unit 6 单元话题满分范文必背-2021-2022学年八年级下册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版）

Unit 6An old man tried to move the mountains.

单元话题满分范文必背

1．请根据下列提示写一个寓言故事。80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示：1. 从前，森林里有很多动物，它们每天在一起高兴地玩耍；

2. 太阳也想加入它们，但它们认为太阳太热，所以白天动物们都躲起来了；

3. 太阳很伤心，就一直下雨，动物们很难过，于是它们想了一个办法，等晚上太阳不太热的时候再和它一起玩耍；

4. 太阳又高兴起来了，快乐地回到了这片森林。

Once upon a time, there was a big forest. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文：

Once upon a time, there was a big forest. Many kinds of animals lived there and they played happily every day. The sun wanted to join them. But the animals thought the sun was shining and that it was too hot. So they couldn’t stand the heat and they hid quickly in the daytime. The sun felt sad and it began to rain. It rained for a few days. The rainy days made the animals sad. So they came up with a good idea. They tried to rest during the daytime and played with the sun at night when it wasn’t too hot. The sun was pleased and came back to the forest happily. They were all happy again.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于材料类书面表达，根据提示内容，写一则寓言故事。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主。描述故事时，场景应描写细致；并且故事发生的背景、起因和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。

2．假如今天英语口语课的主题是“My Favorite Story”,请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文讲述你最喜欢的故事，在课上和大家分享。

要点提示：（1）What is your favorite story?（2）What is it about?（3）What can you learn from it?

要求：（1）意思连贯，语言通顺；（2）70词左右。

My Favorite Story

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【答案】My favorite story is The Fox and the Crow. The fox wanted to get the meat in the crow’s mouth. So he said a lot of beautiful words to the crow. The crow was so happy that he opened his mouth to sing a song. But as soon as he opened his mouth, the meat fell onto the ground and the fox got it. I think the story is interesting and meaningful. It reminds me that we should never believe the person who wants to cheat us.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇提纲类作文，写一篇短文讲述你最喜欢的故事。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，注意根据要点提示从三个方面进行描写。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，需要注意人称和谓语动词的搭配问题。讲述故事内容时时态可用一般过去时态，注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，适当使用连接词。

3．请你根据提示和表格内容及要求，用英语讲述“曹冲称象”的故事。

提示：孙权送给曹操一头大象。曹操想知道大象有多重，但不知道如何称量大象的重量，他的儿子曹冲想出一个好办法。

要求：1. 包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥；

2. 词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Today I’ll tell you a famous Chinese story named Cao Chong Weighed an Elephant. Here it goes.

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【答案】参考范文

Today I’ll tell you a famous Chinese story named Cao Chong Weighed an Elephant. Here it goes.

One day, Sun Quan sent an elephant to Cao Cao. Cao Cao wondered how heavy the elephant was. Everyone said that they couldn’t weigh the elephant unless they killed it. Soon Cao Cao’s son Cao Chong told people to lead the elephant to a boat and mark the water level on the boat. Then they took away the elephant. Next, they kept putting stones into the boat until the water reached the marked level. Finally, Cao Chong said, “After we weigh the stones, we will know how heavy the elephant is.” How clever he was!

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；要叙述清楚“曹冲称象”这个故事及曹冲的方法；最后可以总结一下故事并对曹冲的人物性格作总结。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；故事时态采用一般过去时；描述故事时，场景应描写细致；并且故事发生的起因过程及结果需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。

4．假如你是李华，在网上看见美国网友迈克发帖说很想了解中国的卡通片《喜洋洋与灰太狼》(Pleasant Sheep and Big Big Wolf)。请根据以下提示给他回帖。《喜洋洋与灰太狼》是著名卡通编剧黄伟健的作品。该片以羊和狼两大族群间妙趣横生的争斗为主线，剧情轻松诙谐，对白幽默，深受大家喜爱。

要求：可适当添加细节以使行文流畅；不少于80词（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：cartoon maker卡通编剧

Dear Mike,

                                                                                                                                                 Yours,                                                                                          Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mike,

I’d be happy to tell you something about the cartoon Pleasant Sheep and Big Big Wolf. It is written by the famous Chinese cartoon maker Huang Weijian. The carton tells us stories about the young and brave sheep fight against the wolves. The stories are very interesting. The sheep and the wolves are very funny. We children, our parents and even our grandparents like to watch it. The sheep have a lot of fans both in China and overseas.

