名言法——结尾用名言总结全文
⑬Anyhow, different cultures, different customs. If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”， you will enjoy more your stay here.
不管怎么说，不同的文化就有不同的习俗。如果你“入乡随俗”，你就会更好地享受这里的生活。
(5)照应开头法——结尾对开头进行照应
⑭Different ways of traveling can make people happy, but I like traveling by train most.
不同的旅行方式都能让人愉快，但是我最喜欢乘火车旅行。
常见结尾句式：
I'd appreciate it if ... 如果……我将不胜感激
It is high time that ... 确实到了……的时候了
In this way, I believe that ... 用这种办法，我相信……
Only with combined efforts can we ...
唯有通力合作我们才能……
We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that ...
因此，我们可以得出结论：……
Therefore, we have the reason to believe that ...
因此，我们有理由相信……
Therefore, we should realize that ...
因此，我们应当意识到……
If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that ...
如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问……
We, therefore, can make it clear from the above discussion that ...
因此，从上面的讨论中我们可以明白……
　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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根据提示翻译句子
①我希望你会在中学过丰富多彩的生活。(表示期待法)
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②如果你能到机场接我，我将不胜感激。(表示感谢法)
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③找一个伙伴和我们一起去如何？如果这样，我们可以相互帮助并且乐享旅游。(问题设问法)
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④因此，我们得出结论：世界上没有什么东西和自由一样珍贵。(得出结论法)
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⑤总之，成功是重要的，失败也是重要的，因为它是成功之母。(引用名言法)
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答案：①I hope you will live a rich and colorful life in middle school.　②I'd appreciate it if you could meet me at the airport.　③How about finding a companion to be with us? If so, we can help each other and be happy during the trip.　④We, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world.　⑤In a word, success is important, and so is failure, because it's the mother of success.
三 词顺句畅的过渡和衔接
衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。高中阶段应该掌握的连接(过渡)性词语归纳如下：
——　　(一)表示顺序的过渡性词语　　——
firstly， first of all， to begin/start with， then， later， in the end，
finally， at last， after that， afterwards， since then， meanwhile等。
①Firstly, I have always been interested in reading books. Secondly, I'd like to share my books with others as well.
首先，我一直对读书感兴趣；其次，我也喜欢与别人分享我的书籍。
②First of all, we'll try to find a place to live.
首先，我们得设法找个住的地方。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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用过渡性词语完成句子
首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，然后我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，之后我扫地、拖地。
①________， I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. ②________ I wiped the dust off all the furniture. ③____________， I swept and mopped the floors.
答案：①Firstly　②Then　③After that




——　　(二)表示并列转折关系的过渡性词语　　——
and， or， but， yet， however， while， otherwise， on the
contrary， despite， in spite of， instead of等。
Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.
否则的话，我们迟早会为我们的自私付出代价。
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用过渡性词语完成句子
相反，智能手机不仅占用我们宝贵的时间，而且对我们的健康造成极大的危害。
__________________， smartphones not only take up our valuable time, but also do great harm to our health.
答案：On the contrary
——　　(三)表示因果关系的过渡性词语　　——
thus， because， thanks to， due to， for one reason， so，
as a result/consequence， therefore等。
Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help as well as professional advice.
因此，我写信向你寻求帮助和专业建议。
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用过渡性词语完成句子
①因此，我们没有理由轻视普通的工作。
__________________， we have no reason to look down upon ordinary jobs.
②多亏当地媒体的协助，他在13个国家找到了32对同年同月同日出生的人。
__________________ the assistance of the local media, he has found 32 time twins across 13 countries.
答案：①As a result/consequence　②Thanks to
——　　(四)表示递进关系的过渡性词语　　——
besides， what's more， furthermore， moreover， what's worse， to make matters worse， still， even， in addition等。

①The weather was cold and wet. Still, we had a great time.
天气又冷又潮，不过我们仍旧玩得很开心。
②Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well­known sightseeing spots.
而且，沿河的风景很美，有很多著名景点。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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用过渡性词语完成句子
①另外，我可以看到不同种类的美丽的鸟。
________________， I can see different kinds of beautiful birds.
②更糟的是，如果我们在电话上花费过多的时间，我们会失去将来所需要的交际技能。
______________________________， if we spend too much time on phones, we will lose the communication skills we need in the future.
答案：①In addition　②To make matters worse/Worse still/What's worse
——　　(五)表示观点的过渡性词语　　——
as far as I am concerned， as for sb./sth.， in my opinion， in my view， from my point of view， personally等。

