unit 5 单元话题满分范文必背-2021-2022学年八年级下册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版）

Unit 5What were you doing when the rainstorm came?

单元话题满分范文必背

1．假如你是李华，请根据提示完成作文，记录你和你的家人昨晚7: 00做的事情，可适当发挥。

词数：不少于65词 (开头和结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数)。

1. 你在做作业，而你哥哥在玩电脑游戏；

2. 你的妈妈在做饭而你的爸爸在看球赛；

3. 你的爷爷奶奶在聊天，你的妹妹在和宠物玩。

参考词汇 do one’s homework, play computer games, watch football games...

Now I’d like to share a family moment with you. At 7 o’clock last night, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How happy we were!

【答案】例文

Now I’d like to share a family moment with you. At 7 o’clock last night, I was doing my homework at home. I would have an important test next day. Meanwhile, my brother was playing computer games. While my mother was cooking in the kitchen, my father was watching football games on TV in the living room. Where were my grandparents? They were in the living room, too. While they were talking happily with each other, my little sister was playing with her lovely pet.

How happy we were!

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文主要描述自己家人昨天晚上7点正在做的事情，题干中给出了细节要点，写作时不要遗漏，也可适当增加细节，使文章更加流畅。

2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和过去进行时为主。文章主要描述7点时每个人正在做的事情，写作时要注意运用过去进行时，也要运用适当的连接词使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚。做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

2．根据提示写一段短文，谈谈你和Mary上星期天做的事情, 80词以上，开头已写好，不计入总词数。These days students have a lot of stress from school.They are always busy even on Sundays. Last Sunday, Mary was very busy. What about you?

Last Sunday, Mary was very busy, and so did I._____________________________________________

【答案】One possible version:

Last Sunday, Mary was very busy, and so did I. When Mary was reading English at 9:00, I was listening to the English tapes. At 10:00, while she was doing math homework, I was watching TV, because my favorite program was on at that time. After that I had lunch with my dad . From 2:00 to 3:00 p.m. Mary and I were having a piano lesson together. Both of us like playing the piano. But at 4:00 last Sunday afternoon, while Mary was visiting her friends ,I had to do my homework.

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，谈论我和Mary上个星期做的事情。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如busy，so did I，English tapes，while，at that time，have a piano lesson,both of us等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

3．你经历过什么令你印象深刻的事情吗？ 假设在本周的英语口语课上，老师要求每个小组讲述一件记忆深刻的事情。请你以“An Unforgettable Event”为题，写一篇英语短文， 代表小组发言。

写作提示：1. 事件发生的时间和地点；

2. 事件发生的时候你在做什么；

3. 事件的重要意义或令你印象深刻的原因。

写作要求：1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；

2. 100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

An Unforgettable Event

I have a good friend. He is on a basketball team. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

【答案】例文：

An Unforgettable Event

I have a good friend. He is on a basketball team. He had a game last Saturday. I promised to go to cheer him up, but on that day I woke up late. So I made my way to the playground in a hurry. While I was running to the bus stop, I saw a woman and she was lost. She was new here and didn't know the way to the City Hospital, so I took her there. Finally, when I got to the playground, the game almost ended. I said sorry and explained the reason. He said, "It doesn't matter."

I remember this event well because it reminds me of doing what I should do at any time.

【解析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“An Unforgettable Event”为题作文，根据所给提示和要求写一件记忆深刻的事情。

2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般过去时为主来叙述，写作时要承接开头，紧紧围绕提示内容，写清楚何时、何地、何事，为什么难忘，必要时可作合理的补充，最后简单总结，照样全文；做到主题突出，结构完整。

4．Lily上周六下午去她叔叔家了。请根据表格信息，写一篇约70个单词的英文短文，描述她刚到她叔叔家时看到的情景。

【答案】Lily went to her uncle’s home last Saturday afternoon. When she arrived, her uncle was looking through a newspaper on a chair while her aunt was reading a book on the sofa. Her cousin Johnny was watching an English movie on the computer. Their dog Jimmy was drinking water. When they saw her, they were very happy. The dog even kept jumping around her.