If you are looking for entertainment, stay at home and watch it. Don’t miss it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇回帖，李华在网上看见美国网友迈克发帖说很想了解中国的卡通片《喜洋洋与灰太狼》(Pleasant Sheep and Big Big Wolf)。该片以羊和狼两大族群间妙趣横生的争斗为主线，剧情轻松诙谐，对白幽默，深受大家喜爱。

2.例文点评：这篇短文先介绍了《喜洋洋与灰太狼》的故事情节；时态采用一般现在时为主，描述故事时，场景描写细致，述完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语：be happy to do；tell sb. something about；fight against

句型：The carton tells us stories about the young and brave sheep fight against the wolves.; If you are looking for entertainment, stay at home and watch it.if引导的条件状语从句。

5．根据下面的汉语故事提示，写一篇英文故事。故事开头已经给出，你可以接着写下去。

生金蛋的鹅

       从前，一位农夫发现自家的鹅窝中有一只黄色的蛋。他将蛋带回家，惊喜地发现这是一个金蛋。此后，农夫每天都能得到一个金蛋，他靠卖他的金蛋变得富有起来。后来农夫变得越来越贪婪(greedy)，他想一下子得到鹅肚子中所有的金蛋。于是他杀死了鹅．但是，鹅肚子中什么也没有。

The goose（鹅）that can lay gold eggs

     Once upon a time,a farmer went to his goose's nest,and saw a yellow egg there.

【答案】The goose(鹅) that can lay gold eggs

       Once upon a time,a farmer went to his goose's nest.and saw a yellow egg there. He took the egg home. To his joy, he found that it was an egg made of gold. From then on, he got a gold egg every day. And he soon became rich by selling his eggs. Later the

farmer became more and more greedy. He wanted to get all the gold eggs at once. So he killed the goose. When he looked inside, he found nothing in its body.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们根据提示来写一个故事。这篇作文是叙事的，而且题目中已经给出了汉语提示，我们只需要根据这些提示将这个故事表达出来即可，但是这种情况学生们容易犯一个错误，就是会受汉语表达习惯的影响，写出汉语式的英语，这是学生们尤其要注意的。因为是讲故事，因此这篇作文的使用应使用一般过去时态，注意每句话中的谓语动词都要变成过去式，尤其是要注意一些不规则动词过去式的形式。写作的时候，要使用一些平时积累的句型和短语，在句子之间使用一些适当的连词，使文章表达流畅，意思连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。短文中作者按照题目的要求叙述这样的一个故事。首先这篇短文中使用了正确的时态，短文使用了一般过去时态，每句话中的谓语动词使用了过去式，尤其是正确使用了不规则动词的过去式形式，如went, took, found, got等；其次短文内容完整，叙事有顺序，有感染力。短文给我们清楚地讲述了这个故事，没有遗漏题目中的要点。最后短语使用了一些好的连词和句型，如To his joy, he found that it was an egg made of gold.、Later thefarmer became more and more greedy.、So he killed the goose. When he looked inside, he found nothing in its body等。

6．《后羿射日》是一个古老的神话传说。请根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文，简单介绍一下这个故事。

提示：1.从前，天上只有一个太阳，人们生活得很幸福。

2.突然有一天，天上出现了10个太阳。气候是如此得热以至于庄稼干枯，动物死亡。人们生活得很是艰难。

3.有一个英雄叫后羿。他擅长射箭。于是，人们就请求他把多余的九个太阳射下来。

4.于是，后羿登上海边的一座高山，射掉了九个太阳。

5.人们非常感谢后羿。后来他娶了嫦娥，过上了幸福的生活。

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【答案】Hou Yi Shoots the Suns

Once upon a time, there was only a sun in the sky and people had a happy life. But one day ten suns appeared in the sky. The weather was so hot that all the crops and many animals died. People had a hard life.

There was a young man. His name was Hou Yi. He was good at shooting. So people asked him to shoot nine suns. So he climbed the high mountain beside the sea. He tried to shoot nine suns. Again, there was only a sun in the sky and people were very glad.

At last, Hou Yi married Chang’e and they lived happily.

