中考英语how to polish your writing？课件

这是一份中考英语how to polish your writing？课件，共16页。PPT课件主要包含了important，helpful，necessary，How，Beginning，Body，Ending，junk food，doing ，go to bed等内容，欢迎下载使用。
Hw t beautify a practical writing？
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1.今年是你外籍教师David在中国过的第一个春节。开学的第一天他很惊讶地发现很多同学变胖了。他给大家布置一个作业：写一篇文章关于大家发胖的原因，并且就如何过一个健康的春节提出建议。
2.以往大家在春节都会放烟花，但是今年大部分地区禁止烟花燃放，以至很多人认为少了些年味，你的观点。
3.燃放烟花，但是一片狼藉，火灾，空气污染，垃圾。
It is imprtant/ helpful/ necessary t...
Hw t keep healthy?
Be healthy physically and mentally.
Be healthy bth in bdy and mind.
Have regular meals.Eat the right fd.
Enjy sme hbbiesHave sme friends. Be happy.
D mre exercise. Have enugh sleep.
Let's practise小练笔.
当今社会人们的生活，工作等压力逐渐加大，健康开始成为主要问题。某中学生英文报正开辟专栏讨论人们如何保持健康。请从以下几个方面，用英语写出你的建议，向该栏目投稿。内容包括 1. 多运动 2. 合理科学饮食 3. 保持愉快心情 4. 培养良好的习惯
The intrductin f the tpic& the imprtance f health
Our hpe fr peple t be healthy
T cmplete the passage.
It's imprtant t have healthy eating habits. We shuld have three meals a day n time. We'd better eat mre _______________________but less_____________. It's helpful t develp healthy lifestyles. In my pinin,________ ________every day is imprtant. Fr example, we can take a walk, run and play ball games s n. It's nt healthy t stay up late, s we shuld _______________early. Relaxing urselves is necessary. When we are stressed ut, we can make urselves happy by________________music r talking with ur friends.
First, it's
Secnd, it's
fruit and vegetables
listening t
What's mre, relaxing
Tips： 1.适当的过渡词可以让文章要点层次鲜明，逻辑清晰。2. 通过拓展句（details/examples/reasns/results）进一步给出建议。
Writing skills
写作提升策略一词汇提升：
a. f great helpb. d gd t / be beneficial tc. have meals regularlyd. keep in gd healthe. increase the risk f lead t bad healthg. d harm t / be harmful t
A We shuldn't eat junk fd.B We shuld_____________________junk fd.
keep away frm
1. have three meals a day n time.2. helpful3. be gd fr4. be bad fr5. keep healthy6. make sb fall ill easily7. be unhealthy
Tips： 1.高级词替换2.词性替换3.短语替换
a. I like t listen t music t relax myself.b. Listening t music is a gd way t relax.
写作提升策略二 句式提升：
a.We shuld keep a gd md every day.b.I find it imprtant t keep a gd md every day .
用特定句型或者改变句子的主语时表达更清晰用被动语态可以加强语气。避免中式英语（定语从句）
a. First, we shuld eat healthily.b. Eating healthily shuld be put in the first place.
Which ne is better?
现在中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量，但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就此现象写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1.缺少运动甚至不运动的原因； 2.缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响； 3.针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。 参考词汇 be shrt f
1. 重点：如何增补校外实践，培养良好的运动习惯。 2. 时态：一般现在时 3. 人称：第三人称复数
Hw t rganize yur writing.
Many students are shrt f exercise in their spare time nw. They have t d t much hmewrk after schl, r have t many after-schl classes. S there is n time fr them t d exercise. Being shrt f exercise may cause many prblems, such as putting n weight and pr health. Even thugh they are t busy with their schl-wrk, it is still necessary t d exercise t make their bdies strng and healthy. First, they'd better ride r walk t schl n weekdays. Secnd, they can g swimming r take a walk in the park n weekends. What's mre, they can exercise by ding daily husewrk. All in all, students need t d sme exercise in their spare time, which can help t refresh their mind and be mre energetic.
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Tpicsentences
Key wrds andLinking wrds
如今，青少年的健康问题受到了社会的普遍关注，请仔细观察下面两幅漫画，分析问题并提出你的合理建议。
Yur turn t write.
Teenagers' health
1. 时态：一般现在时 &现在完成时 2. 人称：第三人称3. 分析问题的原因及其影响并给出建议
话题复习一 书面表达篇 Fd,drinks and health
根据以下提醒再次修改润饰你的文章，将它发给你的英语老师。1. 文章的整体框架结构是否如下图所示？可以再加个Ending哦！2. 我有没有用上适当的过渡词，我有没有就主题句进行拓展？3. 我的语言是不是还可以更丰富？有可替换的词吗？有更好的句子吗？我尝试用被动语态和定语从句了吗？4. 我满意我的书写吗？