山东省临沂市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-05作文

山东省临沂市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编

05作文

一、电子邮件

1．（2022·山东临沂）假定你是李嘉，请阅读下面的邮件，用英语表示愿意帮忙并根据邮件内容回复。可以适当发挥。要求：

1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；

2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；

3. 文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。

二、材料作文

2．（2021·山东临沂）在你的学校生活、家庭生活、社会活动及兴趣爱好等方面，一定有让你引以为豪的事情。请以“ One Thing I’m Proud of ” 为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，记述一件令你感到自豪的事情。

要求：

1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分；

2. 不少于60词。

提示：

1. What is the thing you’re proud of?

2. Why are you proud of it?

One Thing I’m Proud of

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3．（2020·山东临沂）在初中三年的时光里，大家或多或少都会有一些不愉快的经历，请以“An Unhappy Experience”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述一个令你不愉快的事件，分享你的体验和感悟。

要求:

1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分;

2.不少于60词。

提示:

1. Tell a story about one of your unhappy experiences,

2. What did you learn from the experience?

An Unhappy Experience

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参考答案：

1．例文

Dear Bert

Thanks for your e-mail. It’s great. I’d like to tell you about how I relax.

Music, movies and sports can make me relaxed, but my favorite way to relax is hiking. At the age of 12, I went hiking with my parents for the first time. And I have been in love with it since then. I go hiking with my friends or parents on weekends. We can enjoy the fresh air and the peaceful country scene. Also, we can have a talk happily.

Relaxing is very important for me. If I keep studying for a long time without relaxing, I’ll feel very tired and even I’ll have a headache. This is bad for my health. However, if I relax myself by hiking, I’ll feel happy, energetic and creative. All in all, relaxing is good for my body and mind.

Best wishes!

Li Jia

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据来信内容提示进行邮件回复，学生需要围绕题目所给提示，结合自身经历来谈谈平时放松自己的方式。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般现在时并根据内容结合其他的时态。正文可分为三段式：第一段承接开头；第二段介绍自己最喜欢的放松方式是什么和什么时候开始以及频率；第三段讲述放松对自己的重要性和原因。文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。

2．例文：

One Thing I’m Proud of

I still remember how I became good at English.

Every English class used to be like a bad dream for me. I didn’t understand my teacher most of the time. One day, the teacher talked with me and gave me some useful advice. I began to review new words from time to time, even on the way to school. I read aloud to practice pronunciation. I watched English videos, and kept a diary in English. Whenever I met new words, I looked them up in a dictionary. I kept using English every day. Practice makes perfect. About two months later, I got an “A” in the final exam.

I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that everyone can achieve their goals through hard work.

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：该题目属于提纲作文写作。在写作时应根据题目和提示内容以及相关经历讲述一件令自己感到自豪的事情，并介绍原因。

2. 写作指导：本文采用第一人称进行写作，时态以一般过去时为主；讲述自己英语学习的转变过程，具体细致；结尾介绍原因简洁有力，全文结构清晰明了。

3．例文：

An Unhappy Experience

Everyone has some unhappy experiences. I had a very unhappy experience between my best friend and me when I was in Grade 8. Never can I forget the time when I prepared for my final exam. During those days, I had so much endless homework that I couldn’t finish it. In order to deal with the problem, I decided to copy my friend’s homework. But to my surprise, she refused me and gave me no reason. I felt very angry with her. After that, I had no choice but to finish it myself. Finally, I got a better score that time because lots of the questions in the exam were from the homework. I felt sorry for that and tried my best to improve our relationships.

From that experience, I learnt that there is no shortcut to learning, and diligence makes the winner. Meanwhile, I am proud of having a friend like her. I will study from her.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，主要围绕“An Unhappy Experience”展开讨论，分享自己的亲身经历，描述自己生活中不愉快的事情，以及自己的感悟。

2.例文点评：文章采取两段式，直接开篇点题，讲述自己与朋友之间的不愉快的经历；第二段写了自己从这段经历中学到了什么。文章要点齐全，结构完整，语句衔接自然，表达准确。

3.高分亮点：

短语：between…and…；prepare for；so…that…；In order to；deal with；decide to do；to one’s surprise；feel angry with；lots of；try one’s best to do；be proud of。

句型：when引导的时间状语从句；倒装句；so…that…引导的结果状语从句；have no choice but to do；because引导的原因状语从句；and并列句；that引导的宾语从句。