北京高考英语作文写作指导
展开一、假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国好友Jim从微信朋友圈看到你参加了学校的红十字急救社团（Red Cross First Aid Club），写信让你了解情况。请给他回信，内容包括：社团简介社团开展的活动你的收获注意：1. 词数不少于100开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数Dear Jim，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua写作指导审题：人称：第一人称为主，第二人称为辅 时态：一般过去时为主提纲：开头句: 1. How is everything going? Since you asked me about the Red Cross First Aid Club that I’m in, let me tell you something about it.2 .I’m very glad that you want to know something about the Red Cross First Aid Club that I’m in, let me tell you something about it.文章主体:要点一：1. The club was founded last year to promote health education among students. So far, it has attracted over 100 students who are interested in health-related issues and willing to lend a hand during emergencies. The members meet every week to take courses or take part in voluntary services.2.This club was set up last year in order to enrich students’ knowledge of health. So far, more than 100 students have participated, all of whom are interested in health issues and willing to help others in an emergency. Members meet weekly for classes or volunteer service.要点二： Recently，we have just received CPR training and learned how to use the AED device, which is now available in most public places in China. In fact, the pictures you saw in my WeChat moments were taken when I was performing CPR on a dummy.Recently, we have been instructed by a professional doctor and learned how to use the AED equipment, which can be seen in most public places in China. As you can see in the picture on WeChat, we were in training at the time.要点三：I have gained a lot from the club. It has taught me some life-saving skills. Moreover, it provides me with a chance to see the medical professionals work up close, whose profound knowledge impresses me a lot. On top of that, I learned that life can be fragile so we should respect it and cherish every day.I’ve learned a lot from this club. It not only taught me some life-saving skills but also gave me a chance to get close to the medical staff, whose hard work left a deep impression on me. What’s more, I have learned more about the fragile of life, so we should cherish every day.结尾句：What clubs are you in? Write to me and tell me anything that you find interesting in your clubs! I look forward to hearing from you soon.What activities did you take part in? I’d like to share your good news. Looking forward to your reply soon.范文Dear Jim， How is everything going? Since you asked me about the Red Cross First Aid Club that I’m in, let me tell you something about it. The club was founded last year to promote health education among students. So far, it has attracted over 100 students who are interested in health-related issues and willing to lend a hand during emergencies. The members meet every week to take courses or take part in voluntary services.I have gained a lot from the club. It has taught me some life-saving skills. Moreover, it provides me with a chance to see the medical professionals work up close, whose profound knowledge impresses me a lot. On top of that, I learned that life can be fragile so we should respect it and cherish every day.What clubs are you in? Write to me and tell me anything that you find interesting in your clubs! I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 二、假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国好友Jim曾经在你校读书，现在想了解学校有哪些变化，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：学校的变化你的感受注意： 1. 词数100左右开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 Dear Jim，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 写作指导审题：人称：第三人称为主，第一、二人称为辅 时态：一般现在时为主提纲：开头句：I’m more than elated to inform you of some changes in our school at your request.I’m very glad to tell you about the changes in our school.文章主体：要点一：Renovated in 2019, the main buildings now have a modern feel, with dark orange walls and white borders. Meanwhile, the whole campus is bursting with vigor, full of recently-planted trees and flowers.After the redevelopment in 2019, the current teaching building with deep orange walls and white borders looks fashionable and atmospheric. The whole campus is tree-lined with flowers blooming all the year round and full of vitality.要点二：Hardware facilities have been updated, including new blackboards and computers in the classrooms.Classrooms have been reinstalled with electronic whiteboards and computers, and are equipped with modern hardware.要点三：The school library, which has been under repair during the last three months, will reopen next next week. It is said that the library will seat more students and the librarians have restocked the library shelves with large quantities of new books.The library has been redecorated. Besides, a large number of new books have been added to provide more students with a good opportunity to learn and read.结尾句：I am glad to witness these changes. They have provided us a better place to study and live. Frankly speaking, I will have a hard time leaving after graduation.I am heartily pleased to see these changes. Facing graduation, I am really reluctant to leave.范文：Dear Jim，I’m more than elated to inform you of some changes in our school at your request.Renovated in 2019, the main buildings now have a modern feel, with dark orange walls and white borders. Meanwhile, the whole campus is bursting with vigor, full of recently-planted trees and flowers.Hardware facilities have been updated, including new blackboards and computers in the classrooms.The school library, which has been under repair during the last three months, will reopen next next week. It is said that the library will seat more students and the librarians have restocked the library shelves with large quantities of new books.I am glad to witness these changes. They have provided us a better place to study and live. Frankly speaking, I will have a hard time leaving after graduation.All the best. Yours, Li Hua 三、假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim来邮件，询问你如何利用博物馆资源促进学习。请你给Jim回一封电子邮件，内容包括：经历感受注意：1. 