安徽省卷三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-05作文

安徽省卷三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编

05作文

一、材料作文

1．（2021·安徽）假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括：

1.事情经过；

2.个人感悟。

注意：

1.词数80~100；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；

4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：pocket money (n.零花钱); meaningful (adj.有意义的)

Once I Was Praised

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二、电子邮件

2．（2022·安徽）假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下：

1.风趣幽默，深受喜爱；

2.团队合作，历险克难；

3.追逐梦想，永不言弃。

注意：

1.词数80～100；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：character（n.人物）；overcome（v.克服）

Dear Mike,

Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hui

三、书信作文

3．（2020·安徽）假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者，请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下：

1.熟悉家乡；

2.乐于交流；

3.擅长英语。

注意：1.词数80-100；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；

4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇： journalist (n.记者)；column (n.专栏)

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

参考答案：

1．One possible version

Once I Was Praised

Once I was praised because I did something meaningful with my pocket money.

One day, I happened to know some students in a school were hungry for knowledge but they didn’t have enough books. I decided to offer my help. With all the pocket money I saved, I bought some books online, and gave them away to the school. My parents were very happy and praised me when they heard about it. They said I did a meaningful thing.

I believe that every little bit helps. I will continue to do what I can to help others.

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Once I Was Praised”为题，结合提示进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍事情经过；第三段描述个人感悟。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

2．例文

Dear Mike,

Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.

The book Journey to the West was written by Wu Cheng’en during the Ming dynasty. It tells a story about the Tang monk Xuanzang and his three disciples. The book is humorous and well received. In the book, the four main characters show teamwork as they overcame numerous difficulties. Finally, they attained the true Buddhist scriptures. This story tells us to chase our dreams and never give up.

You are bound to enjoy yourself while reading the novel and you can share with me your opinions whenever you like.

Yours,

Li Hui

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，向Mike介绍《西游记》这本书。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍这本书的内容以及想表达的哲理；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

3．例文：

Dear Sir/Madam,

I hear your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team.

First, I know a lot about my hometown, such as its history and culture. Besides, I used to work as a journalist for my school newspaper and I did a very good job. I'm easy-going and always ready to communicate with others. Moreover, I have a good knowledge of English, and I'm skillful at expressing myself clearly in English.

I'm sure to be the right person you are looking for. I'd be thankful if I could get this chance.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：本题属于书信作文，信件的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示要点写一封自荐信介绍自己并申请成为小记者。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，先表达写信目的，然后根据要点提示介绍自己，最后再次点明确信自己是最合适的人。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。

3. 高分亮点：

单词和短语：hope to do sth.；a member of；such as；besides；used to do sth.；work as；do a very good job；be ready to do sth.；communicate with；moreover；have a good knowledge of；be skillful at；in English；look for。

句型：and连接并列句；省略that的定语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。