上海中考英语作文模拟专项练习

上海中考英语作文训练

一、Please write at least 60 words on the topic "Give a like to School In the Air". (请以"为空中课堂点赞"为题, 写一篇不少于60个词的短文, 标点符号不占格)。

提示：

1.空中课堂一个无墙的课堂；

2.空中课堂一个别样的课堂；

3.空中课堂一个难忘的课堂……

经历了将近2个月空中课堂的你们, 请从自身的感受给空中课堂点赞并给出理由.

(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。)

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例文

Give a like to School In the Air

I want to give a like to school in the air because it is a classroom without walls. We can study at home instead of going to school.It's a special class. We can use a mobile phone or a computer to communicate and study. We can also share educational resources. What's more, it was an unforgettable class because we got to know more teachers and classmates from all over the country.We encourage each other and work together.

1.题干解读：本文是一篇提纲作文。请以"为空中课堂点赞"为题, 写一篇不少于60个词的短文, 标点符号不占格。注意时态的使用,并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动形象。

2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。

3.高分亮点：

短语：in the air；at home；instead of going to school.；share educational resources；got to know；all over the country；each other等。

句型：1. We can study at home instead of going to school.It's a special class．2.We can use a mobile phone or a computer to communicate and study．3. What's more， it was an unforgettable class because we got to know more teachers and classmates from all over the country．4. We encourage each other and work together．

二、Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

假设你是李平，最近收到加拿大朋友Jack的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复。

注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

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例文：

Dear Jack,

I’ve read your E-mail. Now let me tell you a little bit about how I use computers myself.

        First, I spent about two hours on the computer yesterday. I mainly looked up some information on the Internet and watched some videos. And I don’t think it’s right to spend too much time online every day. Because it hurts our eyes and affects our study. So we should use computers properly.

Yours,

Li Ping

1.题干解读：本文一篇电子邮件，根据Jack的电子邮件内容给他回复一封邮件。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，介绍昨天的事情应用一般过去时，表达自己的观点时应用一般现在时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时要根据邮件中的问题来回复。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

三、Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.（请根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

假设你的好朋友李华最近沉迷于电脑游戏，无心学习。他的父母和老师都非常担心，作为他的好朋友，请你给他写一封信：表达你对他的担忧，告诫他沉迷电脑游戏的危害以及摆脱目前这种状况的方法。（信件格式已给）

The following is for reference only

1. lose oneself in ...

2. be worried about ...

3. communicate with ...

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例文：

Dear Li Hua,

I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to computer games. Spending too much time and energy on games is harmful to your health. I’m worried about you. If you lose yourself in games, you may become isolated from the real world and ignore the beauty and love in life.

You can try other things to distract your attention. You can play basketball or take part in other sports with your friends. It can not only help you keep healthy, but also strengthen your friendship. Besides, you can communicate with your parents and friends, sharing you happiness and sorrow with them. Last but not least, you can read some interesting books to expand your knowledge in your spare time.

I will be happy if you get rid of the game. Look forward to your good news.

Yours,

Lily

1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应根据题目要求写信讲述自己对朋友的担忧，讲述玩电脑上瘾的弊端，并讲述摆脱游戏的方法。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主，讲述游戏的危害和摆脱游戏的方法及建议，要叙述完整，条理清晰。

四、Write a letter of at least 60 words on the topic “A suggestion for our school” (以“给学校的一个建议”为题写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。)

在近四年的初中校园生活和学习中，你学到和享受到了很多。但是通过你的观察，学校有些地方还有提升和完善的空间，比如在课后服务、活动项目、学生午餐、学校设施、校园文化等等方面。要求：请你结合自身经历，确定一个主题，给校长写封信，为学校提出一个合理化、可操作的建议，并说说你的理由或感想。

注意：1. 短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。

2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。

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例文：

Dear headmaster,

I am your student. I want to say something about our school. Although my school life is colorful and happy, I still want to have a suggestion to our school. In my opinion, our school should organize more activities, such as going hiking, holding art festivals, and reading and speech contest. I think our school pay more attention to our study, but ignore other skills. If our school can hold all kinds of activities, students will be more active and improve themselves quickly. It is important for students to grow up healthily.

Your student

1、题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，写作时应先确定主题，然后给学校提出建议，然后说出提建议的理由或感想，可适当发挥。

2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍建议和提建议的理由或感想时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。

五、5．Write at least 60 words on the topic “I can be better”【以“我可以更好”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格】

提示：校园吉尼斯纪录创造者的经历告诉我们：每个人都能够通过努力改变自己，让自己变得更好。请结合自己的具体经历谈谈你对这一观点的认识。

注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分

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例文：

I can be better

The “Guinness Campus” record holder’s experience tells us that everyone can change themselves and become better through hard work.

At the beginning of learning English, I felt it was very difficult. I dared not speak English because my pronunciation was not standard. I also thought my classmates would laugh at me. It wasn’t until I learned about “Guinness Campus” that I realized I could work to change that. I began to get up early every day to read English. I tried my best to imitate the pronunciation by listening to English songs and watching English movies. Finally, I got an A in the final speaking test.

I believe that as long as I persist, my spoken English will be better and better. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.

1.题干解读：阅读题干可知，本文要求以“我可以更好”为题写一篇记叙文。根据提示可知写作内容包括结合自己的经历和经验谈谈关于“每个人都能够通过努力改变自己，让自己变得更好”。写作要思路清晰，层次分明，逻辑清楚，语言的表达符合语法结构。

2.写作指导：例文采取三段式的写作手法，时态为一般过去时，写作时以第一人称为主，第一段写根据校园吉尼斯纪录创造者的经历告诉我们：每个人都能够通过努力改变自己，让自己变得更好；第二段联系身边小事和经验来说明；第三段写个人观点和感受。