湖南省湘潭市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-04作文

湖南省湘潭市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编

04作文

一、材料作文

1．（2022·湖南湘潭）亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。

内容包括：

1.你对这位老师的印象；

2.你感谢他（她）的原因；

3.你对他（她）的祝福。

注意：

1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.可适当举例或拓展；

3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。

It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2．（2020·湖南湘潭）假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Peter想了解你和你的家人在2020年这个长寒假的学习和生活情况及你的感想，请根据以下要点或做适当发挥，给他回一封Email。

参考动汇：上网课have online lessons        健康生活live a healthy life

独立学习study by oneself            相互理解understand each other

注意：

1.词数在80词左右,邮件的开头.结尾已给出,不计入总词数.

2.文中不得出理真实的校名和人名,

Dear Peter,Thank you for your greetings.

Now I’d like to share my family and I did during the long winter vacation in 2020.________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

二、讲稿

3．（2021·湖南湘潭）榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，一定有很多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、钟南山、老师、亲人、朋友……假如你是李华，学校英语社团将举办“The person I admire”的演讲比赛，请你根据要点提示或做适当发挥，写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。

要点提示：

What does he/she look like?

What is he/she like?

Why do you admire him/her?

参考词汇：钦佩admire     鼓励 encourage     挑战 challenge     成功 succeed       树立好榜样set a good example       实现我的梦想achieve my dream

要求：

1.词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2.文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。

Hello, everyone!

I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all. Thanks for listening.

参考答案：

1．例文：

It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to my English teacher Mr. Zhang. She is very kind and patient. She has helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school. When I was in trouble, she used to encourage me and give me some good advice. At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it. She came and cheered me up. She told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I have made great progress in English. I’m so thankful to her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in the future. I hope she will become better and better.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，本文开头已经给出，选择一位你想要感谢的老师，表达感激之情，根据提示要点进行写作，可以适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称和第三人称来描述，时态以一般过去和一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作，要求描述对老师的印象，感谢的原因以及对老师的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

2．例文

Dear Peter,

Thank you for your greetings．

Now I’d like to share my family and I did during the long winter vacation in 2020．I had online lessons at home every day．I spent most of my time reading books．I think it’s the best way to get knowledge．In my free time, I often chatted with my parents so that we could communicate better each other．In order to keep healthy, I insisted on doing exercise for one hour every day．Besides, I also learnt how to cook．

By doing these things, I have learnt how to live a healthy life and learn independently．In addition, I also know the importance of understanding each other．Now I miss my school life and I hope we can go back to school as soon as possible．

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。假设你是李华，要求根据要点提示的内容，给你的外国朋友Peter写一封Email，向他介绍你和你的家人在2020年这个长寒假的学习和生活情况及你的感想；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时和一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。

3．例文：

Hello, everyone!

I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.

She is in her forties. She is a great mother and a good doctor. When I have troubles in my study. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them and encourages me to challenge these problems. And I always succeed in solving them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She sets a good example for my study. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.

I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.

That’s all. Thanks for listening.

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己最敬佩的人是谁以及为什么值得你敬佩等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来，用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。