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍《后羿射日》这个故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there was……，The weather was……，He was good at……，So people asked him to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了以前天上有一个太阳，人们过着幸福的生活，接下来介绍天上出现十个太阳，人们过着艰难的生活，后羿射掉九个太阳，最后后羿娶了嫦娥，过着幸福的生活。此处once upon a time, have a ……life, in the sky, so……that……,be good at, ask sb to do sth, try to do sth, at last等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

7．假如你是杨森，你的英国笔友Sally对中国文化很感兴趣，她希望你能给她介绍一些经典的寓言故事。请你根据下面的提示及要求，给Sally写一封邮件，给她讲讲“狐假虎威”的故事，然后请她谈一谈对该故事的看法。

提示：

1. 很久以前，一只老虎在森林里抓到一只狐狸，想吃掉它；

2. 狐狸告诉老虎它是被派来做百兽首领的，如果老虎吃了它，后果会很糟糕；

3. 老虎不信，就跟在狐狸后面看其他动物是不是真的怕狐狸，结果动物们一看到老虎就都逃走了，老虎以为他们害怕狐狸，所以把狐狸给放了。

要求：

1. 包含提示内容，可以适当发挥，使全文连贯；

2. 词数：80词左右（邮件的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

Dear Sally,

I’m glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Today I’ll tell a story about a tiger and a fox.

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What do you think of the tiger and the fox? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Yang Miao

【答案】参考范文

Dear Sally,

I’m glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Today I’ll tell a story about a tiger and a fox.

Once upon a time, a tiger caught a fox in the forest and wanted to eat him. But the fox told the tiger that he was sent to be the leader of all the animals. The consequences would be terrible if the tiger ate him. The tiger didn’t believe him, so he followed the fox to see if the animals were afraid of the fox. The animals all ran away as soon as they saw the tiger. The tiger thought they were scared of the fox, so he let him go.

What do you think of the tiger and the fox? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Yang Miao

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇电子邮件写作。要求给笔友Sally讲讲“狐假虎威”的故事。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时和一般过去时，开头结尾用第一人称来书写，第二段主体部分用第三人称书写。写作时可分为三段式：第一段感谢Sally对中国文化如此感兴趣；第二段结合要点介绍“狐假虎威”这个故事；第三段写期待收到Sally的回复。在写作时应该注意符合故事情节，同时注意语言的准确性和连贯性，可适当补充细节使文章连贯。

8．根据图画提示，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，描述这则故事。

提示词 tortoise   乌龟 catch up with   赶上

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【答案】One possible version：

Once upon a time, there was a rabbit. It liked running. One day a tortoise decided to compete with the rabbit. All the animals went to watch the game. At first,the rabbit ran very fast and the tortoise walked very slowly. The rabbit thought it ran so fast that the tortoise wasn’t able to catch up with it. So it fell asleep under a tree. However, the tortoise kept on walking without taking a break. Finally, the tortoise won the game and all the animals cheered for it. This story tells us we should always do everything carefully and shouldn’t look down on others.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。描述“龟兔赛跑”这则寓言故事。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时，人称以第三人称为主。先根据图片按照顺序描述故事情节，最后表达从这个故事中得出的哲理感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

9．你准备参加学校“英语角”开展的“用英语讲故事”活动, 你选取了“曹冲称象”这个大家熟悉的故事。

请你根据下边图片内容, 用英语写一篇80个词以上的小短文。

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【答案】How Cao Chong Had the Elephant Weighed

　　Cao Chong was very glad to have received an elephant as a present. He wanted to know how heavy the elephant was, but there was no scale(秤)big enough to weigh such a huge creature.

One day, Cao Chong said to his father, “I’ve found a way to weigh the elephant. ”Cao Chong asked a man to lead the elephant onto a boat. When the boat stopped sinking the man drew a line along on the boat side. After the elephant was led away, Cao Chong had some men put stones into the boat until the water reached the line.

Cao Chong asked the men to weigh each stone from the boat and put down the number. “Add up all the numbers and we will know the weight of the elephant. ”Cao Chong said to his father with kind of pride.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇看图作文，要求根据图片内容描写“曹冲称象”的故事。

2.写作指导：“曹冲称象”这个故事大家都比较熟悉，由于这是介绍过去发生的故事，所以本文主要时态就是一般过去时态，人称以第三人称为主；本文应该写成记述文的形式，要按照开头，经过和结尾的三段式结构来写。写作中可以使用大量的短语和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意语句通顺，逻辑合理。

10．同学们对“愚公移山”的故事一定有着很深的印象吧？请根据下面的图片及提示词语，以The story of Yu Gong为题，把“愚公移山”的故事用英语简要叙述一下，并谈一谈你从故事中学到了什么。100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词语: move the mountains, start digging, Zhi Sou, it is impossible..., die, sons, grandsons, continue to move, god, be moved, help, the story reminds us ...

The story of Yu Gong

Once there lived an old man called Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. So Yu Gong

【答案】例文：

The story of Yu Gong

Once there lived an old man called Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. So Yu Gong decided to move the mountains.

