2023届中考英语写作课课件

这是一份2023届中考英语写作课课件，共22页。PPT课件主要包含了location，history，size，weather，Location，Size，784 k㎡，History，long，famous等内容，欢迎下载使用。
假设你是李华，你的家乡在温州，你的英国笔友Mike十月份要来温州旅游。请你根据提示内容给他写一封邮件介绍你的家乡。
要求：（1）尽量包含所有要点，可适当发挥；（2）条理清楚，语句通顺，行文连贯；（3）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
一般现在时；一般将来时
Step1: Check the questin
Yur hme twn
5.famus places
Step2: Brainstrm
in the sutheast f Zhejiang
It is ______ away frm Wenzhu t Hangzhu.
Step3: Make simple sentences
abut 9.21millin
Wenzhu has a ______ (large/small) ppulatin.
Wenzhu has a ______ f abut 9.21 ______ .
_____________ Wenzhu is abut 9.21____ .
The ppulatin f
The ______ （区域） f Wenzhu is abut 11,784 square(平方) ______ .
Wenzhu has a______(lng/shrt)histry which is mre than 2000 years ld.
Dragn Lantern Dance
5.Interesting places
It is ______ fr Jiangxin Island 、Yandang Muntains、Nanxi River...
Jiangxin Island
Yandang Muntains
Nanxi River
It is ______ fr seafd .
夏季高温多雨冬季温和少雨
The weather here is______but smetimes ______ in ______ and ______ and ______ in ______ .
Step4: Write a shrt passage
Wenzhu is in the sutheast f Zhejiang Prvince. It has a histry f mre than 2,000 years and abut 9.21 millin peple live here. There are many interesting places in Wenzhu, Jiangxin Island, Yandang Muntains and Nanxi River. Yu can als try lts f famus and delicius fd in Wenzhu. The weather is fine in Octber, but smetimes it rains. S remember t bring an umbrella.
Wenzhu is in the sutheast f Zhejiang Prvince. It has a histry f mre than 2,000 years and abut 9.21 millin peple live here. There are many interesting places in Wenzhu, Jiangxin Island, Yandang Muntains and Nanxi River. Yu can als try lts f famus and delicius fd in Wenzhu. The weather is fine in Octber, but smetimes it rains. S remember t bring an umbrella.
Step5: Structure
Let me tell yu smething abut it.
Dear Mike,I’m very happy that yu’re cming t Wenzhu in Octber. Nw, let me tell yu smething abut my hmetwn. I cme frm Wenzhu.
D yu like my hme twn?
What a beautiful place!
The first draft(9-10)
Wenzhu is in the sutheast f Zhejiang Prvince. It has a histry f mre than 2,000 years and abut 9.21 millin peple live here. There are many interesting places in Wenzhu, Jiangxin Island, Yandang Muntains and Nanxi River. Yu can als try lts f famus and delicius fd in Wenzhu. The weather is fine in Octber, but smetimes it rains. S remember t bring an umbrella.
Octber is a gd time t visit them.
Step6: Make up
Final draft(12--15)
Link wrdsgd wrds
gd sentences prverbs
Link wrds: Hwever;Besides;What's mre;But;S;That's because;That's wrds: Pretty(gd);especially;mre than(ver)
Gd sentences: .. be the best time t+d;It is hme t many places f interest;I'm : East r west,hme is the best. There is n place like hme.
As the saying ges,“...”
Step7:self-estimate(自评)
反思订正：1.检查作文是否包含题目要求的所有要点。2.检查每个句子中动词的使用形式是否正确。3.检查每个句子中名词单复数是否正确。4.检查是否用上优美词句。5.检查篇章结构是否合理。6.默读全文，整体检查。如有错写和漏写的情况，请规范订正，如：在错词上画一横线再补上正确的单词；也可以标上序号，订正在下面的横线上。
Step8: peer review(互评)