中考书面表达写作专项复习课件

这是一份中考书面表达写作专项复习课件，共28页。PPT课件主要包含了书写注意事项等内容，欢迎下载使用。

T be able t write an English cmpsitn The ways f cmpsitin writing. Use the ways t write a cmpsitin.
Learning Objective
Discuss abut this picture
（2021河北 ） 请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。提示 （1）What are the man and the wman ding? （2）What shuld yu d when yu see peple litter like this? Why?要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 （2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名 （3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：thrw, envirnment, civilized（文明的） I can see a man and a wman in the picture. The man is___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
认真审题，分析背景,找出文章要表达的中心。
定人称、定时态：介绍图示中两个人在做的事情，人称为_______，时态为___________；介绍自己看到此类情况的做法，人称为_______，时态为_________
定主题：_____________
一般现在时/一般将来时
Read the tips carefully t think abut the tpic , including the backgrund.
Fr example, in this passage:
用核心词汇或短语列出文章要点。
The man: thrw away ,everywhere
The wman: stp, ask…t …, put…in…
I: when,desn’t listen t, pick up, myself, prtect the envirnment
Ending : take actin , a mre beautiful place
What are yu asked t write abut? Hw many aspects (方面)？List the key wrds and expressins
将列出的核心词汇或短语整理成句子,使结构完整，符合表达习惯。
The man is thrwing away the rubbish everywhereThe wman is stpping him. She asks him t put the rubbish in the dustbin.She tells the man that the city is ur hme.
I see ther peple thrw away rubbish everywhere, I will als d as the wman des.He desn’t listen t me, I will pick it up myself and put in in the dustbin. I think the city is my hme. we shuld prtect the envirnment.
Everyne takes actin t prtect it, the city will be a mre beautiful place t live.
,1.表示并列或递进: and, bth…and; nt nly…but als, neither…nr;2.表示条件: if3.表示顺序: first , next，then, finally; 4.表示因果: because, s;5.表示选择: r, either…r;6.表示解释: fr example, such as;7.表示转折: but, hwever
恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。
Use cnnectives t jin sentences . Turn the sentences int a passage
修改词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下改变句式或添加语句，展示自己的语言功底。
检查人称、时态、单词拼写和大小写使用正确
将草稿认真抄写到答题纸上，一定注意书写的注意事项。 Pay attentin t yur handwriting!
3、一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线划掉即可。 eg:
He can speker English very well.
He can speker speak English very well.
1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。 作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线作为“四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准书写，不要把它作为第四线，让字母吊在线上。
2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写——给人一种凌乱的感觉。
It’s yur turn nw!
某英文网站正在开展以 “建设绿色校园”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，你们学校上周也进行了保护校园环境的实践活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对保护环境的认识，活动中你做了什么，以及你的感受 要点:（1）What d yu think f prtecting the envirnment? （2）What did yu d in the activity? （3）Hw did yu feel? 要求:（1）短文必须包含所有提示内容，可作适当发挥。 （2）短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 （3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 At my schl , we held a practical activity last week_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　
Writing practice
1. 人称:________________________________
2.时态：________________________________
A practical activity f prtecting the envirnment
Yur pinins n this activity：__________________
The things yu did in this activity:_______________
Yur feelings at that time：____________________________________
(write as many wrds and expressinsas pssible)
Summary——书面表达写作技巧
抄 pay attentin t yur handwriting!
要求：1.短文必须包含所有提示内容，可作适当发挥。 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
每年6月8号为“世界海洋日”(Wrld Oceans Day)，今年世界海洋日的主题是“清洁我们的海洋（Cleaning Our Oceans）”。假如你是李华，请你以“Say N T Plastics”为题，根据以下提示和要求，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法和建议。
提示：1. Why shuld we say n t plastics? 2. What shuld we d in ur daily life?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
English Writing Skills:1. Read the tips carefully,including the backgrund.2. What are yu asked t write abut? Hw many aspects (方面)？3. Use cnnectives t jin wrds, phrases and sentences.4. Pay attentin t yur handwriting.
One pssible versin:
At my schl, we held a practical activity last mnth. It's abut prtecting the envirnment. I think this activity is very necessary. It's imprtant fr everyne t take actins t prtect ur envirnment. After all, we have nly ne earth. During the activity, we nt nly watered the trees and flwers arund ur schl, but als cllected the waste n the playgrund. What's mre, we gave a speech t call n all peple t realize the imprtance f prtecting the envirnment. We encuraged students t d sme small things t make a difference t ur envirnment. It tk us three hurs t finish it. We were very tired but happy. The schl seemed mre beautiful with ur effrts. I lve my schl.
红色为“连”蓝色为“美”
习作互改评价表批改人姓名_____ 被改人姓名________作文标题________ 批改日期___________
表格提示 (Charts)图文提示 (Pictures)汉语提示 (Chinese)英语提示 (English)
Ways f beginning:
1.At present,prtecting the envirnment is the mst imprtant.
2.It is everyne’s duty t lve and prtect the envirnment.
1.I believe we can make the wrld a better place t live in.
2.In a wrd, everyne can d smething t make a difference.
3.In my pint f view, I’ll try my best t make ur city cleaner and mre beautiful.
Ways f ending:
I can see a man and a wman in the picture. The man is thrwing away the rubbish everywhere. the wman is stp him. She asks him t put the rubbish in the dustbin .She ( )tells the man that the city is ur hme. ( ) I see ther peple thrw away rubbish everywhere, I will als d ( )the wman des. ( ) he desn’t listen me, I will pick it up myself and put it in the dustbin. ( ) I think the city is my hme. We shuld prtect the envirnment. ( )everyne takes actin t prtect it, the city will be a mre beautiful place t live in.
I can see a man and a wman in the picture. The man is thrwing away the rubbish everywhere. The wman is stpping him. She asks him t put the rubbish in the dustbin .She als tells the man that the city is ur hme. When I see ther peple thrw away rubbish everywhere, I will als d as the wman des. If he desn’t listen t me, I will pick it up myself and put in the dustbin. Because I think the city is my hme. We shuld prtect the envirnment. If everyne takes actin t prtect it, the city will be a mre beautiful place t live in.
I can see a man and a wman in the picture. The man is thrwing away the rubbish everywhere. The wman is stpping him. She nt nly asks him t put the rubbish in the dustbin , but als tells him that the city is ur hme. When I see ther peple thrw away rubbish everywhere, I will als d as the wman des. If he desn’t listen t me, I will pick it up myself and put in the dustbin. Because I regard the city as my hme. It is ur duty t prtect the envirnment. In my pinin, if everyne takes actin t prtect it, the city will be a mre beautiful place t live in.