①As far as I'm concerned, all our classmates have learned a lot from our communication and the various activities.
就我而言，我们都从彼此的交流和各种各样的活动中学到了很多东西。
②As for my favorite figure in Chinese history it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.
至于中国历史上我最喜欢的人物，一定是魏源，一位晚清的伟大思想家。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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用过渡性词语完成句子
①在我看来，这里的每个人都是我们大家庭的一员，我们从对方身上学到很多东西。
__________________， everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other.
②至于考试作弊，我会告诉他们诚实的重要性。
__________________ cheating in the exams, I will tell them the importance of honesty.
答案：①In my opinion/view/From my point of view/Personally　②As for
——　　(六)表示总结的过渡性词语　　——
all in all， on the whole， in short， in brief， in conclusion， in a word， to sum up， in general等。

①In conclusion, I like being praised, but I know sometimes it's not always good.
总之，我喜欢被表扬，但是我知道有时候表扬并不总是好的。
②All in all, traveling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.
总的来说，旅游是充实自己、准备迎接新挑战的最佳选择。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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用过渡性词语完成句子
①总之，如果我们有这么一块有魔力的手表，我们的生活将会变得更加方便。
__________________， if we had such a magic watch, our life would become more convenient.
②总的来说，我发现自行车比摩托车更令人喜欢。
__________________， I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle.
答案：①In a word/In short/In brief　②On the whole/In general/All in all
　 　
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Ⅰ.请用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文
假如你是中学生李明，家住泉州。你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的故乡London，并希望了解你家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。
回信必须包括以下内容：
1.自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；
2.发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；
3.存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等；
4.对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。
注意：1.请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3.词数100左右。
参考词汇：高层建筑high­rise building
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
[考生作文]
Dear Jason，
I'm 1.very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.
Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live. Its economy has been developing 2.fast during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been 3.built,_high­rise buildings standing in many parts of the city. There are 4.more_and_more schools and hospitals for the native people. It is developing into a modern and 5.beautiful city. 6.But there are still some problems, 7.such_as heavy traffic in rush hours and 8.serious air pollution, which have a bad 9.effect on people's daily life. 10.I_think Quanzhou should strive to develop and build an environmentally friendly, healthy and attractive city, so that we could have a better hometown in future.
Yours，
Li Ming
[升格作文]
Dear Jason，
I'm 1.______________ happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.
Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live. Its economy has been developing 2.______________ during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been 3.______________， high­rise buildings standing in many parts of the city. 4.______________ schools and hospitals are available for the native people. It is developing into a modern and 5.______________ city. 6.______________， there are still some problems, 7.______________ heavy traffic in rush hours and 8.______________ air pollution, which have a bad 9.______________ on people's daily life. 10.______________， Quanzhou should strive to develop and build an environmentally friendly, healthy and attractive city, so that we could have a better hometown in future.
Yours，
Li Ming
答案：1.more than/pretty　2.rapidly/swiftly　3.set up　4.An increasing number of　5.attractive/charming
6．However　7.for example　8.severe　9.influence/impact　10.In my opinion/As far as I am concerned
Ⅱ.根据要求，为下面的话题写作设计一个开头段
假设你是李华，你的学校校报新开设的栏目My Favorite Traditional Chinese Festival正在向全校师生征集稿件。
请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。
1．开门见山式：
　
　
2．概括式：
　
　
答案：1.Of all the traditional Chinese festivals, I like Mid－Autumn Festival best./There are a lot of traditional festivals in China, of which I like Mid­Autumn Festival best.
2．Chinese people have been celebrating Mid­Autumn Festival for centuries and I like it best.
Ⅲ.根据要求及首段内容，为下面的话题设计一个结尾段
假如你是李华，你有一种超能力，那么你将用它来做什么呢？请用英语写一篇短文，畅谈一下你的打算。
I have been dreaming of having a superpower since my childhood. 　
　
1．首尾呼应式：
　
　
2．画龙点睛式：
　
　
答案：1.How I wish I would really have such a superpower.
2．If I had such a superpower, I would do more to help the people on the earth live happily.
Ⅳ.写作练习
假如你是李华，高考后想出国留学，但担心不适应国外生活，请给外籍教师Peter写一封信，告诉他你的担忧，请他介绍美国大学生的学习和生活并给出相关建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，


