牛津版 (深圳&广州)九年级上册（2014秋审查）Unit 1 Wise men in history备课ppt课件

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Fur steps
1. Fcusing n structure and clarity 2. Analyzing the cntent f yur writing3. Editing spelling, grammar and punctuatin mistakes4. Reading yur wrk ut lud
1. Fcusing n structure and clarity A well-rganized essay r article leads the reader thrugh a clear line f thinking. Generally speaking, a shrt essay cnsists f three parts:
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Each f the paragraphs shuld relate t sme aspects f yur tpic
state the tpic
state the tpic again
Intrductin :
My HbbiesI have a lt f hbbies and enjy ding many things in my free time. __________________. I ften read in my free time. I read many kinds f bks. And I like the stries that have gd endings. ___________________. I like all kinds f music. I ften listen t the music prgrams n radi. Althugh I can’t sing English sngs well, I listen t them a lt, which help me learn English. ________________. I ften play ping-png after classes. When I am ding sprts, I frget all my truble. In shrt, I enjy my hbbies and they are very helpful t my health and my studies.
I am a lver f reading
I am als a music lver
I like sprts as well
state the tpic: I have a lt f hbbies and enjy ding many things in my free time.
Tpic sentence: I am a lver f reading.
Tpic sentence: I am als a music lver.
Tpic sentence: I like sprts as well.
restate the tpic: In shrt, I enjy my hbbies and they are very helpful t my health and my studies.
Bdy
2.Analyzing the cntent f yur writingDes the writing have a unified pint f view? Are all the pints develped lgically?Are the tpic sentences and supprting details arranged prperly?Is the writing cherent with gd transitins?
Analyse yur lgic by cnstructing a backwards utline.  G thrugh the utline t make sure all f yur pints are supprting the tpic f the essay, and remve any infrmatin that desn’t cntribute t the main fcus.
Analyse yur lgic by cnstructing a backwards utline. 
(I have a lt f hbbies.)
(I am a lver f reading.)
(I am als a music lver.)
(I enjy my hbbies.)
(I like sprts as well.)
My HbbiesI have a lt f hbbies and enjy ding many things in my free time. ____________________ . I ften read in my free time. I read many kinds f bks. And I like the stries that have gd endings. ______________________. I like all kinds f music. I ften listen t the music prgrams n radi. Althugh I can’t sing English sngs well, I listen t them a lt, which help me learn English._________________ . I ften play ping-png and basketball after classes. When I am ding sprts, I frget all my truble. In shrt, I enjy my hbbies and they are very helpful t my health and my studies.
Bdy: tpic sentence+ supprting detail(s)
Tpic sentence1: I am a lver f reading.
Supprting details (sentences): I ften read in my free time. I read many kinds f bks.And I like the stries that have gd endings.
The mst imprtant cmes first!
Tpic sentence2: I am als a music lver.Supprting details (sentences): I like all kinds f music.I ften listen t the music prgrams n radi.Althugh I can’t sing English sngs well, I listen t them a lt, which help me learn English.Tpic sentence3: I like sprts as well.Supprting details (sentences): I ften play ping-png and basketball after classes. When I am ding sprts, I frget all my truble.
In my pinin, electricity is very precius in ur life. We cannt see it, but it cntained in batteries. The chemicals inside it prduce it. If we d nt use it prperly, we might be killed. With electricity, peple can watch TV and play PC games. We must be careful with it.
What d yu think f the paragraph?
Tpic sentence:
In my pinin, electricity is very precius in ur life.
Supprting details:
It needs lts f time and mney t build a pwer statin.Electricity cmes t ur flats frm the pwer statin far away.Cal and water—— the materials fr prducing electricity are precius.
The first draft
In my pinin, electricity is very precius in ur life. It needs lts f time/mney t build a pwer statin. Electricity cmes t ur flats frm the pwer statin far away. Cal and water—— the materials fr prducing electricity are precius.
In my pinin, electricity is very precius in ur life. It cmes int ur flats thrugh wires. The wires are cnnected t the pwer statin far away. Building pwer statins needs a lt f mney and time. We usually use cal and water t make electricity and they are very precius. We must nt waste electricity. We shuld make gd use f it.
The secnd draft
In my pinin, electricity is very precius in ur life. It needs lts f time/mney t build a pwer statin. Electricity cmes t ur flats frm the pwer statin far away. Cal and water——the materials fr prducing electricity are precius.
The First draft
new infrmatin
given infrmatin
The third draft
In my pinin, electricity is very precius in ur life. It cmes int ur flats thrugh wires. The wires are cnnected t the pwer statin far away. As we all knw, building pwer statins needs a lt f mney and time as well. In additin, we usually use cal and water t make electricity and they are als very precius. In a wrd, we must nt waste electricity. We shuld make gd use f it.
The use f transitins
T imprve the fluency流畅性 and cherence连贯性 f yur writing, yu may need t add transitins t shw hw ne sentence relates t anther and hw ne paragraph leads t the , mrever, in additin …firstly, secndly, thirdly…
Many students have difficulty taking a test. They get pr grades n their quizzes. They must wrk harder in class. They shuld spend mre time reviewing and ding hmewrk. They’d better ask teachers fr help if they have any questins.
Many students have difficulty taking a test. As a result, they get pr grades n their quizzes. They must, therefre, wrk harder in class. In additin, they shuld spend mre time reviewing and ding hmewrk. Finally, they’d better ask teachers fr help if they have any questins.
The use f transitins
Once yu have finished writing, it is essential that yu re-read yur paragraph tw r three times t check it fr spelling, grammar and punctuatin mistakes.
3. Editing spelling, grammar and punctuatin mistakes
Find and underline the mistakes in the fllwing stry. Discuss the mistakes and, next t each line, write what kind f mistake it is. Use the abbreviatins belw. (P12)
gr=grammar mistakesp=spelling mistakep=punctuatin mistake
Julius Caesar killed by freind
Julius Caesar was warn that smene wanted t kill him and he shuld nt speak n public? He was standing n the steps f the Senate when he attacked. He said, “I must speak t my peple.” As he died, he see his ldest friend Brutus. He was ne f the killers, “Yu t, Brutus?” he asked, and die.
Julius Caesar killed by friend
Julius Caesar was warned that smene wanted t kill him and he shuld nt speak in public. He was standing n the steps f the Senate when he was attacked. He said, “I must speak t my peple. ”As he died, he saw his ldest friend Brutus. He was ne f the killers. “Yu t, Brutus?” he asked, and died.
Other cmmn punctuatin mistakes
《Harry Ptter》is my favrite series f fantasy nvels.　　Harry Ptter is my favrite series f fantasy nvels. (italics)
I like ice-cream、chclate、gingerbread and milkshake.　　 I like ice-cream, chclate, gingerbread and milkshake.
My mm prepared the fried chicken, pizza, fruit juice…　　My mm prepared the fried chicken, pizza, fruit juice……
A shrt guide t punctuatin （P14）
Cmmn English punctuatin marks :perid  .questin mark  ?exclamatin mark !cmma  ,qutatin marks “ ”apstrphes ’hyphens –cln :
Yu may catch far mre mistakes by reading yur wrk ut lud!
4. Reading yur wrk ut lud
Please evaluate a piece f yur writing accrding t the self-check list and then revise yur writing.