Module 10 模块主题写作详解与训练--2022--2023学年外研版九年级英语上册

外研版英语九（上）Module 10模块主题写作详解与训练模块主题写作整体感知 话题分析本模块以“Australia”为话题，介绍了澳大利亚的历史、饮食和文化以及西方国家的文化风俗等。旅游是学生们感兴趣的话题，更是中考命题的热点，出题率比较高。该话题的常见命题形式：1. 描写一个地方，介绍给朋友；2. 描写自己的一次旅游经历等。通过本模块的学习，要求学生能够利用图片等资料介绍景点及自己的经历；能够运用简单的that引导的定语从句描述某次旅游经历；能够用短语等表明事情发生的先后顺序。 常用表达1. It lies... 它位于……2. The air is very fresh. 空气非常清新。3. It has a population of... 它有……人口。4. It has a history of... 它有……的历史。5. First... On the first day... Then... The next day... After that... Finally... 首先……在第一天……然后……第二天……那之后……最后……实例分析 典型例题    假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack和他的家人要来中国旅行。请给他写一封100词左右的信向他介绍一下中国，并且给他推荐一些著名的景点。参考词汇：travel agency 思路点拨1. 体裁：书信；2. 人称：第一、第二、第三人称；3. 时态：一般现在时。写作模板引入正题I’m glad to hear that...具体介绍China is a great country... the weather...the Great Wall... 表达希望I’m looking forward to... 连句成篇Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear that you and your family are coming to visit China.China is a great country with a very long history, so there are lots of places of interest here. It is the best time for you to visit China in autumn. Because the weather then is neither too cold nor too hot. When you come here, you can first go to Beijing and pay a visit to the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum and the Bird’s Nest. After that you can travel with agencies to other famous places, such as Jiuzhaigou, Guilin and so on.I’m looking forward to seeing you.Yours,Li Hua范文欣赏（一）假如你叫李明，现在在新西兰留学。国内的朋友李华给你发来了电子邮件想了解一些新西兰的风俗习惯。请你根据提示给他回复一封邮件。提示：1. 在新西兰人们谈论的话题通常是天气和体育运动；2. 在新西兰，许多家庭都有自己的花园。周末人们要么在花园里劳动，要么出去度假；3. 如果应邀到新西兰人家里做客，没有必要带贵重的礼物，给男主人带一盒巧克力或一瓶酒，给女主人带一束鲜花即可。注意：1.词数为80左右；2.电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：新西兰New Zealand, 男主人：host, 女主人：hostess, 一束：a bunch ofTo:lihua1992@yahoo.com.cnFrom:liming1990@yahoo.com.cnDear Li Hua,Thank you for your email. You want to know something about the customs in New Zealand. OK, let me tell you some. First, the topics that people in New Zealand talk about are usually weather and sports. Secondly, many families in New Zealand have their own gardens. On weekends, people either work in their garden or go out for their holidays. Thirdly, if you are invented to a New Zealander’s home for dinner, you don’t need to take very expensive gifts. You can take a box of chocolate or a bottle of wine to the host, or a bunch of flowers to the hostess.Best wishes!Your friend,Li Ming（二）小明喜欢旅游，他去过泰国（Thailand）。在一次报告中，小明向同学们介绍了泰国。要点包括：1. 泰国有许多花草树木，是一个美丽的国家；2. 一些泰国人讲英语，同他们交谈很容易；3. 泰国有中国食物；4. 泰国一年四季变化不大。请以“A Beautiful Country—Thailand”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。A Beautiful Country—Thailand    Good morning, dear friends. I am very glad to give a talk about Thailand. I like traveling and I have been to Thailand. Thailand is a beautiful country. There are a lot of trees, flowers and grass in Thailand. Some people in Thailand speak English, so it is easy to talk with them. What’s more, you can find Chinese food in this country. The temperature in Thailand is almost the same all year round, so you can choose to Thailand whenever you like. If you have a chance to visit Thailand, I’m sure you will like it.  That’s all. Thank you.（三）你们学校的外籍老师Miss Green 要到海南岛去度假，她向你（Zhang Ming）了解情况。请你为她写一段简要的介绍。内容包括：1. 海南岛位于中国的南部，全年多雨炎热；2. 在海南岛的度假活动可以有：钓鱼、游泳、潜水、冲浪、欣赏美丽风光等；3. 提示她带上度假必备品：太阳镜、伞、太阳帽等；4. 词数：100左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）提示词：潜水dive；太阳帽 sunhat。Dear Miss Green,A trip to Hainan is the best choice for your summer holiday. Hainan Island is in the south part of our country. The weather there is pretty pleasant.Haikou city is the capital of Hainan Province while it is also the biggest city on the island. There, you could either go visit the flower markets or enjoy the delicious seafood. There, you could find many beautiful beaches. People there love walking along the seaside or swimming in the sea, and you can go swimming, diving, surfing and so on.On Hainan Island, you could enjoy bright sunshine, fresh air and beautiful scenery. The sunshine there is very heavy, do not forget to bring your sunshine glasses, umbrella and sunshine hat. You will never forget that.Zhang Ming自我展示你上个月与父母去北京度假了。在北京游览了很多地方，包括紫禁城、颐和园和长城等，你被这个现代化的大都市的发展所震惊了。同时给你留下深刻印象的还有人们的友好以及一些人甚至会说英语。请你写一篇100词左右的短文介绍一下你的北京之行。参考词汇：admire钦佩；the Forbidden City紫禁城；the Summer Palace颐和园；the Great Wall。       外研版英语九（上）Module 10模块主题写作自我展示答案I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents last month and we stayed there for a week.To my surprise, Beijing is such a modern city that my parents and I all admire the development of it. We visited many wonderful places there, such as the the Forbidden, the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. What impresses me most is that the people there are very friendly and some of them can even speak English. But I still think that there are some problems of this city which I dislike. There are too many people and the traffic is too heavy. If there were fewer people and less traffic, it would be better.