词数100左右2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数 Dear Jim，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua写作指导审题：人称：第一人称为主，第二人称为辅 时态：一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅提纲：开头句：I’m glad to hear from you. Personally, I find museums a good source of knowledge and beneficial to study.I am happy to hear from you. Knowing that you want to know how to use the resources in the resources in the museum to facilitate your study, I would like to share my views with you.文章主体：要点一：Actually，my classmates and I often go to museums and attend exhibitions of all kinds. Such visits have helped us gain access to excellent resources.I usually go to the museum to watch exhibitions of different kinds on weekends. These experiences help me gain excellent resources.要点二：Once，in order to better understand “Ancient Chinese Inventions”, my class went to China Science and Technology Museum. Viewing delicate exhibits and listening to the guides introduction, I was deeply impressed by the wisdom and creativity of ancient Chinese People.Once, I went to the museum to make clear about “Ancient Chinese Inventions”. I saw many delicate exhibits and listened to the guide’s introduction there, deeply impressed by the wisdom and creativity of ancient Chinese people.结尾句：By the way, London is home to many fantastic museums. How do you make the most use of them? Do write and tell me about it.By the way, London is home to many fantastic museums. I hope my views on this issue can be of help to you.范文:Dear Jim， I’m glad to hear from you. Personally, I find museums a good source of knowledge and beneficial to study.Actually，my classmates and I often go to museums and attend exhibitions of all kinds. Such visits have helped us gain access to excellent resources.Once，in order to better understand “Ancient Chinese Inventions”, my class went to China Science and Technology Museum. Viewing delicate exhibits and listening to the guides introduction, I was deeply impressed by the wisdom and creativity of ancient Chinese People.By the way, London is home to many fantastic museums. How do you make the most use of them? Do write and tell me about it. Yours, Li Hua四、假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。因为疫情，你的外教Jim无法回国，写信向你询问寒假期间可以参加的活动。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：推荐一项活动介绍活动内容提醒注意事项注意：1. 词数不少于802.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua写作指导审题：人称：第一、二人称为主，第三人称为辅 时态：一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅提纲：开头句：I’m sorry to hear that you can’t go back home during the winter vacation. But it doesn’t matter. You can experience the relaxing and exciting life here in China.I’m sorry to hear that you can’t return to your country in winter vacation because of the epidemic. But don’t be sad. I’m sure you will also have a wonderful time in China.文章主体：要点一：I suggest you visit the Forbidden City. It is a must-see attraction in Beijing. There you can experience the life of the royal family and the way they celebrated the Spring Festival.Knowing you are interested in Chinese traditional festival, I recommend that you come to my home to spend the coming Spring Festival with my family.要点二：In addition, you can appreciate the beauty of the great treasures on display, which will offer you a great chance to explore the Chinese culture.The Spring Festival, which falls on the first day of first lunar month, is the most important festival in China to represent reunion and harmony.要点三：Usually the Forbidden City will be more beautifully decorated during the Spring Festival with colorful lights and delicate lanterns. You can improve yourself in the festive atmosphere. I’m sure the Forbidden city is worth a visit.On New Year’s Eve, all the family members get together to have a big dinner, wishing everyone a happy new year. It will be a great pleasure if you come to my home. We can make dumplings and enjoy the Spring Festival Gala together.要点四：As for the preparation, you can book the the ticket online on advance. Remember to wear a mask while visiting. You can also check the official website for more information.Of course, don’t forget to wear a mask because the temple fair is crowed.结尾句：I hope my recommendation can be of some help to you. If there is anything else I can do, please let me know. Wish you a happy holiday.Are you interested in it? I sincerely hope that you can accept my invitation. Look forward to your reply.范文一：Dear Jim：I’m sorry to hear that you can’t go back home during the winter vacation. But it doesn’t matter. You can experience the relaxing and exciting life here in China.I suggest you visit the Forbidden City. It is a must-see attraction in Beijing. There you can experience the life of the royal family and the way they celebrated the Spring Festival. In addition, you can appreciate the beauty of the great treasures on display, which will offer you a great chance to explore the Chinese culture. As for the preparation, you can book the the ticket online on advance. Remember to wear a mask while visiting. You can also check the official website for more information.I hope my recommendation can be of some help to you. If there is anything else I can do, please let me know. Wish you a happy holiday. Yours, Li Hua范文二：Dear Jim：I’m sorry to hear that you can’t return to your country in winter vacation because of the epidemic. But don’t be sad. I’m sure you will also have a wonderful time in China. Knowing you are interested in Chinese traditional festival, I recommend that you come to my home to spend the coming Spring Festival with my family.The Spring Festival, which falls on the first day of first lunar month, is the most important festival in China to represent reunion and harmony. On New Year’s Eve, all the family members get together to have a big dinner, wishing everyone a happy new year. It will be a great pleasure if you come to my home. We can make dumplings and enjoy the Spring Festival Gala together.Of course, don’t forget to wear a mask because the temple fair is crowed.Are you interested in it? I sincerely hope that you can accept my invitation. Look forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua
