2023届高考英语复习：如何构建续写情节 课件

这是一份2023届高考英语复习：如何构建续写情节 课件，共23页。PPT课件主要包含了典例分析等内容，欢迎下载使用。
读后续写的评分标准综述
评分: 主要从续写内容、词汇语法、篇章结构三方面考虑。1.创造情节的质量、续写的完整性及与原文情境的融洽度。2.词汇、语法的准确性、恰当性及多样性。3.上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
What is plt?
Plt is the way an authr creates and rganizes a chain f events in a narrative. The plt must fllw a lgical, attractive frmat that draws the reader in. Plt differs frm “stry” in that it highlights a specific and purpseful cause-and-effect relatinship between a sequence f majr events in the narrative.Plt is a literary term defined as the events that make up a stry, particularly as they relate t ne anther in a pattern, in a sequence, thrugh cause and effect.
A lgical plt?
Twilight merged int darkness. With the class appraching, I gt mre and mre nervus. Despite the hurs devted t it these days, I still felt butterflies in my stmach. The whle night fund me turning and tssing in bed, unable t fall asleep. I gt up at dawn and pened the windw. The air was s fresh, and the lvely birds were hpping frm branch t branch, singing beautiful sngs merrily. Suddenly, I sensed the smell f spring, with everything cming back t life. After breakfast, I tk my cellphne and read an article abut hw China take n the virus. Prud f the effrts China made t keep standing, I felt lucky t have such a big cuntry t fall back n. It's nearly 10 'clck, which is time fr my class. With a trembling hand, I turned n the cmputer, my heart pumping vilently. Taking a deep breath, I managed t calm dwn and began my class as usual.
后续---Lgical pltting
1. 续写第一段的内容设计既要考虑与上文的融洽衔接，同时也要考虑本段和最后一段开头语的呼应和衔接，而后者是容易忽视的部分。2. 续写第二段是文章的结尾，要关注与文章开头的遥相呼应，凸显主题，升华精神。
The expsitin intrduces the characters, describes the setting and establishes the prblem in the stry.The rising actin is where the suspense builds and the prblem gets wrse and becmes mre cmplicated.The climax is the turning pint in the stry. It is usually the mst exciting part in the stry and the part that makes the reader eager t keep reading.The falling actin is the events that happen after the climax and lead t a reslutin.The reslutin is the utcme f the stry. It is hw things end up r turn ut fr the characters.
续写情节构建中存在的问题
1. 文章理解不到位，续写情节与原文脱离2. 违背真实生活，缺乏合理性3. 融洽度不高，衔接不合理4. 大量对话无意义，段落间分布不均衡5. 主题升华牵强或跑偏
1. 文章理解不到位，续写情节与原文脱离 Cnner ran t Caleb's side, and the bys tried t cmfrt their father. Tim didn't say anything but cried. The tw brthers gradually knew that it was their father that caused this accident. Tim was very scared. He culdn't help feeling shcked, tearing rlling dwn his face.(???)
2. 违背真实生活，缺乏合理性 Cnner ran t Caleb's side, and the bys tried t cmfrt their father. “Take it easy dad, and I'm sure yu will be fine.” Cnner smiled t his father and encuraged him. After a while, they managed t pull their father ut f the car...
3. 融洽度不高，衔接不合理 emergency persnnel arrived, and with their help, Tim was finally sent t hspital. But the tw brthers culdn't enter the hspital as they wre n shes. Anxius and wrried, they arrived hme fr shes and ran twards hspital as fast as they culd. Para 2: After the accident, Tim cmpleted tw mnths f physical treatment.
4. 大量对话无意义，段落间分布不均衡“Dad, we are yur sns!”“Dad, d yu get injured?” “I'm fine. Dn't wrry.”“Dad, dn't wrry, and I'm sure t help yu ut.”...
5. 主题升华牵强或跑偏 this experience, never did the family drive carelessly, because they had knwn the bitter result brught by car accident. Indeed, life is by n means a thing that we culd make jke n at any time.
He met her at a party. She was utstanding. Many guys were after her, while he was average lking, shy and awkward. After the party, he invited her fr cffee. She was surprised, but ut f pliteness, she accepted his invitatin t g n a date. As they sat in a nice cffee shp, he was t nervus t say anything and she felt uncmfrtable. Suddenly, he asked the waiter, “Culd yu please give me sme salt? I'd like t put it in my cffee." They stared at him wtih a strange lk! His face turned red, but when the salt came, he put it in his cffee and drank it. Curius, she asked, "Why this unusual habit?" He tk a cuple f sips and replied, "When I was a little by, I lived near the sea. I liked playing n the sea. I culd feel the taste f the sea, just like the taste f salty cffee. Nw every time I have the salty cffee, I always think f my childhd and my hmetwn. I miss it and my parents, wh are still there."
She was deeply mved. A man wh can admit that he's hmesick must lve his hme and care abut his family. He must be respnsible. She talked t, abut her faraway hmetwn, her childhd and her family. That was a really nice talk, als a beautiful beginning f their lve stry. They cntinued t date. She fund that he met all her requirements. He was tlerant, kind, warm and careful. He was such a gd man and had it nt been fr the salt in the cffee, she’d never have really knwn him! The rest f the stry was just like any ther beautiful lve stry---they married and lived happily tgether. And every time she made cffee fr him, she put in sme salt, the way he liked it. After 40 years, he passed away and left her a letter which said: Para 1: My dearest, please frgive me fr my cheating yu all the time. D yu still remember ur first date in the cafe? ________________________ Para 2: She was shcked by the letter, with the feeling f being cheated. ______________________________________________________________
1. 解读文本，奠定续写基础
***读---（plts+language+clues）内容---wh, when, where, what(He met her at a party and finally gt married. Befre death, he left her a letter asking fr frgiving.) why+hw(续写内容)线索/意图---（多为结尾或主旨服务） was tlerant, kind, warm and careful. He was such a gd every time she made cffee fr him, she put in sme salt, the way he liked it. After 40 years, he passed away and left her a letter...
2. 依据两段首句推理情节发展
两个段首句是重要的续写提示，在很大程度上指明了情节的发展方向。对段首句分析，进行设问，可有效地推理续写的主要情节。第一段---三个逻辑上的衔接（原文+段首句+第二段段首句）第二段---关注与文章开头的遥相呼应（线索/意图），根据具体语境弘扬真善美
2. 依据两段首句推理情节发展---（第一段）
Para 1: My dearest, please frgive me fr my cheating yu all the time. D yu still remember ur first date in the cafe?__________Para 2: She was shcked by the letter, with the feeling f being cheated. ______________________________________________对第一段段首句进行设问：What happened at their first date in the cafe?What did he d t cheat her and why did he cheat her?Why did he cheat her all the 40 years?
2. 依据两段首句推理情节发展---（第二段）
Para 2: She was shcked by the letter, with the feeling f being cheated. ______________________________________________对第二段段首句进行设问：Wuld she frgive him fr his life-lng lie?Why r why nt?*?? She brke dwn, regretting her naive decisin t marry him. Never wuld she frgive him and never wuld she marry him if given a secnd chance.*?? Reflecting n what he had dne fr her in the past 40 years, she began t understand his white lie and chse t frgive him. She wuld definitely marry him again if given a secnd chance.
3. 可根据需要合理增加情节
*在不影响主要情节的前提下，可适当合理地增加部分次要情节*可依据需要增加适当细节描写（环境，心理，外貌等）
第一段可增加的情节：男孩对当时女孩接受他的邀请感到意外，其实他很讨厌和咸咖啡，但为了爱，他忍受了40年；男孩无数次想告知女孩真相，但由于害怕失去最终没能说出口 Actually it was entirely ut f my expectatin that yu accepted my invitatin t date. Can yu imagine hw excited but nervus I was in face f such a charming yung girl? T be frank, I hated salty cffee. Hwever, each time yu made r rdered salty cffee fr me ut f lve, I felt strange and bad in my muth, but sweet and warm in my heart. I had tried cuntless times t tell yu the truth, but I was afraid f lsing yu.
第二段可增加的情节：桌子上他们的一张照片勾起了女主对美好过往的回忆，想起了丈夫为这个家做的点点滴滴，她理解并原谅了丈夫 Suddenly, a family pht n the table caught her eyes. N sner had she seen it than memries came flding back, thse exciting mments when they spent the precius time tgether, thse lving mments when he patiently lked after her during her sickness and thse bitter-sweet mments when they had t face hardships bravely.
第二段可增加的情节：女主亲自冲了杯咸咖啡品尝一下，发现其实咸咖啡超级难喝，她想到丈夫竟然默默忍受了40年，最终理解了丈夫默默无私地付出 Suddenly, she rse and walked int the kitchen. Having made a cup f saulty cffee, she smelt it ut f curisity. A strange and bad smell made its way straight int her nse. She hesitated, and then sipped a little. Never had she had such bad cffee. Hw culd he tlerate it fr his whle life? Immediately, she realized that the man wh tlerantly drank salty cffee fr 40 years was wrth cherishing permanently.