Although Yu Gong was old, he decided to move the mountains with his family. So Yu Gong started digging. At that time, a “clever” man called Zhi Sou laughed at him and told him that it was impossible to move such high mountains. But Yu Gong didn’t listen to him and said that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. Then a god was moved by Yu Gong so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains.

The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文主要讲述“愚公移山”的故事，写作时可根据图片所给提示以及常识进行写作，要注意故事的顺序，题中给出了提示词语，写作时要适当运用，也可适当增加细节，使文章更丰满。

2.写作指导：本文主要讲述“愚公移山”的故事，描述故事内容用一般过去时，讲述故事告诉的道理时用一般现在时。第一段讲述愚公打算移山；第二段讲述愚公移山的过程；第三段讲述愚公移山告诉人们的道理。文章的逻辑比较清晰，写作时注意运用不同的句式，不要出现拼写和语法错误。

11．假如你们班要举行一次看图讲英语故事比赛。请你根据下面图片内容写一个故事来为你的发言做准备。70词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

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参考词汇：乌龟turtle；兔子rabbit；比赛race

Once upon a time，a turtle and a rabbit had an argument about who could run faster.______________________________________________________________________

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【答案】Once upon a time，a turtle and a rabbit had an argument about who could run faster.They decided to have a race.The race started.The rabbit ran very quickly but the turtle walked slowly.“The turtle is so slow.I will have a rest under the tree.”said the rabbit.After a while，the rabbit woke up.At this time，the turtle was far away.The rabbit ran quickly but it was too late.In the end，the turtle won the race.

【解析】

【详解】

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试题分析：这是一篇看图作文。它是龟兔赛跑的故事，本文时态主要是过去式。对于看图作文一定要看清画面，了解图示所表达的主要内容，尤其要注意图片中的人物、地点和背景；把握关键词语，积极展开联想；逐图进行描述，综合起来思考。用自己最熟悉最有把握的句型和词汇来表达。尽可能地用多样化的句子结构和句型，使语言丰富、流畅。写完之后要检查修改。要对照题目要求，认真通读全句、对话或短文，检查内容有无遗漏，时态、语态是否妥当，单词的拼写是否正确，主谓是否一致，句子的语序和表达是否符合英文习惯等，尽量减少错误。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文。时态运用正确，内容要点完整、应用词汇灵活准确，句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，上下文连贯，字数符合要求。

12．从前，森林里住着狐狸妈妈和小狐狸。一天小狐狸饿了，狐狸妈妈去给她找食物，后来发生了什么样的故事呢? 请根据图片提示写一则英语小故事。

要求: 1. 表达清楚, 无拼写错误;

2. 60个词左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

　　Once upon a time, there was a fox and her baby in the forest.   _____________

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【答案】Once upon a time, there was a fox and her baby in the forest. One day, the baby was hungry and cried. Mother Fox decided to get some food for her baby, so she went to a village. She got a chicken and hurried to her house. When she was near her house, the hunter came. Mother Fox shouted, “It’s dangerous. Run quickly! ”Baby Fox ran away but Mother Fox died.

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【详解】

本文记叙了狐狸妈妈给小狐狸寻找食物，路上遇到一名猎人，结果狐狸妈妈被猎手枪杀的故事。根据文章的开头Once upon a time可知，讲述的是很久以前的故事，因此用一般过去时态来描述，人称为第三人称。写作前，要认真思考四幅图所包含的故事情节，根据信息提示去组织写作素材，注意文章的条理性。要点：1．从前，森林里住着狐狸妈妈和小狐狸；2．一天小狐狸饿了，狐狸妈妈去给她找食物；3．捉到一只小鸡，返回路上，遇到追赶来的猎人；4．狐狸妈妈被猎人枪杀。

点睛：看图作文须注意以下几点：

1.首先应仔细阅读图画及文字说明确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文或说明文为主。 记叙文：要抓住记叙文的六要素：时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(w～)和过程(how)。即：五个“W”和一个“H”。根据图画提示把这六个问题写清楚了，至少可得及格分数。说明文：一般先要把图画联系起来，弄清楚图画的目的、意图；然后进行抽象概括，找出一个说明对象，接着根据图画从时间、过程、步骤等方面加以解释、说明；最后进行总结，得出结论。

2．确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写，一般采用第一人称；如果是以讲故事的形式来写，则一般采用第三人称。但不管用哪种人称，全文都必须一致。

3．确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁，确定文章所要用的时态。切记全文时态的一致性。

4．发挥联想要合理、适度。这类文章的说明一般都要求考生作适当的联想和发挥，以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。但联想和发挥一定要根据图画做到合情合理，不能过多地胡乱联想和发挥。