　

Yours，
Li Hua
[精彩范文]
Dear_Peter，
How is everything going these days? I am Li Hua, one of your students. I'm writing to you to ask for some advice on how to adapt to the life abroad.
On thinking that I will be exposed to a completely unfamiliar environment, I can't help feeling nervous. So now I am eager to know what real American college life is like and what problems foreign students may come across at the beginning. Besides, though I have made a lot of preparations for English language, I am still afraid that I might have difficulties in communicating with others in English. Could you please offer me some advice on it?
I hope my silly questions will not bother you too much. Thanks for your time and I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li_Hua
Ⅴ.用过渡性词语完成句子
1．在我看来，那些得到她的捐赠的人会被鼓励着更努力地学习。
______________________________________________， those who have
received her donations will be encouraged to study even harder.
答案：In my opinion/view/From my point of view/Personally/As far as I am concerned
2．而且，其他人能得到他们想要的书，他们有更多自由的时间阅读书籍。
________________， other persons can get the books they want and they have more free time to read them.
答案：Besides/Furthermore/Moreover/Additionally
3．这辆自行车好像很笨重，很难控制。更糟的是，我从车子上掉下来很多次。
The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. ________________， I took
many falls off the bike.
答案：Worse still/To make matters worse/What's worse
4．最后，我想问关于他私人生活的几个问题，那一定很有趣。
____________， I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life,
which must be very interesting.
答案：Finally/At last/In the end
5．总之，他必须为他缺席会议作出解释。
____________________， he must give an explanation for his absence from the conference.
答案：In short/In brief/In a word
6．另外，我们应该学会与别人友好相处。
____________________， we should learn how to get along well with others.
答案：In addition/Additionally
7．一般来说，这个季节去泰山旅游的人是最多的。
____________________， the number of people visiting Mount Tai in this
season is the largest.
答案：Generally speaking/In general
8．尽管生病了，怀特先生还是来参加了毕业典礼。
____________________ illness, Mr White attended the graduation ceremony.
答案：Despite/In spite of
Ⅵ.根据下面的提示写一篇短文，注意使用适当的过渡
性词语　　假定你是李华，你的英国网友Anna在她的学校举办的一次作文比赛中荣获一等奖，你写信向她表示祝贺，并在信中谈及自己在英语写作上存在的困难，希望得到她的帮助。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Anna，
I am very glad to learn that 　
　
　
　

Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
[精彩范文]
Dear_Anna，
I_am_very_glad_to_learn_that you have won the first prize in your school's English writing contest. I am writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your excellent performance.
Honestly speaking, it's a real encouragement to me to see your efforts rewarded. How I admire your writing skills! I have been learning English for several years and I have little trouble in listening, speaking and reading. However, I find it hard to write a good composition. In spite of so many efforts put into it, I just can't find a way out. I feel stressed out. I would appreciate it if you could give me some specific advice on it.
Looking_forward_to_your_early_reply.
Yours，
Li_Hua

