广西贵港三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-05作文

广西贵港三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编

05作文

一、材料作文

1．（2020·广西贵港）最近我国涌现出了许许多多的英雄人物，社会上掀起一股向英雄学习的热潮。请你根据下面表格提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你心中的英雄。

写作要求：

1. 短文必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；

3. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；

4. 词数80左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇：virus 病毒Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

二、书信作文

2．（2021·广西贵港）近来，为了进一步加强学生在校的管理，许多学校制定了新的校规。假如你是李华，请你根据下面表格的内容提示，用英文给你的笔友Mark写一封信，介绍你校的新校规，并谈谈你对新校规的看法。

写作要求：

1. 内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；

3. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；

4. 词数80左石。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Mark,How’s it going? I'm glad to share my new school rules with you.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

What about your school rules? Please write soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

三、讲稿

3．（2022·广西贵港）前段时间，同学们观看了“天宫课堂”之后，纷纷表示要向三位宇航员学习，成为一名有理想、有抱负的青少年。请你根据以下的内容提示，以“How to be an excellent teenager”为主题，用英语写一篇发言稿，在下周的主题班会上发言。

内容提示：1.努力学习，积极锻炼；

2.尊敬长辈，乐于助人；

3.学会做家务；

4.热爱中国文化，培养各种兴趣爱好；

5.感想：……

写作要求：1.内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；

2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；

3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；

4.词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇： respect 尊敬

Hello, everyone! I’d like to share my ideas about how to be an excellent teenager.

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That’s all. Thank you.

参考答案：

1．例文：

Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. Li Lanjuan is a hero in my heart. She is one of the most famous doctors in China. She was born in September,1947. She is very brave and she's not afraid of viruses. Besides, she doesn't worry about her own safety. After the outbreak of the epidemic in 2019, Li Lanjuan and medical staff made great efforts to treat patients. With her knowledge, she gave lots of useful advice on what to do to avoid the virus. Her advice saved thousands of people. She is a good doctor in the eyes of Chinese people respected by the whole country.

I want to be a doctor like Li Lanjuan when I grow up. Li's attitude has had a big influence on me. From her, I have learned that I should study harder and stay confident.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，介绍自己心目中的英雄李兰娟，文中要从她的简介，崇拜的原因以及谈论自己的理想三个方面来写，主要采用第三人称，然后根据写作的内容选用恰当的时态。

2.例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。

3.高分亮点：

短语： one of the most famous doctors； be born in；be afraid of；worry about；make great efforts to do；with her knowledge；grow up。

句型：①疑问词+不定式作定语 With her knowledge, she gave lots of useful advice on what to do to avoid the virus.

②过去分词作定语 She is a good doctor in the eyes of Chinese people respected by the whole country.

③时间状语从句 I want to be a doctor like Li Lanjuan when I grow up.

2．例文

Dear Mark,

How’s it going? I'm glad to share my new school rules with you.

We must finish our homework on time. We can’t take phones with us to school. We had better get enough sleep, at least 9 hours a day. We should develop reading habits, read a good book once a week. Doing exercise is also important, we must do exercise an hour a day. We must keep safe first. Don’t fight with each other and never go swimming alone.

I think these school rules are good for us. We must obey them.

What about your school rules? Please write soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，向笔友Mike介绍新校规。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。根据表格内所给的要点来进行一一介绍，在安全方面至少要补充一点，最后要发表自己对这些新校规的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

3．例文：

Hello, everyone! I’d like to share my ideas about how to be an excellent teenager.

Above all, to be an excellent teenager, it is very important for us to study hard and exercise actively. When we have a healthy body and have enough knowledge, we can help others better. Next, we must respect the elderly and be willing to help others. Doing some voluntary work can make us feel happy. It’s really nice to help others. Third, we should learn to do housework when we are free. It can make our parents feel happy. Finally, we should love Chinese culture and develop all kinds of interests and hobbies. Although it is not easy for us to be an excellent teenager, we also try our best to make it. Only in this way, our country will be stronger and stronger.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿。以“如何成为一个优秀的青少年”为题写一篇短文。根据内容提示完成写作，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。开头和结尾已给出，第二段介绍成为一个优秀的青少年的具体的做法，最后表达自己的感想。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。