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。根据所给表格中所提供的信息，用英文描述Lily刚到她叔叔家时看到的情景。结合语境理解，可知短文应该一般过去时态与过去进行时态来描述，人称为第三人称，写作时注意主谓一致，同时还应注意写作中要有适当性的发挥，做到语句通顺、语意连贯。

点睛：在完成写作时，首先要把握文章的体裁，根据信息内容可知，这是一篇记叙文写作。人称的选择为第三人称，文中要用到过去进行时态，要正确掌握其构成形式were/was+ doing ,注意主谓一致。写作中要用到when/while的时间状语从句，要区分它们的用法，与while连用的时态只能是进行时态。

5．假如你是大明，描述上星期六晚上7点钟，你们一家人都在做什么。

要求：1.词数：80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】Hello, I'm Darning. Last Saturday evening, my family were all at home. At 7:00, my grandparents were watching TV in the room. My father was drawing a picture at the desk. My mother was washing clothes. My sister wanted to take part in a piano competition and she was playing the piano. What was my brother doing? Oh, he was chatting with his friends on the Internet. What about me? I was listening la music in my bedroom. What a happy family!

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇图表，要求介绍星期六晚上7点钟，你们一家人都在做什么。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用过去进行时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

6．假如你是一名警察，昨晚10点住新星旅馆206房间的王先生外出时房间失窃了。你询问了其他房间的几个邻居当时在干什么。请根据下面表格提示写一则调查报告。

注意：1.以警察的身份来写；

2．可以适当发挥，主要用过去进行时；

3．70词左右。文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

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【答案】Mr.Wang in Room 206 in Xinxing Hotel called to say he was stolen at 10 o'clock last night while he was out.We asked a few of his neighbors what they were doing at that time. Here is the result.

Miss Li in Room 106 said she was chatting online with friends. Mr. Zhang in Room 204 was taking a shower. Mr. Liu in Room 207 was watching TV. Mr. Xia in Room 306 said he was writing a letter then. Old John in Room 105 said he was sleeping.

We will keep on doing some other surveys and try to find the thief.

【解析】

【详解】

【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如last night，a few of，at that time，be chatting online，take a shower，watch TV，keep on doing，try to do，等。而Mr.Wang in Room 206 in Xinxing Hotel called to say he was stolen at 10 o'clock last night while he was out./ We asked a few of his neighbors what they were doing at that time. Here is the result./ Miss Li in Room 106 said she was chatting online with friends.等多种复杂从句结构的运用更是为文章增色不少。

点睛：这是一篇提纲作文。根据表格内容可知用一般过去时，按照提示内容逐条进行适当的发挥，最后连接成一篇完整的作文即可。

7．假如你是一名警察，昨晚10点住新星旅馆206房间的王先生外出时房间失窃了。你询问了其他房间的几个邻居当时在干什么。请根据下面表格提示写一则调查报告。

注意：1．以警察的身份来写；

2．可以适当发挥，主要用过去进行时；

3.70词左右。文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Mr. Wang in Room 206 in Xinxing Hotel called to say he was stolen at 10 o'clock last night while he was out.

【答案】Mr. Wang in Room 206 in Xinxing Hotel called to say he was stolen at 10 o'clock last night while he was out. We asked a few of his neighbors what they were doing at that time. Here is the result. Miss Li in Room 106 said she was chatting online with friends. Mr. Zhang in Room 204 was taking a shower. Mr. Liu in Room 207 was watching TV. Miss Xia in Room 306 said she was writing a letter then. Old John in Room 105 said he was sleeping. We will keep on doing some other surveys and try to find the thief.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用较高级词汇和句型，以使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富于变化。

8．假设你叫王益，今天早晨上学途中，你目击了一场交通事故。请你根据下表信息，写一篇英语短文叙述你的所见、所闻和所感。

要求：1.80词左右；2.条理清晰，语句通顺。参考词汇：摩托车motorbike；遵守交通规则obey the traffic rules

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【答案】例文：

This morning, on my way to school, I saw a traffic accident. It happened at 7:40 when I was waiting at the traffic lights. A man rode his motorbike and tried to cross the road when the traffic lights were red. Then the motorbike crashed into a bus. The man hurt his left leg seriously. The driver called 110 using his mobile phone. The policemen arrived at 7:50. They sent the man to hospital.

I think safety is the most important thing. Everyone should obey the traffic rules.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述交通事故的经过、伤亡情况、救助过程及自己的感受。

2.写作指导：本文用第三人称来写作，时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述交通事故的经过叙述完整，条理清晰。