　
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Ⅰ.请用更高级词汇替换黑体词汇
1．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.________
答案：difficult→challenging
2．We'll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.________
答案：develop→promote
3．I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.________
答案：bear→put up with
4．I met one of my classmates on my way to school yesterday.________
答案：met→came across
5．He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.________
答案：decided→determined/made up his mind
6．Developing very quickly, the Internet causes the breakdown of face－to－face communication.________
答案：causes→gives rise to
7．When you are bored with the people sometimes, you'd better find a quiet place, listening to some classical music.________
答案：bored with→fed up with
8．More and more visitors have been attracted to this place.________
答案：More and more→An increasing number of
9．He didn't listen to what I said in the class.________
答案：didn't listen to→turned a deaf ear to
10．Suddenly I thought of an idea that someone had broken into my house.________
答案：I thought of an idea→an idea occurred to me
Ⅱ.按要求改写下列句子
1．My favorite hobbies are reading books and newspapers. They have become a necessary part of my daily life.
→_______________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________ (用定语从句合并句子)
答案：My favorite hobbies are reading books and newspapers, which have become a necessary part of my daily life.
2．That they had had professional training impressed me most.
→_______________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________ (用主语从句和表语从句改写句子)
答案：What impressed me most was that they had had professional training.
3．After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months, we strongly desired to be the winner.
→_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________ (用分词作状语改写句子)
答案：Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months, we strongly desired to be the winner.
4．I didn't know real happiness until I met you.
→_______________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________ (用强调句型改写句子)
答案：It was not until I met you that I knew real happiness.
5．The weather was so cold that we had to stay at home.
→_______________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________ (用倒装句改写句子)
答案：So cold was the weather that we had to stay at home.
6．The local government didn't realize the problem until the river was seriously polluted.
→_______________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________ (用倒装句改写句子)
答案：Not until the river was seriously polluted did the local government realize the problem.
7．It's time for us to take measures to protect endangered animals.
→_______________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________ (用虚拟语气改写句子)
答案：It's time that we took/should take measures to protect endangered animals.
8．When we approached the city center, we saw a stone statue of about 10 meters in height.
→_______________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________ (用现在分词短语作时间状语改写句子)
答案：Approaching the city center, we saw a stone statue of about 10 meters in height.
9．They are experienced, knowledgeable, patient and understanding.
→_______________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________ (用not only ... but also ... 句型改写句子)
答案：They are not only experienced and knowledgeable, but also patient and understanding.
10．We should speak more English. We think it is very important.
→_______________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________ (用it作形式宾语合并句子)
答案：We think it very important to speak more English.
Ⅲ.用过渡词汇或句式补全句子
1．____________________(首先), the most significant thing is to set a goal, work out a plan and carry out your plan step by step.
答案：First of all/To begin with
2．____________________ (就我而言), I love wealth, but I value health more.
答案：As far as I am concerned
3．____________________ (事实上), advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.
答案：As a matter of fact/In fact
4．____________________________________(况且), listening to some soft music does relax your mood and give you a new start.
答案：Besides/In addition/What's more/Moreover
5．I lost my way in the forest and __________________________ (更糟的是), it got dark.
答案：to make matters worse/worse still
6．______________ (因此), I suggest we live in harmony with the nature.
答案：Therefore
7．__________________________ (总之), changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.
答案：In a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief
8．____________________________ (到了……的时候了) we took some measures to solve the problem.
答案：It's (high) time that
9．____________________________ (我们可以得出一个结论) our society is progressing and people are living a better life than ever before.
答案：We can draw a conclusion that
10．______________________________________________ (从这次经历中，我了解到) being careful is very important and that we can't be too careful, especially in examinations.
答案：From this experience, I learned that
Ⅳ.翻译下列开头和结尾句
1．我代表学生会给您写信请求帮助我们的校友。
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
答案：I am writing to you, on behalf of Student Union, to ask for help for our schoolmate.
2．如果方便的话，我希望您能接受我们的邀请。
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答案：We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.
3．我写信申请在您的大学里学习。
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答案：I'm writing to apply to study in your university.
4．我写信告诉您我的问题，这个问题困扰了我很长时间。
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答案：I am writing to tell you my problem, which has troubled me for a long time.
5．我写信给您是因为我有些确实严肃的问题想要和您交流。
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答案：I am writing to you because I have something really serious to communicate with you.
6．7月25日至8月10日在北戴河将有一个英语暑假夏令营。
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答案：There is going to be an English summer camp in Beidaihe from July 25 to August 10.
7．我的确希望你能考虑我的建议。
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答案：I do hope you will consider my suggestion.
8．对于您的慷慨帮助，我再次表示感谢。
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答案：Thanks again for your generous help.
9．我为给你带来这么大的麻烦再次向你道歉。
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10．我想向你致以最诚挚的祝贺。
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答案：I would like to congratulate you with all my heart.
11．如果你能认真对待我的投诉，我会非常高兴。
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答案：I would be very delighted if you could consider my complaint seriously.
12．请一定按时参加。
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答案：Be sure to attend it on time.







