山东省威海市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-05作文

山东省威海市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编

05作文

一、材料作文

1．（2020·山东威海）阅读理解B篇材料中，Mary Chan经常听爷爷讲起他难忘的老师Mr. Tan。再读本篇材料，假如你是Mary，请以“I have been wondering…”为题，简要介绍Mr. Tan，写写你对Mr. Tan严厉教育行为的看法，以及如果你也遇到了这样严厉的老师，你的想法或做法。

要求：（1）词数100左右，题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数；

（2）可适当归纳引用文中对Mr. Tan的描述，但要以自己的感想为主；

（3）文中不得出现任何与考生相关的真实信息。

I have been wondering…

When I was little， my grandfather often told me about his teachers. He said he would never forget Mr. Tan, a strict teacher I have been wondering about it. ...

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二、电子邮件

2．（2022·山东威海）某英语杂志社Just Ask栏目收到一位青少年Claire的电子邮件，邮件中讲述了自己的困惑，并向大家寻求帮助。认真阅读这封电子邮件，假定你是Sarah或Kevin，请从不同角度给出合理化建议。

要求： (1) 词数100左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

 (2) 文中不得出现任何与考生相关的真实信息。

Dear Claire,I understand you. Once I was also in the similar situation. It’s not easy for us to get through teenage years smoothly. Here are my opinions. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Good luck!

Sarah/Kevin

3．（2021·山东威海）假如你的英国朋友Helen要来威海参加一个交换项目，她想顺便了解威海的文化氛围，但由于疫情原因不能成行。请你根据所给信息提示，给她写一封电子邮件，重点向她介绍一下威海城市书房（public library）的情况，并简要陈述城市书房对人们文化生活的影响。

信息提示：

要求：

（1）条理清晰，语言通顺，内容积极，书写规范；

（2）词数100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；

（3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

Dear Helen,It’s a pity that you can’t come to Weihai. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Next time when you come to Weihai, I’d like to show you around and we’ll enjoy the culture here.

Your friend,

Zhong Hua

参考答案：

1．例文：

I have been wondering...

When I was little, my grandfather often told me about his teachers. He said he would never forget Mr. Tan, a strict teacher. I have been wondering about it. Mr. Tan never smiled at school. And he beat or kicked the students, or asked them to run around the school. In my opinion, Mr. Tan wasn't a good teacher.

Now I am going to finish my middle school. I have experienced many teachers. Gradually I understand my grandfather. I have realized that strict teachers are also good teachers. Sometimes teachers punish students just because they want to make them full of energy, to urge them to do better, and to help them get into good habits. That is what responsible teachers often do.

In our school life, we often have teachers like Mr. Tan. We should try to understand them. And as students, listening carefully in class is responsible for ourselves. But, of course, such kind of teachers should control their own temper and action. They should find more good methods to deal with the affairs with the students. And if we really can't get on well with such strict teachers, maybe we can talk with them, and tell them what we think.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示简要介绍谭先生，发表对谭先生的严厉教育行为的看法，以及如果自己也遇到了这样严厉的老师，你会有什么想法或做法。

2.例文点评：例文以第一人称为主，主要采用一般现在时来写作。本文讲述了自己遇到的老师的行为以及自己的观点和想法，叙述完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语：tell about；in my opinion； is responsible for; full of; urge them to do; get into good habits; get on well with。

句型：what引导的宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；and连接的并列句；when引导的时间状语从句。

2．Version 1

Dear Claire,

I understand you. Once I was also in the similar situation. It’s not easy for us to get through teenage years smoothly. Here are my opinions.

First of all, just be yourself and stick to your own style. There is no need to care too much about what you are in others’ eyes. After all, your outer look is not as important as your inner beauty. Figure out what you are good at and work hard to make yourself better at it. Everyone will look up to you if you are outstanding enough.

What’s more, you should know what true friends are. A true friend will always care about you, not your clothes. He will reach for your hand and touch your heart, but not laugh at you.

In addition, wearing comfortably and conveniently is enough for a teenager. With the growth of your age and experience, you will develop your sense of fashion.

Good luck!

Kevin

Version 2

Dear Claire,

I understand you. Once I was also in the similar situation. It’s not easy for us to get through teenage years smoothly. Here are my opinions.   

First of all, the clothes we wear don’t need to be fashionable but suitable. Fashion can mean a lot, not just about clothes. For example, if you can speak beautiful English or volunteer to help others, you are in fashion.

Next, a true friend should be someone who really understands you. You can have a talk with your friends laughing at you and tell them your feeling. I believe they will change.

Most of all, different people can have different opinions even for the same clothes. The true fashion is to be yourself. Don’t care too much about what others say. Keep active, do what you are good at and improve yourself to be a better person.

Good luck!

Sarah【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据邮件的内容，写一封回信，给出建议。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：以例文1为例，写作时要以第二和第三人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二、三、四段就他人的看法，交友和穿着等方面给出建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

3．范文1：

Dear Helen,

It’s a pity that you can’t come to Weihai. As you have known, Weihai is one of the most suitable living cities in the world. The cultural atmosphere is very good, especially The Public Library. Located in every corner of the city, the public libraries are quiet and clean, with a lot of different kinds of books in each library. They are free to all the citizens of our city. Many volunteers come to the libraries to do the service after work. Now these public libraries have had great effects on people’s lives. More and more people in Weihai go to the public libraries to borrow books. They are good places for the people to read, study or even to relax in. Thanks to the public libraries, the people’s culture level has developed greatly.

Next time when you come to Weihai, I’d like to show you around and we’ll enjoy the culture here.

Yours,

Zhong Hua

范文2：

Dear Helen,

It’s a pity that you can’t come to Weihai. I’m glad to hear that you are interested in the culture of our city. Now let me tell you something about the public libraries in Weihai.

Thanks to the government, many public libraries have been built in the past few years. You can find them in every corner of the city. The public libraries are quiet and clean, with a lot of different kinds of books suitable for different people. They are free to all the people of our city. Many volunteers come to the libraries to do the service after work. Now these public libraries have had great effects on people’s lives. More and more people go to the public libraries to borrow books. They are good places for the people to read, study or even to relax in.

Next time when you come to Weihai. I’d like to show you around and we’ll enjoy the culture here.

Yours,

Zhong Hua【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，但写作时要按邮件的格式来写。在写作时应承接短文开头，根据表格中汉语提示的内容，介绍威海城市书房的情况，包括分布、环境、藏书、功能和面向群体等方面。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时。在介绍内容时，力求语言通顺，内容全面，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。