Unit 4 单元话题满分范文必背-2021-2022学年八年级下册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版）

Unit 4Why don’t you talk to your parents?

单元话题满分范文必背

1．良好的家庭关系对青少年的健康成长很重要。但现实生活中，不少孩子和父母之间缺乏必要的沟通和交流。作为晚辈，我们应该如何和父母友好相处呢？请根据下面的提示，以How to get on with parents?为题写一篇80词左右的文章。(文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数)

How to get on with parents?

For teenagers, it’s important to get on with parents.What should we do?

【答案】One possible version:

How to get on with parents?

For teenagers, it’s important to get on with parents. What should we do?

Firstly,we should spend some time communicating with our parents. For example, we may talk about our teachers, classmates or the things that happen in school. Secondly, we should do something with our parents each week, such as making dinner or going shopping. We’ll improve our relationship with them in this way. Thirdly, we’d better discuss our problems with them. They will help us find better ways to solve them.

It’s not easy to get on with parents. So we should learn to be understanding first.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本题是一篇给提纲作文。要求根据所给的要点提示以“How to get on with parents?”为题写一篇短文，谈一谈如何好人父母友好相处。注意要点齐全。

2.写作指导：审题可知，文章应采取一般现在时和第三人称进行叙述，文章开头已给出，第二段就如何与父母相处提出详细的建议；第三段简要地概括结尾。第二段中可以用firstly, secondly, thirdly等等引出各要点，让人一目了然。短文要详略得当，中心突出，内容上要保证要点齐全，无单词和语法上的错误。

2．中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。

要求：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。

3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Hello everyone,

Hello everyone,

I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.

That’s all. Thank you!

【答案】Hello everyone,

I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.

I am not very tall and very common. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.

My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well.

I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，要求用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。要求从个人外貌特点、与人沟通及学习压力等方面进行写作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。短文用第一人称形式，一般现在时态。

写作亮点：短文开头直奔主题：我想要谈谈我的烦恼及怎样处理他们；后面三段分别从外貌上的烦恼、与父母交流上的障碍、学习上的压力几方面分别谈论自己的烦恼及处理的方式，生动具体，条理分明。文中的不定式作宾补、作定语、作宾语用得准确恰当；and连接的并列句、并列谓语等等都使短文显得简捷生动。

【考点定位】 考查提纲类作文。

3．假设你是Tina，你的笔友Tom给你发了一封电子邮件，信中他诉说了他的烦恼：他最好的朋友要过生日，他的朋友们准备的礼物都很贵，可是他却没有足够的钱给最好的朋友买很昂贵的礼物。请根据提示给他写一封回信，给他一些合理的建议。

提示：1. 买礼物并不一定必须买贵的。

2. 没有必要因为不买贵的就感到难过。

3. 同学应该会理解。

4. 花钱太多还得向父母要。

5. 可以买花或者自制贺卡等。

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【答案】Dear Tom,

Glad to hear from you, but I’m sorry to know that you’re so worried. In my opinion, gifts are just something to show our love. They can’t be measured by money.

I don’t think you need to buy an expensive gift, although your classmates will buy expensive gifts for him. If you buy one expensive gift, you will need too much money. And if you don’t have enough money, you have to ask your parents for money. And I don’t think it is a good idea. Why don’t you buy some flowers and make a beautiful birthday card for your best friend? That’ll be enough to make him happy.