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[2021·贵州省普通高等学校招生适应性测试]假定你是李华，你校将为高三学生举办成人礼活动(the coming－of－age ceremony)。请给你的英国朋友Nancy写封邮件，介绍此次活动的相关情况，内容包括：
1．活动安排；
2．活动意义；
3．你的准备。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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[2021·江西省高三五校联考]假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike就读的学校要举办一年一度的“中华文化节”，他来信向你征求活动意见，请你写封回信，内容包括：
1．写作目的；
2．活动建议；
3．表示祝愿。
注意：
1．词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike，
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Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua


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[2021·昆明市高三“三诊一模”]学校校园网站英文栏目开展题为“我心中的美丽乡村”的征集活动。请根据以下内容投稿：
1．生态环境；
2．生活条件；
3．精神面貌。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．题目已为你写好。
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[2021·甘肃省第二次高考诊断]你市正在组织首届高中生英语作文比赛。请以你向往的职业为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1．职业简介；
2．向往该职业的原因。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．短文题目已为你写好。
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[2021·南充市第一次高考适应性考试]假定你是李华，你校的校园网站“英语天地(English World)”专栏拟登载介绍国外著名旅游景点的文章。请你给英国笔友Lucy写封约稿信。要点如下：
1．栏目介绍(国外著名旅游景点简介)；
2．稿件长度(不超过800词)；
3．交稿日期(截至本月底)。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy，
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[2021·开封市高三第一次模拟]上周六你校组织英语俱乐部成员去市博物馆观看了中国绘画艺术展。请你用英语写一篇新闻报道，内容包括：
1．活动的时间和地点；
2．展览的内容；
3．你的感受。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
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参考答案
(一)
第二节
【范文赏读】
Dear Nancy，
To remind the seniors of their growth, our school will hold a coming－of－age ceremony next weekend in the playground.
Firstly, the students will take an oath of the sense of duty for the society as grown－ups. Secondly, the students are supposed to express their thanks to the parents and teachers as they have done a lot for the students. Later, a representative of the parents who attend the ceremony will give a speech. Through the ceremony, students will learn to be grateful, and take on the burdens on their shoulders.
I have invited my mom to attend the ceremony and prepared a gift for her. More importantly, I will try my best to fulfill my dream.
Yours，
Li Hua
(二)
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【范文赏读】
Dear Mike，
So delighted to learn that your school is going to hold the annual “Chinese Culture Festival”， I'm here sharing some of my advice with you.
Firstly, it would be a good idea to hold a competition about Chinese poetry recitation, through which students can taste the charm of the Chinese language.Additionally，a speech concerning Chinese traditional festivals is highly recommended, as unique customs and traditions behind each festival will undoubtedly attract students.
I'm fully convinced that your festival will be a joyful and fruitful activity, which will spread brilliant Chinese culture to a larger extent.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
(三)
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The Charming Village in My Eyes
The charming village in my eyes is a place where people are living a peaceful, happy and healthy life.
Surrounded by green mountains and beautiful lakes，the village takes on a nice look, with neat paths and furnished houses. The roads leading to all directions are broad and clean. In addition, villagers have easy access to clean water and the Internet. It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online，thus improving their lives. It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits.
This is the beautiful picture of the village in my mind.
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My dream job
I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession.
As we all know, China has respected teachers and valued education since ancient times. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example—Miss Li，the head teacher of my junior high school, is a kind and patient person who is very popular with students.I have always followed her as an example and made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher，I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.
(五)
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Dear Lucy，
I am writing to see if you would like to write an article for our school website.
Many interesting articles from foreign friends have been published in the “English World” column of the website, making it very popular among students.In order to broaden our horizons this column will carry some articles about famous tourist attractions abroad. You are interested in travelling, so would you please write an article about one of the famous tourist attractions in your country? No more than 800 words would be fine. I am wondering if I could get your article before the end of this month.
Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours，
Li Hua
(六)
【范文赏读】
A visit to City Museum
Last Saturday, the members of our School English Club went to the City Museum, located in the downtown area of our city to appreciate a large exhibition of Chinese painting.
At the exhibition, a large number of Chinese paintings were on show, all of which are the works of famous Chinese painters. They're all typical Chinese paintings with nature as their main theme. Besides, we watched a video about the achievements we had made in the last few centuries. All the students were all amazed at our rich culture, saying that this visit was really a cultural feast.
The visit was a great success. It not only enriched our life, but also helped us learn more about Chinese painting culture.