Yours,

Tina

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇应用文写作，根据情景设置，针对电子邮件中Tom所诉说的烦恼，提出自己合理化的建议。要点提示中共列举了5点，这也是写作的基本框架，要求考生认真审题，根据汉语提示，去理清自己的写作思路，准确把握句子的时态，想着如选择恰当的英语句式去表达。文章中出现了两个if引导的条件状语从句：If you buy one expensive gift, you will need too much money. And if you don’t have enough money, you have to ask your parents for money.复合句的使用，丰富了语言表达效果。同时，对于最后一个要点的处理采用了提建议的一种表达方式：Why don’t you buy some flowers and make a beautiful birthday card for your best friend? ，也是作者消除好友烦恼的同时提出的合理化建议，成为文章的写作亮点。

4．假如你叫林琳，你的美国笔友Joe给你写了一封邮件倾诉自己的烦恼。请你根据邮件的内容，给他写一封回信，帮助他解决烦恼。

Dear Lin Lin，

I am feeling unhappy these days.I don't know why I get angry so easily now.I shouted at my parents last week and had a fight with my best friend yesterday.What should I do？Could you give me some advice?

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours，

Joe

要求：1.词数为70左右。

2．要求思路清晰，层次分明。

提示词：forgive v. 原谅solve v. 解决

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【答案】Dear Joe,

I was glad to hear from you, but I’m sorry to hear about your problems. I think you must say sorry to your parents and your best friend. Your family and your true friends are always with you. You can tell them about your problems. I think they will forgive you and help you to solve them. Also, you can listen to soft music when you get angry. It can help you relax.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Lin Lin

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析：这篇作文首先要求一定要读懂笔友的信，只有读懂了才能知道对方遇到了什么样的问题，通过阅读发现Joe近日心情不好而且和父母、最好的朋友之间都出现了一点摩擦，他写信请求帮助。我们在作文中应该提出一些解决方案（如何和他们相处，如何对待自己的坏心情），并通过语言安慰Joe，达到写作的目的。

写作亮点：首先表明收到信的感受，运用了固定句型（I am glad to hear from you），其次表达了如何对待父母和朋友的观点（say sorry to…），简单介绍了为什么要这么做的原因（be with you ），并对Joe进行了安慰，（they will forgive you and help you to solve them），最后，为Joe提出了好建议（listen to soft music），可以说结构完整，逻辑清晰，完成了既定的写作目标。

5．假设你是张伟，你的英国笔友弗兰克(Frank)来信告诉你，他因长时间打游戏与父母发生了争吵，他现在很难过。请你根据以下要点及要求，给他写一封英文回信。

要点：1.长时间打游戏是错的，父母是对的；2．打游戏浪费时间，伤害眼睛，不利于学习；3．理解尊重父母，与他们好好相处；4．向父母道歉，与他们沟通；5．不打游戏，努力学习，帮父母做家务。

要求：1.必须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥；2．词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。

Dear Frank,

I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents.

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Please be happy and everything will be better.

Yours,

Zhang Wei

【答案】例文

Dear Frank,

I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. I really worry about you.I think it's wrong for you to play games for a long time.Your parents are right because playing games wastes a lot of time and it's bad for your eyes and study.

You should understand and respect your parents and get on well with them. In this way, you can be happy and improve yourself quickly. I also think that you should make an apology to your parents, for you have made them very sad and angry. When you meet some trouble, you'd better communicate with them. Don't play games any more, study hard and never give up. If you're free, you can help them with housework.

Please be happy and everything will be better.

Yours,

Zhang Wei

【解析】

【详解】

1、题干解读：题目要求给你的笔友写一封英文回信，要求根据所给要点解决你的英国笔友弗兰克(Frank)遇到的一些问题。

2、例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态主要以一般现在时为主；例文详细介绍了处理问题的一些建议；结构清晰；逻辑性强。

3、高分亮点：

短语：worry about；for a long time；be bad for；get on well with；had better do sth；communicate with。

句型：I think it's wrong for you to play games for a long time；When you meet some trouble, you'd better communicate with them。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如worry about；for a long time；be bad for；get on well with；had better do sth；communicate with等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

6．假设你是张伟，你的英国笔友弗兰克 (Frank) 来信告诉你，他因长时间打游戏与父母发生了争吵，他现在很难过。请你根据以下要点及要求，给他写一封英文回信。

写作要点：

1.长时间打游戏是错的，父母是对的；

2. 打游戏浪费时间，伤害眼睛，不利于学习；

3. 理解尊重父母，与他们好好相处；

4. 向父母道歉，与他们沟通；

5. 不打游戏，努力学习，帮父母做家务。

写作要求：

1.必须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥；

2．词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。

Dear Frank,

I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents.

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Please be happy and everything will be better.

Yours,

Zhang Wei

【答案】例文：

Dear Frank,

I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. I really worry about you. I think it's wrong for you to play games for a long time. Your parents are right because playing games wastes a lot of time and it's bad for your eyes and study.

You should understand and respect your parents and get on well with them. In this way, you can be happy and improve yourself quickly. I also think that you should make an apology to your parents, for you have made them very sad and angry. When you meet some trouble, you'd better communicate with them. Don't play games any more, study hard and never give up. If you're free, you can help them with housework.

Please be happy and everything will be better.

Yours,

Zhang Wei

【解析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求写信给弗兰克，表明对打游戏的看法，提出和父母和睦相处的建议。写作时需承接开头围绕写作提示，亮明自己的看法。

2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、二人称和一般现在时为主来叙述，写作时要写出长时间打游戏的危害及对于改善亲子关系的建议，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。

7．假如你是Li Ping，请根据以下写作要点写一封80词左右的email，向你的朋友Tom说明自己不能去参加他的生日宴会。

写作要点：

1. 感谢邀请；

2. 道歉，说明你不能去参加他的生日宴会。

3. 简要说明你不能参加的理由：

(1) 奶奶卧病在床需要人照顾；

(2) 父母出差要到香港下个月才能回来；

(3) 自己的英语不是很好，英语考试即将来临，要为英语考试准备，多做听力练习；

4. 告诉Tom你感到十分抱歉，请他见谅。祝他生日快乐！

写作要求：

1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；

2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。

3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清楚；

4.至少80词。（不含已写出的英文）

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best Wishes!

Yours,

Li Ping

【答案】One possible version

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I’d love to go but I can’t. I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And my parents are out on business in Hong Kong. They are coming back next month. Also, my English is not so good. I must do more listening practice. I need to study for my coming English exam. I’m very sorry that I can’t go to your party.

Thank you for inviting me. I hope you can have a good time. Happy birthday!

Best Wishes!

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作文体是邮件。在写作时应承接邮件开头，按照邮件的格式来写；首先是称呼；然后是正文内容，正文包含三个方面的内容：感谢对方的邀请，拒绝对方的邀请，叙述拒绝的理由；结尾告诉对方自己无法参加的歉意以及对对方的祝福；最后落款，署名。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；按照邮件的格式叙述内容；表达拒绝别人的邀请时，语言表达要委婉，态度要温和；叙述拒绝的理由时，层次分明，条理清楚，内容得当；表达歉意时，诚恳真诚。

8．假如你是David，你的笔友Mark来邮件谈到自己的烦恼：性格比较内向，不善于与人交往，与同学的关系也不太融洽，所以在学习和生活中的压力很大。请你给他回一封邮件，提一些建议。词数：70词左右。邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。 Dear Mark，

Thanks for your email.I am sorry to know that you are having problems at school.

【答案】Dear Mark,

Thanks for your email. I am sorry to know that you are having problems at school. But I think there is no need to worry about it. You are very clever. I hope my advice can help. I think you should talk more with your friends about your problems. Try to be more outgoing and friendly to everyone. You can also tell your parents or your teachers that you need some help. Finally you should take part in some interesting activities after class to communicate often with your classmates.

Hope you'll get along well with your classmates and make great progress in your study.

Yours,

David

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文，给你的笔友Mark回信，给他提一些建议。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am sorry to……，You are……，But I think there is no need to……，You can……，Finally you should……, Hope you'll……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头对Mark遇到的麻烦感到难过，接下来给他提了一些建议，最后希望他能和同学相处得好，并且学习进步。此处thanks for, worry about, talk with sb about sth, be friendly to, take part in, get along with, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。